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Alana

Certified Tutor

2+ years

Alana

Bachelor's
Alana's other Tutor Subjects
1st-12th Grade Writing
1st-12th Grade Reading
6th-10th Grade English
6th-8th Grade Chemistry

Winning a Fulbright Scholarship taught Alana exactly how competitive essay panels think: they skim hundreds of applications and stop only when a clear, specific narrative grabs them. She teaches students to identify the one throughline that connects their background to the scholarship's mission, the...

Education

Yale University

Bachelor's

Jai

Certified Tutor

9+ years

Jai

Bachelors in Electrical Engineering and Computer Science
Jai's other Tutor Subjects
Calculus
Algebra
Electrical Engineering
ACT Writing

I'm a recent Stanford graduate (Electrical Engineering and Computer Science), and have been working at a major Management Consulting firm for a few years now. I personally scored a 2360 (out of 2400) on the SAT and 35 on the ACT and was successful in gaining admission to several top universities. I'...

Education

Stanford University

Bachelors in Electrical Engineering and Computer Science

Test Scores
SAT
1590
ACT
35
Kate

Certified Tutor

Kate

Masters, Environmental Engineering
Kate's other Tutor Subjects
AP Calculus BC
AP Calculus AB
College Algebra
Pre-Calculus

I'm available to tutor biology, chemistry, physics, math from Algebra up through AP Calculus, SAT test prep, and French. I've been tutoring students in science and math for 7 years. I also spent 8 months working and studying in France, and have tutored high school and adult students in French. When ...

Education

Massachusetts Institute of Technology

Masters, Environmental Engineering

Massachusetts Institute of Technology

Bachelors

Test Scores
SAT
1580
Jessica

Certified Tutor

Jessica

PHD, Medicine
Jessica's other Tutor Subjects
College Algebra
Calculus
Algebra
Honors Chemistry

I am a licensed physician from Florida who is currently changing careers. I graduated from the University of Pennsylvania in 2009 and have extensive tutoring and editing experience. While a student, I became a certified writing tutor through the Critical Writing Department. Since I completed my writ...

Education

Nova Southeastern University

PHD, Medicine

University of Pennsylvania

Bachelors, History

University of Pennsylvania

undergraduate

Test Scores
SAT
1540
Jeffrey

Certified Tutor

6+ years

Jeffrey

Doctor of Philosophy, Mechanical Engineering
Jeffrey's other Tutor Subjects
Pre-Calculus
Geometry
Calculus
Algebra

I am enrolled in the Mechanical Engineering PhD program at Rice University which will begin Fall 2020, and I am hoping to return to academia as a professor after earning my PhD. In the meantime, I am looking to share my passion for gaining knowledge, specifically in STEM, by educating the up and com...

Education

University of Notre Dame

Bachelor of Science

Rice University

Doctor of Philosophy, Mechanical Engineering

Test Scores
ACT
34
Rhea

Certified Tutor

6+ years

Rhea

Bachelor of Science, Biology, General
Rhea's other Tutor Subjects
AP Statistics
AP Calculus BC
AP Calculus AB
Pre-Algebra

I am a current student at the University of Chicago. I am working towards a Bachelor of Science in Biological Sciences, and I am on the pre-medical track. I am extremely passionate about tutoring, and I have several years of experience tutoring students in my high school's learning center in various...

Education

University of Chicago

Bachelor of Science, Biology, General

Test Scores
Perfect Score
SAT
1550
ACT
36
Erika

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Erika

Master of Public Policy, Public Policy
Erika's other Tutor Subjects
Pre-Algebra
Middle School Math
Calculus
Algebra

I am available to tutor middle and high school math, history and test prep. I have tutored math and history in the past and I previously taught a test prep course at a school in Hanoi, Vietnam. I have a lot of experience teaching all the need-to-know tricks to doing great on the SATS/ACTS! When I am...

