English Language Arts: Creative Writing (TEKS.ELA.9-12.11.A) Practice Test
•18 QuestionsAfter the call, I drove to the old workshop the way you remember a melody: not note by note, but by a pressure in the chest. Dust hung in the light, and the bench still carried the bruised outline of my father's hands. He was upstairs, sleeping carefully, the stroke making a map I did not know how to read. I wandered, waiting for a language to return. There were jars of screws labeled in his tidy slant, saws with their teeth showing, the radio welded to one station. I wanted to tell him I had learned to measure twice, cut once, but the phrase felt like a tourist in my mouth. We have not spoken well in years. In the silence, I practiced greetings I would abandon. When I climbed the steps, the boards announced me, and something in the house paused, as if considering whether to forgive me.
Which revision best elevates the literary quality through more precise, purposeful imagery while preserving the piece's intimate voice and complex intent?
Which revision best elevates the literary quality through more precise, purposeful imagery while preserving the piece's intimate voice and complex intent?