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Read the ending of the story. Earlier, Chen trained for weeks to run the last lap in the relay, but during practice he kept dropping the baton. Ending: "In the race, I gripped the baton the way Coach showed me and didn’t let my fingers loosen. When I crossed the finish line, my teammates rushed over and cheered, and I finally smiled instead of apologizing. After today, I understand that mistakes in practice are how you get ready for the real moment. I placed the baton back in the case and took a deep breath." How does this conclusion follow from the narrated events?
It does not follow because a conclusion should stop without explaining feelings.
It follows because it introduces a new challenge for Chen to join a different sport.
It follows because it shows a logical outcome of Chen’s practice and ends with a final, calm moment.
It does not follow because it mentions Coach, who should only appear in the middle of a story.
Explanation
This question tests CCSS.W.4.3.e (Provide a conclusion that follows from the narrated experiences or events). An effective conclusion FOLLOWS FROM the story (references/connects to events that happened, is logical outcome based on story) AND PROVIDES CLOSURE (reader feels story is complete, problem resolved or experience concluded, character has final thought/feeling about outcome). Conclusion ≠ just stopping—it must give sense of completion. Common approaches: reflection (character thinks about what they learned), resolution (shows problem solved), looking forward (what happens next based on experience), final image (peaceful or satisfying moment), circular (references beginning to show completion). Conclusion should be brief (3-5 sentences) and not introduce new conflict. This conclusion reflects on the experience and provides a final image which connects to training, dropping the baton in practice, and succeeding in the race. Choice A is correct because it accurately identifies the connection to story events like practice and distinguishes an effective conclusion through logical outcome and calm resolution. Choice C represents new conflict acceptance which happens when students believe conclusions should add challenges to extend the narrative rather than provide closure. Teaching strategy: Help students evaluate conclusions with two questions: (1) Does this ending CONNECT to what happened in the story? (conclusion should reference/follow from events, not random ending), and (2) Does this ending make the story feel COMPLETE? (problem solved, experience concluded, character reflects—not left hanging). Effective conclusions: Character reflects ("Now I know..." "After that day, I learned..."), Resolution shown ("Finally, we found it" "The problem was solved"), Looking forward ("Next time I'll..." "I can't wait to..."), Final peaceful moment (character satisfied, looking at result), Circular (references beginning to show how things changed). Ineffective conclusions: Abrupt stop with no closure ("Then we left. The End."), Unresolved (problem still exists), New conflict (introduces new problem that needs solving), Unconnected to story (random thought not related to events), Cliché ("and it was all a dream"). Common pitfalls: Thinking any ending is a conclusion (conclusion must follow from AND provide closure), not recognizing when story is left unresolved, expecting conclusion to continue story with more events (conclusion ends story), accepting clichés as effective conclusions. Remember: Conclusion must FOLLOW FROM narrated events (connect to what happened) and PROVIDE CLOSURE (feel complete).
Read the ending of the story. Earlier, Carlos trained for a 5K and nearly quit during the long hill, but his sister reminded him to keep a steady pace.
"At the finish line, I grabbed my sister’s hand and we both cheered. I remembered that hill and how I almost stopped, but I kept moving one step at a time. Now I know I can do hard things when I don’t rush. On the way home, I started planning which race I might try next."
How does this ending give the story a sense of completion?
It gives completion by focusing on transitions instead of the story’s main event.
It gives completion by resolving the race and reflecting on the challenge from earlier.
It gives completion by ending right after the hill without telling the result.
It gives completion by adding a new conflict about losing his shoes at home.
Explanation
This question tests CCSS.W.4.3.e (Provide a conclusion that follows from the narrated experiences or events). An effective conclusion FOLLOWS FROM the story (references/connects to events that happened, is logical outcome based on story) AND PROVIDES CLOSURE (reader feels story is complete, problem resolved or experience concluded, character has final thought/feeling about outcome). This conclusion shows resolution and looks forward which directly connects to Carlos's training struggle and his sister's advice about steady pacing. Choice B is correct because it accurately identifies how the ending provides completion by resolving the race (finished successfully) and reflecting on the earlier challenge (remembering the hill where he almost quit). Choice A represents abrupt ending confusion which happens when students think stopping immediately after a challenge provides closure without showing resolution. Teaching strategy: Help students evaluate conclusions with two questions: (1) Does this ending CONNECT to what happened in the story? (references the difficult hill, sister's advice about steady pace, successful finish), and (2) Does this ending make the story feel COMPLETE? (race finished, lesson learned about persistence, planning future races). Effective conclusions often combine resolution of the immediate challenge with looking forward based on what was learned.