Education

Harvard University

Master of Public Policy, Public Policy

Test Scores
ACT
32
Matthew

Certified Tutor

Matthew

Bachelors in Human Biology (concentration in Bioinformatics and Stem Cell Science)
Matthew's other Tutor Subjects
Pre-Algebra
College Algebra
Algebra 3/4
Arithmetic

I'm a highly creative person who works best with visual thinkers. Very recently graduated from Stanford University, I majored in Human Biology with a concentration in Bioinformatics and Stem Cell Science. Technical though my background may be, I am currently gigging as a singer/songwriter/composer i...

Education

Stanford University

Bachelors in Human Biology (concentration in Bioinformatics and Stem Cell Science)

Test Scores
SAT
1510
Charles

Certified Tutor

Charles

Bachelor of Science, Mechanical Engineering
Charles's other Tutor Subjects
AP Calculus AB
Pre-Algebra
Algebra 3/4
Trigonometry

I am a junior Mechanical Engineering major at Yale, and I hope to become a Naval Aviator after college. I am also a varsity sailor, and enjoy playing music with friends when I can get some free time. I have been tutoring my fellow students throughout my entire academic career, and I would best descr...

Education

Yale University

Bachelor of Science, Mechanical Engineering

Test Scores
SAT
1440
ACT
34
Tony

Certified Tutor

Tony

Bachelor of Science in Biology
Tony's other Tutor Subjects
Calculus
Algebra
Biology
High School Biology

I am a recent graduate of Yale University and incoming first year medical student at Columbia University. Originally from the DC area, I have always had a passion for science and medicine and pursued a degree in Biology while at Yale. During the 2008-2009 academic year, I tutored science, math, Engl...

Education

Yale University

Bachelor of Science in Biology

Test Scores
SAT
1540

Frequently Asked Questions

Scholarship essays are often the deciding factor in competitive award decisions, especially when multiple applicants have similar GPAs and test scores. A compelling essay gives scholarship committees insight into your character, values, and potential impact—helping you stand out from other candidates. For students in Albany competing for limited funding, a well-crafted essay can be the difference between receiving significant financial support and missing out entirely.

Your first session typically involves getting to know your writing style, understanding the specific scholarship prompts you're addressing, and identifying your strengths and areas for improvement. A tutor will ask about your background, achievements, and what makes your story unique, then help you brainstorm compelling angles for your essays. This foundation allows for personalized guidance tailored to your voice and the particular requirements of each scholarship application.

Tutors guide you through proven essay structure techniques—helping you craft a clear, specific thesis statement that directly addresses the prompt and organizing your supporting paragraphs logically. They'll work with you on transitions, ensuring each paragraph builds on the previous one and contributes to your overall argument. This structured approach prevents common issues like rambling or losing focus, which can weaken your application.

The best scholarship essays sound like you—not overly formal or trying too hard to impress. Tutors help you find the balance between meeting professional standards and letting your personality shine through, which scholarship committees genuinely want to see. Through revision and feedback, you'll learn to maintain authenticity while strengthening your word choice, sentence variety, and overall polish.

Tutors provide comprehensive feedback addressing content, organization, grammar, and style—helping you understand not just what needs to change, but why. Rather than simply correcting errors, they explain the reasoning behind suggestions so you can apply those lessons to future essays. This personalized feedback approach helps you become a stronger writer overall, not just for this scholarship cycle.

Many students struggle with showing rather than telling (using specific examples instead of general statements), staying within word limits while covering everything important, or sounding authentic while trying to impress. Others find it hard to connect their personal story to the scholarship's mission or values. A tutor helps you overcome these obstacles by providing targeted strategies and real-time feedback on your drafts.

This depends on how many scholarships you're applying for and your starting point, but most students benefit from beginning 2-3 months before their earliest deadline. This allows time for brainstorming, multiple drafts, and revision without rushing. Even a few sessions can significantly strengthen your essays, though ongoing support through the application cycle typically yields the strongest results.

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