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Eric

Certified Tutor

2+ years

Eric

Bachelor's
Eric's other Tutor Subjects
1st-10th Grade math
K-5th Grade Reading
Nutrition
SAT Essay

I'm a current medical student at Rush Medical College with a deep appreciation for the process of learning. I know from personal experience that mastering new material doesn't always come easily it takes patience, structure, and persistence. My own journey has taught me the value of steady progress...

Education

University of Chicago

Bachelor's

Alana

Certified Tutor

2+ years

Alana

Bachelor's
Alana's other Tutor Subjects
1st-12th Grade Writing
1st-12th Grade Reading
6th-10th Grade English
6th-8th Grade Chemistry

I graduated from Yale University in 2021 with a B.A. in the History of Science, Medicine, and Public Health. Following my graduation, I attended Imperial College London on a Fulbright Scholarship to complete my Master of Public Health. Tutoring has been a joy for me over the years, as I've worked w...

Education

Yale University

Bachelor's

Bilge

Certified Tutor

2+ years

Bilge

Doctorate (e.g., PhD, MD, JD, etc.)
Bilge's other Tutor Subjects
9th-12th Grade Biology
9th-12th Grade AP Biology
10th-12th Grade Science
10th-12th Grade Writing

As a passionate Neuroscientist with a PhD from Wesleyan University, I have over 6 years of experience in tutoring subjects such neuroscience, neural systems, molecular biology, genetics, general biology, and scientific writing (AP level, college level, and high school level). My teaching philosophy...

Education

Wesleyan University

Doctorate (e.g., PhD, MD, JD, etc.)

Middle East Technical University

Bachelor's

Alicia

Certified Tutor

2+ years

Alicia

Master's/Graduate
Alicia's other Tutor Subjects
10th Grade AP Microeconomics
Pre-Algebra
Statistics
Middle School Math

As a dedicated tutor with a Master's degree in Social Work from Columbia University, I am passionate about fostering personal growth and academic success in my students. I employ a student-centered approach that emphasizes empathy and understanding. My goal is to create a supportive learning environ...

Education

Columbia University

Master's/Graduate

University of Saint Joseph

Bachelor's

Kate

Certified Tutor

Kate

Masters, Environmental Engineering
Kate's other Tutor Subjects
AP Calculus BC
AP Calculus AB
College Algebra
Pre-Calculus

I'm available to tutor biology, chemistry, physics, math from Algebra up through AP Calculus, SAT test prep, and French. I've been tutoring students in science and math for 7 years. I also spent 8 months working and studying in France, and have tutored high school and adult students in French. When ...

Education

Massachusetts Institute of Technology

Masters, Environmental Engineering

Massachusetts Institute of Technology

Bachelors

Test Scores
SAT
1580
Jessica

Certified Tutor

Jessica

PHD, Medicine
Jessica's other Tutor Subjects
College Algebra
Calculus
Algebra
Honors Chemistry

I am a licensed physician from Florida who is currently changing careers. I graduated from the University of Pennsylvania in 2009 and have extensive tutoring and editing experience. While a student, I became a certified writing tutor through the Critical Writing Department. Since I completed my writ...

Education

Nova Southeastern University

PHD, Medicine

University of Pennsylvania

Bachelors, History

University of Pennsylvania

undergraduate

Test Scores
SAT
1540
Jai

Certified Tutor

9+ years

Jai

Bachelors in Electrical Engineering and Computer Science
Jai's other Tutor Subjects
Calculus
Algebra
Electrical Engineering
ACT Writing

I'm a recent Stanford graduate (Electrical Engineering and Computer Science), and have been working at a major Management Consulting firm for a few years now. I personally scored a 2360 (out of 2400) on the SAT and 35 on the ACT and was successful in gaining admission to several top universities. I'...

Education

Stanford University

Bachelors in Electrical Engineering and Computer Science

Test Scores
SAT
1590
ACT
35
Erika

Certified Tutor

Erika

Master of Public Policy, Public Policy
Erika's other Tutor Subjects
Pre-Algebra
Middle School Math
Calculus
Algebra

I am available to tutor middle and high school math, history and test prep. I have tutored math and history in the past and I previously taught a test prep course at a school in Hanoi, Vietnam. I have a lot of experience teaching all the need-to-know tricks to doing great on the SATS/ACTS! When I am...

