Establish/Maintain a Formal Argument Style
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6th Grade ELA › Establish/Maintain a Formal Argument Style
Read this speech draft to the school board: “We propose a later start time because it can improve sleep and attendance.” Which next sentence best maintains the formal style?
So yeah, that’s why we need it, okay?
You know how everyone is basically exhausted, so this would help a ton.
This change would be significant for students who currently arrive tired each morning.
It’s gonna be great, and we’ll all feel better, trust me.
Explanation
This question tests CCSS.W.6.1.d (establishing and maintaining formal style in argumentative writing appropriate for audience and purpose). Formal style uses sophisticated vocabulary, avoids contractions, employs third person or inclusive first person ("we"), maintains objective tone, uses complete and varied sentence structures, and acknowledges other perspectives respectfully. The speech draft establishes formal style with "We propose" and needs a follow-up sentence that maintains this formality when addressing the school board. The correct answer (A) maintains formal style through sophisticated vocabulary ("significant"), third-person reference ("students"), and objective description ("currently arrive tired") without emotional language. Options B, C, and D break formality through second person "you," contractions ("it's," "we'll"), casual vocabulary ("ton," "gonna"), conversational phrases ("trust me," "okay?"), and informal sentence fragments. Help students understand that maintaining formal style means every sentence must uphold the established tone - one casual sentence can undermine the speaker's credibility with an authority audience like a school board.
In a formal proposal to the student council, why is formal style appropriate for this argument?
Proposal: We request that the school create a recycling program in every hallway. This program would be beneficial because it could reduce waste and keep the campus cleaner. Furthermore, it would demonstrate that students can take responsibility for shared spaces.
Formal style means the audience must agree with the writer's opinion.
Formal style makes the argument longer, so it is more interesting to read.
Formal style shows respect for the audience and helps the writer sound credible to decision makers.
Formal style is always better than informal style in every situation.
Explanation
This question tests CCSS.W.6.1.d (establishing and maintaining formal style in argumentative writing appropriate for audience and purpose). Formal style uses sophisticated vocabulary, avoids contractions, employs third person or inclusive first person ("we"), maintains objective tone, uses complete and varied sentence structures, and acknowledges other perspectives respectfully. The proposal establishes formal style appropriate for addressing the student council through inclusive "we," sophisticated vocabulary ("beneficial," "furthermore," "demonstrate"), and measured tone. The correct answer (A) accurately explains why formal style fits this context - it shows respect for the audience (student council as decision-makers) and helps establish writer credibility. Option B confuses length with formality, C incorrectly links style to agreement, and D overgeneralizes by claiming formal is always better, ignoring that informal style suits personal contexts. Teaching strategy: Help students match style to purpose and audience - formal for authorities and academic contexts, informal for friends and personal expression.
Which word choice is most appropriate for formal argumentative writing in a petition to the school board?
Sentence: The school board should make a rule that requires safe bike storage for students.
fix up
establish
throw together
do
Explanation
This question tests CCSS.W.6.1.d (establishing and maintaining formal style in argumentative writing appropriate for audience and purpose). Formal style uses sophisticated vocabulary, avoids contractions, employs third person or inclusive first person ("we"), maintains objective tone, uses complete and varied sentence structures, and acknowledges other perspectives respectfully. The sentence requires a formal verb to replace the casual "make" when addressing the school board. The correct answer (B) "establish" elevates vocabulary to appropriate academic level - it's more precise and sophisticated than "make." Option A "do" is even more casual than "make," while C "fix up" and D "throw together" are informal phrasal verbs inappropriate for official petitions. Teaching strategy: Build a formal vocabulary bank with students - pair common words with formal alternatives (make/establish, get/obtain, show/demonstrate, ask/request). Practice choosing the right level of formality for different audiences.
Compare the two passages about adding a recycling program at school. Passage 1: “The school should establish a recycling program because it would reduce waste and enhance responsibility.” Passage 2: “We really want recycling because it’s good and it’ll make school better.” Which best describes the style difference?
Both passages are equally formal because they share the same claim.
Passage 1 is more formal because it uses precise vocabulary, while Passage 2 is more informal with casual words.
Passage 2 is more formal because it sounds more friendly to the reader.
Passage 1 is informal because it uses “we,” and Passage 2 is formal because it is shorter.
