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Keisha explains plant growth in two drafts. Which ending better wraps up her topic?
Draft 1 ends, “Seeds need water and sunlight,” and stops right there.
Draft 1 is better because it ends faster and uses fewer words.
Draft 2 is worse because it restates the main idea instead of adding new facts.
Draft 2 ends, “Now you know plants need water, light, and time to grow strong.”
Explanation
This question tests 4th grade informational/explanatory writing skills: providing a concluding statement or section related to information or explanation presented (CCSS.W.4.2.e). Informational and explanatory writing needs a CONCLUDING STATEMENT that wraps up the explanation. An effective conclusion does one or more of these: restates the main idea (not word-for-word, but synthesized—"Now you know that...", "As you can see..."), summarizes the key points briefly, provides a final thought about why the topic matters or what the reader should remember, and uses conclusion transition words (In conclusion, Finally, To sum up, Now you know, Therefore). The conclusion connects back to what was explained and gives the reader a sense of completion—it does NOT introduce major new information not mentioned in the body, and it's NOT just "The end" or "Done." Keisha writes an explanation about plant growth in two drafts. Draft 1 ends "Seeds need water and sunlight" and stops right there. Draft 2 ends "Now you know plants need water, light, and time to grow strong." Draft 2 has a concluding statement while Draft 1 ends abruptly. Choice B is correct because Draft 2 ends "Now you know plants need water, light, and time to grow strong" which uses the transition phrase "Now you know" and restates the main ideas about what plants need to grow. This wraps up the explanation effectively. Draft 1 wraps up worse because it ends after "Seeds need water and sunlight" without any concluding statement, leaving the reader without closure. Effective conclusions wrap up the explanation, don't introduce new major information, and connect back to the topic. Choice C is incorrect because it claims Draft 1 is better for ending faster and using fewer words when actually Draft 1 lacks a conclusion—just stopping after a detail doesn't wrap up the explanation. Students sometimes think shorter is always better and don't recognize when explanation lacks conclusion. To help students write effective conclusions for informational/explanatory writing: Teach conclusion formula explicitly: "Restate + So What" or "Summary + Final Thought"; model with think-aloud: "I explained what plants need to grow (water, light, time). Now I'll wrap up by restating: 'Plants require these three things to thrive.' Final thought: 'Understanding plant needs helps us become better gardeners.'" Show difference between introduction (This explanation is about...) and conclusion (Now you know that...); practice "Turn your introduction into a conclusion" by changing from future to past tense (will explain → explained/shows); post conclusion transition words: In conclusion, Finally, To sum up, Now you know, As you can see, Therefore, This shows that, In the end. Use "conclusion checklist": Does it restate main idea (not word-for-word)? Does it summarize key points? Does it provide final thought? Does it use transition word? Does it connect to topic? Does it avoid introducing major new information? Practice identifying strong vs weak conclusions with examples. Watch for: students who just stop after last detail without concluding; students who think shorter is always better; students who don't recognize that explanation lacks conclusion.
Read Chen’s explanation about penguin adaptations. What is the problem with his conclusion?
It restates the main idea and gives closure about surviving in cold.
It uses “Finally,” which makes it incorrect for a conclusion.
It is too vague, saying “That’s all,” without connecting to penguins.
It summarizes key points about blubber and feathers, so it is strong.
