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Lena

Certified Tutor

10+ years

Lena

Current Undergrad, Political Science and Environmental Studies
Lena's other Tutor Subjects
Calculus
Algebra
PSAT Writing Skills
SAT Subject Test in French with Listening

The ISEE Upper Level essay gives students roughly 30 minutes to produce a coherent, well-organized response to a prompt they've never seen — a challenge that rewards preparation over raw talent. Lena teaches a repeatable structure: a clear thesis, two to three developed examples, and purposeful tran...

Education

Brown University

Current Undergrad, Political Science and Environmental Studies

Test Scores
SAT
1570
Nicole

Certified Tutor

5+ years

Nicole

Master of Arts, Education
Nicole's other Tutor Subjects
Calculus
Algebra
PSAT Writing Skills
SAT Reading

ISEE Upper Level Writing asks younger students to do something surprisingly sophisticated: produce a coherent, well-structured essay from a single prompt in a short window. Nicole walks students through planning techniques — quick thesis construction, paragraph mapping, strong closing sentences — th...

Education

University of Michigan-Flint

Master of Arts, Education

University of Innsbruck

Bachelor in Arts, Linguistics

Samantha

Certified Tutor

9+ years

Samantha

Current Undergrad Student, Psychology
Samantha's other Tutor Subjects
Applied Mathematics
AP Calculus BC
AP Calculus AB
Pre-Algebra

The ISEE Upper Level essay asks students to take a position and defend it in a short window, which can feel overwhelming for younger writers. Samantha teaches a simple framework: one clear claim, two specific reasons, and a conclusion that doesn't just repeat the introduction. Her background teachin...

Education

Princeton University

Current Undergrad Student, Psychology

Test Scores
SAT
1480
Francesca

Certified Tutor

9+ years

Francesca

Bachelor of Economics, Political Science and Government
Francesca's other Tutor Subjects
Pre-Algebra
Pre-Calculus
Middle School Math
Geometry

The ISEE Upper Level essay asks students to take a clear position and defend it in a short window — a skill that looks simple but trips up even strong writers who ramble or lose focus. As a current law student at Chicago-Kent, Francesca knows how to build a tight argument under time pressure and tea...

Education

Loyola University-Chicago

Bachelor of Economics, Political Science and Government

Test Scores
ACT
33
Victoria

Certified Tutor

5+ years

Victoria

Current Undergrad Student, Anthropology
Victoria's other Tutor Subjects
Calculus
Algebra
SAT Reading
SAT Writing and Language

The ISEE Upper Level essay asks students to build a coherent argument under time pressure, which is exactly the kind of writing Victoria has been teaching and editing for years. As a Brearley graduate and current Carleton College student, she knows what selective schools expect from young writers an...

Education

Carleton College

Current Undergrad Student, Anthropology

Test Scores
SAT
1420
Ben

Certified Tutor

9+ years

Ben

Current Grad Student, Creative Writing
Ben's other Tutor Subjects
Pre-Algebra
Geometry
Calculus
Algebra

The ISEE Upper Level essay asks students to take a position and defend it in under 30 minutes — a task that rewards structure over style. As a creative writing MFA candidate and high school teacher, Ben teaches a repeatable essay framework: clear thesis, two evidence-driven body paragraphs, and a co...

Education

Ball State University

Bachelor of Science, History

Northwestern University

Current Grad Student, Creative Writing

Kaitlyn

Certified Tutor

8+ years

Kaitlyn

Bachelor of Science, Biology, General
Kaitlyn's other Tutor Subjects
6th Grade math
6th Grade AP Language Composition
Pre-Algebra
College Algebra

The ISEE Upper Level essay trips up strong writers who don't know how to organize an argument under time pressure. Kaitlyn teaches a clear thesis-and-evidence structure that works for any prompt, then drills students on transitions and specific supporting details that elevate a score from average to...

Education

Fairfield University

Bachelor of Science, Biology, General

Test Scores
SAT
1500
ACT
33
Maddie

Certified Tutor

7+ years

Maddie

Current Undergrad Student, Classics
Maddie's other Tutor Subjects
Calculus
Algebra
Genetics
Environmental Science

ISEE Upper Level Writing asks students to produce a polished essay under tight time pressure, which means having a reliable structure before the clock starts. As a Classics major at Yale, Maddie teaches students to outline an argument in under two minutes and develop each paragraph with specific, co...

