5TH GRADE ELA • WRITING

Writing a Strong Concluding Statement

Learn how to wrap up your informational writing so your reader walks away feeling satisfied and informed.

Why Do We Need Conclusions?

Have you ever read a great story or article, and then it just… stopped? No ending, no wrap-up—just nothing. That probably felt weird, right? That's because readers expect a conclusion. A concluding statement or section is the final part of a piece of writing. It tells the reader, "Okay, we're done—here's what all of this means."

People have been writing conclusions for a very long time. Let's take a quick look at how the idea of wrapping up your writing has been important throughout history.

Ancient Greece
Greek speakers like Aristotle taught that a good speech needs three parts: a beginning, a middle, and an ending. The ending should remind listeners of the main point so they remember it.
The 1800s
Schools in America started teaching the "five-paragraph essay." This format always ends with a conclusion paragraph that ties everything together.
The 1900s
Newspapers developed the "inverted pyramid" style, putting the most important facts first. Even with this style, feature articles still close with a strong ending to leave an impression.
Today
The Common Core standards ask 5th graders to "provide a concluding statement or section related to the information or explanation presented." That's what this lesson is all about!

So whether you're writing a report about volcanoes or explaining how a bicycle works, your reader needs you to finish strong. A conclusion is like putting the cherry on top of a sundae—it completes the whole thing.

Core Ideas About Conclusions

Before you can write a strong conclusion, you need to understand four important rules. Think of these as your "conclusion toolkit." Every time you write a concluding statement or section, pull out these tools and use them.

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It Connects to Your Topic

Your conclusion must relate to what you wrote about. If your essay is about dolphins, your conclusion shouldn't suddenly talk about pizza.
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It Restates the Big Idea

Remind the reader of your main point. Use different words than you used in the introduction—don't just copy and paste!
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It Wraps Things Up

A conclusion gives the reader a feeling of "all done." It should not introduce brand-new information that wasn't in the body.
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It Leaves an Impression

A great conclusion makes your reader think, feel something, or want to learn more. End with something memorable!
KEY TAKEAWAY
Think of a conclusion like the final scene of a movie. The movie doesn't just stop in the middle of a car chase—the story wraps up, the hero says something meaningful, and you leave the theater feeling satisfied. Your concluding statement does the same thing for your reader. It tells them, "This is what it all meant," so they close the page feeling like they learned something complete.

The Essay Map: Where the Conclusion Lives

Let's look at a picture that shows the parts of an informational essay. Notice where the conclusion fits in. It comes at the very end, after your introduction and body paragraphs. Its job is to "tie the bow" on everything you've explained.

As you can see, the conclusion sits right at the bottom. It's the last thing your reader sees. Just like the introduction opens the door and invites the reader in, the conclusion closes that door gently and says goodbye. The body paragraphs do the heavy lifting in the middle, sharing all the facts and details. The conclusion doesn't need to repeat every detail—it just needs to remind the reader of the main message.

How to Build a Conclusion: Step by Step

Writing a conclusion doesn't have to be scary. You can follow a simple recipe every time. There are three ingredients in a great concluding statement or section. Let's break them down.

The Conclusion Recipe
Signal Word + Restated Big Idea + Final Thought
Put these three pieces together for every conclusion you write.

Ingredient 1 — Signal Words

A signal word (also called a transition word) tells your reader, "We're wrapping up now!" Some signal words you can use are: In conclusion, Overall, As you can see, All in all, To sum up, and Clearly. These words act like a turn signal on a car—they let the reader know you're about to turn toward the end.

Ingredient 2 — Restated Big Idea

Next, you remind the reader of the main idea of your whole essay. This is NOT a word-for-word copy of your introduction. Instead, you say the same idea in a fresh way. For example, if your introduction said, "Honeybees are important to our food supply," your conclusion might say, "Without honeybees, many of the fruits and vegetables we eat every day would disappear."

Ingredient 3 — Final Thought

The final thought gives your reader something to think about after they finish reading. You might share a surprising fact, ask a question, or explain why your topic matters. This is the "mic drop" moment of your essay!

All three pieces together = a strong ending

When you combine all three ingredients, you get a conclusion that sounds complete and polished. Remember: signal wordrestated big ideafinal thought. Keep this order in mind every time!

Types of Final Thoughts

The final thought is where you get to be creative. There are several different ways to end your conclusion. Let's look at the most common types so you can pick the one that works best for your writing.

TypeWhat It DoesExample (Topic: Recycling)
Big-Picture StatementShows why the topic matters in the real world"If every family recycled just one more bag each week, our planet would be a much cleaner place."
Thought-Provoking QuestionMakes the reader stop and think"What small step will you take today to help reduce waste?"
Surprising FactLeaves the reader with a "wow" moment"A single aluminum can that is recycled saves enough energy to power a TV for three hours."
Call to ActionTells the reader to do something"Start a recycling bin in your classroom this week!"
Looking ForwardTalks about the future or what could happen"As new recycling technologies develop, we may one day live in a world with zero waste."

You can mix and match these types! For example, you could use a surprising fact and then follow it with a question. There is no single "right" way to end—just make sure it connects back to your topic.

KEY TAKEAWAY
Choosing a final thought is like choosing a bow for a gift. A sparkly bow, a simple ribbon, or a big puffy bow—they all look different, but they all finish off the present. Your final thought is the bow on your writing. Pick the style that matches what you're trying to say!