These sentences come at the end of the story. Earlier, Carlos and his sister built a model bridge for science class, but it kept collapsing until they used triangles to make it stronger.
Ending: "By the time we glued on the last triangle, the bridge finally stood on its own. We tested it with a stack of pennies, and it held every one. I felt proud because our mistake helped us build something better. We packed the bridge carefully for school the next morning."
What does this ending provide for the story?
More description of the setting at the beginning of the story.
A reason to stop the story early without finishing the main event.
Closure by showing the problem is solved and how Carlos feels about the result.
A new conflict that will take place during the next science fair.
Explanation
This question tests CCSS.W.4.3.e (Provide a conclusion that follows from the narrated experiences or events). An effective conclusion FOLLOWS FROM the story (references/connects to events that happened, is logical outcome based on story) AND PROVIDES CLOSURE (reader feels story is complete, problem resolved or experience concluded, character has final thought/feeling about outcome). This conclusion shows resolution and provides a final satisfying moment, which directly connects to the bridge-building struggle and the discovery that triangles make it stronger. Choice C is correct because it accurately identifies that the ending provides closure by showing the problem is solved (bridge stands and holds pennies) and how Carlos feels about the result (proud that mistakes led to better solution). Choice A represents new conflict acceptance which happens when students confuse adding new problems with providing effective conclusions. Teaching strategy: Help students evaluate conclusions with two questions: (1) Does this ending CONNECT to what happened in the story? (references the triangles solution and testing with pennies), and (2) Does this ending make the story feel COMPLETE? (problem solved, Carlos feels proud, bridge ready for school). Resolution-based conclusions like this show the problem solved ("the bridge finally stood on its own"), character's feelings ("I felt proud"), and a sense of completion (packing bridge for school).
These sentences come at the end of the story. Earlier, Sofia spilled paint on the class mural and worried her classmates would be upset, so she stayed after school to mix the right color and repaint the corner. Ending: "By the time we cleaned the brushes, the mural looked smooth again. Ms. Patel nodded and told me she was proud that I fixed my mistake. I felt relieved, because I didn’t hide what happened. From now on, I will slow down when I carry supplies." What does this ending provide for the story?
A surprising twist that changes the story’s topic to a different class project.
A new conflict about Sofia spilling paint again the next day.
A detailed description of the mural’s colors, which is the main purpose of an ending.
Closure by showing the problem is fixed and Sofia reflects on what she will do differently.
Explanation
This question tests CCSS.W.4.3.e (Provide a conclusion that follows from the narrated experiences or events). An effective conclusion FOLLOWS FROM the story (references/connects to events that happened, is logical outcome based on story) AND PROVIDES CLOSURE (reader feels story is complete, problem resolved or experience concluded, character has final thought/feeling about outcome). Conclusion ≠ just stopping—it must give sense of completion. Common approaches: reflection (character thinks about what they learned), resolution (shows problem solved), looking forward (what happens next based on experience), final image (peaceful or satisfying moment), circular (references beginning to show completion). Conclusion should be brief (3-5 sentences) and not introduce new conflict. This conclusion shows resolution and reflects on the experience which connects to spilling paint and repainting the mural after school. Choice C is correct because it correctly identifies what's needed for closure, including problem resolution and reflection on future actions. Choice A represents new conflict acceptance which happens when students think endings should introduce more problems to keep the story going instead of concluding it. Teaching strategy: Help students evaluate conclusions with two questions: (1) Does this ending CONNECT to what happened in the story? (conclusion should reference/follow from events, not random ending), and (2) Does this ending make the story feel COMPLETE? (problem solved, experience concluded, character reflects—not left hanging). Effective conclusions: Character reflects ("Now I know..." "After that day, I learned..."), Resolution shown ("Finally, we found it" "The problem was solved"), Looking forward ("Next time I'll..." "I can't wait to..."), Final peaceful moment (character satisfied, looking at result), Circular (references beginning to show how things changed). Ineffective conclusions: Abrupt stop with no closure ("Then we left. The End."), Unresolved (problem still exists), New conflict (introduces new problem that needs solving), Unconnected to story (random thought not related to events), Cliché ("and it was all a dream"). Common pitfalls: Thinking any ending is a conclusion (conclusion must follow from AND provide closure), not recognizing when story is left unresolved, expecting conclusion to continue story with more events (conclusion ends story), accepting clichés as effective conclusions. Remember: Conclusion must FOLLOW FROM narrated events (connect to what happened) and PROVIDE CLOSURE (feel complete).
