ISEE Upper Level Essay Flashcards: Revising For Clarity

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This deck focuses on Revising For Clarity, giving you a quick way to review the definitions, rules, and examples that matter most for ISEE Upper Level Essay.

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Flashcard 1: Find and correct the fragment: "Because the library was closed."

Answer: Correct: "Because the library was closed, we went home.". Adding an independent clause completes the thought initiated by the subordinate clause.

Flashcard 2: Which revision most improves clarity by replacing a vague pronoun: "When Sarah met Maya, she was nervous"?

Answer: Correct: "When Sarah met Maya, Sarah was nervous.". Replacing the ambiguous pronoun 'she' with the specific name 'Sarah' clarifies who was nervous in the sentence.

Flashcard 3: Which punctuation correctly joins two independent clauses without a conjunction?

Answer: A semicolon. It links closely related independent clauses without requiring a coordinating conjunction.

Flashcard 4: Find and correct the run-on: "I studied all night I still felt unprepared."

Answer: Correct: "I studied all night, but I still felt unprepared.". Adding a comma and contrasting conjunction 'but' properly connects the two independent clauses.

Flashcard 5: Which revision removes redundancy: "In my personal opinion, I think the rule is unfair."

Answer: Correct: "I think the rule is unfair.". Removing 'In my personal opinion' eliminates repetition since 'I think' already conveys personal viewpoint.

Flashcard 6: What is a sentence fragment?

Answer: A group of words punctuated as a sentence but lacking a subject or a verb. It fails to form a complete thought, often missing a subject, verb, or independent clause.

Flashcard 7: Which revision best improves coherence by adding a transition: "I practiced daily. I improved."

Answer: Correct: "I practiced daily; as a result, I improved.". Inserting 'as a result' clarifies the causal relationship, improving logical flow between sentences.

Flashcard 8: What is the most direct definition of a topic sentence in a paragraph?

Answer: A sentence that states the paragraph's main idea. It introduces the central focus that unifies and guides the supporting details in the paragraph.

Flashcard 9: What is the most effective way to reduce wordiness in a sentence?

Answer: Replace inflated phrases with precise words and remove unnecessary words. This method streamlines sentences by favoring conciseness and precision without losing essential meaning.

Flashcard 10: Choose the correct punctuation: "The test was difficult   I finished on time."

Answer: Correct: "The test was difficult; I finished on time.". The semicolon connects the two related independent clauses appropriately without a conjunction.

Flashcard 11: Find and correct the apostrophe error: "The dogs tail wagged."

Answer: Correct: "The dog's tail wagged.". The apostrophe in 'dog's' correctly indicates possession of the tail by the dog.

Flashcard 12: Choose the correct word for formal tone: "The results were kinda surprising."

Answer: Correct: "The results were somewhat surprising.". Replacing informal 'kinda' with 'somewhat' elevates the language to a more formal level.

Flashcard 13: What is the primary purpose of a concluding sentence in a paragraph?

Answer: To reinforce the main idea and provide closure. It summarizes key points and gives the paragraph a sense of completion.

Flashcard 14: Which revision fixes inconsistent verb tense: "He walks to class and grabbed a seat."

Answer: Correct: "He walked to class and grabbed a seat.". Shifting 'walks' to past tense 'walked' aligns it with 'grabbed' for tense consistency.

Flashcard 15: Which revision fixes a misplaced modifier: "Walking to school, the backpack broke my strap"?

Answer: Correct: "Walking to school, I broke my backpack strap.". Repositioning the modifier to modify 'I' corrects the illogical suggestion that the backpack was walking.

Flashcard 16: What is parallel structure?

Answer: Using the same grammatical form for items in a series or comparison. It maintains consistency in grammatical form for balanced and clear lists or comparisons.

Flashcard 17: Find and correct the pronoun-antecedent agreement error: "Every runner should tie their shoes."

Answer: Correct: "Every runner should tie his or her shoes.". 'Every runner' is singular, so the pronoun must agree in number with 'his or her' instead of plural 'their'.

Flashcard 18: Which transition best signals a cause-and-effect relationship?

Answer: Therefore. It indicates a logical conclusion or result stemming from the prior cause.

Flashcard 19: Find and correct the subject-verb agreement error: "Each of the students have a locker."

Answer: Correct: "Each of the students has a locker.". 'Each' is a singular subject, requiring the singular verb 'has' for agreement.

Flashcard 20: Identify the best revision for concision: "Due to the fact that it rained, the game was canceled."

Answer: Correct: "Because it rained, the game was canceled.". Substituting 'Because' for the verbose 'Due to the fact that' eliminates unnecessary words while retaining meaning.

Flashcard 21: Which transition best signals contrast between two ideas?

Answer: However. It introduces an opposing or contrasting idea to the one previously stated.

Flashcard 22: Find and correct faulty comparison: "Her essay is better than any student in the class."

Answer: Correct: "Her essay is better than any other student's in the class.". Adding 'other' and possessive 'student's' ensures logical comparison between essays, excluding her own.

Flashcard 23: What is a run-on sentence?

Answer: Two independent clauses joined without proper punctuation or a conjunction. It improperly connects multiple complete thoughts, causing confusion without appropriate separation or linking.

Flashcard 24: What does it mean for writing to be coherent?

Answer: Ideas follow a logical order with clear connections between sentences and paragraphs. Coherent writing ensures logical progression and smooth transitions for better reader understanding.

Flashcard 25: Find and correct the parallelism error: "She likes hiking, to swim, and biking."

Answer: Correct: "She likes hiking, swimming, and biking.". Converting all items to gerunds ensures consistent grammatical structure in the list.