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1

Read Keisha’s report comparing butterflies and moths: “Butterflies usually fly during the day, but many moths fly at night. Nocturnal means active at night. Butterflies often have antennae with round ends, while moth antennae can look feathery.” Which sentence gives a definition that helps readers understand an important word?

Butterflies usually fly during the day, but many moths fly at night.

Nocturnal means active at night.

Butterflies and moths are both insects.

Butterflies often have antennae with round ends, while moth antennae can look feathery.

Explanation

This question tests 3rd grade informative/explanatory writing skill of developing the topic with facts, definitions, and details (CCSS.W.3.2.b). Developing a topic means teaching readers about it using facts (true information, often with numbers/specifics), definitions (explaining important words), and details (describing, elaborating, explaining how or why). Well-developed writing doesn't just list bare facts ('Penguins swim'); it elaborates ('Penguins use their flippers like wings to swim up to 15 miles per hour, catching fish underwater'). The combination of facts, definitions, and details helps readers learn and understand the topic fully. For 3rd graders, development means adding specific information and explanation, not just mentioning the topic. In this scenario, Keisha is writing about butterflies and moths and developing it with a definition of an important word like nocturnal. The question tests whether students can identify needed definitions. Choice C is correct because it provides a definition that helps readers understand the important word 'nocturnal' used in context. For example, 'active at night' gives readers a clear understanding of vocabulary. This shows effective topic development. Choice D gives a bare fact without details or elaboration, just stating they are insects. This is common when students list facts from research without explaining or elaborating. This happens because students may think facts alone are enough, or may confuse informative writing with list-making, or may not understand that 'developing' means elaborating and explaining, not just stating. To help students develop topics with facts, definitions, and details: Teach FAD (Facts, And Details): Every fact needs details to develop it. Model expanding bare facts: 'Penguins eat fish' → 'Penguins eat fish like anchovies and sardines, catching them underwater with their sharp beaks.' Practice definitions: When you use important word, explain what it means for readers. Use elaboration prompts: 'Say more about that,' 'Give an example,' 'Explain how,' 'Tell why.' Create development checklist: □ Specific facts (with numbers/names/details)? □ Definitions for hard words? □ Details that describe/explain/elaborate? Compare bare vs developed writing side-by-side. Use mentor texts: highlight facts in one color, definitions in another, details in third. Teach sentence expansion: Start with fact, add 'how,' 'why,' 'when,' 'where' details. Watch for: Bare lists of facts without elaboration. Vague statements ('it's interesting'). Opinions mixed with facts ('best,' 'I think'). Facts without context or explanation. Praise: 'You gave a fact AND added details that help readers understand!'

2

Read Jamal’s animal report about sea turtles: “Sea turtles are reptiles. Reptiles are cold-blooded animals, so their bodies warm up in the sun. Sea turtles can live up to about 80 years, and they have hard shells that protect them from predators like sharks.” Which sentence develops the topic with a fact and detail?

Sea turtles are reptiles.

Sea turtles can live up to about 80 years, and they have hard shells that protect them from predators like sharks.

Sea turtles swim.

Sea turtles are the coolest ocean animals.

Explanation

This question tests 3rd grade informative/explanatory writing skill of developing the topic with facts, definitions, and details (CCSS.W.3.2.b). Developing a topic means teaching readers about it using facts (true information, often with numbers/specifics), definitions (explaining important words), and details (describing, elaborating, explaining how or why). Well-developed writing doesn't just list bare facts ('Penguins swim'); it elaborates ('Penguins use their flippers like wings to swim up to 15 miles per hour, catching fish underwater'). The combination of facts, definitions, and details helps readers learn and understand the topic fully. For 3rd graders, development means adding specific information and explanation, not just mentioning the topic. In this scenario, Jamal is writing about sea turtles and developing the topic with facts like lifespan and shells, plus details about protection; the question tests whether students can identify the sentence that develops the topic with a fact and detail. Choice B is correct because it includes specific facts with numbers (up to 80 years) and details (hard shells protect from predators like sharks), elaborating on sea turtle characteristics. For example, mentioning predators like sharks gives readers a detailed picture of how the shell functions in the topic. Choice D gives a bare fact without details, just stating 'Sea turtles swim' without explaining how or why. This is common when students list facts from research without explaining or elaborating. This happens because students may think facts alone are enough, or may confuse informative writing with list-making, or may not understand that 'developing' means elaborating and explaining, not just stating. To help students develop topics with facts, definitions, and details: Teach FAD (Facts, And Details): Every fact needs details to develop it. Model expanding bare facts: 'Penguins eat fish' → 'Penguins eat fish like anchovies and sardines, catching them underwater with their sharp beaks.' Practice definitions: When you use important word, explain what it means for readers. Use elaboration prompts: 'Say more about that,' 'Give an example,' 'Explain how,' 'Tell why.' Create development checklist: □ Specific facts (with numbers/names/details)? □ Definitions for hard words? □ Details that describe/explain/elaborate? Compare bare vs developed writing side-by-side. Use mentor texts: highlight facts in one color, definitions in another, details in third. Teach sentence expansion: Start with fact, add 'how,' 'why,' 'when,' 'where' details. Watch for: Bare lists of facts without elaboration. Vague statements ('it's interesting'). Opinions mixed with facts ('best,' 'I think'). Facts without context or explanation. Praise: 'You gave a fact AND added details that help readers understand!'

