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Eric

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2+ years

Eric

Bachelor's
Eric's other Tutor Subjects
1st-10th Grade math
K-5th Grade Reading
Nutrition
SAT Essay

I'm a current medical student at Rush Medical College with a deep appreciation for the process of learning. I know from personal experience that mastering new material doesn't always come easily it takes patience, structure, and persistence. My own journey has taught me the value of steady progress...

Education

University of Chicago

Bachelor's

Alana

Certified Tutor

2+ years

Alana

Bachelor's
Alana's other Tutor Subjects
1st-12th Grade Writing
1st-12th Grade Reading
6th-10th Grade English
6th-8th Grade Chemistry

I graduated from Yale University in 2021 with a B.A. in the History of Science, Medicine, and Public Health. Following my graduation, I attended Imperial College London on a Fulbright Scholarship to complete my Master of Public Health. Tutoring has been a joy for me over the years, as I've worked w...

Education

Yale University

Bachelor's

Bilge

Certified Tutor

2+ years

Bilge

Doctorate (e.g., PhD, MD, JD, etc.)
Bilge's other Tutor Subjects
9th-12th Grade Biology
9th-12th Grade AP Biology
10th-12th Grade Science
10th-12th Grade Writing

As a passionate Neuroscientist with a PhD from Wesleyan University, I have over 6 years of experience in tutoring subjects such neuroscience, neural systems, molecular biology, genetics, general biology, and scientific writing (AP level, college level, and high school level). My teaching philosophy...

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Wesleyan University

Doctorate (e.g., PhD, MD, JD, etc.)

Middle East Technical University

Bachelor's

Alicia

Certified Tutor

2+ years

Alicia

Master's/Graduate
Alicia's other Tutor Subjects
10th Grade AP Microeconomics
Pre-Algebra
Statistics
Middle School Math

As a dedicated tutor with a Master's degree in Social Work from Columbia University, I am passionate about fostering personal growth and academic success in my students. I employ a student-centered approach that emphasizes empathy and understanding. My goal is to create a supportive learning environ...

Education

Columbia University

Master's/Graduate

University of Saint Joseph

Bachelor's

Kate

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Kate

Masters, Environmental Engineering
Kate's other Tutor Subjects
AP Calculus BC
AP Calculus AB
College Algebra
Pre-Calculus

I'm available to tutor biology, chemistry, physics, math from Algebra up through AP Calculus, SAT test prep, and French. I've been tutoring students in science and math for 7 years. I also spent 8 months working and studying in France, and have tutored high school and adult students in French. When ...

Education

Massachusetts Institute of Technology

Masters, Environmental Engineering

Massachusetts Institute of Technology

Bachelors

Test Scores
SAT
1580
Jessica

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Jessica

PHD, Medicine
Jessica's other Tutor Subjects
College Algebra
Calculus
Algebra
Honors Chemistry

I am a licensed physician from Florida who is currently changing careers. I graduated from the University of Pennsylvania in 2009 and have extensive tutoring and editing experience. While a student, I became a certified writing tutor through the Critical Writing Department. Since I completed my writ...

Education

Nova Southeastern University

PHD, Medicine

University of Pennsylvania

Bachelors, History

University of Pennsylvania

undergraduate

Test Scores
SAT
1540
Jai

Certified Tutor

9+ years

Jai

Bachelors in Electrical Engineering and Computer Science
Jai's other Tutor Subjects
Calculus
Algebra
Electrical Engineering
ACT Writing

I'm a recent Stanford graduate (Electrical Engineering and Computer Science), and have been working at a major Management Consulting firm for a few years now. I personally scored a 2360 (out of 2400) on the SAT and 35 on the ACT and was successful in gaining admission to several top universities. I'...

Education

Stanford University

Bachelors in Electrical Engineering and Computer Science

Test Scores
SAT
1590
ACT
35
Jeffrey

Certified Tutor

6+ years

Jeffrey

Doctor of Philosophy, Mechanical Engineering
Jeffrey's other Tutor Subjects
Pre-Calculus
Geometry
Calculus
Algebra

I am enrolled in the Mechanical Engineering PhD program at Rice University which will begin Fall 2020, and I am hoping to return to academia as a professor after earning my PhD. In the meantime, I am looking to share my passion for gaining knowledge, specifically in STEM, by educating the up and com...