Explanation
This question tests 4th grade informational/explanatory writing skills: providing a concluding statement or section related to information or explanation presented (CCSS.W.4.2.e). Informational and explanatory writing needs a CONCLUDING STATEMENT that wraps up the explanation. An effective conclusion does one or more of these: restates the main idea (not word-for-word, but synthesized—“Now you know that...", "As you can see..."), summarizes the key points briefly, provides a final thought about why the topic matters or what the reader should remember, and uses conclusion transition words (In conclusion, Finally, To sum up, Now you know, Therefore). The conclusion connects back to what was explained and gives the reader a sense of completion—it does NOT introduce major new information not mentioned in the body, and it's NOT just "The end" or "Done." Example: If explanation is about how levers work (fulcrum, less force needed, examples), strong conclusion: "Now you can see how levers use a fulcrum to help us lift heavy objects more easily. This simple machine makes our work easier every day." (restates main idea + final thought). Weak conclusion: "Done." (too brief, no wrap-up). Weak: "There are also pulleys and wheels." (new information, doesn't conclude about levers). Missing conclusion: explanation just stops after last example without any wrap-up sentence. Chen writes an explanation about penguin adaptations. The body includes facts about blubber, feathers, and other ways penguins survive in cold environments. The explanation has a weak conclusion: "That’s all." The conclusion is too vague and doesn't connect to the topic. Choice A is correct because the conclusion is too vague: "That’s all" doesn't reference topic specifically. Choice B is incorrect because it claims the conclusion restates and gives closure when it's too vague and doesn't reference topic. Students sometimes write vague conclusions ("That's all") that could apply to any topic. To help students write effective conclusions for informational/explanatory writing: Teach conclusion formula explicitly: "Restate + So What" or "Summary + Final Thought"; model with think-aloud: "I explained three ways polar bears adapt to Arctic (thick fur, small ears, wide paws). Now I'll wrap up by restating: 'These special features help polar bears survive in extremely cold environments.' Final thought: 'Understanding these adaptations shows how animals change to fit where they live.'" Show difference between introduction (This explanation is about...) and conclusion (Now you know that...); practice "Turn your introduction into a conclusion" by changing from future to past tense (will explain → explained/shows); post conclusion transition words: In conclusion, Finally, To sum up, Now you know, As you can see, Therefore, This shows that, In the end. Use "conclusion checklist": Does it restate main idea (not word-for-word)? Does it summarize key points? Does it provide final thought? Does it use transition word? Does it connect to topic? Does it avoid introducing major new information? Practice identifying strong vs weak conclusions with examples; provide sentence frames: "Now you know that [main idea]. This [why it matters]." or "In conclusion, [summary of key points]. [Final thought]." Give feedback on common errors: "This conclusion is too brief. Add a sentence restating your main idea." or "This introduces new information. Instead, wrap up by summarizing what you already explained.". Watch for: students who just stop after last detail without concluding; students who write "The end" or "Done" thinking it's sufficient; students who introduce completely new facts in conclusion instead of wrapping up. Common pitfall 2: students who copy introduction word-for-word; students who write vague conclusions ("That's all") that could apply to any topic; students who don't use transition words to signal conclusion; students who think longer conclusion is better even if it doesn't wrap up effectively; students who confuse adding more facts (body development) with wrapping up (conclusion).
Marcus wrote about exercising safely. What does his concluding statement do?
It introduces a new topic about video games and screen time.
It wraps up by restating why warming up and drinking water matter.
It only tells the reader the title again, with no final thought.
It adds another body detail instead of giving closure.
Explanation
This question tests 4th grade informational/explanatory writing skills: providing a concluding statement or section related to information or explanation presented (CCSS.W.4.2.e). Informational and explanatory writing needs a CONCLUDING STATEMENT that wraps up the explanation. An effective conclusion does one or more of these: restates the main idea (not word-for-word, but synthesized—“Now you know that...", "As you can see..."), summarizes the key points briefly, provides a final thought about why the topic matters or what the reader should remember, and uses conclusion transition words (In conclusion, Finally, To sum up, Now you know, Therefore). The conclusion connects back to what was explained and gives the reader a sense of completion—it does NOT introduce major new information not mentioned in the body, and it's NOT just "The end" or "Done." Example: If explanation is about how levers work (fulcrum, less force needed, examples), strong conclusion: "Now you can see how levers use a fulcrum to help us lift heavy objects more easily. This simple machine makes our work easier every day." (restates main idea + final thought). Weak conclusion: "Done." (too brief, no wrap-up). Weak: "There are also pulleys and wheels." (new information, doesn't conclude about levers). Missing conclusion: explanation just stops after last example without any wrap-up sentence. Marcus writes an explanation about exercising safely. The body includes facts about warming up, drinking water, and other safety tips. The explanation includes a concluding statement that restates why warming up and drinking water matter. The conclusion restates the main idea and provides a final thought. Choice B is correct because the concluding statement wraps up by restating why warming up and drinking water matter, connecting back to the topic. Choice A is incorrect because it thinks the conclusion should introduce new information when it should connect to what's already explained. Students sometimes think adding another fact is same as wrapping up. To help students write effective conclusions for informational/explanatory writing: Teach conclusion formula explicitly: "Restate + So What" or "Summary + Final Thought"; model with think-aloud: "I explained three ways polar bears adapt to Arctic (thick fur, small ears, wide paws). Now I'll wrap up by restating: 'These special features help polar bears survive in extremely cold environments.' Final thought: 'Understanding these adaptations shows how animals change to fit where they live.'" Show difference between introduction (This explanation is about...) and conclusion (Now you know that...); practice "Turn your introduction into a conclusion" by changing from future to past tense (will explain → explained/shows); post conclusion transition words: In conclusion, Finally, To sum up, Now you know, As you can see, Therefore, This shows that, In the end. Use "conclusion checklist": Does it restate main idea (not word-for-word)? Does it summarize key points? Does it provide final thought? Does it use transition word? Does it connect to topic? Does it avoid introducing major new information? Practice identifying strong vs weak conclusions with examples; provide sentence frames: "Now you know that [main idea]. This [why it matters]." or "In conclusion, [summary of key points]. [Final thought]." Give feedback on common errors: "This conclusion is too brief. Add a sentence restating your main idea." or "This introduces new information. Instead, wrap up by summarizing what you already explained.". Watch for: students who just stop after last detail without concluding; students who write "The end" or "Done" thinking it's sufficient; students who introduce completely new facts in conclusion instead of wrapping up. Common pitfall 2: students who copy introduction word-for-word; students who write vague conclusions ("That's all") that could apply to any topic; students who don't use transition words to signal conclusion; students who think longer conclusion is better even if it doesn't wrap up effectively; students who confuse adding more facts (body development) with wrapping up (conclusion).