Education

Harvard University

Master of Public Policy, Public Policy

Test Scores
ACT
32
Jeffrey

Certified Tutor

6+ years

Jeffrey

Doctor of Philosophy, Mechanical Engineering
Jeffrey's other Tutor Subjects
Pre-Calculus
Geometry
Calculus
Algebra

I am enrolled in the Mechanical Engineering PhD program at Rice University which will begin Fall 2020, and I am hoping to return to academia as a professor after earning my PhD. In the meantime, I am looking to share my passion for gaining knowledge, specifically in STEM, by educating the up and com...

Education

University of Notre Dame

Bachelor of Science

Rice University

Doctor of Philosophy, Mechanical Engineering

Test Scores
ACT
34
Rhea

Certified Tutor

6+ years

Rhea

Bachelor of Science, Biology, General
Rhea's other Tutor Subjects
AP Statistics
AP Calculus BC
AP Calculus AB
Pre-Algebra

I am a current student at the University of Chicago. I am working towards a Bachelor of Science in Biological Sciences, and I am on the pre-medical track. I am extremely passionate about tutoring, and I have several years of experience tutoring students in my high school's learning center in various...

Education

University of Chicago

Bachelor of Science, Biology, General

Test Scores
Perfect Score
SAT
1550
ACT
36

Frequently Asked Questions

Essays are often one of the most heavily weighted components of private school applications—sometimes carrying as much influence as grades and test scores. Admissions committees use essays to understand your voice, values, and how you think beyond what numbers can show. A strong essay can distinguish you from other qualified candidates, especially in Albany's competitive private school landscape where many applicants have similar academic profiles.

Students often struggle with finding their authentic voice while trying to impress admissions officers, leading to overly formal or generic writing. Other frequent challenges include unclear thesis development, weak organization that doesn't support the main argument, and difficulty showing rather than telling through specific examples and details. Many students also get stuck on revision, unsure how to strengthen their work beyond surface-level edits.

Personalized 1-on-1 instruction provides detailed, targeted feedback on your specific writing patterns and challenges—not generic grammar corrections. A tutor works with you through multiple drafts, helping you develop a stronger thesis, organize your ideas more effectively, and find your authentic voice while maintaining the formality appropriate for applications. This individualized approach accelerates improvement far more than general writing workshops, since the feedback directly addresses your unique needs.

A compelling application essay needs a clear, specific thesis that answers the prompt directly; a logical structure that guides readers through your argument; and concrete examples or stories that illustrate your points rather than simply stating them. Strong essays also demonstrate self-awareness—showing how an experience shaped your thinking or values—and maintain a consistent, authentic voice throughout. Tutors help you build each of these elements systematically rather than trying to perfect everything at once.

Most strong application essays go through 3-5 meaningful revisions, though the number varies depending on your starting point and the complexity of your ideas. Early drafts focus on getting ideas down and clarifying your main argument; middle drafts strengthen organization and evidence; final drafts refine voice and eliminate unnecessary words. Working with a tutor helps you make each revision count by identifying which elements need the most attention rather than revising everything equally.

Many students write solid essays that miss the prompt by addressing a related but different question. The key is to identify what the prompt is really asking—not just the surface topic, but the underlying question about who you are or how you think. Tutors help you break down prompts carefully, develop a thesis that directly addresses the specific question asked, and check throughout your drafts that every paragraph supports that central answer.

Authentic voice emerges when you stop trying to sound "impressive" and instead write how you actually think and speak—while maintaining appropriate formality for the context. This means using specific details from your life, your natural sentence rhythms, and genuine examples rather than generic accomplishments. A tutor can help you identify when your writing sounds forced, encourage you to take risks with your ideas, and show you how to maintain your personality while still meeting application standards.

Begin by carefully reading and annotating each prompt to understand exactly what's being asked, then brainstorm specific moments, challenges, or insights from your life that connect to the prompt—not generic accomplishments everyone lists. Before diving into writing, many students benefit from mapping out their main idea and supporting points so the structure is clear. Varsity Tutors connects you with expert tutors who can guide you through this planning phase and help you start with a strong foundation rather than rewriting from scratch later.

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