Create Cohesion Among Claims and Counterclaims

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1

A student is writing an argument that the school should start classes 30 minutes later. Read the draft sentences.

Claim: School should start later.

Reason: Teens need more sleep to focus.

Evidence: A local survey found that 62% of students get fewer than 8 hours of sleep on school nights.

Which transition best connects the reason to the evidence?

"Teens need more sleep to focus. ____ a local survey found that 62% of students get fewer than 8 hours of sleep on school nights."

For instance,

In contrast,

As a result,

Meanwhile,

Explanation

This question tests using transition words, phrases, and clauses to create cohesion and clarify relationships among claims, counterclaims, reasons, and evidence in argumentative writing. Transitions create cohesion by connecting ideas and clarifying relationships: Addition transitions (furthermore, additionally, moreover, also, another reason) add supporting points ("Schools should extend lunch periods. Furthermore, longer lunches improve student focus in afternoon classes"—"Furthermore" signals additional reason supporting claim). Sequence transitions (first, second, next, finally) order multiple points ("First, extended lunches allow adequate eating time. Second, they provide social interaction. Finally, they reduce afternoon fatigue"—sequence transitions organize three reasons clearly). Contrast transitions (however, nevertheless, in contrast, on the other hand, whereas, although) show opposing ideas ("Longer lunch periods benefit students. However, critics argue they reduce instructional time"—"However" signals shift from claim to counterclaim, clarifies this is opposition). Example transitions (for instance, for example, specifically, such as) introduce evidence ("Extended lunches improve afternoon focus. For instance, a 2023 study found students with 45-minute lunches scored 12% higher on afternoon assessments"—"For instance" signals specific evidence supporting reason). Cause-effect transitions (because, since, as a result, therefore, consequently) show causal relationships ("Students need time to digest meals. As a result, hurried 20-minute lunches cause discomfort affecting afternoon concentration"—"As a result" clarifies causal connection). The question asks which transition best connects a reason ("Teens need more sleep to focus") to evidence ("a local survey found that 62% of students get fewer than 8 hours of sleep"). The relationship is example—the survey provides specific evidence supporting the general reason about teens needing sleep. "For instance" (B) correctly signals this relationship, introducing the survey as a specific example that demonstrates the reason. "In contrast" (A) incorrectly suggests opposition between reason and evidence when they support each other; "As a result" (C) wrongly implies the survey is a consequence of teens needing sleep rather than evidence of it; "Meanwhile" (D) suggests simultaneous but unrelated events, failing to show the evidence supports the reason. Using transitions effectively requires identifying the relationship between ideas—here, evidence exemplifying a reason—and selecting the appropriate transition to make that relationship clear to readers.

2

A student argues that students should be allowed to redo major assignments.

Draft:

"Some teachers worry that allowing redos will encourage students to procrastinate. ____ this objection overlooks the fact that redos can be limited to one per unit and require students to complete extra practice first."

Which transition best refutes the counterclaim and signals a rebuttal?

As a result,

Nevertheless,

In addition,

For example,

Explanation

This question tests using transition words, phrases, and clauses to create cohesion and clarify relationships among claims, counterclaims, reasons, and evidence in argumentative writing. Transitions create cohesion by connecting ideas and clarifying relationships: Addition transitions (furthermore, additionally, moreover, also, another reason) add supporting points ("Schools should extend lunch periods. Furthermore, longer lunches improve student focus in afternoon classes"—"Furthermore" signals additional reason supporting claim). Sequence transitions (first, second, next, finally) order multiple points ("First, extended lunches allow adequate eating time. Second, they provide social interaction. Finally, they reduce afternoon fatigue"—sequence transitions organize three reasons clearly). Contrast transitions (however, nevertheless, in contrast, on the other hand, whereas, although) show opposing ideas ("Longer lunch periods benefit students. However, critics argue they reduce instructional time"—"However" signals shift from claim to counterclaim, clarifies this is opposition). Concession transitions (admittedly, granted, while it is true, although) acknowledge opposing points before refuting ("Admittedly, longer lunches reduce class time. Nevertheless, improved focus during remaining class time offsets this loss"—"Admittedly" concedes counterargument, "Nevertheless" refutes it). The draft presents a counterclaim (teachers worry about procrastination) followed by a rebuttal (this overlooks limitations on redos). "Nevertheless" (A) correctly signals this rebuttal relationship, showing that despite the teachers' concern, the objection can be addressed through specific limitations. "For example" (B) wrongly suggests the rebuttal is evidence for the teachers' worry; "In addition" (C) incorrectly implies adding to the counterclaim rather than refuting it; "As a result" (D) wrongly suggests the rebuttal is caused by the teachers' worry. Effective rebuttals require transitions that signal opposition to the counterclaim while maintaining logical flow—"Nevertheless" achieves this by acknowledging the concern exists but arguing it can be overcome.