Worked Example: Writing a Conclusion Step by Step

Let's say you just finished writing an informational essay about how sea turtles survive in the ocean. Your introduction said: "Sea turtles are amazing creatures that have special body features to help them live in the ocean." Now it's time to write the conclusion. Watch how we do it.

Writing a Conclusion Step by Step
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Step 1 — Choose a Signal WordWe'll start with "All in all" because it sounds smooth and natural. Other choices like "In conclusion" or "To sum up" would also work.
So far we have: "All in all,…"
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Step 2 — Restate the Big Idea in New WordsOur introduction said sea turtles have "special body features" that help them live in the ocean. We don't want to use those exact words again. Let's say it differently:
"All in all, sea turtles are built for life in the sea, from their powerful flippers to their strong shells."
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Step 3 — Add a Final ThoughtLet's use a big-picture statement that explains why this topic matters:
"All in all, sea turtles are built for life in the sea, from their powerful flippers to their strong shells. By learning about these incredible animals, we can better understand why it is so important to protect their ocean homes."
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Final Result ✨"All in all, sea turtles are built for life in the sea, from their powerful flippers to their strong shells. By learning about these incredible animals, we can better understand why it is so important to protect their ocean homes." Notice how this conclusion signals the ending, restates the main idea without copying, and gives the reader a reason to care. That's a strong conclusion!

Dos and Don'ts of Conclusions

Even great writers sometimes make mistakes in their conclusions. Here's a helpful chart that shows what to do and what to avoid.

✅ DO THIS❌ DON'T DO THIS
Restate your main idea in fresh wordsCopy your introduction word for word
Use a signal word or phrase to startEnd suddenly with no warning
Keep it connected to your topicBring up a totally new topic
Leave the reader with something to think aboutSay "That's all I have to say" or "The end"
Write 2–4 strong sentencesWrite only one rushed sentence, or ramble on forever
Sound confident and thoughtfulApologize or sound unsure ("I guess maybe…")
KEY TAKEAWAY
One of the biggest mistakes 5th graders make is adding new facts in the conclusion. Your conclusion is not the place to share new information—it's the place to remind and reflect. Think of it like a coach's speech after the big game. The coach doesn't teach a new play. Instead, the coach talks about what the team accomplished and what it all means. That's exactly what your conclusion should do.

Taking Your Conclusions to the Next Level

Right now, you're learning to write concluding statements (a sentence or two) and concluding sections (a whole paragraph). As you move into middle school and beyond, conclusions will get bigger and more complex. Here's a sneak peek at how conclusions grow with you.

Grade LevelWhat Your Conclusion Looks LikeWhat's New
5th Grade (You!)1 paragraph with signal word, restated idea, and final thoughtYou're learning the recipe right now
Middle School1–2 paragraphs that connect ideas across the essayYou'll show how different body paragraphs relate to each other
High SchoolA full concluding section that broadens the topicYou'll connect your topic to larger issues in the world

The skills you learn now—using signal words, restating ideas, and leaving a strong impression—will be the foundation for everything that comes next. So practice them well! Every essay, report, and research project you write from here on out will need a solid conclusion.

Practice Problems

Time to practice! Try each problem below, then click "Show Answer" to check your work. The problems get a little harder as you go—good luck!

PROBLEM 1CONCEPTUAL
What is the purpose of a concluding statement or section in informational writing? Explain it in your own words.
PROBLEM 2IDENTIFICATION
Read the following conclusion from a report about pandas: "Overall, giant pandas are gentle animals that depend on bamboo forests to survive. As people continue to cut down forests, pandas need our help now more than ever." Identify the three parts of this conclusion: (a) the signal word, (b) the restated big idea, and (c) the final thought.
PROBLEM 3INTERMEDIATE
Here is the introduction of an essay about volcanoes: "Volcanoes are one of the most powerful forces on Earth. They can destroy entire cities, but they also create new land and rich soil." Write a concluding sentence that restates this big idea in different words. Do NOT copy the introduction word for word.
PROBLEM 4APPLIED / MULTI-STEP
Imagine you wrote a 3-paragraph report about why recess is important for students. Your body paragraphs explained: (1) recess helps kids exercise, (2) recess lets kids practice social skills, and (3) recess helps kids focus better in class afterward. Write a full concluding paragraph (3–4 sentences) that includes a signal word, a restated big idea, and a final thought. Use one of the final thought types from the table in Section 5.
PROBLEM 5CRITICAL THINKING
Read these two conclusions for the same essay about the water cycle. Decide which one is stronger, and explain why. Conclusion A: "The water cycle is the water cycle. Water goes up and comes down. The end." Conclusion B: "As you can see, the water cycle is an incredible process that keeps our planet alive. Every drop of rain that falls has been on an amazing journey through evaporation, condensation, and precipitation—and that same drop may fall again a thousand years from now."

Lesson Summary

A concluding statement or section is the final part of your informational or explanatory writing. It serves three important purposes: it signals to the reader that the piece is ending, it restates the main idea in fresh words so the reader remembers it, and it leaves a lasting impression through a final thought—like a big-picture statement, a surprising fact, a question, or a call to action. A strong conclusion never introduces new information, never copies the introduction word for word, and never ends with "The end" or "That's all." Instead, it ties everything together like the bow on a present.

To write your conclusion, remember the simple recipe: start with a signal word (such as "Overall," "In conclusion," or "All in all"), then restate your big idea using different words, and finish with a memorable final thought. With practice, writing conclusions will become second nature—and your readers will always walk away feeling like your writing was complete, polished, and worth reading.

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