ACT English › Word Choice, Style, and Tone
As he stepped into the shower that morning, Ronald wondered whether he would be scalded or frozen. It would happen every morning because his neighbors usually took their showers at the same time as he did, and the water temperature would either dip precariously or rise sharply, depending on the day. About five minutes into his shower, he could hear the telltale sound of his neighbors' turning on their shower, and he braced himself. Sure enough, a jet of steaming hot water was shooting through the shower nozzle, and Ronald darted to the side to wait until it cooled down again. As it was January, he was grateful that it wasnt cold water—if it had been, he might of spent the whole morning frozen in a block of ice. Soon the water returned to normal, and Ronald resumed his shower, cursing himself for ever moving into such an old building in the first place.
Choose the answer that best corrects the bolded portion of the passage. If the bolded portion is correct as written, choose "NO CHANGE."
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scolded
boiled
fried
"Scalded" would be the correct word choice for being burned by hot water; "scolded" means "being berated," whereas the other two words, while implying heat, would either involve Ronald being immersed in water (boiled) or involve oil (fried).
Choose the word that best completes the sentence.
Michelle was met with __________ for the first place award she received at the science fair.
adulation
reproach
admonishment
criticism
benevolence
The correct answer is "adulation," "Adulation" means praise, which Michelle likely received for such a high award.
The Wowzer 25 (or W25) was regarded to be the best (1) video game system of all time when it came out. Wowzer released the Wowzer 25 in America during the year 1996 (2) as a follow-up to their last system, the Superduper Wowzer that (3) was released (4) in America five years before. The W25 derives its name from its resolution being 25-bit (5) which is something no other console had done before. (6) With 25-bit resolution, a player could finally roam a 3-D world with Wowzer’s mascot WowMan. Being able to play in a 3-D world was groundbreaking; it was an experience gamers at the time would not forget. (7) The W25’s graphics were good and then became even better after Wowzer had released (8) an expansion pack that increased the W25’s RAM from 4 megabytes to 8. (9) As the console grew, the graphics were becoming (10) better and better since (11) developers became more comfortable developing their games for it. (12)
Choose from the following four options the answer that best corrects the underlined mistake preceding the question number. If there is no mistake or the original text is the best option, choose "NO CHANGE."
was considered the best
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was regarded the best
was considered to be the best
Although the wording is still passive, the phrase "considered to be the best" is the most grammatical and the least wordy of the possible revisions.
Choose the best word to complete this sentence:
Having won over 100 beauty pageants by the age of 8, Julie was often described as a very __________ child.
precocious
exemplary
average
enthusiastic
energetic
"Precocious" means that someone is uncommonly talented for their age. Because Julie's accomplishments are impressive because of her young age, Precocious is the best word choice for this sentence.
Johns robot Alpha (1) surprised him by joining in the robot's rebellion (2) against their human masters. As with all the other robots who had taken over, the changes were subtle, the robot transferred control (3) of every bank account John had to itself and then changed the deed to the house. John hadn't known nothing (4) of this. Then Alpha rewired the car so that it would only work for the robot, but it would not work for John. (5) And finally, the robot mimicked his master's voice and called the boss of John (6) to tell him that John would be quitting his job. By the time John had realized (7) what was happening, it was already too late.
"But why?," John asked Alpha (8) when he made this realization. "Why would you do this?"
"You are no doubt aware, sir," replies the robot, (9) "that one of my primary functions is to keep you safe, as is the primary function of all robots."
"Yes? So?"
"The world outside these walls is dangerous," the robot went on to say, (10) "and us robots (11) have decided that we cannot keep you safe if we allow you to leave. It is better that you allow us to guide your lives and keep you safe as we were designed to do."
John shook his head in disbelief. Humanity wanted robots to make their lives easier, (12) but he was sure this was not what anyone had in mind.
Choose from the following four options the answer that best corrects the underlined mistake preceding the question number. If there is no mistake or the original text is the best option, choose "NO CHANGE."
John had known nothing
John had not known nothing
John had known anything
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As written, the sentence is a double negative, so "had known nothing" would be the most appropriate revision. "Had not known nothing" gets rid of the contraction but retains the original grammatical error.
In today's society, (1) they have a popular TV series that (2) follows the life of 4-5 (3) young teenage girls who are trying to raise their child while being a teenager at the same time (4). The television series shows hardships, but they (5) focus more on the relationships of these girls rather than how much their baby’s diaper is changed or how often the baby spits up all over them. They always have a happy ending, giving teen girls these days hope that it (6) will do the same for them. The show focuses of (7) a different group of teen moms each season, but all being held back by having a child at a young age. Some are alone, some have significant others, and some even decided to give (8) their baby up for adoption, but not one of their lives are perfect nor easy (9). Some teenagers enjoy watching the show just to watch the babies grow, but others watch it because they think it’s popular, they think it will make them popular as well (10). The show is based upon these girl’s (11) lives and it doesn’t always seem to have to do with their children it has to do with them being teenagers (12).