Explanation
This question tests CCSS.W.6.1.d (establishing and maintaining formal style in argumentative writing appropriate for audience and purpose). Formal style uses sophisticated vocabulary, avoids contractions, employs third person or inclusive first person ("we"), maintains objective tone, uses complete and varied sentence structures, and acknowledges other perspectives respectfully. The passages contrast formal and informal versions of the same argument: Passage 1 uses sophisticated vocabulary ("establish," "reduce," "enhance") while Passage 2 uses casual words ("want," "good," contraction "it'll"). The correct answer (C) accurately identifies this style difference by focusing on vocabulary sophistication as the key distinguishing feature. Option A incorrectly claims "we" is informal (inclusive first person can be formal), option B misses the clear style differences, and option D confuses friendliness with formality. Help students compare formal and informal versions of the same argument to see style differences clearly - formal writing isn't unfriendly, just more sophisticated and measured. Watch for students who think informal equals incorrect - both styles can be correct for different contexts and audiences.
Read this class essay sentence: “Using tablets in class can be beneficial; however, students should follow clear rules to stay focused.” Which feature most contributes to a formal tone?
It includes the topic of tablets, which is modern.
It avoids long words so it is easy to read.
It tries to convince the reader with a strong opinion.
It uses the transition “however” to sound measured and objective.
Explanation
This question tests CCSS.W.6.1.d (establishing and maintaining formal style in argumentative writing appropriate for audience and purpose). Formal style uses sophisticated vocabulary, avoids contractions, employs third person or inclusive first person ("we"), maintains objective tone, uses complete and varied sentence structures, and acknowledges other perspectives respectfully. The sentence establishes formal style through multiple features, but the question asks which MOST contributes to formal tone. The correct answer (A) accurately identifies the transition "however" as creating measured, objective tone - formal writing acknowledges complexity and different perspectives rather than making absolute statements. Option B confuses content (tablets) with style, option C describes all argumentative writing regardless of formality, and option D misunderstands that formal writing can use sophisticated vocabulary. Help students recognize that formal transitions ("however," "furthermore," "nevertheless") signal thoughtful, balanced consideration rather than emotional reaction. These transitions show the writer is considering multiple perspectives, which demonstrates the respect and objectivity central to formal style.
Read the letter to the principal. Which words contribute most to the formal style and tone?
Letter: I respectfully request that our school establish a quiet study area in the library during lunch. This change would be beneficial for students who need to complete assignments. Furthermore, it could reduce noise in the hallways. While some students prefer to talk with friends, a designated space would still allow choice.
"respectfully request" and "furthermore"
"quiet" and "noise"
"library" and "lunch"
"talk with friends" and "still"
Explanation
This question tests CCSS.W.6.1.d (establishing and maintaining formal style in argumentative writing appropriate for audience and purpose). Formal style uses sophisticated vocabulary, avoids contractions, employs third person or inclusive first person ("we"), maintains objective tone, uses complete and varied sentence structures, and acknowledges other perspectives respectfully. The letter establishes formal style through specific word choices that elevate the tone. Key markers include "respectfully request" (formal phrasing showing deference) and "furthermore" (sophisticated transition word). The correct answer (B) accurately identifies these formal style markers that show respect for authority and academic sophistication. Option A contains everyday words that don't specifically contribute to formality, while C includes casual phrases, and D lists topic words unrelated to style. Practice identifying context first: Who is the audience (principal)? What is the purpose (formal request)? Then match style to context by choosing words that show respect and sophistication.
Which revision makes the underlined sentence more formal for a letter to the principal?
Draft: I am writing to request a later start time on Mondays. Many students feel tired, and it affects learning. We can't focus when we're exhausted. A small change could significantly improve attention in first period.
We cannot focus when we are exhausted.
We cannot focus, and it is annoying.
We cannot focus when we are, like, totally exhausted.
You cannot focus when you are exhausted.
Explanation
This question tests CCSS.W.6.1.d (establishing and maintaining formal style in argumentative writing appropriate for audience and purpose). Formal style uses sophisticated vocabulary, avoids contractions, employs third person or inclusive first person ("we"), maintains objective tone, uses complete and varied sentence structures, and acknowledges other perspectives respectfully. The underlined sentence breaks formal style by using contractions ("can't" and "we're"). The correct answer (A) revises appropriately for formality by expanding contractions to "cannot" and "are" while maintaining the inclusive first person "we" appropriate for student-to-principal communication. Option B adds informal filler "like, totally" making it less formal, C shifts to second person "you" which is too direct for addressing authority, and D changes the meaning by adding "annoying" which sounds complaining rather than professional. Teaching strategy: Focus on contractions as the clearest formal style marker - always expand them in formal writing ("cannot" not "can't," "we are" not "we're").