Read the ending of the story. Earlier, Marcus worked for days on a model bridge for engineering club. After one weak test, he added extra supports and tried again.
"When the weights were placed on top, my bridge held steady without bending. I let out a long breath because the extra supports had worked. I packed the model into a box and wrote 'Handle with care' on the lid. On the walk home, I felt satisfied knowing I didn’t give up."
How does this conclusion follow from the narrated experiences or events?
It follows because it restarts the story by introducing Marcus for the first time.
It follows because it shows the bridge test results and Marcus’s final feelings.
It follows because it adds a new conflict about losing the box on the bus.
It follows because it includes more sensory details, even if the bridge is not mentioned.
Explanation
This question tests CCSS.W.4.3.e (Provide a conclusion that follows from the narrated experiences or events). An effective conclusion FOLLOWS FROM the story (references/connects to events that happened, is logical outcome based on story) AND PROVIDES CLOSURE (reader feels story is complete, problem resolved or experience concluded, character has final thought/feeling about outcome). Conclusion ≠ just stopping—it must give sense of completion. Common approaches: reflection (character thinks about what they learned), resolution (shows problem solved), looking forward (what happens next based on experience), final image (peaceful or satisfying moment), circular (references beginning to show completion). Conclusion should be brief (3-5 sentences) and not introduce new conflict. This conclusion shows resolution and expresses the character's feeling, which connects to building the model bridge, testing it, and adding supports. Choice A is correct because it accurately identifies the connection to story events through test results and final satisfaction. Choice B represents new conflict acceptance which happens when students think adding unrelated problems follows logically from the events. Teaching strategy: Help students evaluate conclusions with two questions: (1) Does this ending CONNECT to what happened in the story? (conclusion should reference/follow from events, not random ending), and (2) Does this ending make the story feel COMPLETE? (problem solved, experience concluded, character reflects—not left hanging). Effective conclusions: Character reflects ("Now I know..." "After that day, I learned..."), Resolution shown ("Finally, we found it" "The problem was solved"), Looking forward ("Next time I'll..." "I can't wait to..."), Final peaceful moment (character satisfied, looking at result), Circular (references beginning to show how things changed). Ineffective conclusions: Abrupt stop with no closure ("Then we left. The End."), Unresolved (problem still exists), New conflict (introduces new problem that needs solving), Unconnected to story (random thought not related to events), Cliché ("and it was all a dream"). Common pitfalls: Thinking any ending is a conclusion (conclusion must follow from AND provide closure), not recognizing when story is left unresolved, expecting conclusion to continue story with more events (conclusion ends story), accepting clichés as effective conclusions. Remember: Conclusion must FOLLOW FROM narrated events (connect to what happened) and PROVIDE CLOSURE (feel complete).
Read the ending of the story. Earlier, Chen joined a soccer team and felt frustrated because he kept missing passes during practice. His coach showed him how to keep his eyes up, and his teammates encouraged him. Ending: "At the last practice, I trapped the ball and sent it to Riley right on time. Coach nodded, and my teammates shouted my name. After that day, I stopped thinking I had to be perfect right away. I walked off the field tired but happy, ready for our first game." How does this ending give the story a sense of completion?
It completes the story by switching to a different character and a different sport.
It completes the story by adding a new argument with the coach that is not resolved.
It completes the story because it ends with “The End,” which always provides closure.
It completes the story by showing Chen improved, felt proud, and looked forward to the next step.