Read Jamal’s explanation about levers. Does his conclusion wrap up the topic effectively?
Yes, it summarizes how a fulcrum helps lift with less effort.
Yes, because any last sentence counts as a conclusion.
No, because conclusions should repeat the first sentence word-for-word.
No, it introduces pulleys and wheels that were not explained.
Explanation
This question tests 4th grade informational/explanatory writing skills: providing a concluding statement or section related to information or explanation presented (CCSS.W.4.2.e). Informational and explanatory writing needs a CONCLUDING STATEMENT that wraps up the explanation. An effective conclusion does one or more of these: restates the main idea (not word-for-word, but synthesized—“Now you know that...", "As you can see..."), summarizes the key points briefly, provides a final thought about why the topic matters or what the reader should remember, and uses conclusion transition words (In conclusion, Finally, To sum up, Now you know, Therefore). The conclusion connects back to what was explained and gives the reader a sense of completion—it does NOT introduce major new information not mentioned in the body, and it's NOT just "The end" or "Done." Example: If explanation is about how levers work (fulcrum, less force needed, examples), strong conclusion: "Now you can see how levers use a fulcrum to help us lift heavy objects more easily. This simple machine makes our work easier every day." (restates main idea + final thought). Weak conclusion: "Done." (too brief, no wrap-up). Weak: "There are also pulleys and wheels." (new information, doesn't conclude about levers). Missing conclusion: explanation just stops after last example without any wrap-up sentence. Jamal writes an explanation about levers. The body includes facts about how levers use a fulcrum to lift heavy objects with less effort, with examples like seesaws and crowbars. The explanation includes a concluding statement that summarizes the fulcrum's role. Choice A is correct because Jamal includes a concluding statement which summarizes how a fulcrum helps lift with less effort, wrapping up the explanation effectively. Choice B is incorrect because it thinks the conclusion should not introduce new information, but in this case, it doesn't—it connects to what's already explained. Students sometimes introduce completely new information instead of wrapping up what was explained. To help students write effective conclusions for informational/explanatory writing: Teach conclusion formula explicitly: "Restate + So What" or "Summary + Final Thought"; model with think-aloud: "I explained three ways polar bears adapt to Arctic (thick fur, small ears, wide paws). Now I'll wrap up by restating: 'These special features help polar bears survive in extremely cold environments.' Final thought: 'Understanding these adaptations shows how animals change to fit where they live.'" Show difference between introduction (This explanation is about...) and conclusion (Now you know that...); practice "Turn your introduction into a conclusion" by changing from future to past tense (will explain → explained/shows); post conclusion transition words: In conclusion, Finally, To sum up, Now you know, As you can see, Therefore, This shows that, In the end. Use "conclusion checklist": Does it restate main idea (not word-for-word)? Does it summarize key points? Does it provide final thought? Does it use transition word? Does it connect to topic? Does it avoid introducing major new information? Practice identifying strong vs weak conclusions with examples; provide sentence frames: "Now you know that [main idea]. This [why it matters]." or "In conclusion, [summary of key points]. [Final thought]." Give feedback on common errors: "This conclusion is too brief. Add a sentence restating your main idea." or "This introduces new information. Instead, wrap up by summarizing what you already explained.". Watch for: students who just stop after last detail without concluding; students who write "The end" or "Done" thinking it's sufficient; students who introduce completely new facts in conclusion instead of wrapping up. Common pitfall 2: students who copy introduction word-for-word; students who write vague conclusions ("That's all") that could apply to any topic; students who don't use transition words to signal conclusion; students who think longer conclusion is better even if it doesn't wrap up effectively; students who confuse adding more facts (body development) with wrapping up (conclusion).
