Quotation Mark Errors

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1

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English. One of the answer choices reproduces the underlined portion as it is written in the sentence.

“I can’t believe he ate the entire cake,” she said, “Can you?”

cake,” she said. “Can you?”

cake,” she said, “Can you?”

cake” she said, “Can you?”

cake” she said “Can you?”

cake.” She said. “Can you?”

Explanation

Double quotation marks are conventionally used to indicate speech, and commas are conventionally used inside the quotation marks to separate a line of speech from its subsequent dialogue tag. Because “‘Can you?’” is a separate sentence from “‘I can’t believe he ate the entire cake,’ she said,’” there must be a period after “she said” to separate the two sentences.

2

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English. One of the answer choices reproduces the underlined portion as it is written in the sentence.

Did she say, "I'll take the car?"

Did she say, "I'll take the car"?

Did she say "I'll take the car"?

Did she say, "I'll take the car."?

Did she say, "I'll take the car."

Did she say, "I'll take the car?"

Explanation

This question is asking whether or not a phrase was said, and that phrase itself is not a question. If a question ends with a quoted statement that is not a question, the question mark will go outside the closing quotation mark.

3

“The Dark Ages?” by Matthew Minerd (2016)

There are two different ways to consider the so-called “Dark Ages.” On the one hand, you can think of the period directly after the fall of the Roman Empire, when civilization began to collapse throughout the Western Empire. On the other hand, you can consider the period that followed this initial collapse of society. It is a gross simplification too use the adjective dark to describe the civilization of either of these periods.

As regards the first period it is quite a simplification to consider this period to be a single historical moment. It is not as though the civilization switched off like a lightbulb. At one moment light and then, at the next, dark. Instead, the decline of civilization occurred over a period of numerous decades and was, in fact, already occurring for many years before the so-called period of darkness. Thus, the decline of civilization was not a rapid collapse into barbarism, but instead, was a slow alteration of the cultural milieu of a portion of Europe. Indeed, the Eastern Roman Empire retained much of it’s cultural status during these years of decline!

More importantly, the period following the slow collapse of the Western Empire was much less “dark” than almost every popular telling states. Indeed, even during the period of decline, the seeds for cultural restoration was being sown. A key element of this cultural revival were the formation of monastic communities throughout the countryside of what we now know as Europe. Although these were not the only positive force during these centuries, the monasteries had played an important role in preserving and advancing the cause of culture through at least the thirteenth century and arguably until the Renaissance.

How should the underlined and bolded selection be changed?

use the adjective "dark" to describe the civilization of either of these periods.

use the adjective, dark, to describe the civilization of either of these periods.

use the adjective, "dark," to describe the civilization of either of these periods.

use the adjective, "dark" to describe the civilization of either of these periods.

use the adjective, "Dark," to describe the civilization of either of these periods.

Explanation

Since the word "dark" is being referred to as an adjective, it is necessary to place quotation marks around it. This is the same as writing, "The word 'dark' has four letters," (or the previous sentence). When you do this, it is not necessary to add any commas or to alter the capitalization as you do in direct quotations; instead, you leave the word as is and merely "wrap" it in quotations marks.

4

Choose the answer that best corrects the underlined portion of the sentence. If the underlined portion is correct as written, choose "NO CHANGE."

"You're going to have to pass through the forest if you want to get to the town before nightfall" said shopkeeper at the entrance to town.

"You're going to have to pass through the forest if you want to get to the town before nightfall,"

"You're going to have to pass through the forest if you want to get to the town before nightfall;"

'You're going to have to pass through the forest if you want to get to the town before nightfall'

NO CHANGE

Explanation

The quoted sentence is a statement attributed to the shopkeeper, who is listed after the quote. It is grammatically correct to separate these clauses with a comma that comes before the quotation mark.

5

“The Common Good: The United Aim of Many”

Among the many topics that are misunderstood in political science, and political philosophy, the notion of the “common good” ranks foremost. Often, we think of the common good as being nothing more than getting “the most things for the most people.” For example, when a person makes multiple millions of dollars, people will often say, “He should give back some of that money, for the sake of the common good.” Whether or not such people should do this with his money, this is really an improper use of the expression the common good.

