Create Cohesion Among Claims and Evidence
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7th Grade Writing › Create Cohesion Among Claims and Evidence
Improve connections. Which revision best fixes the incorrect transition and makes the relationships among ideas clearer?
Original:
“Students should bring reusable water bottles to school. However, this reduces plastic waste because fewer disposable bottles are thrown away. For example, our cafeteria sells hundreds of single-use bottles each week.”
“Students should bring reusable water bottles to school. Meanwhile, this reduces plastic waste. Therefore, our cafeteria sells hundreds of single-use bottles each week.”
“Students should bring reusable water bottles to school. This reduces plastic waste. This reduces plastic waste. This reduces plastic waste.”
“Students should bring reusable water bottles to school. Additionally, this reduces plastic waste because fewer disposable bottles are thrown away. For example, our cafeteria sells hundreds of single-use bottles each week.”
“Students should bring reusable water bottles to school. However, for example, this reduces plastic waste. Because our cafeteria sells bottles each week.”
Explanation
This question tests using words, phrases, and clauses to create cohesion (smooth flow, connected ideas) and clarify relationships among claim(s), reasons, and evidence in argumentative writing—employing transitions making explicit how evidence supports reasons, how reasons support claim, how ideas connect. The original misuses "However" (which signals contrast) when the ideas actually support each other, creating confusion about the logical relationships. Choice A correctly removes the contradictory "However" and adds "Additionally" to signal that reducing plastic waste is a benefit supporting the claim, while keeping "For example" to introduce specific evidence about cafeteria bottle sales. Choice B creates fragments and maintains illogical transitions, C uses "Meanwhile" and "Therefore" inappropriately, and D relies on repetition rather than transitions. When revising for cohesion, ensure transitions match the actual logical relationships between ideas: use additive transitions for supporting points, not contrasting ones.
Which transition best completes the blank to show that the writer is adding another reason that supports the same claim?
“Schools should offer more arts classes. Art helps students express ideas in different ways. ____ arts classes can also build teamwork when students collaborate on performances and group projects.”
Nevertheless,
For example,
Additionally,
Therefore,
Explanation
This question tests using words, phrases, and clauses to create cohesion (smooth flow, connected ideas) and clarify relationships among claim(s), reasons, and evidence in argumentative writing—employing transitions making explicit how evidence supports reasons, how reasons support claim, how ideas connect. Additive transitions like "additionally," "furthermore," and "moreover" signal that the writer is adding another point that supports the same claim, building a stronger argument through multiple reasons. The paragraph presents one benefit of arts classes (expressing ideas differently), and "Additionally" appropriately introduces a second benefit (building teamwork), both supporting the claim for more arts classes. Choice A correctly uses this additive transition, while "Nevertheless" (B) wrongly signals contrast, "For example" (C) incorrectly suggests exemplification rather than addition, and "Therefore" (D) mistakenly indicates conclusion. When presenting multiple reasons supporting the same claim, use additive transitions to signal that you're building your argument with complementary points.
Compare cohesion. Which version creates better cohesion by clearly connecting the claim, reasons, and evidence?
Version 1:
“Students should do community service to graduate. Service teaches responsibility. A local volunteer center reported that teens who volunteer are more likely to keep a part-time job for a full year. Students learn about community needs.”
Version 2:
“Students should do community service to graduate because service teaches responsibility. For example, a local volunteer center reported that teens who volunteer are more likely to keep a part-time job for a full year. Furthermore, community service helps students learn about local needs.”
Version 1, because it has shorter sentences and avoids transitions.
Version 1, because it includes a statistic, which automatically makes the relationships clear.
Both versions are equally cohesive because they discuss the same topic.
Version 2, because “because,” “for example,” and “furthermore” clarify claim-reason and reason-evidence connections.
Explanation
This question tests using words, phrases, and clauses to create cohesion (smooth flow, connected ideas) and clarify relationships among claim(s), reasons, and evidence in argumentative writing—employing transitions making explicit how evidence supports reasons, how reasons support claim, how ideas connect. Version 2 creates superior cohesion through strategic use of transitions that clarify logical relationships: "because" explicitly connects the reason to the claim, "For example" signals that specific evidence follows to support the general reason, and "Furthermore" adds an additional supporting reason. Version 1 merely lists related ideas without showing how they connect, like presenting puzzle pieces without assembling them. Choice B correctly identifies Version 2's superior cohesion through its transitional phrases, while A wrongly prefers disconnection, C mistakenly believes statistics alone create clarity, and D incorrectly equates topic similarity with cohesion. Effective argumentative writing requires transitions that make the logical structure visible, guiding readers through the claim-reason-evidence relationships.