Carlos wrote about George Washington Carver. How could he improve his conclusion?
Introduce a new section about Abraham Lincoln’s life and inventions.
Replace it with “The end,” so the reader knows he is finished.
Remove the conclusion because informational writing does not need one.
Add a sentence that summarizes Carver’s impact and connects to the main idea.
Explanation
This question tests 4th grade informational/explanatory writing skills: providing a concluding statement or section related to information or explanation presented (CCSS.W.4.2.e). Informational and explanatory writing needs a CONCLUDING STATEMENT that wraps up the explanation. An effective conclusion does one or more of these: restates the main idea (not word-for-word, but synthesized—“Now you know that...", "As you can see..."), summarizes the key points briefly, provides a final thought about why the topic matters or what the reader should remember, and uses conclusion transition words (In conclusion, Finally, To sum up, Now you know, Therefore). The conclusion connects back to what was explained and gives the reader a sense of completion—it does NOT introduce major new information not mentioned in the body, and it's NOT just "The end" or "Done." Example: If explanation is about how levers work (fulcrum, less force needed, examples), strong conclusion: "Now you can see how levers use a fulcrum to help us lift heavy objects more easily. This simple machine makes our work easier every day." (restates main idea + final thought). Weak conclusion: "Done." (too brief, no wrap-up). Weak: "There are also pulleys and wheels." (new information, doesn't conclude about levers). Missing conclusion: explanation just stops after last example without any wrap-up sentence. Carlos writes an explanation about George Washington Carver. The body includes facts about his life, inventions, and impact. The explanation has a weak or missing conclusion that needs improvement. Choice B is correct because Carlos could improve by adding a sentence that summarizes Carver’s impact and connects to the main idea to wrap up. Choice C is incorrect because it thinks the conclusion should introduce new information when it should connect to what's already explained. Students sometimes introduce completely new information instead of wrapping up what was explained. To help students write effective conclusions for informational/explanatory writing: Teach conclusion formula explicitly: "Restate + So What" or "Summary + Final Thought"; model with think-aloud: "I explained three ways polar bears adapt to Arctic (thick fur, small ears, wide paws). Now I'll wrap up by restating: 'These special features help polar bears survive in extremely cold environments.' Final thought: 'Understanding these adaptations shows how animals change to fit where they live.'" Show difference between introduction (This explanation is about...) and conclusion (Now you know that...); practice "Turn your introduction into a conclusion" by changing from future to past tense (will explain → explained/shows); post conclusion transition words: In conclusion, Finally, To sum up, Now you know, As you can see, Therefore, This shows that, In the end. Use "conclusion checklist": Does it restate main idea (not word-for-word)? Does it summarize key points? Does it provide final thought? Does it use transition word? Does it connect to topic? Does it avoid introducing major new information? Practice identifying strong vs weak conclusions with examples; provide sentence frames: "Now you know that [main idea]. This [why it matters]." or "In conclusion, [summary of key points]. [Final thought]." Give feedback on common errors: "This conclusion is too brief. Add a sentence restating your main idea." or "This introduces new information. Instead, wrap up by summarizing what you already explained.". Watch for: students who just stop after last detail without concluding; students who write "The end" or "Done" thinking it's sufficient; students who introduce completely new facts in conclusion instead of wrapping up. Common pitfall 2: students who copy introduction word-for-word; students who write vague conclusions ("That's all") that could apply to any topic; students who don't use transition words to signal conclusion; students who think longer conclusion is better even if it doesn't wrap up effectively; students who confuse adding more facts (body development) with wrapping up (conclusion).
Read Maya’s explanation about deserts. Does her ending give a strong conclusion?
No, it adds new facts about rainforests instead of summarizing deserts.
No, because conclusions should only list every detail from the body.
Yes, it ends with “That’s all about my topic,” which is specific.
Yes, it restates what makes deserts dry and extreme using “To sum up.”