3

A student is arguing that the school should keep arts electives (band, chorus, and art) even when budgets are tight.

Draft:

"Arts classes help students express themselves and stay engaged in school. ____ opponents argue that electives should be cut so the school can focus on tested subjects."

Which transition best shows contrast between the claim and the counterclaim?

In contrast,

Specifically,

For this reason,

Likewise,

Explanation

This question tests using transition words, phrases, and clauses to create cohesion and clarify relationships among claims, counterclaims, reasons, and evidence in argumentative writing. Transitions create cohesion by connecting ideas and clarifying relationships: Addition transitions (furthermore, additionally, moreover, also, another reason) add supporting points ("Schools should extend lunch periods. Furthermore, longer lunches improve student focus in afternoon classes"—"Furthermore" signals additional reason supporting claim). Sequence transitions (first, second, next, finally) order multiple points ("First, extended lunches allow adequate eating time. Second, they provide social interaction. Finally, they reduce afternoon fatigue"—sequence transitions organize three reasons clearly). Contrast transitions (however, nevertheless, in contrast, on the other hand, whereas, although) show opposing ideas ("Longer lunch periods benefit students. However, critics argue they reduce instructional time"—"However" signals shift from claim to counterclaim, clarifies this is opposition). The draft moves from the claim supporting arts classes (help students express themselves and stay engaged) to the counterclaim (opponents argue for cuts to focus on tested subjects). This shift from support to opposition requires a contrast transition. "In contrast" (B) correctly signals this opposing relationship, alerting readers that a different viewpoint follows. "For this reason" (A) wrongly suggests opponents' argument is caused by arts helping students; "Likewise" (C) incorrectly implies agreement between claim and counterclaim; "Specifically" (D) wrongly suggests the opponents' view is an example supporting arts classes. Contrast transitions are essential for introducing counterclaims, clearly signaling when the argument shifts from supporting reasons to acknowledging opposition.

4

A student is building an argument that schools should limit homework on weeknights.

Draft:

"First, students need time after school for family responsibilities and activities. ____ too much homework can reduce sleep, which makes it harder to learn the next day."

Which transition best shows sequence and introduces the second reason?

As a result,

Second,

For example,

In contrast,

Explanation

This question tests using transition words, phrases, and clauses to create cohesion and clarify relationships among claims, counterclaims, reasons, and evidence in argumentative writing. Transitions create cohesion by connecting ideas and clarifying relationships: Addition transitions (furthermore, additionally, moreover, also, another reason) add supporting points ("Schools should extend lunch periods. Furthermore, longer lunches improve student focus in afternoon classes"—"Furthermore" signals additional reason supporting claim). Sequence transitions (first, second, next, finally) order multiple points ("First, extended lunches allow adequate eating time. Second, they provide social interaction. Finally, they reduce afternoon fatigue"—sequence transitions organize three reasons clearly). Contrast transitions (however, nevertheless, in contrast, on the other hand, whereas, although) show opposing ideas ("Longer lunch periods benefit students. However, critics argue they reduce instructional time"—"However" signals shift from claim to counterclaim, clarifies this is opposition). The draft uses "First" to introduce the initial reason, so the blank needs a sequence transition introducing the next reason in order. "Second" (C) correctly continues the sequence, clearly organizing multiple reasons supporting homework limits. "For example" (A) wrongly suggests the sleep issue is evidence for family responsibilities rather than another reason; "In contrast" (B) incorrectly implies opposition between two supporting reasons; "As a result" (D) wrongly suggests reduced sleep is caused by family responsibilities rather than being another separate reason. Sequence transitions create organizational clarity, helping readers follow multiple points systematically—essential when presenting several reasons supporting a claim.