Which revision best improves cohesion by adding connecting language that clarifies how the reasons relate to the claim?
Original:
“School libraries should stay open after school. Students need a quiet place to work. The library has free internet. Some students don’t have reliable Wi-Fi at home.”
“School libraries should stay open after school because students need a quiet place to work. Additionally, the library has free internet; for example, it can support students who don’t have reliable Wi-Fi at home.”
“School libraries should stay open after school. Students need a quiet place to work. The library has free internet. Some students don’t have reliable Wi-Fi at home.”
“School libraries should stay open after school. Meanwhile, students need a quiet place to work. However, the library has free internet.”
“School libraries should stay open after school. Students need a quiet place to work, and the library has free internet, and some students don’t have reliable Wi-Fi at home.”
Explanation
This question tests using words, phrases, and clauses to create cohesion (smooth flow, connected ideas) and clarify relationships among claim(s), reasons, and evidence in argumentative writing—employing transitions making explicit how evidence supports reasons, how reasons support claim, how ideas connect. Cohesive arguments use transitions to explicitly connect claims to reasons and reasons to evidence, creating a logical flow rather than a disconnected list. Choice C effectively uses "because" to link the claim to the first reason, "Additionally" to introduce a second supporting reason, and "for example" to show how the Wi-Fi issue illustrates the internet access benefit. Choice A lacks any connecting language, B overuses "and" without clarifying relationships, and D uses inappropriate transitions ("Meanwhile" and "However") that suggest contrast or simultaneity rather than support. When revising for cohesion, use causal transitions ("because," "since") to connect reasons to claims, additive transitions ("additionally," "furthermore") to introduce new supporting points, and exemplifying transitions ("for example," "specifically") to introduce evidence.
In the paragraph below, which transition best fits the blank to clarify the relationship between the reason and the evidence?
Claim: Our school should start a composting program.
Reason: Composting would reduce how much trash we send to landfills. ____ the city’s waste report shows that about 30% of what schools throw away is food scraps and paper towels—items that could be composted.
As a result,
For example,
However,
Meanwhile,
Explanation
This question tests using words, phrases, and clauses to create cohesion (smooth flow, connected ideas) and clarify relationships among claim(s), reasons, and evidence in argumentative writing—employing transitions making explicit how evidence supports reasons, how reasons support claim, how ideas connect. Transitions like "for example" introduce specific evidence that illustrates or supports a general reason, creating a clear logical flow from abstract to concrete. The reason states that composting reduces landfill waste, and "For example" signals that the following statistic (30% of school trash could be composted) provides specific evidence supporting this general claim. Choice B correctly uses "For example" to show the evidence-reason relationship, while "However" (A) incorrectly signals contrast, "As a result" (C) wrongly indicates consequence, and "Meanwhile" (D) inappropriately suggests simultaneous but unrelated events. When connecting evidence to reasons, use transitions like "for example," "specifically," or "for instance" to signal that you're moving from general statements to specific supporting details.
Select the best transition to clarify a cause-and-effect relationship between the evidence and the claim.
“Schools should limit homework on weeknights. Many students stay up late finishing assignments; a student survey found that 62% get fewer than 8 hours of sleep on school nights. ____ sleep loss can make it harder to pay attention and remember new information in class.”
For instance,
Consequently,
Similarly,
Because
Explanation
This question tests using words, phrases, and clauses to create cohesion (smooth flow, connected ideas) and clarify relationships among claim(s), reasons, and evidence in argumentative writing—employing transitions making explicit how evidence supports reasons, how reasons support claim, how ideas connect. Cause-and-effect transitions like "consequently," "as a result," and "therefore" show that one idea leads to or causes another, essential for argumentative logic. The evidence shows students get insufficient sleep due to homework, and "Consequently" signals that sleep loss causes the negative effects on attention and memory, which supports limiting homework. Choice C correctly uses this causal transition, while "For instance" (A) wrongly suggests example, "Because" (B) would create a fragment and reverse the logic, and "Similarly" (D) incorrectly indicates comparison. When showing how evidence leads to effects that support your claim, use transitions that make the causal chain explicit, helping readers follow your reasoning from evidence through consequences to conclusion.
Determine the missing connector. Which phrase best fits the blank to show that the second sentence provides specific evidence supporting the first?
“Longer recess can improve students’ focus in class. ____ one middle school reported 20% fewer behavior referrals after it increased recess by 10 minutes.”