Explanation
This question tests CCSS.W.4.3.e (Provide a conclusion that follows from the narrated experiences or events). An effective conclusion FOLLOWS FROM the story (references/connects to events that happened, is logical outcome based on story) AND PROVIDES CLOSURE (reader feels story is complete, problem resolved or experience concluded, character has final thought/feeling about outcome). Conclusion ≠ just stopping—it must give sense of completion. Common approaches: reflection (character thinks about what they learned), resolution (shows problem solved), looking forward (what happens next based on experience), final image (peaceful or satisfying moment), circular (references beginning to show completion). Conclusion should be brief (3-5 sentences) and not introduce new conflict. This conclusion reflects on the experience and looks forward which connects to Chen's frustration with passes and coaching help by showing his improvement and readiness for the game. Choice A is correct because it correctly evaluates the closure through progress, pride, and anticipation of future events based on the story. Choice B represents new conflict acceptance which happens when students believe unresolved issues enhance completion instead of recognizing they prevent closure. Teaching strategy: Help students evaluate conclusions with two questions: (1) Does this ending CONNECT to what happened in the story? (conclusion should reference/follow from events, not random ending), and (2) Does this ending make the story feel COMPLETE? (problem solved, experience concluded, character reflects—not left hanging). Effective conclusions: Character reflects ("Now I know..." "After that day, I learned..."), Resolution shown ("Finally, we found it" "The problem was solved"), Looking forward ("Next time I'll..." "I can't wait to..."), Final peaceful moment (character satisfied, looking at result), Circular (references beginning to show how things changed). Ineffective conclusions: Abrupt stop with no closure ("Then we left. The End."), Unresolved (problem still exists), New conflict (introduces new problem that needs solving), Unconnected to story (random thought not related to events), Cliché ("and it was all a dream"). Common pitfalls: Thinking any ending is a conclusion (conclusion must follow from AND provide closure), not recognizing when story is left unresolved, expecting conclusion to continue story with more events (conclusion ends story), accepting clichés as effective conclusions. Remember: Conclusion must FOLLOW FROM narrated events (connect to what happened) and PROVIDE CLOSURE (feel complete).
Look at the conclusion. Earlier, Amir was afraid to jump off the diving board, but his coach taught him to take one deep breath and look straight ahead.
"I stepped to the edge, took the same deep breath Coach taught me, and jumped. When I surfaced, I heard my friends cheering, and I started laughing. After that, the diving board did not seem like a monster anymore. I climbed out of the pool feeling brave and ready for practice tomorrow."
How does the conclusion connect to the events in the story?
It connects by adding a new character who challenges Amir to a race.
It connects by explaining the history of diving boards in great detail.
It connects by repeating the coach’s advice and showing Amir’s fear has changed.
It connects because it ends with the words "The End," which is enough closure.
Explanation
This question tests CCSS.W.4.3.e (Provide a conclusion that follows from the narrated experiences or events). An effective conclusion FOLLOWS FROM the story (references/connects to events that happened, is logical outcome based on story) AND PROVIDES CLOSURE (reader feels story is complete, problem resolved or experience concluded, character has final thought/feeling about outcome). This conclusion shows resolution and character transformation which directly connects to the coach's advice about taking a deep breath and Amir's fear of the diving board. Choice A is correct because it accurately identifies how the conclusion connects by repeating the coach's breathing technique and showing Amir's fear has transformed into bravery and readiness. Choice B represents new conflict acceptance which happens when students think conclusions need new characters or challenges rather than resolving existing conflicts. Teaching strategy: Help students evaluate conclusions with two questions: (1) Does this ending CONNECT to what happened in the story? (uses the same breathing technique coach taught, references the diving board fear), and (2) Does this ending make the story feel COMPLETE? (fear conquered, friends cheering, character feels brave and ready for future practice). Common pitfalls: Thinking any ending words provide closure (D) or that conclusions need new elements (B) instead of connecting to and resolving the established conflict.
These sentences come at the end of the story. Earlier, Riley was scared to try the high diving board at the pool. After watching others, getting advice from the lifeguard, and climbing up twice, Riley finally jumped.
