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(1) Cowboys have long been a symbol in American society. (2) On the one hand, they represent American strength, adventurousness, and indefatigability. (3) But they also call up images of oppression, racism, and exploitation. (4) However, both of these romanticized views of cowboys betray the dull routine and everyday realities of the lives that many cowboys lived.
(5) Some cowboys worked at the same farms for much of their lives, while others periodically moved cattle from place to place without ever participating in a gun fight or being harangued by unexpected or hidden enemies. (6) Today, their figurative descendants can still be found living in agricultural areas, working hard to ensure that steady supplies of milk, meat and other agricultural products find their ways to stores and your dining room table.
Which of the following would be the best spot to insert the sentence "Many times, they dealt with disease, hunger and loneliness."?
Between Sentence 5 and Sentence 6
Between Sentence 3 and Sentence 4
Before Sentence 1
Before Sentence 5
Between Sentence 2 and Sentence 3
"Between Sentences 5 and 6" is the best answer because Sentence 5 marks the beginning of the description of the real life of the cowboy, while Sentence 6 focuses more on the contemporary existence of people that fit the cowboy image. The clause being inserted refers to the past lives of the cowboys but is not necessarily part of the idealized image in the first paragraph, excluding this location as a possibility.
1 If you’ve watched any environmental news reports in the last few years, it’s likely you’ve stumbled among the idea of fracking. 2 The word is short for “hydraulic fracturing” and involves injecting liquid into rock to create fractures and fractals, there allowing natural gas to be extracted more querulously.3 Proponents say the method facilitates oil drilling and allows countries, like the United States, to cut back on their foreign oil dependence. 4 Amateurs say that fracking, causes significant and sometimes irresponsible environmental damage.
5 Fracking can require sonorous quantities of water, and leach dangerous carcinogenic chemicals into the groundwater. 6 Some people have even inquired minor earthquakes to fracking: as the process thought to spurn tremors.7 Perhaps most worrisome, fracking allows governments to continue depending on fossil fuel rather than exploring renewable energy. 8 These sources could include wind turbines, solar panels, even hot springs and waterwheels.
What transitional word or phrase should begin Sentence 4?
However
Moreover
Furthermore
Likewise
What’s more
Sentence 4 introduces an opposite point of view from Sentence 3, so we need a transitional word that signifies contrast. Note that transitional words or phrases need to be followed by a comma. The sentence should read: "However, amateurs say that fracking, causes significant and sometimes irresponsible environmental damage."
1 All in all, aviation will likely continue to fascinate people for centuries to come. 2 Long before the famous Wright brothers humans were attempting to fly. 3 The ancient Greek myth of Icarus and Daedalus shows the tantalizing allusion of flight. 4 With large kites’ in China may have been the first successful instance of human flight several thousand years ago. 5 Hundreds of years later and despite many hazings; the Montgolfier brothers and other pioneering aviators began experimenting with manned hot-air balloon flights. 6 Therefore, technology has advanced to the point of supersonic and hypersonic flight, but people are still trying to break new barriers and invent new methods of flight.
Which of the following sentences needs an apostrophe added to or deleted from it?
Sentence 4
Sentence 5
Sentence 3
Sentence 2
Sentence 1
Sentence 4 is incorrectly creating a possessive. The "kites" aren’t possessing anything in this sentence, there are just many of them, so there should be no apostrophe.
1 Visitors to Pennsylvania, Indiana, Ohio, or other United States are often astounded when they encounter an Amish person. 2 To someone who is not familiar with this religious community, the lifestyle seems to harp back to a bygone era. 3 In particular the Amish are known for their plain garments, their eschewal of modern technology, their use of horses and buggies, and their exquisite handicrafts, including: wooden furniture, intricate quilts, and fruit pies. 4 Contact with the outside world is limited, and communities are often as insolent now as when they emigrated from Switzerland in the 1700s.
5 The people are governed strictly in their auspicious behavior, dress, and lifestyle by a set of rules known as Ordnung, and most speak both Pennsylvania Dutch and English. 6 Their religious beliefs are most closely related to Mennonites, and they observe many common Christian practices: baptism, marriage, and Sunday church services, for example. 7 Whereas, the Amish also practice rumspringa, a period of adolescent exploration, as well as excommunication and shunning to exclude those who do not conform to the community’s beliefs and practices. 8 What does life look like inside an Amish community? 9 Wherewithal, there seem to be both positive and negative aspects to this emphasis on family ties, manual labor, and religious belief.
Which sentence needs a colon either added to or deleted from it?
