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1

“Intellectual Virtues”

Whenever someone talks about being “virtuous,” we immediately think of someone whose very moral. Perhaps we even think of people who are a bit boring for virtuous people can appear to have no fun at least in the popular imagination. Whatever the case might be, almost any reader would be surprised to see the expression “intellectual virtues.” What could this expression mean to designate! At best, most people would say, “Such virtues must describe people for who knowledge is combined with devotion and rigorous discipline.” That is; they would seem to describe the person who has a disciplined character in addition to being intelligent.

However, in ancient and medieval philosophy, certain intellectual capacities were considered virtues. These character traits were not quite the same as moral character traits or virtues. To understand this idea, it can be helpul to consider two example people, one whose skills are the fruit of a so-called intellectual virtue and the other whose skills are not.

It is easier to start with the person who does not have a given intellectual virtue. We all know someone who is not very good at math, that is, someone for who math is difficult even though he or she might be quite skilled at many other tasks It makes sense to say that this person doesn’t have an intellectual virtue. Likewise, think of the person who is only able to memorize formulas. Such a person is often very good at working through many problems with deft skill. This person seems to be a “wiz” at geometry and algebra, quickly solving equations and proofs.

However, this latter person might suddenly be presented with a difficult, new problem. When we notice that he or she does not have the creative skill and insight to solve the problem, we realize that he or she does’nt have a so-called “intellectual virtue.” This person merely has a habit—a particular skill that is helpful but does not indicate true and complete mathematical knowledge. The person who is able to understand the mathematics and creatively apply this knowledge to solve new problems. This person has a true intellectual virtue. They have a particular ability for intellectual insight, able to probe the difficult domain of this topic. This is much more noble as the mere habit of being able to balance equations and repeat facts about geometric figures!

Choose the answer that best corrects the underlined portion of the passage. If the underlined portion is correct as written, choose "NO CHANGE."

not such a fruit

not an intellectual virtue

not an fruit

not an intellectual fruit

NO CHANGE

Explanation

Clearly there is a parallel contrast in this sentence. There are some activities that are the fruit of intellectual virtues and there are ones that are not such a fruit. Now, you might well choose the longer version "not the fruit of a so-called intellectual virtue." This is, however, a bit wordy. The sentence is clear enough if you replace not with "not such a fruit."

2

“Intellectual Virtues”

Whenever someone talks about being “virtuous,” we immediately think of someone whose very moral. Perhaps we even think of people who are a bit boring for virtuous people can appear to have no fun at least in the popular imagination. Whatever the case might be, almost any reader would be surprised to see the expression “intellectual virtues.” What could this expression mean to designate! At best, most people would say, “Such virtues must describe people for who knowledge is combined with devotion and rigorous discipline.” That is; they would seem to describe the person who has a disciplined character in addition to being intelligent.

However, in ancient and medieval philosophy, certain intellectual capacities were considered virtues. These character traits were not quite the same as moral character traits or virtues. To understand this idea, it can be helpul to consider two example people, one whose skills are the fruit of a so-called intellectual virtue and the other whose skills are not.

It is easier to start with the person who does not have a given intellectual virtue. We all know someone who is not very good at math, that is, someone for who math is difficult even though he or she might be quite skilled at many other tasks It makes sense to say that this person doesn’t have an intellectual virtue. Likewise, think of the person who is only able to memorize formulas. Such a person is often very good at working through many problems with deft skill. This person seems to be a “wiz” at geometry and algebra, quickly solving equations and proofs.

However, this latter person might suddenly be presented with a difficult, new problem. When we notice that he or she does not have the creative skill and insight to solve the problem, we realize that he or she does’nt have a so-called “intellectual virtue.” This person merely has a habit—a particular skill that is helpful but does not indicate true and complete mathematical knowledge. The person who is able to understand the mathematics and creatively apply this knowledge to solve new problems. This person has a true intellectual virtue. They have a particular ability for intellectual insight, able to probe the difficult domain of this topic. This is much more noble as the mere habit of being able to balance equations and repeat facts about geometric figures!

Choose the answer that best corrects the underlined portion of the passage. If the underlined portion is correct as written, choose "NO CHANGE."

not such a fruit

not an intellectual virtue

not an fruit

not an intellectual fruit

NO CHANGE

Explanation

Clearly there is a parallel contrast in this sentence. There are some activities that are the fruit of intellectual virtues and there are ones that are not such a fruit. Now, you might well choose the longer version "not the fruit of a so-called intellectual virtue." This is, however, a bit wordy. The sentence is clear enough if you replace not with "not such a fruit."

3

Read the following passage and choose the correct response.