"The splash was loud, but I popped back up grinning. My legs had been shaking on the ladder, yet the jump felt quick and safe. From now on, I won’t let my fear decide for me before I even try. I swam to the side and waved to my friends."
What does this conclusion provide for the story?
It provides closure by showing Riley jumped and is thinking differently about fear.
It provides closure because it changes the setting to a new pool with a new problem.
It provides a better middle because it adds more steps to climbing the ladder.
It provides suspense by leaving unclear whether Riley ever jumped.
Explanation
This question tests CCSS.W.4.3.e (Provide a conclusion that follows from the narrated experiences or events). An effective conclusion FOLLOWS FROM the story (references/connects to events that happened, is logical outcome based on story) AND PROVIDES CLOSURE (reader feels story is complete, problem resolved or experience concluded, character has final thought/feeling about outcome). Conclusion ≠ just stopping—it must give sense of completion. Common approaches: reflection (character thinks about what they learned), resolution (shows problem solved), looking forward (what happens next based on experience), final image (peaceful or satisfying moment), circular (references beginning to show completion). Conclusion should be brief (3-5 sentences) and not introduce new conflict. This conclusion reflects on the experience and looks forward, which connects to Riley's fear of the diving board and finally jumping after advice and attempts. Choice A is correct because it correctly evaluates the closure provided by resolving the fear and showing changed thinking. Choice C represents no closure recognition which happens when students overlook unresolved elements and mistake suspense for completion. Teaching strategy: Help students evaluate conclusions with two questions: (1) Does this ending CONNECT to what happened in the story? (conclusion should reference/follow from events, not random ending), and (2) Does this ending make the story feel COMPLETE? (problem solved, experience concluded, character reflects—not left hanging). Effective conclusions: Character reflects ("Now I know..." "After that day, I learned..."), Resolution shown ("Finally, we found it" "The problem was solved"), Looking forward ("Next time I'll..." "I can't wait to..."), Final peaceful moment (character satisfied, looking at result), Circular (references beginning to show how things changed). Ineffective conclusions: Abrupt stop with no closure ("Then we left. The End."), Unresolved (problem still exists), New conflict (introduces new problem that needs solving), Unconnected to story (random thought not related to events), Cliché ("and it was all a dream"). Common pitfalls: Thinking any ending is a conclusion (conclusion must follow from AND provide closure), not recognizing when story is left unresolved, expecting conclusion to continue story with more events (conclusion ends story), accepting clichés as effective conclusions. Remember: Conclusion must FOLLOW FROM narrated events (connect to what happened) and PROVIDE CLOSURE (feel complete).
Look at the conclusion. Earlier, Jamal and his dad built a birdhouse, but Jamal kept measuring wrong and the pieces did not fit. They re-measured, sanded the edges, and finally nailed it together. Conclusion: "By the time we hung the birdhouse on the maple tree, it looked straight and sturdy. I could still hear Dad reminding me to measure twice before cutting once. When a small sparrow landed on the roof, I felt proud that we fixed our mistakes. From now on, I will slow down and check my work." Does this conclusion provide a sense of closure that follows from the story?
Yes, because it leaves the birdhouse unfinished so readers can imagine the rest.
No, because it should start a brand-new adventure that is not related to the birdhouse.
Yes, because it shows the finished birdhouse, Jamal’s feelings, and what he will do next time.
No, because it focuses on transitions instead of ending the story.
