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Bilge

Certified Tutor

2+ years

Bilge

Doctorate (e.g., PhD, MD, JD, etc.)
Bilge's other Tutor Subjects
9th-12th Grade Biology
9th-12th Grade AP Biology
10th-12th Grade Science
10th-12th Grade Writing

Private school admissions essays ask younger writers to do something surprisingly difficult: be genuine and specific in a very short space. Bilge approaches these essays by first drawing out the details that make a student memorable — a particular curiosity, a moment of growth, a quirky interest — t...

Education

Wesleyan University

Doctorate (e.g., PhD, MD, JD, etc.)

Middle East Technical University

Bachelor's

Alicia

Certified Tutor

2+ years

Alicia

Master's/Graduate
Alicia's other Tutor Subjects
10th Grade AP Microeconomics
Pre-Algebra
Statistics
Middle School Math

Private school admissions essays ask young writers to do something surprisingly difficult: sound mature without sounding rehearsed. Alicia is particularly skilled at drawing out a middle schooler's genuine interests and personality, then coaching them to express those ideas in clear, confident prose...

Education

Columbia University

Master's/Graduate

University of Saint Joseph

Bachelor's

Alana

Certified Tutor

2+ years

Alana

Bachelor's
Alana's other Tutor Subjects
1st-12th Grade Writing
1st-12th Grade Reading
6th-10th Grade English
6th-8th Grade Chemistry

Having navigated the admissions process at Yale and later earned a Fulbright to Imperial College London, Alana knows firsthand how a well-crafted personal essay can open doors — and she brings that insight down to the middle school level, where the challenge is distilling a young person's personalit...

Education

Yale University

Bachelor's

Eric

Certified Tutor

2+ years

Eric

Bachelor's
Eric's other Tutor Subjects
1st-10th Grade math
K-5th Grade Reading
Nutrition
SAT Essay

Private high school applications ask young writers to do something surprisingly difficult: be reflective and specific about who they are at twelve or thirteen years old. Eric excels at drawing out a student's genuine voice through targeted questions, then teaching them how to organize those ideas in...

Education

University of Chicago

Bachelor's

Jessica

Certified Tutor

Jessica

PHD, Medicine
Jessica's other Tutor Subjects
College Algebra
Calculus
Algebra
Honors Chemistry

I am a licensed physician from Florida who is currently changing careers. I graduated from the University of Pennsylvania in 2009 and have extensive tutoring and editing experience. While a student, I became a certified writing tutor through the Critical Writing Department. Since I completed my writ...

Education

Nova Southeastern University

PHD, Medicine

University of Pennsylvania

Bachelors, History

University of Pennsylvania

undergraduate

Test Scores
SAT
1540
Kate

Certified Tutor

Kate

Masters, Environmental Engineering
Kate's other Tutor Subjects
AP Calculus BC
AP Calculus AB
College Algebra
Pre-Calculus

I'm available to tutor biology, chemistry, physics, math from Algebra up through AP Calculus, SAT test prep, and French. I've been tutoring students in science and math for 7 years. I also spent 8 months working and studying in France, and have tutored high school and adult students in French. When ...

Education

Massachusetts Institute of Technology

Masters, Environmental Engineering

Massachusetts Institute of Technology

Bachelors

Test Scores
SAT
1580
Jai

Certified Tutor

9+ years

Jai

Bachelors in Electrical Engineering and Computer Science
Jai's other Tutor Subjects
Calculus
Algebra
Electrical Engineering
ACT Writing

I'm a recent Stanford graduate (Electrical Engineering and Computer Science), and have been working at a major Management Consulting firm for a few years now. I personally scored a 2360 (out of 2400) on the SAT and 35 on the ACT and was successful in gaining admission to several top universities. I'...

Education

Stanford University

Bachelors in Electrical Engineering and Computer Science

Test Scores
SAT
1590
ACT
35
Jeffrey

Certified Tutor

6+ years

Jeffrey

Doctor of Philosophy, Mechanical Engineering
Jeffrey's other Tutor Subjects
Pre-Calculus
Geometry
Calculus
Algebra

I am enrolled in the Mechanical Engineering PhD program at Rice University which will begin Fall 2020, and I am hoping to return to academia as a professor after earning my PhD. In the meantime, I am looking to share my passion for gaining knowledge, specifically in STEM, by educating the up and com...