3

Read Emma’s informative writing about how libraries work: “Libraries lend books for free. A librarian is a person who helps you find books and use the computer catalog. Many libraries let you keep books for two weeks, and you return them to the front desk or book drop.” Which sentence provides a definition that helps readers understand the topic?

Libraries lend books for free.

You return them to the front desk or book drop.

A librarian is a person who helps you find books and use the computer catalog.

Many libraries let you keep books for two weeks.

Explanation

This question tests 3rd grade informative/explanatory writing skill of developing the topic with facts, definitions, and details (CCSS.W.3.2.b). Developing a topic means teaching readers about it using facts (true information, often with numbers/specifics), definitions (explaining important words), and details (describing, elaborating, explaining how or why). Well-developed writing doesn't just list bare facts ('Penguins swim'); it elaborates ('Penguins use their flippers like wings to swim up to 15 miles per hour, catching fish underwater'). The combination of facts, definitions, and details helps readers learn and understand the topic fully. For 3rd graders, development means adding specific information and explanation, not just mentioning the topic. In this scenario, Emma is writing about how libraries work, developing with facts about lending and a definition of librarian; the question tests whether students can identify the sentence that provides a definition to help readers understand the topic. Choice D is correct because it provides a definition of 'librarian,' explaining their role in helping find books and use catalogs. For example, this definition gives readers a clear understanding of key vocabulary in the library process. Choice A gives a bare fact without details or definition, just stating libraries lend for free without elaborating. This is common when students list facts from research without explaining or elaborating. This happens because students may think facts alone are enough, or may confuse informative writing with list-making, or may not understand that 'developing' means elaborating and explaining, not just stating. To help students develop topics with facts, definitions, and details: Teach FAD (Facts, And Details): Every fact needs details to develop it. Model expanding bare facts: 'Penguins eat fish' → 'Penguins eat fish like anchovies and sardines, catching them underwater with their sharp beaks.' Practice definitions: When you use important word, explain what it means for readers. Use elaboration prompts: 'Say more about that,' 'Give an example,' 'Explain how,' 'Tell why.' Create development checklist: □ Specific facts (with numbers/names/details)? □ Definitions for hard words? □ Details that describe/explain/elaborate? Compare bare vs developed writing side-by-side. Use mentor texts: highlight facts in one color, definitions in another, details in third. Teach sentence expansion: Start with fact, add 'how,' 'why,' 'when,' 'where' details. Watch for: Bare lists of facts without elaboration. Vague statements ('it's interesting'). Opinions mixed with facts ('best,' 'I think'). Facts without context or explanation. Praise: 'You gave a fact AND added details that help readers understand!'

4

Read Maya’s informative writing about the water cycle:

“Water can change and move from place to place. Evaporation means water turns into vapor. Water evaporates from oceans, lakes, and puddles. The sun warms the water, and the vapor rises into the air even though you cannot see it.”

Which sentence adds a detail that elaborates on the fact about evaporation?

Evaporation means water turns into vapor.

Water evaporates from oceans, lakes, and puddles.

The sun warms the water, and the vapor rises into the air even though you cannot see it.

Water can change and move from place to place.