Explanation
This question tests CCSS.W.4.3.e (Provide a conclusion that follows from the narrated experiences or events). An effective conclusion FOLLOWS FROM the story (references/connects to events that happened, is logical outcome based on story) AND PROVIDES CLOSURE (reader feels story is complete, problem resolved or experience concluded, character has final thought/feeling about outcome). Conclusion ≠ just stopping—it must give sense of completion. Common approaches: reflection (character thinks about what they learned), resolution (shows problem solved), looking forward (what happens next based on experience), final image (peaceful or satisfying moment), circular (references beginning to show completion). Conclusion should be brief (3-5 sentences) and not introduce new conflict. This conclusion shows resolution and looks forward which connects to Jamal's measuring mistakes and fixing them with his dad by describing the finished birdhouse and his plan to improve. Choice A is correct because it correctly evaluates the closure provided by the successful outcome, feelings of pride, and future application of the lesson. Choice B represents new conflict acceptance which happens when students confuse conclusions with story extensions that introduce unrelated adventures instead of providing resolution. Teaching strategy: Help students evaluate conclusions with two questions: (1) Does this ending CONNECT to what happened in the story? (conclusion should reference/follow from events, not random ending), and (2) Does this ending make the story feel COMPLETE? (problem solved, experience concluded, character reflects—not left hanging). Effective conclusions: Character reflects ("Now I know..." "After that day, I learned..."), Resolution shown ("Finally, we found it" "The problem was solved"), Looking forward ("Next time I'll..." "I can't wait to..."), Final peaceful moment (character satisfied, looking at result), Circular (references beginning to show how things changed). Ineffective conclusions: Abrupt stop with no closure ("Then we left. The End."), Unresolved (problem still exists), New conflict (introduces new problem that needs solving), Unconnected to story (random thought not related to events), Cliché ("and it was all a dream"). Common pitfalls: Thinking any ending is a conclusion (conclusion must follow from AND provide closure), not recognizing when story is left unresolved, expecting conclusion to continue story with more events (conclusion ends story), accepting clichés as effective conclusions. Remember: Conclusion must FOLLOW FROM narrated events (connect to what happened) and PROVIDE CLOSURE (feel complete).
Read the ending of the story. Earlier, Maya was nervous about reading her poem out loud, but her friend helped her practice during recess and she finally shared it at the class celebration.
"When I finished, the room was quiet for a second, and then my classmates started clapping. I took a deep breath and smiled because I had done the hard part. After that day, I learned that practicing with a friend can make scary things feel possible. I walked back to my seat, proud and calm."
How does this conclusion follow from the narrated events and provide closure?
It connects to Maya practicing and reading aloud, and it ends with her feeling proud.
It would be stronger if it added more dialogue from the middle of the story.
It introduces a new problem by showing Maya is worried about a different assignment.
It provides closure because it stops quickly after the poem without any reflection.
Explanation
This question tests CCSS.W.4.3.e (Provide a conclusion that follows from the narrated experiences or events). An effective conclusion FOLLOWS FROM the story (references/connects to events that happened, is logical outcome based on story) AND PROVIDES CLOSURE (reader feels story is complete, problem resolved or experience concluded, character has final thought/feeling about outcome). Conclusion ≠ just stopping—it must give sense of completion. Common approaches: reflection (character thinks about what they learned), resolution (shows problem solved), looking forward (what happens next based on experience), final image (peaceful or satisfying moment), circular (references beginning to show completion). Conclusion should be brief (3-5 sentences) and not introduce new conflict. This conclusion reflects on the experience and expresses the character's feeling of pride, which connects to Maya's nervousness about reading aloud and how practicing with a friend helped her succeed. Choice B is correct because it accurately identifies the connection to story events like practicing and reading aloud while evaluating the closure provided through her proud feeling. Choice A represents new conflict acceptance which happens when students mistakenly think introducing unrelated worries strengthens the ending instead of providing resolution. Teaching strategy: Help students evaluate conclusions with two questions: (1) Does this ending CONNECT to what happened in the story? (conclusion should reference/follow from events, not random ending), and (2) Does this ending make the story feel COMPLETE? (problem solved, experience concluded, character reflects—not left hanging). Effective conclusions: Character reflects ("Now I know..." "After that day, I learned..."), Resolution shown ("Finally, we found it" "The problem was solved"), Looking forward ("Next time I'll..." "I can't wait to..."), Final peaceful moment (character satisfied, looking at result), Circular (references beginning to show how things changed). Ineffective conclusions: Abrupt stop with no closure ("Then we left. The End."), Unresolved (problem still exists), New conflict (introduces new problem that needs solving), Unconnected to story (random thought not related to events), Cliché ("and it was all a dream"). Common pitfalls: Thinking any ending is a conclusion (conclusion must follow from AND provide closure), not recognizing when story is left unresolved, expecting conclusion to continue story with more events (conclusion ends story), accepting clichés as effective conclusions. Remember: Conclusion must FOLLOW FROM narrated events (connect to what happened) and PROVIDE CLOSURE (feel complete).