When I was a child, my father would take me to our local amusement park every other weekend. He would always wake me up early so we could spend all day at the park. A wave of excitement always hit me as we walked through the gate into the park. Getting to the top of the roller coaster, I my entire body tensed up.I wasn't ready for a ride like this, but there was no turning back now.I felt the cart move forward and braced for the impending drop.

There's no transition between entering the park and getting to the top of the roller coaster

The narrator does not properly establish the history of roller coasters

The narrator does not properly establish the history of the amusement parks

There is no proper transition between getting to the top of the roller coaster and the narrator's apprehension about being on the ride

Explanation

The change from entering the park to being at the top of the roller coaster is abrupt and not properly established by the sentences before it. It would be best for these two ideas to be in two separate paragraphs.

4

Read the following passage and choose the correct response.

When I was a child, my father would take me to our local amusement park every other weekend. He would always wake me up early so we could spend all day at the park. A wave of excitement always hit me as we walked through the gate into the park. Getting to the top of the roller coaster, I my entire body tensed up.I wasn't ready for a ride like this, but there was no turning back now.I felt the cart move forward and braced for the impending drop.

There's no transition between entering the park and getting to the top of the roller coaster

The narrator does not properly establish the history of roller coasters

The narrator does not properly establish the history of the amusement parks

There is no proper transition between getting to the top of the roller coaster and the narrator's apprehension about being on the ride

Explanation

The change from entering the park to being at the top of the roller coaster is abrupt and not properly established by the sentences before it. It would be best for these two ideas to be in two separate paragraphs.

5

Ray Charles was one of the first major musical sessions artists of the 20th Century to assert total control over his recording sessions;

At this point, the writer is considering adding the following information:

"he selected musicians, arranged charts for each song, and supervised the mixing and mastering of each of his records."

Should the writer add this to the passage here?

Yes, because it adds important details that support the claim made in the sentence.

Yes, because it explains why Ray Charles' music was so popular.

No, because it introduces irrelevant details.

No, because it makes claims that cannot be verified.

No, the added clause is grammatically incorrect.

Explanation

The answer choice provides three specific examples of how Ray Charles controlled the recording of his music.

No connection is made to the popularity of Ray Charles' records.

The information is relevant.

The information is factual and can be verified.

6

Ray Charles was one of the first major musical sessions artists of the 20th Century to assert total control over his recording sessions;

At this point, the writer is considering adding the following information:

"he selected musicians, arranged charts for each song, and supervised the mixing and mastering of each of his records."

Should the writer add this to the passage here?

Yes, because it adds important details that support the claim made in the sentence.

Yes, because it explains why Ray Charles' music was so popular.

No, because it introduces irrelevant details.

No, because it makes claims that cannot be verified.

No, the added clause is grammatically incorrect.

Explanation

The answer choice provides three specific examples of how Ray Charles controlled the recording of his music.

No connection is made to the popularity of Ray Charles' records.

The information is relevant.

The information is factual and can be verified.

7

Passage adapted from The Mysterious Key and What it Opened (1867) by Louisa May Alcott

"Trevlyn lands and Trevlyn gold,
Heir nor heiress e'er shall hold,
Undisturbed, till, spite of rust,
Truth is found in Trevlyn dust."

"This is the third time I've found you poring over that old rhyme. What is the charm, Richard? Not its poetry I fancy." And the young wife laid a slender hand on the yellow, time-worn page where, in Old English text, appeared the lines she laughed at.

Richard Trevlyn looked up with a smile and threw by the book, as if annoyed at being discovered reading it. Drawing his wife's hand through his own, he led her back to her couch, folded the soft shawls about her, and, sitting in a low chair beside her, said in a cheerful tone, though his eyes betrayed some hidden care, "My love, that book is a history of our family for centuries, and that old prophecy has never yet been fulfilled, except the 'heir and heiress' line. I am the last Trevlyn, and as the time draws near when my child shall be born, I naturally think of his future, and hope he will enjoy his heritage in peace."

If the underlined portion was deleted, the passage would lose all of the following except                       .

important information about Richard's parents

a important detail about Richard's wife

an important detail about why Richard was reading the book

important information about an event that may soon occur

Explanation

"Important information about Richard's parents" is the correct answer, because the underlined portion gives no information about Richard's parents. It does give us an important detail about Richard's wife (namely that she is pregnant), and the book (which is "a history of \[their\] family). The detail about his wife, that she is pregnant, is also about an event that will occur soon.

8

Passage adapted from The Mysterious Key and What it Opened (1867) by Louisa May Alcott

"Trevlyn lands and Trevlyn gold,
Heir nor heiress e'er shall hold,
Undisturbed, till, spite of rust,
Truth is found in Trevlyn dust."