Explanation

This question tests 3rd grade informative/explanatory writing skill of developing the topic with facts, definitions, and details (CCSS.W.3.2.b). Developing a topic means teaching readers about it using facts (true information, often with numbers/specifics), definitions (explaining important words), and details (describing, elaborating, explaining how or why). Well-developed writing doesn't just list bare facts ('Penguins swim'); it elaborates ('Penguins use their flippers like wings to swim up to 15 miles per hour, catching fish underwater'). The combination of facts, definitions, and details helps readers learn and understand the topic fully. For 3rd graders, development means adding specific information and explanation, not just mentioning the topic. In this scenario, Maya is writing about the water cycle and developing with a definition and some facts with details; the question tests whether students can identify a sentence that adds an elaborating detail to a fact. Choice B is correct because it adds a detail that elaborates on the fact about evaporation by explaining how it happens and a specific invisible aspect. For example, 'The sun warms the water, and the vapor rises into the air even though you cannot see it' gives readers a detailed picture of the process. This shows effective topic development. Choice A gives a bare fact without details. This is common when students list facts from research without explaining or elaborating. This happens because students may think facts alone are enough, or may confuse informative writing with list-making, or may not understand that 'developing' means elaborating and explaining, not just stating. To help students develop topics with facts, definitions, and details: Teach FAD (Facts, And Details): Every fact needs details to develop it. Model expanding bare facts: 'Penguins eat fish' → 'Penguins eat fish like anchovies and sardines, catching them underwater with their sharp beaks.' Practice definitions: When you use important word, explain what it means for readers. Use elaboration prompts: 'Say more about that,' 'Give an example,' 'Explain how,' 'Tell why.' Create development checklist: □ Specific facts (with numbers/names/details)? □ Definitions for hard words? □ Details that describe/explain/elaborate? Compare bare vs developed writing side-by-side. Use mentor texts: highlight facts in one color, definitions in another, details in third. Teach sentence expansion: Start with fact, add 'how,' 'why,' 'when,' 'where' details. Watch for: Bare lists of facts without elaboration. Vague statements ('it's interesting'). Opinions mixed with facts ('best,' 'I think'). Facts without context or explanation. Praise: 'You gave a fact AND added details that help readers understand!'

5

Read Marcus’s report about Rosa Parks: “Rosa Parks refused to give up her seat on a bus in 1955. Segregation meant Black and white people had to use separate areas. She was arrested, and this helped lead to the Montgomery Bus Boycott, which lasted 381 days.” How does Marcus develop the topic of Rosa Parks?

He uses a date, defines segregation, and adds details about what happened after.

He lists opinions about why buses are important.

He tells a personal story about meeting Rosa Parks.

He asks questions to make the reader wonder.

Explanation

This question tests 3rd grade informative/explanatory writing skill of developing the topic with facts, definitions, and details (CCSS.W.3.2.b). Developing a topic means teaching readers about it using facts (true information, often with numbers/specifics), definitions (explaining important words), and details (describing, elaborating, explaining how or why). Well-developed writing doesn't just list bare facts ('Penguins swim'); it elaborates ('Penguins use their flippers like wings to swim up to 15 miles per hour, catching fish underwater'). The combination of facts, definitions, and details helps readers learn and understand the topic fully. For 3rd graders, development means adding specific information and explanation, not just mentioning the topic. In this scenario, Marcus is writing about Rosa Parks, developing with a date, definition of segregation, and details about consequences; the question tests whether students can identify how he develops the topic. Choice B is correct because it describes using a date, defining segregation, and adding details about the aftermath, combining facts and details to develop the topic. For example, mentioning the boycott's 381 days gives readers factual information and a detailed picture of the event's impact. Choice D lists opinions instead of facts, which doesn't develop with objective information. This is common when students include opinions instead of facts. This happens because students may think facts alone are enough, or may confuse informative writing with list-making, or may not understand that 'developing' means elaborating and explaining, not just stating. To help students develop topics with facts, definitions, and details: Teach FAD (Facts, And Details): Every fact needs details to develop it. Model expanding bare facts: 'Penguins eat fish' → 'Penguins eat fish like anchovies and sardines, catching them underwater with their sharp beaks.' Practice definitions: When you use important word, explain what it means for readers. Use elaboration prompts: 'Say more about that,' 'Give an example,' 'Explain how,' 'Tell why.' Create development checklist: □ Specific facts (with numbers/names/details)? □ Definitions for hard words? □ Details that describe/explain/elaborate? Compare bare vs developed writing side-by-side. Use mentor texts: highlight facts in one color, definitions in another, details in third. Teach sentence expansion: Start with fact, add 'how,' 'why,' 'when,' 'where' details. Watch for: Bare lists of facts without elaboration. Vague statements ('it's interesting'). Opinions mixed with facts ('best,' 'I think'). Facts without context or explanation. Praise: 'You gave a fact AND added details that help readers understand!'