Meanwhile,
In conclusion,
Specifically,
On the other hand,
Explanation
This question tests using words, phrases, and clauses to create cohesion (smooth flow, connected ideas) and clarify relationships among claim(s), reasons, and evidence in argumentative writing—employing transitions making explicit how evidence supports reasons, how reasons support claim, how ideas connect. Transitions that introduce specific examples or evidence include "specifically," "for example," "for instance," and "in particular," signaling movement from general statements to concrete support. The first sentence makes a general claim about recess improving focus, and "Specifically" appropriately introduces the particular evidence of one school's 20% reduction in behavior referrals. Choice B correctly uses this exemplifying transition, while "In conclusion" (A) wrongly signals ending, "On the other hand" (C) incorrectly suggests contrast, and "Meanwhile" (D) inappropriately indicates simultaneity. When moving from general reasons to specific evidence, use transitions that signal exemplification to help readers understand that concrete details are supporting abstract claims.
Which transition best completes the blank to show contrast and introduce a counterargument?
“Some people argue that requiring uniforms would limit students’ self-expression. ____ uniforms can reduce distractions and help students focus on learning rather than clothing brands.”
However,
Similarly,
As a result,
For instance,
Explanation
This question tests using words, phrases, and clauses to create cohesion (smooth flow, connected ideas) and clarify relationships among claim(s), reasons, and evidence in argumentative writing—employing transitions making explicit how evidence supports reasons, how reasons support claim, how ideas connect. Contrast transitions like "however" signal a shift from one viewpoint to an opposing one, essential for introducing counterarguments or alternative perspectives in argumentative writing. The first sentence presents an objection to uniforms (limiting self-expression), and "However" appropriately signals the shift to a contrasting benefit (reducing distractions). Choice C correctly uses this contrast transition, while "For instance" (A) wrongly suggests example, "Similarly" (B) incorrectly indicates agreement, and "As a result" (D) mistakenly implies causation. When addressing counterarguments, use contrast transitions like "however," "nevertheless," or "on the other hand" to clearly signal the shift from opposing views to your own position.
Identify the function of the underlined transition in this argument.
“Students should have a short break between classes. As a result, fewer students would arrive late, since crowded hallways would have more time to clear.”
What relationship does the underlined transition signal?
It introduces a counterargument that disagrees with the claim.
It gives a specific example to illustrate a statistic.
It signals a cause-and-effect relationship (a result of the previous idea).
It adds an unrelated new topic.
Explanation
This question tests using words, phrases, and clauses to create cohesion (smooth flow, connected ideas) and clarify relationships among claim(s), reasons, and evidence in argumentative writing—employing transitions making explicit how evidence supports reasons, how reasons support claim, how ideas connect. The transition "As a result" signals a cause-and-effect relationship, indicating that what follows is a consequence or outcome of what came before. In this argument, the break between classes (cause) would lead to fewer late arrivals because hallways would have time to clear (effect). Choice B correctly identifies this cause-and-effect function, while A incorrectly suggests counterargument, C wrongly claims unrelatedness, and D mistakenly identifies it as exemplification. Understanding transition functions helps writers choose the right connectors: use "as a result," "consequently," or "therefore" for effects; "for example" or "for instance" for illustrations; "however" or "on the other hand" for contrasts.
Read this draft argument:
"The town should plant more trees in parks. Trees provide shade. Summer temperatures are rising. Trees improve air quality. Leaves trap some pollution particles."
Which set of transitions best improves cohesion by showing (1) a cause-effect link and (2) that the last sentence is evidence for the air-quality reason?
Add "Since" before "Summer temperatures are rising" and "For instance," before "Leaves trap some pollution particles."
Add "Because" before "Summer temperatures are rising" and "However," before "Leaves trap some pollution particles."
Add "Similarly," before "Summer temperatures are rising" and "In conclusion," before "Leaves trap some pollution particles."
Add "As a result," before "Summer temperatures are rising" and "Moreover," before "Leaves trap some pollution particles."
Explanation
This question tests using words, phrases, and clauses to create cohesion (smooth flow, connected ideas) and clarify relationships among claim(s), reasons, and evidence in argumentative writing—employing transitions making explicit how evidence supports reasons, how reasons support claim, how ideas connect. Option D correctly uses two different types of transitions to create cohesion: "Since" establishes a causal relationship showing that rising temperatures are a reason why shade from trees is needed, and "For instance" introduces specific evidence about how leaves trap pollution particles to support the air quality claim. These transitions clarify the logical relationships between ideas and show how evidence supports reasons. Option A incorrectly uses "Similarly" for a causal relationship and "In conclusion" for evidence. Option B wrongly uses "However" to suggest contrast where support is intended. Option C misuses "As a result" to suggest rising temperatures are a consequence rather than a cause. Effective argumentative writing matches transition types to the logical relationships they represent—causal transitions for reasons, exemplification transitions for evidence, and appropriate connectors for each type of relationship in the argument.