A better way to understand the common good is to think about common ends or common goals. An example will help to explain this. Think of a group of musicians on a stage. If all of these people came together to practice in the same room, we wouldn’t call them a symphony. A mass of people just playing any music whatsoever are not a symphony. A symphony is an organized group; a mass of people is just a mass of people. Nothing physically differs regarding the mass of people and the symphony. They are both made up of the same “stuff,” namely a group of musicians.

However, a common good changes this mass into something that they never could be without that common good. When these musicians come together to play the Dies Irae of Mozart, they become something that they never were as individuals. Each member of the group uses his or her personal skill for the sake of a new, common performance. Perhaps the tuba player loves to play loudly. Perhaps the lead violinist loves playing quickly. These preferences must be channeled and limited for the sake of the common enterprise of playing Mozart’s stirring piece of music. The desires of the individual instrumentalists, whom play the music, no longer reigns supreme.

The common good unites this group. If you were to ask the tuba player, what are you doing, he would answer, “Taking part in the symphonic playing of the Dies Irae.” Then, if you were to ask any other musician the same question, he or she would answer in the same way. The answer would not be, “playing the Dies Irae my way.” If that were the answer, the musician would not be part of the symphony. He or she would be doing something private, not something that is truly common.

How should the underlined selection be changed?

The answer would not be, “Playing the Dies Irae my way.”

The answer would not be playing the Dies Irae my way.

The answer would not be “Playing the Dies Irae my way.”

NO CHANGE

Explanation

This error is just a simple matter of capitalization at the beginning of the quote. Any direct quotation requires that you capitalize its start. Therefore, replace the word "playing" with "Playing." That is all that is needed!

6

Adapted from Great Expectations by Charles Dickens (1861)

As she applied herself to set the tea-things, Joe peeped down at me over his leg, as if he was mentally casting me and himself up and calculating what kind of pair we practically should make, under the grievous circumstances foreshadowed. After that, he sat feeling his right-side flaxen curls and whisker, and following Mrs. Joe about with his blue eyes, as his manner always was at squally times.

My sister had a trenchant way of cutting our bread and butter for us, that never varied. First, with her left hand she jammed the loaf hard and fast against her bib, where it sometimes got a pin into it and sometimes a needle, which we afterwards got into our mouths. Then, she took some butter (not too much) on a knife and spread it on the loaf, in an apothecary kind of way, as if she were making a plaster. She used both sides of the knife with a slapping dexterity and trimming and moulding the butter off round the crust. Then, she gave the knife a final smart wipe on the edge of the plaster and then sawed a very thick round off the loaf: which she finally, before separating from the loaf, hewed into two halves, of which Joe got one and I the other.

On the present occasion, though I was hungry, I dared not eat my slice. I felt that I must have something in reserve for my dreadful acquaintance, and his ally the still more dreadful young man. I knew, “Mrs. Joe's housekeeping to be of the strictest kind,” and that my larcenous researches might find nothing available in the safe. Therefore, I resolved to put my hunk of bread and butter down the leg of my trousers.

Which of the following is the best form of the underlined selection?

I knew Mrs. Joe's housekeeping to be of the strictest kind and

NO CHANGE

I knew, “Mrs. Joe's housekeeping was of the strictest kind,” and

I knew, “Mrs. Joe's housekeeping to be of the strictest kind”, and

Explanation

There is no need for the set of quotation marks in the passage. Almost always, "know" is used with indirect quotations or statments. Later in the sentence, the author introduces an indirect statement by using "that." This thought is also indirectly mentioned, though there is no "that" used. Therefore, no quotation marks are necessary.

7

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English.

I told my friends that “I was too tired to go out,” but really I just wanted to catch up on my favorite TV series.

I told my friends that I was too tired to go out, but really I just wanted to catch up on my favorite TV series.

I told my friends that “I was too tired to go out,” but really I just wanted to catch up on my favorite TV series.

I told my friends that “I was too tired to go out” but really I just wanted to catch up on my favorite TV series.

I told my friends that I was too tired to go out but really I just wanted to catch up on my favorite TV series.