Explanation
This question tests 4th grade informational/explanatory writing skills: providing a concluding statement or section related to information or explanation presented (CCSS.W.4.2.e). Informational and explanatory writing needs a CONCLUDING STATEMENT that wraps up the explanation. An effective conclusion does one or more of these: restates the main idea (not word-for-word, but synthesized—“Now you know that...", "As you can see..."), summarizes the key points briefly, provides a final thought about why the topic matters or what the reader should remember, and uses conclusion transition words (In conclusion, Finally, To sum up, Now you know, Therefore). The conclusion connects back to what was explained and gives the reader a sense of completion—it does NOT introduce major new information not mentioned in the body, and it's NOT just "The end" or "Done." Example: If explanation is about how levers work (fulcrum, less force needed, examples), strong conclusion: "Now you can see how levers use a fulcrum to help us lift heavy objects more easily. This simple machine makes our work easier every day." (restates main idea + final thought). Weak conclusion: "Done." (too brief, no wrap-up). Weak: "There are also pulleys and wheels." (new information, doesn't conclude about levers). Missing conclusion: explanation just stops after last example without any wrap-up sentence. Maya writes an explanation about deserts. The body includes facts about what makes deserts dry and extreme, such as low rainfall and temperature extremes. The explanation includes a concluding statement: something that restates using "To sum up." The conclusion restates that deserts are dry and extreme and provides closure. Choice C is correct because Maya includes a concluding statement: which restates the main idea by saying what makes deserts dry and extreme using "To sum up" and connects back to topic. Choice B is incorrect because it claims the conclusion introduces new info about rainforests when it doesn't—it connects to what's explained. Students sometimes introduce completely new information instead of wrapping up what was explained. To help students write effective conclusions for informational/explanatory writing: Teach conclusion formula explicitly: "Restate + So What" or "Summary + Final Thought"; model with think-aloud: "I explained three ways polar bears adapt to Arctic (thick fur, small ears, wide paws). Now I'll wrap up by restating: 'These special features help polar bears survive in extremely cold environments.' Final thought: 'Understanding these adaptations shows how animals change to fit where they live.'" Show difference between introduction (This explanation is about...) and conclusion (Now you know that...); practice "Turn your introduction into a conclusion" by changing from future to past tense (will explain → explained/shows); post conclusion transition words: In conclusion, Finally, To sum up, Now you know, As you can see, Therefore, This shows that, In the end. Use "conclusion checklist": Does it restate main idea (not word-for-word)? Does it summarize key points? Does it provide final thought? Does it use transition word? Does it connect to topic? Does it avoid introducing major new information? Practice identifying strong vs weak conclusions with examples; provide sentence frames: "Now you know that [main idea]. This [why it matters]." or "In conclusion, [summary of key points]. [Final thought]." Give feedback on common errors: "This conclusion is too brief. Add a sentence restating your main idea." or "This introduces new information. Instead, wrap up by summarizing what you already explained.". Watch for: students who just stop after last detail without concluding; students who write "The end" or "Done" thinking it's sufficient; students who introduce completely new facts in conclusion instead of wrapping up. Common pitfall 2: students who copy introduction word-for-word; students who write vague conclusions ("That's all") that could apply to any topic; students who don't use transition words to signal conclusion; students who think longer conclusion is better even if it doesn't wrap up effectively; students who confuse adding more facts (body development) with wrapping up (conclusion).
Sofia wrote about the water cycle. What should she add to wrap it up?
A concluding statement that summarizes evaporation, condensation, and precipitation.
A new paragraph explaining hurricanes and tornadoes in detail.
More transition words in the middle, like “first” and “next.”
A longer introduction that repeats the title three times.