6

Read Yuki’s animal report about sea turtles: “Sea turtles lay eggs on sandy beaches. A predator is an animal that hunts other animals for food. Raccoons and birds can dig up turtle nests and eat the eggs.” Which sentence adds a detail that elaborates on the fact about sea turtles laying eggs?

Sea turtles are interesting.

Raccoons and birds can dig up turtle nests and eat the eggs.

Sea turtles lay eggs on sandy beaches.

A predator is an animal that hunts other animals for food.

Explanation

This question tests 3rd grade informative/explanatory writing skill of developing the topic with facts, definitions, and details (CCSS.W.3.2.b). Developing a topic means teaching readers about it using facts (true information, often with numbers/specifics), definitions (explaining important words), and details (describing, elaborating, explaining how or why). Well-developed writing doesn't just list bare facts ('Penguins swim'); it elaborates ('Penguins use their flippers like wings to swim up to 15 miles per hour, catching fish underwater'). The combination of facts, definitions, and details helps readers learn and understand the topic fully. For 3rd graders, development means adding specific information and explanation, not just mentioning the topic. In this scenario, Yuki is writing about sea turtles, developing with a fact about laying eggs, a definition of predator, and details about threats; the question tests whether students can identify the sentence that adds a detail elaborating on the egg-laying fact. Choice C is correct because it elaborates with details, explaining how raccoons and birds dig up nests and eat eggs. For example, naming specific predators and their actions gives readers a detailed picture of the dangers to eggs. Choice D includes an opinion instead of a fact, saying sea turtles are 'interesting' without factual development. This is common when students mix opinions with facts. This happens because students may think facts alone are enough, or may confuse informative writing with list-making, or may not understand that 'developing' means elaborating and explaining, not just stating. To help students develop topics with facts, definitions, and details: Teach FAD (Facts, And Details): Every fact needs details to develop it. Model expanding bare facts: 'Penguins eat fish' → 'Penguins eat fish like anchovies and sardines, catching them underwater with their sharp beaks.' Practice definitions: When you use important word, explain what it means for readers. Use elaboration prompts: 'Say more about that,' 'Give an example,' 'Explain how,' 'Tell why.' Create development checklist: □ Specific facts (with numbers/names/details)? □ Definitions for hard words? □ Details that describe/explain/elaborate? Compare bare vs developed writing side-by-side. Use mentor texts: highlight facts in one color, definitions in another, details in third. Teach sentence expansion: Start with fact, add 'how,' 'why,' 'when,' 'where' details. Watch for: Bare lists of facts without elaboration. Vague statements ('it's interesting'). Opinions mixed with facts ('best,' 'I think'). Facts without context or explanation. Praise: 'You gave a fact AND added details that help readers understand!'

7

Read Keisha’s place description about rainforests: “Rainforests are warm, wet forests near the equator. The canopy is the top layer of trees, and it can be like a green roof. Animals such as monkeys, birds, and sloths live in the canopy where they find food and safety.” Which sentence develops the topic with examples and details?

The canopy is the top layer of trees, and it can be like a green roof.

Rainforests are warm, wet forests near the equator.

Rainforests have trees.

Animals such as monkeys, birds, and sloths live in the canopy where they find food and safety.