5

A student is arguing that the city should build more bike lanes.

Draft:

"Bike lanes make streets safer for cyclists. ____ they also reduce traffic because more people choose to bike instead of drive."

Which transition best connects the two reasons by showing addition?

Additionally,

Nevertheless,

On the other hand,

For example,

Explanation

This question tests using transition words, phrases, and clauses to create cohesion and clarify relationships among claims, counterclaims, reasons, and evidence in argumentative writing. Transitions create cohesion by connecting ideas and clarifying relationships: Addition transitions (furthermore, additionally, moreover, also, another reason) add supporting points ("Schools should extend lunch periods. Furthermore, longer lunches improve student focus in afternoon classes"—"Furthermore" signals additional reason supporting claim). Sequence transitions (first, second, next, finally) order multiple points ("First, extended lunches allow adequate eating time. Second, they provide social interaction. Finally, they reduce afternoon fatigue"—sequence transitions organize three reasons clearly). Contrast transitions (however, nevertheless, in contrast, on the other hand, whereas, although) show opposing ideas ("Longer lunch periods benefit students. However, critics argue they reduce instructional time"—"However" signals shift from claim to counterclaim, clarifies this is opposition). The question presents two reasons supporting bike lanes: they make streets safer for cyclists AND they reduce traffic. The blank needs a transition showing addition—the second reason adds to the first, both supporting the claim. "Additionally" (A) correctly signals this additive relationship, showing the second reason builds upon the first. "Nevertheless" (B) incorrectly suggests contrast or opposition between the two reasons when they both support bike lanes; "For example" (C) wrongly implies the second statement is evidence for the first rather than another reason; "On the other hand" (D) incorrectly signals contrast between two supporting reasons. Using transitions effectively requires recognizing when ideas add to each other (both reasons support the claim) versus when they contrast (claim vs. counterclaim), and selecting transitions that clarify these relationships for readers.

6

A student is writing an essay supporting longer lunch periods at school.

Draft:

"Longer lunches give students enough time to eat. They are less likely to rush and skip healthy foods. ____ some administrators worry that a longer lunch would shorten class time."

Which transition best introduces the counterclaim and signals a shift to an opposing view?

Similarly,

However,

For this reason,

Specifically,

Explanation

This question tests using transition words, phrases, and clauses to create cohesion and clarify relationships among claims, counterclaims, reasons, and evidence in argumentative writing. Transitions create cohesion by connecting ideas and clarifying relationships: Addition transitions (furthermore, additionally, moreover, also, another reason) add supporting points ("Schools should extend lunch periods. Furthermore, longer lunches improve student focus in afternoon classes"—"Furthermore" signals additional reason supporting claim). Sequence transitions (first, second, next, finally) order multiple points ("First, extended lunches allow adequate eating time. Second, they provide social interaction. Finally, they reduce afternoon fatigue"—sequence transitions organize three reasons clearly). Contrast transitions (however, nevertheless, in contrast, on the other hand, whereas, although) show opposing ideas ("Longer lunch periods benefit students. However, critics argue they reduce instructional time"—"However" signals shift from claim to counterclaim, clarifies this is opposition). The draft moves from supporting reasons (longer lunches give time to eat, students less likely to rush) to a counterclaim (administrators worry about shortened class time). This shift from support to opposition requires a contrast transition. "However" (C) correctly signals this shift, alerting readers that an opposing view follows the supporting reasons. "For this reason" (A) wrongly suggests the administrators' worry is caused by students having time to eat; "Similarly" (B) incorrectly implies the counterclaim agrees with the supporting reasons; "Specifically" (D) wrongly suggests the administrators' worry is an example supporting longer lunches. Effective transitions must accurately represent relationships—here, the contrast between supporting reasons and opposing counterclaim—helping readers follow the argument's structure as it acknowledges different perspectives.