Explanation
This question tests 4th grade informational/explanatory writing skills: providing a concluding statement or section related to information or explanation presented (CCSS.W.4.2.e). Informational and explanatory writing needs a CONCLUDING STATEMENT that wraps up the explanation. An effective conclusion does one or more of these: restates the main idea (not word-for-word, but synthesized—“Now you know that...", "As you can see..."), summarizes the key points briefly, provides a final thought about why the topic matters or what the reader should remember, and uses conclusion transition words (In conclusion, Finally, To sum up, Now you know, Therefore). The conclusion connects back to what was explained and gives the reader a sense of completion—it does NOT introduce major new information not mentioned in the body, and it's NOT just "The end" or "Done." Example: If explanation is about how levers work (fulcrum, less force needed, examples), strong conclusion: "Now you can see how levers use a fulcrum to help us lift heavy objects more easily. This simple machine makes our work easier every day." (restates main idea + final thought). Weak conclusion: "Done." (too brief, no wrap-up). Weak: "There are also pulleys and wheels." (new information, doesn't conclude about levers). Missing conclusion: explanation just stops after last example without any wrap-up sentence. Sofia writes an explanation about the water cycle. The body includes facts about evaporation, condensation, and precipitation. The explanation ends abruptly after the last detail without any wrap-up. Choice B is correct because Sofia should add a concluding statement that summarizes evaporation, condensation, and precipitation to wrap up. Choice A is incorrect because it thinks adding new information about hurricanes and tornadoes wraps up when it should connect to what's already explained. Students sometimes introduce completely new information instead of wrapping up what was explained. To help students write effective conclusions for informational/explanatory writing: Teach conclusion formula explicitly: "Restate + So What" or "Summary + Final Thought"; model with think-aloud: "I explained three ways polar bears adapt to Arctic (thick fur, small ears, wide paws). Now I'll wrap up by restating: 'These special features help polar bears survive in extremely cold environments.' Final thought: 'Understanding these adaptations shows how animals change to fit where they live.'" Show difference between introduction (This explanation is about...) and conclusion (Now you know that...); practice "Turn your introduction into a conclusion" by changing from future to past tense (will explain → explained/shows); post conclusion transition words: In conclusion, Finally, To sum up, Now you know, As you can see, Therefore, This shows that, In the end. Use "conclusion checklist": Does it restate main idea (not word-for-word)? Does it summarize key points? Does it provide final thought? Does it use transition word? Does it connect to topic? Does it avoid introducing major new information? Practice identifying strong vs weak conclusions with examples; provide sentence frames: "Now you know that [main idea]. This [why it matters]." or "In conclusion, [summary of key points]. [Final thought]." Give feedback on common errors: "This conclusion is too brief. Add a sentence restating your main idea." or "This introduces new information. Instead, wrap up by summarizing what you already explained.". Watch for: students who just stop after last detail without concluding; students who write "The end" or "Done" thinking it's sufficient; students who introduce completely new facts in conclusion instead of wrapping up. Common pitfall 2: students who copy introduction word-for-word; students who write vague conclusions ("That's all") that could apply to any topic; students who don't use transition words to signal conclusion; students who think longer conclusion is better even if it doesn't wrap up effectively; students who confuse adding more facts (body development) with wrapping up (conclusion).
Maya wrote about Harriet Tubman. What does her concluding statement do best?
It repeats her introduction word-for-word without summarizing any key points.
It tells the reader she is finished writing, which is the main purpose.
It introduces a new fact about another leader to expand the topic.
It summarizes her bravery and explains why her actions mattered.
Explanation
This question tests 4th grade informational/explanatory writing skills: providing a concluding statement or section related to information or explanation presented (CCSS.W.4.2.e). Informational and explanatory writing needs a CONCLUDING STATEMENT that wraps up the explanation. An effective conclusion does one or more of these: restates the main idea (not word-for-word, but synthesized—“Now you know that...", "As you can see..."), summarizes the key points briefly, provides a final thought about why the topic matters or what the reader should remember, and uses conclusion transition words (In conclusion, Finally, To sum up, Now you know, Therefore). The conclusion connects back to what was explained and gives the reader a sense of completion—it does NOT introduce major new information not mentioned in the body, and it's NOT just "The end" or "Done." Example: If explanation is about how levers work (fulcrum, less force needed, examples), strong conclusion: "Now you can see how levers use a fulcrum to help us lift heavy objects more easily. This simple machine makes our work easier every day." (restates main idea + final thought). Weak conclusion: "Done." (too brief, no wrap-up). Weak: "There are also pulleys and wheels." (new information, doesn't conclude about levers). Missing conclusion: explanation just stops after last example without any wrap-up sentence. Maya writes an explanation about Harriet Tubman. The body includes facts about her bravery in leading enslaved people to freedom. The explanation includes a concluding statement that summarizes her bravery and why it mattered. Choice C is correct because the conclusion summarizes her bravery and provides final thought about why her actions mattered, using transition words and connecting back to the topic. Choice B is incorrect because it thinks copying introduction word-for-word is ineffective when the actual conclusion synthesizes; students sometimes copy introduction exactly instead of synthesizing. To help students write effective conclusions for informational/explanatory writing: Teach