Explanation

This question tests 3rd grade informative/explanatory writing skill of developing the topic with facts, definitions, and details (CCSS.W.3.2.b). Developing a topic means teaching readers about it using facts (true information, often with numbers/specifics), definitions (explaining important words), and details (describing, elaborating, explaining how or why). Well-developed writing doesn't just list bare facts ('Penguins swim'); it elaborates ('Penguins use their flippers like wings to swim up to 15 miles per hour, catching fish underwater'). The combination of facts, definitions, and details helps readers learn and understand the topic fully. For 3rd graders, development means adding specific information and explanation, not just mentioning the topic. In this scenario, Keisha is writing about rainforests, developing with facts, a definition of canopy, and examples of animals; the question tests whether students can identify the sentence that develops the topic with examples and details. Choice C is correct because it elaborates with specific examples (monkeys, birds, sloths) and details (find food and safety in the canopy). For example, naming animals and their benefits gives readers a detailed picture of life in the rainforest. Choice D gives a bare fact without details, just stating 'Rainforests have trees' without elaboration. This is common when students list facts from research without explaining or elaborating. This happens because students may think facts alone are enough, or may confuse informative writing with list-making, or may not understand that 'developing' means elaborating and explaining, not just stating. To help students develop topics with facts, definitions, and details: Teach FAD (Facts, And Details): Every fact needs details to develop it. Model expanding bare facts: 'Penguins eat fish' → 'Penguins eat fish like anchovies and sardines, catching them underwater with their sharp beaks.' Practice definitions: When you use important word, explain what it means for readers. Use elaboration prompts: 'Say more about that,' 'Give an example,' 'Explain how,' 'Tell why.' Create development checklist: □ Specific facts (with numbers/names/details)? □ Definitions for hard words? □ Details that describe/explain/elaborate? Compare bare vs developed writing side-by-side. Use mentor texts: highlight facts in one color, definitions in another, details in third. Teach sentence expansion: Start with fact, add 'how,' 'why,' 'when,' 'where' details. Watch for: Bare lists of facts without elaboration. Vague statements ('it's interesting'). Opinions mixed with facts ('best,' 'I think'). Facts without context or explanation. Praise: 'You gave a fact AND added details that help readers understand!'

8

Amir is writing an informative paragraph about how libraries work. He already wrote: “Libraries lend books for free. A librarian helps people find books.” Which revision would better develop the topic with facts and details?

Libraries lend books for free, and many let you borrow them for about two weeks before returning them.

I went to the library yesterday with my cousin.

Libraries have stuff.

Libraries are fun places.

Explanation

This question tests 3rd grade informative/explanatory writing skill of developing the topic with facts, definitions, and details (CCSS.W.3.2.b). Developing a topic means teaching readers about it using facts (true information, often with numbers/specifics), definitions (explaining important words), and details (describing, elaborating, explaining how or why). Well-developed writing doesn't just list bare facts ('Penguins swim'); it elaborates ('Penguins use their flippers like wings to swim up to 15 miles per hour, catching fish underwater'). The combination of facts, definitions, and details helps readers learn and understand the topic fully. For 3rd graders, development means adding specific information and explanation, not just mentioning the topic. In this scenario, Amir is writing about how libraries work with bare facts, and the question asks for a revision adding facts and details; the question tests whether students can identify the revision that better develops the topic with facts and details. Choice B is correct because it includes specific facts with details, elaborating on borrowing time (about two weeks) and returning process. For example, adding the timeframe and return method gives readers factual information and a detailed picture of library procedures. Choice A includes an opinion instead of facts, calling libraries 'fun' without objective development. This is common when students mix opinions with facts. This happens because students may think facts alone are enough, or may confuse informative writing with list-making, or may not understand that 'developing' means elaborating and explaining, not just stating. To help students develop topics with facts, definitions, and details: Teach FAD (Facts, And Details): Every fact needs details to develop it. Model expanding bare facts: 'Penguins eat fish' → 'Penguins eat fish like anchovies and sardines, catching them underwater with their sharp beaks.' Practice definitions: When you use important word, explain what it means for readers. Use elaboration prompts: 'Say more about that,' 'Give an example,' 'Explain how,' 'Tell why.' Create development checklist: □ Specific facts (with numbers/names/details)? □ Definitions for hard words? □ Details that describe/explain/elaborate? Compare bare vs developed writing side-by-side. Use mentor texts: highlight facts in one color, definitions in another, details in third. Teach sentence expansion: Start with fact, add 'how,' 'why,' 'when,' 'where' details. Watch for: Bare lists of facts without elaboration. Vague statements ('it's interesting'). Opinions mixed with facts ('best,' 'I think'). Facts without context or explanation. Praise: 'You gave a fact AND added details that help readers understand!'

9

Read Carlos’s informative writing about rainforests: “Rainforests are forests that get a lot of rain. Many rainforests receive over 100 inches of rain each year. The canopy is the layer of treetops, and it makes shade on the forest floor.” What does Carlos define to help readers understand rainforests?