Education

University of Notre Dame

Bachelor of Science

Rice University

Doctor of Philosophy, Mechanical Engineering

Test Scores
ACT
34
Rhea

Certified Tutor

6+ years

Rhea

Bachelor of Science, Biology, General
Rhea's other Tutor Subjects
AP Statistics
AP Calculus BC
AP Calculus AB
Pre-Algebra

I am a current student at the University of Chicago. I am working towards a Bachelor of Science in Biological Sciences, and I am on the pre-medical track. I am extremely passionate about tutoring, and I have several years of experience tutoring students in my high school's learning center in various...

Education

University of Chicago

Bachelor of Science, Biology, General

Test Scores
Perfect Score
SAT
1550
ACT
36
Erika

Certified Tutor

Erika

Master of Public Policy, Public Policy
Erika's other Tutor Subjects
Pre-Algebra
Middle School Math
Calculus
Algebra

I am available to tutor middle and high school math, history and test prep. I have tutored math and history in the past and I previously taught a test prep course at a school in Hanoi, Vietnam. I have a lot of experience teaching all the need-to-know tricks to doing great on the SATS/ACTS! When I am...

Education

Harvard University

Master of Public Policy, Public Policy

Test Scores
ACT
32

Frequently Asked Questions

Application essays are often one of the most important components of a private school application—sometimes weighing as heavily as grades and test scores. Admissions committees use essays to understand your personality, values, and writing ability beyond what transcripts reveal. A strong essay can set you apart from other qualified applicants, especially at competitive schools in the Salt Lake City area.

Many students struggle with finding their authentic voice, staying focused on the prompt, and avoiding generic responses that could apply to any applicant. Others find it difficult to balance showing vulnerability with maintaining confidence, or they over-explain rather than trusting readers to understand their story. Writer's block and perfectionism can also prevent students from completing drafts, especially when they're unsure about essay structure and what admissions committees actually want to see.

While essay prompts vary, most benefit from a clear introduction that hooks the reader and addresses the prompt, body paragraphs with specific examples and reflection, and a conclusion that ties your story back to who you are as a student. The key is to show rather than tell—use concrete details and anecdotes instead of simply stating qualities about yourself. A tutor can help you understand how to organize your thoughts and develop each section in a way that feels natural and compelling.

Varsity Tutors connects you with tutors who provide personalized feedback on your essay's content, structure, and voice—not just grammar and mechanics. They help you clarify your main idea, strengthen your examples, eliminate clichés, and develop a writing style that sounds authentically like you. With multiple revision rounds and targeted guidance, you'll build confidence in your writing and submit an essay that truly represents your best work.

Your voice comes through when you write about what genuinely matters to you, use specific details from your own experiences, and write in a way that feels natural to how you speak. Avoid trying to sound overly formal or copying styles you admire—admissions officers want to hear from you, not a version of you that sounds like someone else. A tutor can help you identify your natural voice, encourage you to take risks with your writing, and give you feedback on when your personality is shining through versus when you're playing it too safe.

Most strong application essays go through at least 3-5 rounds of meaningful revision, though the number depends on your starting point and deadline. Early revisions focus on big-picture issues like clarity and structure, while later ones refine word choice, pacing, and flow. Working with a tutor gives you expert guidance on what to prioritize in each revision cycle, helping you use your time efficiently and avoid getting stuck on endless tweaking.

Misinterpreting a prompt can lead to an essay that doesn't answer what the school is actually asking, which hurts your chances. A tutor can help you break down the prompt, identify what the school really wants to know about you, and brainstorm angles that are both authentic and responsive. This is especially helpful when prompts are open-ended or when you're applying to multiple schools with different questions.

Look for tutors with strong writing backgrounds—ideally those who have experience with college or graduate-level admissions essays, English teaching, or professional writing. They should understand not just grammar and mechanics, but how to help you develop ideas, strengthen arguments, and craft compelling narratives. Varsity Tutors connects you with expert tutors who have proven experience helping students write essays that get results, and you can discuss their background before your first session.

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