I told my friends that, “I was too tired to go out,” but really I just wanted to catch up on my favorite TV series.

Explanation

“I was too tired to go out” is an indirect quotation; we know this because it’s preceded by the word “that.” Since indirect quotations don’t require quotation marks, and since a comma is needed before the conjunction (“but”) to separate these two independent clauses, the correct answer is “I told my friends that I was too tired to go out, but really I just wanted to catch up on my favorite TV series.”

8

Choose the answer that best corrects the underlined portion of the sentence. If the underlined portion is correct as written, select “NO CHANGE.”

"What do you think he meant by that comment?" Louise said.

NO CHANGE

comment," Louise

comment?' Louise

comment"? Louise

comment?," Louise

Explanation

This question asks you about the grammatically correct use of quotation marks following a quotation mark. Since Louise is asking a question, the correct form is a question mark with double quotation marks outside of it. It is not necessary to also use a comma.

9

There once was a shepherd boy whom sat on the hillside watching the village sheep. He was hot and exhausted fanning himself, rapidly in a feeble attempt to cool himself down. On top of that, he had never been so bored before.

To amuse himself, he decided to play a joke. He put his hands around his mouth and yelled in a loud voice, "Wolf! Wolf! A wolf is chasing the sheep!”

They came running. They asked the boy, “What’s going on? Did you yell ‘A wolf is chasing the sheep?’ ”

The boy laughed. “It was just a joke, everyone.”

The people fumed, but they all returned to their homes.

The next day, the boy bored again decided to amuse himself again. He bellowed, “Wolf! Wolf!”

Again, the townspeople came running. Once they arrived and witnessed the laughing boy, they realized they’d been tricked a second time. Nonetheless, they returned home and irritated resolved to never fall for the trick again for third time.

The next day, the boy was watching his sheep. Suddenly, out of nowhere, a wolf appeared from behind the bushes. With its teeth bared, the boy cowered as the wolf approached the sheep. Terrified, he called, “Help! A wolf! A wolf is here!”

The people ignored his cries. “That mischievous boy,” they all said to one another. “He must think he can fool us again.” But not one of them came running.

No one was there to witness as the wolf ate every last sheep on the hillside, as the boy helplessly cowered behind a bush. As the boy hid, he shook his head. “I shall never fib again,” he resolved to himself.

Choose the best replacement for the underlined sentence "...Did you yell ‘A wolf is chasing the sheep?’”

"...Did you yell 'A wolf is chasing the sheep'?"

NO CHANGE

"...Did you yell 'A wolf is chasing the sheep' "?

"...Did you yell? 'A wolf is chasing the sheep!' "

"...Did you yell 'A wolf is chasing the sheep!' "

Explanation

The "outer" quote ("Did you yell...?") is a question, but the "inner" quote ('A wolf is chasing the sheep') is not. Therefore, the question mark does not go inside the "inner" quotation marks (' '), but inside the "outer" quotation marks (" "). Putting a question mark outside both pairs of marks would make the entire phrase (They asked the boy...?) a question, which is incorrect. Putting it inside both marks makes the boy's phrase (A wolf is chasing the sheep?) a question, which is also incorrect. Only having an exclamation point at the end makes the whole phrase an exclamation, which is incorrect. Putting a question mark then an exclamation point makes no sense (it sounds as if the townspeople are asking the boy "Did you yell?" then yelling themselves "A wolf is chasing the sheep). The only correct answer is the choice in which the punctuation is as follows: '?"

10

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English. One of the underlined choices repeats the answer as it is written.

"I don't believe you really wanted to drop the cake," Elena said, "In fact, I think it was totally an accident."

said. "In fact, I think it was totally an accident."

said, "In fact, I think it was totally an accident."

said; "In fact, I think it was totally an accident."

said - "In fact, I think it was totally an accident."

said? "In fact, I think it was totally an accident."

Explanation

The error in this sentence is the incorrect punctuation used to separate Elena's first sentence from her second sentence. Since both sentences are complete thoughts, we should change the comma after "said" to a period ("said. 'In fact, I think it was totally an accident.'")

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