Education

University of Notre Dame

Bachelor of Science

Rice University

Doctor of Philosophy, Mechanical Engineering

Test Scores
ACT
34
Erika

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Erika

Master of Public Policy, Public Policy
Erika's other Tutor Subjects
Pre-Algebra
Middle School Math
Calculus
Algebra

I am available to tutor middle and high school math, history and test prep. I have tutored math and history in the past and I previously taught a test prep course at a school in Hanoi, Vietnam. I have a lot of experience teaching all the need-to-know tricks to doing great on the SATS/ACTS! When I am...

Education

Harvard University

Master of Public Policy, Public Policy

Test Scores
ACT
32
Rhea

Certified Tutor

6+ years

Rhea

Bachelor of Science, Biology, General
Rhea's other Tutor Subjects
AP Statistics
AP Calculus BC
AP Calculus AB
Pre-Algebra

I am a current student at the University of Chicago. I am working towards a Bachelor of Science in Biological Sciences, and I am on the pre-medical track. I am extremely passionate about tutoring, and I have several years of experience tutoring students in my high school's learning center in various...

Education

University of Chicago

Bachelor of Science, Biology, General

Test Scores
Perfect Score
SAT
1550
ACT
36

Frequently Asked Questions

Essays are often one of the most heavily weighted components of private high school applications. Admissions committees use essays to understand your personality, values, and writing ability beyond what grades and test scores reveal. A compelling essay can be the deciding factor between applicants with similar academic records, making strong writing skills essential for competitive Buffalo-area private schools.

Many students struggle with finding their authentic voice while meeting formal essay requirements, organizing their thoughts coherently, and avoiding clichéd responses to prompts like "Why do you want to attend our school?" Other frequent challenges include managing writer's block, revising effectively, and balancing personal storytelling with the specific expectations of each school's prompt.

A strong essay opens with a compelling hook that captures attention, develops a clear thesis or central idea, and supports it with specific examples and details rather than generalizations. The essay should demonstrate self-awareness, reflect your genuine interests and values, and conclude by connecting your story to what you'll contribute to the school community. Proper grammar and polished prose are expected, but authentic voice matters just as much as technical correctness.

Expert tutors provide personalized feedback on your essay drafts, helping you clarify your ideas, strengthen your arguments, and develop your unique voice. They guide you through the revision process, identifying areas where you can add more specific details, tighten your organization, or deepen your self-reflection. With one-on-one instruction, you'll learn strategies for tackling different essay prompts and gain confidence in your writing before submitting applications.

Most students applying to several private schools should plan 4-8 weeks to write and revise multiple essays thoughtfully. Each school typically requires 2-4 essays with different prompts, so you'll want time to brainstorm, draft, revise, and get feedback on each one. Starting early reduces stress and gives you space to let essays sit between drafts, which helps you revise with fresh eyes.

Your authentic voice comes through when you write about topics you genuinely care about and use your natural vocabulary and sentence patterns—not overly formal or flowery language. The key is balancing personality with professionalism: be yourself, but also proofread carefully and follow the school's guidelines. Tutors can help you identify where your writing sounds most natural and show you how to maintain that voice while meeting academic standards.

Start by reading each prompt carefully and identifying exactly what the school is asking—some prompts seek personal stories, while others ask about academic interests or fit with the school's values. Brainstorm specific examples from your life that answer the prompt directly, avoiding generic responses. Before you write, outline your main idea and supporting details, then draft with the prompt visible so you stay focused on answering what was asked.

Effective revision happens in stages: first read for big-picture issues like organization and clarity, then focus on sentence-level improvements like word choice and grammar, and finally proofread for typos. Taking a break between drafts helps you see your writing with fresh eyes. Getting feedback from a tutor during revision is invaluable—they can spot unclear passages you might miss and suggest specific improvements that strengthen your argument and voice.

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