conclusion formula explicitly: "Restate + So What" or "Summary + Final Thought"; model with think-aloud: "I explained three ways polar bears adapt to Arctic (thick fur, small ears, wide paws). Now I'll wrap up by restating: 'These special features help polar bears survive in extremely cold environments.' Final thought: 'Understanding these adaptations shows how animals change to fit where they live.'" Show difference between introduction (This explanation is about...) and conclusion (Now you know that...); practice "Turn your introduction into a conclusion" by changing from future to past tense (will explain → explained/shows); post conclusion transition words: In conclusion, Finally, To sum up, Now you know, As you can see, Therefore, This shows that, In the end. Use "conclusion checklist": Does it restate main idea (not word-for-word)? Does it summarize key points? Does it provide final thought? Does it use transition word? Does it connect to topic? Does it avoid introducing major new information? Practice identifying strong vs weak conclusions with examples; provide sentence frames: "Now you know that [main idea]. This [why it matters]." or "In conclusion, [summary of key points]. [Final thought]." Give feedback on common errors: "This conclusion is too brief. Add a sentence restating your main idea." or "This introduces new information. Instead, wrap up by summarizing what you already explained." Watch for: students who just stop after last detail without concluding; students who write "The end" or "Done" thinking it's sufficient; students who introduce completely new facts in conclusion instead of wrapping up. Common pitfall: students who copy introduction word-for-word; students who write vague conclusions ("That's all") that could apply to any topic; students who don't use transition words to signal conclusion; students who think longer conclusion is better even if it doesn't wrap up effectively; students who confuse adding more facts (body development) with wrapping up (conclusion).
Sofia wrote about the water cycle. What should she add to wrap up her explanation?
The same first sentence copied again as the ending.
Another body sentence with extra details instead of a conclusion.
A new paragraph explaining tornadoes, because they are also weather.
A concluding statement that summarizes evaporation, condensation, and precipitation.
Explanation
This question tests 4th grade informational/explanatory writing skills: providing a concluding statement or section related to information or explanation presented (CCSS.W.4.2.e). Informational and explanatory writing needs a CONCLUDING STATEMENT that wraps up the explanation. An effective conclusion does one or more of these: restates the main idea (not word-for-word, but synthesized—“Now you know that...", "As you can see..."), summarizes the key points briefly, provides a final thought about why the topic matters or what the reader should remember, and uses conclusion transition words (In conclusion, Finally, To sum up, Now you know, Therefore). The conclusion connects back to what was explained and gives the reader a sense of completion—it does NOT introduce major new information not mentioned in the body, and it's NOT just "The end" or "Done." Example: If explanation is about how levers work (fulcrum, less force needed, examples), strong conclusion: "Now you can see how levers use a fulcrum to help us lift heavy objects more easily. This simple machine makes our work easier every day." (restates main idea + final thought). Weak conclusion: "Done." (too brief, no wrap-up). Weak: "There are also pulleys and wheels." (new information, doesn't conclude about levers). Missing conclusion: explanation just stops after last example without any wrap-up sentence. Sofia writes an explanation about the water cycle. The body includes facts about evaporation, condensation, and precipitation as key stages. The explanation lacks a concluding statement and needs one to wrap up. Choice A is correct because Sofia should add a concluding statement that summarizes evaporation, condensation, and precipitation to wrap up, such as "In conclusion, the water cycle keeps water moving through these important steps." Choice B is incorrect because it thinks conclusion should introduce new information when it should connect to what's already explained; students sometimes introduce completely new information instead of wrapping up what was explained. To help students write effective conclusions for informational/explanatory writing: Teach conclusion formula explicitly: "Restate + So What" or "Summary + Final Thought"; model with think-aloud: "I explained three ways polar bears adapt to Arctic (thick fur, small ears, wide paws). Now I'll wrap up by restating: 'These special features help polar bears survive in extremely cold environments.' Final thought: 'Understanding these adaptations shows how animals change to fit where they live.'" Show difference between introduction (This explanation is about...) and conclusion (Now you know that...); practice "Turn your introduction into a conclusion" by changing from future to past tense (will explain → explained/shows); post conclusion transition words: In conclusion, Finally, To sum up, Now you know, As you can see, Therefore, This shows that, In the end. Use "conclusion checklist": Does it restate main idea (not word-for-word)? Does it summarize key points? Does it provide final thought? Does it use transition word? Does it connect to topic? Does it avoid introducing major new information? Practice identifying strong vs weak conclusions with examples; provide sentence frames: "Now you know that [main idea]. This [why it matters]." or "In conclusion, [summary of key points]. [Final thought]." Give feedback on common errors: "This conclusion is too brief. Add a sentence restating your main idea." or "This introduces new information. Instead, wrap up by summarizing what you already explained." Watch for: students who just stop after last detail without concluding; students who write "The end" or "Done" thinking it's sufficient; students who introduce completely new facts in conclusion instead of wrapping up. Common pitfall: students who copy introduction word-for-word; students who write vague conclusions ("That's all") that could apply to any topic; students who don't use transition words to signal conclusion; students who think longer conclusion is better even if it doesn't wrap up effectively; students who confuse adding more facts (body development) with wrapping up (conclusion).