Education

Yale University

Current Undergrad Student, Classics

Nicole

Certified Tutor

8+ years

Nicole

Bachelor in Arts, English
Nicole's other Tutor Subjects
Calculus
Algebra
Human Development
PSAT Writing Skills

A strong ISEE Upper Level essay needs a clear thesis, organized body paragraphs, and specific examples — all produced in about 30 minutes. Nicole's English degree and her experience coaching college-level writing translate well here; she teaches students to outline in under five minutes and develop ...

Education

University of Miami

Bachelor in Arts, English

Test Scores
SAT
1450
Alessia

Certified Tutor

8+ years

Alessia

Bachelor in Arts, Political Science and Government
Alessia's other Tutor Subjects
Middle School Math
Calculus
Algebra
ISEE-Upper Level Writing

Scoring well on the ISEE Upper Level Writing section means producing a clear, organized essay under time pressure — a skill that's very different from polishing a paper at home over several days. Alessia, who recently navigated competitive admissions herself and now studies at Penn, teaches students...

Education

University of Pennsylvania

Bachelor in Arts, Political Science and Government

Frequently Asked Questions

The ISEE-Upper Level Writing section tests your ability to construct clear, well-organized essays that demonstrate strong reasoning and command of language. Unlike multiple-choice sections, this essay requires you to develop a thesis, support it with relevant examples, and maintain a consistent voice—skills that matter not just for admissions but for academic success in high school and beyond. Many independent schools in the Sacramento area use ISEE scores as a key part of their admissions process, making strong writing performance essential.

Students often struggle with organizing their thoughts quickly under timed conditions, developing a clear thesis that directly addresses the prompt, and providing specific, relevant examples rather than vague generalizations. Many also find it difficult to maintain a formal academic tone while still sounding natural, or they spend too much time on their introduction and rush through their body paragraphs. Personalized 1-on-1 instruction helps you identify your specific patterns and practice targeted strategies to overcome them.

Your first session focuses on understanding where you currently stand. You'll likely write a practice essay under timed conditions so your tutor can assess your strengths, identify specific areas for growth, and understand your writing process. This diagnostic helps create a personalized plan tailored to your needs—whether that's strengthening thesis development, improving organization, expanding your vocabulary, or managing test anxiety. From there, your tutor will guide you through targeted practice with detailed feedback on each draft.

Strong ISEE essays follow a clear structure: an engaging introduction with a clear thesis, body paragraphs that each support one main idea with specific examples, and a conclusion that reinforces your argument. Many students benefit from outlining for just 2-3 minutes before writing—this prevents rambling and keeps your essay focused. Personalized tutoring helps you develop an outline system that works for your thinking style, practice writing under time pressure, and learn how to revise efficiently when you notice organizational issues.

A strong thesis is specific, arguable, and directly answers the prompt—not a vague statement that could apply to many topics. For example, "Technology has changed education" is too broad, while "Classroom technology is most effective when it supplements rather than replaces direct teacher instruction" takes a clear position that you can defend with examples. Your thesis should appear in your introduction and guide every paragraph that follows. Working with a tutor helps you practice crafting thesis statements that are ambitious enough to be interesting but focused enough to support within the essay time limit.

The strongest essays use specific, relevant examples—whether from literature, history, personal experience, or current events—that directly support your thesis rather than generic statements. Instead of "Many people use social media," try "During the 2020 pandemic, social media allowed isolated students to maintain friendships and access educational resources, demonstrating its value during crisis." Each example should connect back to your main argument in 1-2 sentences. Personalized instruction helps you develop a library of strong examples and practice selecting the most relevant ones quickly under test conditions.

ISEE essays should sound intelligent and formal without being stiff or robotic—think of writing for an educated adult, not a textbook. Avoid slang and overly casual language, but also avoid unnecessarily complex sentences that obscure your meaning. Read your essay aloud to catch awkward phrasing, and use active voice when possible ("The data shows" rather than "It is shown by the data"). A tutor can provide feedback on your specific writing patterns, help you recognize when you're being too casual or too formal, and guide you toward a voice that feels authentic and appropriate.

Most students see meaningful improvement within 4-8 weeks of consistent, focused practice with personalized feedback—though the timeline depends on where you're starting and how frequently you work with a tutor. Consistent practice is more important than duration; students who write practice essays weekly and receive detailed feedback typically progress faster than those with sporadic sessions. Varsity Tutors connects you with expert tutors who can create a realistic timeline based on your current level and target score, then adjust the plan as you progress.

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