"This is the third time I've found you poring over that old rhyme. What is the charm, Richard? Not its poetry I fancy." And the young wife laid a slender hand on the yellow, time-worn page where, in Old English text, appeared the lines she laughed at.

Richard Trevlyn looked up with a smile and threw by the book, as if annoyed at being discovered reading it. Drawing his wife's hand through his own, he led her back to her couch, folded the soft shawls about her, and, sitting in a low chair beside her, said in a cheerful tone, though his eyes betrayed some hidden care, "My love, that book is a history of our family for centuries, and that old prophecy has never yet been fulfilled, except the 'heir and heiress' line. I am the last Trevlyn, and as the time draws near when my child shall be born, I naturally think of his future, and hope he will enjoy his heritage in peace."

If the underlined portion was deleted, the passage would lose all of the following except                       .

important information about Richard's parents

a important detail about Richard's wife

an important detail about why Richard was reading the book

important information about an event that may soon occur

Explanation

"Important information about Richard's parents" is the correct answer, because the underlined portion gives no information about Richard's parents. It does give us an important detail about Richard's wife (namely that she is pregnant), and the book (which is "a history of \[their\] family). The detail about his wife, that she is pregnant, is also about an event that will occur soon.

9

"Lincoln as a Child" by Caleb Zimmerman (2013)

Abraham Lincoln's forefathers were pioneers. People that left their homes to open up the wilderness and make the way clear for others to follow them. For one hundred and seventy years, ever since the first Lincoln came from England to Massachusetts in 1638, he had been moving slowly westward as new settlements were made in the forest. They faced solitude, privation, and all the dangers and hardships that beset those who take up their homes where only beasts and wild men have had homes before; but they continued to press steadily forward, though they lost fortune and sometimes even life itself in their westward progress.

Back in Pennsylvania and New Jersey, some of the Lincolns had been people of wealth and influence. In Kentucky, where the future President was born on February 12, 1809, his parents live in deep poverty. Their home was a small log cabin of the rudest kind, and nothing seemed more unlikely than that their child, coming into the world in such humble surroundings, was destined to be the greatest man of his time and true to his heritage, he also was to be a pioneer—not into new woods and unexplored fields like his ancestors, but a pioneer of a nobler and grander sort, directing the thoughts of people ever toward the right, and leading the American people, through difficulties and dangers and a mighty war, to peace and freedom.

The author wants to insert a sentence highlighting a contrast between what are currently the first and second sentences of paragraph two. Which of the following sentences best accomplishes this?

"This also characterized the early life of Abraham Lincoln."

"For the parents of young Abraham, this would not be the case."

"This propensity toward wealth and power only grew as the Lincolns moved west."

Leave the passage as it is.

Explanation

"This also characterized the early life of Abraham Lincoln and "This propensity toward wealth and power only grew as the Lincolns moved west" suggest that Abraham Lincoln’s parents were wealthy and powerful, which is incorrect and invalidated by the following sentence.

Leaving the passage as it is leaves a contrast unintroduced.

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"Lincoln as a Child" by Caleb Zimmerman (2013)

Abraham Lincoln's forefathers were pioneers. People that left their homes to open up the wilderness and make the way clear for others to follow them. For one hundred and seventy years, ever since the first Lincoln came from England to Massachusetts in 1638, he had been moving slowly westward as new settlements were made in the forest. They faced solitude, privation, and all the dangers and hardships that beset those who take up their homes where only beasts and wild men have had homes before; but they continued to press steadily forward, though they lost fortune and sometimes even life itself in their westward progress.

Back in Pennsylvania and New Jersey, some of the Lincolns had been people of wealth and influence. In Kentucky, where the future President was born on February 12, 1809, his parents live in deep poverty. Their home was a small log cabin of the rudest kind, and nothing seemed more unlikely than that their child, coming into the world in such humble surroundings, was destined to be the greatest man of his time and true to his heritage, he also was to be a pioneer—not into new woods and unexplored fields like his ancestors, but a pioneer of a nobler and grander sort, directing the thoughts of people ever toward the right, and leading the American people, through difficulties and dangers and a mighty war, to peace and freedom.

The author wants to insert a sentence highlighting a contrast between what are currently the first and second sentences of paragraph two. Which of the following sentences best accomplishes this?

"This also characterized the early life of Abraham Lincoln."

"For the parents of young Abraham, this would not be the case."

"This propensity toward wealth and power only grew as the Lincolns moved west."

Leave the passage as it is.

Explanation

"This also characterized the early life of Abraham Lincoln and "This propensity toward wealth and power only grew as the Lincolns moved west" suggest that Abraham Lincoln’s parents were wealthy and powerful, which is incorrect and invalidated by the following sentence.

Leaving the passage as it is leaves a contrast unintroduced.

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