Read Yuki’s explanation about exercise. How could she improve her weak conclusion?
Remove the ending so the writing stops right after the last detail.
Add new information about vitamins that was not in her explanation.
Copy her introduction exactly as the conclusion without any changes.
Add a final sentence that restates benefits like strong muscles and a healthy heart.
Explanation
This question tests 4th grade informational/explanatory writing skills: providing a concluding statement or section related to information or explanation presented (CCSS.W.4.2.e). Informational and explanatory writing needs a CONCLUDING STATEMENT that wraps up the explanation. An effective conclusion does one or more of these: restates the main idea (not word-for-word, but synthesized—“Now you know that...", "As you can see..."), summarizes the key points briefly, provides a final thought about why the topic matters or what the reader should remember, and uses conclusion transition words (In conclusion, Finally, To sum up, Now you know, Therefore). The conclusion connects back to what was explained and gives the reader a sense of completion—it does NOT introduce major new information not mentioned in the body, and it's NOT just "The end" or "Done." Example: If explanation is about how levers work (fulcrum, less force needed, examples), strong conclusion: "Now you can see how levers use a fulcrum to help us lift heavy objects more easily. This simple machine makes our work easier every day." (restates main idea + final thought). Weak conclusion: "Done." (too brief, no wrap-up). Weak: "There are also pulleys and wheels." (new information, doesn't conclude about levers). Missing conclusion: explanation just stops after last example without any wrap-up sentence. Yuki writes an explanation about exercise. The body includes facts about benefits like strong muscles and a healthy heart. The explanation has a weak conclusion that needs improvement. Choice A is correct because Yuki could improve by adding a final sentence that restates benefits like strong muscles and a healthy heart to wrap up, such as "In conclusion, exercise helps build strong muscles and a healthy heart." Effective conclusions wrap up the explanation, don't introduce new major information, and connect back to the topic. Choice C is incorrect because it thinks conclusion should introduce new information when it should connect to what's already explained; students sometimes think good conclusion must introduce new facts. To help students write effective conclusions for informational/explanatory writing: Teach conclusion formula explicitly: "Restate + So What" or "Summary + Final Thought"; model with think-aloud: "I explained three ways polar bears adapt to Arctic (thick fur, small ears, wide paws). Now I'll wrap up by restating: 'These special features help polar bears survive in extremely cold environments.' Final thought: 'Understanding these adaptations shows how animals change to fit where they live.'" Show difference between introduction (This explanation is about...) and conclusion (Now you know that...); practice "Turn your introduction into a conclusion" by changing from future to past tense (will explain → explained/shows); post conclusion transition words: In conclusion, Finally, To sum up, Now you know, As you can see, Therefore, This shows that, In the end. Use "conclusion checklist": Does it restate main idea (not word-for-word)? Does it summarize key points? Does it provide final thought? Does it use transition word? Does it connect to topic? Does it avoid introducing major new information? Practice identifying strong vs weak conclusions with examples; provide sentence frames: "Now you know that [main idea]. This [why it matters]." or "In conclusion, [summary of key points]. [Final thought]." Give feedback on common errors: "This conclusion is too brief. Add a sentence restating your main idea." or "This introduces new information. Instead, wrap up by summarizing what you already explained." Watch for: students who just stop after last detail without concluding; students who write "The end" or "Done" thinking it's sufficient; students who introduce completely new facts in conclusion instead of wrapping up. Common pitfall: students who copy introduction word-for-word; students who write vague conclusions ("That's all") that could apply to any topic; students who don't use transition words to signal conclusion; students who think longer conclusion is better even if it doesn't wrap up effectively; students who confuse adding more facts (body development) with wrapping up (conclusion).