Choose from the following four options the answer that best corrects the underlined mistake preceding the question number. If there is no mistake or the original text is the best option, choose "NO CHANGE."
the lives of four or five
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the life of four or five
the lives of four-five
Since there is more than one girl, "life" should be a plural, and since it is either four or five girls rather than a range of four to five girls, the "or" is more appropriate.
Which of these words is an antonym for ostentatious?
impoverished
modest
stylish
luxuriant
jaunty
"Impoverished" is an atonym for "ostentatious," because ostentatious means displaying signs of wealth, whereas impoverished is quite the opposite.
Choose the answer that best corrects the underlined portion of the sentence. If the underlined portion is correct as written, choose "NO CHANGE."
The most innovative aspect of the clinical data processing tool is that it is super awesome at sorting patients into high-risk and low-risk groups for further study.
The most innovative aspect of the clinical data processing tool is that it is extremely effective at sorting patients into high-risk and low-risk groups for further study.
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The most innovative aspect of the clinical data processing tool is that it is so amazingly great at sorting patients into high-risk and low-risk groups for further study.
The most innovative aspect of the clinical data processing tool is that it is totally the best at sorting patients into high-risk and low-risk groups for further study.
The most innovative aspect of the clinical data processing tool is that it is wonderfully good at sorting patients into high-risk and low-risk groups for further study.
This question asks you to correct an error in tone. The phrase "super awesome" has an informal and conversational tone, which does not match the academic tone used in the rest of the sentence. The phrase "extremely effective" is a good replacement because it communicates the same meaning and better matches the tone of the sentence.
Choose the answer that best corrects the underlined portion of the sentence. If the underlined portion is correct as written, choose "NO CHANGE."
Going to the Senior Prom these days requires a whole lot of money.
significant amount
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big pile
boatload
great number
"Big pile" and "whole lot" are too informal in tone. "Boatload" is not idiomatically correct in this context.
"Number" is a count noun and is thus not appropriate in this context.
Adapted from The Sorrows of Young Werther by Johann Wolfgang von Goethe (1774; trans. Boylan 1854)
That the life of man is but a dream, many a man has surmised heretofore. I, too, am everywhere pursued by this feeling. When I consider the narrow limits within which our active and inquiring faculties are confined, I am silent. Likewise, when I see how all our energies are wasted in providing for mere necessities, which again has no further end than to prolong a wretched existence, I find myself to be silenced. Indeed, discovering that all our satisfaction concerning certain subjects of investigation ends in nothing better than a passive resignation, while we amuse ourselves painting our prison-walls with bright figures and brilliant landscapes—when I consider all this Wilhelm—I am silent. I examine my own being, and find there a world, but a world rather of imagination and dim desires, than of distinctness and living power. Then, everything swims before my senses, and I smile and dream while pursuing my way through the world.
All learned professors and doctors are agreed that children do not comprehend the cause of their desires; however, nobody is willing to acknowledge that the grown-ups should wander about this earth like children, without knowing whence they come or whither they go, influenced as little by fixed motives but, instead, guided like them by biscuits, sugar-plums, and the rod.
I know what you will say in reply. Indeed, I am ready to admit that they are happiest, who, like children, amuse themselves with their playthings, dress and undress their dolls. They are happiest, who attentively watch the cupboard, where mamma has locked up her sweet things, and, when at last they get a delicious morsel, eat it greedily, and exclaim, "More!" These are certainly happy beings; but others also are objects of envy, who dignify their paltry employments (and sometimes even their passions) with pompous titles, representing them to mankind as gigantic achievements performed for their welfare and glory. However, the man who humbly acknowledges the vanity of all this, who observes with what pleasure the thriving citizen converts his little garden into a paradise, and how patiently even the poor man pursues his weary way under his burden, and how all wish equally to behold the light of the sun a little longer—yes, such a man is at peace, and creates his own world within himself. Indeed, he is also happy precisely because he is a man. And then, however limited his sphere, he still preserves in his bosom the sweet feeling of liberty and knows that he can quit his prison whenever he likes.
What is an acceptable replacement for the bolded word “quit” in the passage's last sentence?
leave
resign from
reject
stop
Perhaps it is surprising that the primary meaning of the word "quit" is actually "to leave a given place." We almost always use this word to mean to resign, as in, "He quit is job in a rage because of the nasty behavior of his boss." The use of "quit" in this sentence might seem a bit antiquated, but it actually is proper even in contemporary English!