rain

shade

forest floor

canopy

Explanation

This question tests 3rd grade informative/explanatory writing skill of developing the topic with facts, definitions, and details (CCSS.W.3.2.b). Developing a topic means teaching readers about it using facts (true information, often with numbers/specifics), definitions (explaining important words), and details (describing, elaborating, explaining how or why). Well-developed writing doesn't just list bare facts ('Penguins swim'); it elaborates ('Penguins use their flippers like wings to swim up to 15 miles per hour, catching fish underwater'). The combination of facts, definitions, and details helps readers learn and understand the topic fully. For 3rd graders, development means adding specific information and explanation, not just mentioning the topic. In this scenario, Carlos is writing about rainforests and developing it with a definition of canopy and facts about rain; the question tests whether students can identify what Carlos defines to help readers understand rainforests. Choice B is correct because it identifies 'canopy' as the term defined, providing a definition that helps readers understand this key part of rainforests. For example, explaining canopy as the layer of treetops gives readers a clear understanding of vocabulary and its role in the ecosystem. Choice A identifies 'rain,' but the writing doesn't define it, just mentions it vaguely. This is common when students use technical words without defining them. This happens because students may think facts alone are enough, or may confuse informative writing with list-making, or may not understand that 'developing' means elaborating and explaining, not just stating. To help students develop topics with facts, definitions, and details: Teach FAD (Facts, And Details): Every fact needs details to develop it. Model expanding bare facts: 'Penguins eat fish' → 'Penguins eat fish like anchovies and sardines, catching them underwater with their sharp beaks.' Practice definitions: When you use important word, explain what it means for readers. Use elaboration prompts: 'Say more about that,' 'Give an example,' 'Explain how,' 'Tell why.' Create development checklist: □ Specific facts (with numbers/names/details)? □ Definitions for hard words? □ Details that describe/explain/elaborate? Compare bare vs developed writing side-by-side. Use mentor texts: highlight facts in one color, definitions in another, details in third. Teach sentence expansion: Start with fact, add 'how,' 'why,' 'when,' 'where' details. Watch for: Bare lists of facts without elaboration. Vague statements ('it's interesting'). Opinions mixed with facts ('best,' 'I think'). Facts without context or explanation. Praise: 'You gave a fact AND added details that help readers understand!'

10

Read Chen’s science writing about the water cycle: “Condensation happens when water vapor cools and turns back into tiny drops of liquid water. These drops collect to form clouds. When the drops get heavy, they fall as rain or snow.” Which sentence best develops the topic with a definition and details?

Clouds are pretty.

Rain falls.

Condensation happens when water vapor cools and turns back into tiny drops of liquid water.

Water is wet.

Explanation

This question tests 3rd grade informative/explanatory writing skill of developing the topic with facts, definitions, and details (CCSS.W.3.2.b). Developing a topic means teaching readers about it using facts (true information, often with numbers/specifics), definitions (explaining important words), and details (describing, elaborating, explaining how or why). Well-developed writing doesn't just list bare facts ('Penguins swim'); it elaborates ('Penguins use their flippers like wings to swim up to 15 miles per hour, catching fish underwater'). The combination of facts, definitions, and details helps readers learn and understand the topic fully. For 3rd graders, development means adding specific information and explanation, not just mentioning the topic. In this scenario, Chen is writing about the water cycle, developing with a definition of condensation and details about the process; the question tests whether students can identify the sentence that best develops the topic with a definition and details. Choice A is correct because it provides a definition of condensation with details about how vapor cools into drops. For example, explaining the transformation into 'tiny drops of liquid water' gives readers a clear understanding of the process. Choice B includes an opinion instead of a fact, calling clouds 'pretty' without factual development. This is common when students mix opinions with facts. This happens because students may think facts alone are enough, or may confuse informative writing with list-making, or may not understand that 'developing' means elaborating and explaining, not just stating. To help students develop topics with facts, definitions, and details: Teach FAD (Facts, And Details): Every fact needs details to develop it. Model expanding bare facts: 'Penguins eat fish' → 'Penguins eat fish like anchovies and sardines, catching them underwater with their sharp beaks.' Practice definitions: When you use important word, explain what it means for readers. Use elaboration prompts: 'Say more about that,' 'Give an example,' 'Explain how,' 'Tell why.' Create development checklist: □ Specific facts (with numbers/names/details)? □ Definitions for hard words? □ Details that describe/explain/elaborate? Compare bare vs developed writing side-by-side. Use mentor texts: highlight facts in one color, definitions in another, details in third. Teach sentence expansion: Start with fact, add 'how,' 'why,' 'when,' 'where' details. Watch for: Bare lists of facts without elaboration. Vague statements ('it's interesting'). Opinions mixed with facts ('best,' 'I think'). Facts without context or explanation. Praise: 'You gave a fact AND added details that help readers understand!'

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