Read the email draft to a principal. Which detail is the clearest sign the style is informal?
Email: Hi Principal Lee! I want to talk about the dress code because it is kind of confusing. You should let kids wear hats in winter since it is cold. It is a good rule change, and it would help a lot.
It includes a debatable claim about a school policy.
It uses second-person pronouns like "you" to address the reader directly.
It has complete sentences and correct spelling.
It gives a reason about winter weather.
Explanation
This question tests CCSS.W.6.1.d (establishing and maintaining formal style in argumentative writing appropriate for audience and purpose). Formal style uses sophisticated vocabulary, avoids contractions, employs third person or inclusive first person ("we"), maintains objective tone, uses complete and varied sentence structures, and acknowledges other perspectives respectfully. The email breaks formal style through multiple markers: casual greeting ("Hi!"), conversational tone ("kind of confusing"), and especially second-person direct address. The correct answer (A) accurately identifies the clearest informal marker - using "you" to directly address the principal, which is too casual for formal communication with authority. Options B and C focus on content not style, while D confuses basic correctness with formality level. Help students understand that addressing authority figures requires more distance - use "the school should" not "you should" when writing to principals or officials.
In the passage below, which sentence breaks the formal style and sounds too informal for a proposal to the student council?
Proposal: Students should be permitted to start a board game club after school. The club would provide a beneficial way to practice strategy and teamwork. It could also help new students meet peers in a structured setting. This club would be super fun, and everyone would totally love it. Consequently, the club could improve school community.
Sentence 1
Sentence 3
Sentence 4
Sentence 2
Explanation
This question tests CCSS.W.6.1.d (establishing and maintaining formal style in argumentative writing appropriate for audience and purpose). Formal style uses sophisticated vocabulary, avoids contractions, employs third person or inclusive first person ("we"), maintains objective tone, uses complete and varied sentence structures, and acknowledges other perspectives respectfully. The passage establishes formal style through sentences 1-3 but breaks formal style in sentence 4. Key markers include the shift from "beneficial" and "consequently" to "super fun" and "totally love it" - casual vocabulary inappropriate for a student council proposal. The correct answer (D) accurately identifies where formality breaks through the use of informal intensifiers ("super," "totally") and conversational tone. The other sentences maintain appropriate formality with words like "permitted," "beneficial," and "structured setting." Help students recognize that informal language isn't incorrect but is inappropriate for formal contexts like proposals to decision-making bodies.
Read this letter to the principal: “I request that our school establish a weekly homework-free night, because it is beneficial for students’ sleep and family time. While some families may prefer extra practice, students can still study for tests as needed.” Which feature makes the style formal?
It uses precise words like “request,” “establish,” and “beneficial.”
It gives two reasons to support the claim.
It uses many contractions to sound friendly.
It sounds excited and emotional about homework.
Explanation
This question tests CCSS.W.6.1.d (establishing and maintaining formal style in argumentative writing appropriate for audience and purpose). Formal style uses sophisticated vocabulary, avoids contractions, employs third person or inclusive first person ("we"), maintains objective tone, uses complete and varied sentence structures, and acknowledges other perspectives respectfully. The passage establishes formal style through sophisticated vocabulary choices: "request" (instead of "want" or "ask"), "establish" (instead of "make" or "start"), and "beneficial" (instead of "good" or "helpful"). The correct answer (A) accurately identifies the formal style feature by pointing to these precise word choices that elevate the language to an appropriate academic level. Option B reflects a structural element (giving reasons) that could appear in both formal and informal writing, while options C and D describe informal features (emotional tone and contractions) that are absent from this formal passage. Help students by explicitly teaching formal style markers: NO contractions, SOPHISTICATED vocabulary ("beneficial" not "good," "request" not "want"), THIRD PERSON or INCLUSIVE FIRST, and OBJECTIVE TONE. Practice identifying context first: Who is the audience? What is the purpose? Then match style to context.