Sentence 3
Sentence 1
Sentence 2
Sentence 7
Sentence 8
As a general rule of thumb, a colon is not needed after the word “including.” (You can think of “including” itself as a sort of colon, a means of introducing a list.) Therefore, the colon in Sentence 3 is incorrect.
1 All in all, aviation will likely continue to fascinate people for centuries to come. 2 Long before the famous Wright brothers humans were attempting to fly. 3 The ancient Greek myth of Icarus and Daedalus shows the tantalizing allusion of flight. 4 With large kites’ in China may have been the first successful instance of human flight several thousand years ago. 5 Hundreds of years later and despite many hazings; the Montgolfier brothers and other pioneering aviators began experimenting with manned hot-air balloon flights. 6 Therefore, technology has advanced to the point of supersonic and hypersonic flight, but people are still trying to break new barriers and invent new methods of flight.
Which of the following sentences needs a semicolon added to or deleted from it?
Sentence 5
Sentence 4
Sentence 3
Sentence 2
Sentence 1
Sentence 5 incorrectly contains a semicolon; the appropriate punctuation for separating an independent clause (“the Montgolfier brothers and other pioneering aviators began experimenting with manned hot-air balloon flights”) and a dependent clause (“Hundreds of years later and despite many dangers”) is a comma.
1 As anyone who has tried it can tell you, Filipino food is an exciting intriguing blend of flavors. 2 Due to interaction with various nations and cultures, it’s cuisine is marked by influences from Austronesia, Spain, China, Malaysia, and the United States. 3 Some typical dishes including pancit, longganisa, lumpia, kare-kare, pinakbet, sinigang, and adobo. 4 For example, one could find everything from Spanish paella and Chinese spring rolls (locally called lumpia) if you walked into a Filipino restaurant.
5 Another important compound of Filipino cuisine is street food. 6 These street foods include many fried foods, such as bananas, plantains, dumplings, squid balls, battered quail eggs, and fruit or vegetable spring rolls.7 Taho, a warm street food, is composed of bean curd, a caramel syrup or arnibal, and tapioca pearls.8 Don’t forget dessert! 9 With such a variety of flavors, textures, and cooking styles, there’s certainly to be something for every gourmand.
Which of the following topics would best complement the passage if added in a sentence?
A list of common Filipino beverages
A guide to dining etiquette in the Philippines
A guide to pronouncing the food names listed in the passage
A list of Filipino feast days and festivals
A list of Filipino recipes influenced by American foods
Since the passage’s main goal is to familiarize the reader with a variety of Filipino dishes and meals, adding a sentence about Filipino beverages would round out the discussion nicely. All of the other topics are either too specific or irrelevant to the main focus of the passage.
1 Wedding customs range between families and social classes, but also between countries. 2 Since the dawn of time, human couples have been entering into long-term romantic commitments with each other. 3 In Ethiopia, for example, one of the groom’s friends sprays perfume inside the house of the groom’s future wife; while in Finland, engaged women go door-to-door with pillowcases to accept wedding gifts. 4 Certain celebratory traditions, such as eating special food and reciting some sort of vows or prayers, are so widely practiced today that they seem almost unilateral.
5 Recently, the very definition of marriage has shifted to include same-sex couples, both in popular culture and in certain nations’ and American states’ laws. 6 Dancing is an important part of many marriage ceremonies and celebrations, and festive wedding music can be found across a wide variety of cultures. 7 The presence of family members is also common to weddings in nearly every nation, although fathers do not always “give away” brides; sometimes mothers, grandparents, or even siblings play this role instead.
Where should the following sentence be inserted in the passage? “All in all, wedding traditions can provide not only fascinating insight into a particular culture’s beliefs and practices but also a lovely testament to enduring love.”
After Sentence 7
After Sentence 1
After Sentence 3
After Sentence 5
After Sentence 4
As a rhetorical question and a generally broad sentence, this would be an excellent conclusion for the entire passage. The fact that it begins with “All in all” is another hint that this would be a good conclusion. It belongs after Sentence 7.
\[1\] American architecture has many distinctive styles and signature elements. \[2\] While perhaps newer than its counterparts, Southwestern architecture draws on Spanish and Native American influences that are hundreds or thousands of years old. \[3\] These influences can be seen in the use of native building materials such as adobe and pine timber, both easily found in the Southwest, and in the use of a central plaza or veranda. \[4\] Traditional building elements include walls with rounded corners, exposed timber beams, flat roofs, and a simple, uncluttered aesthetic. \[5\] