Correcting Punctuation Errors: Comma Splices - PSAT Writing

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Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English. One of the answer choices reproduces the underlined portion as it is written in the sentence.

One of Robert's role models is his father, a fireman, local hero, and small business owner, he started a popular clothing retail store.

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Grammatically, it is best to avoid use of verbs ending in "-ing" where they are not necessary. The correct answer avoids this by using the phrase "owner who started." It is also the most efficient (and least wordy) option.

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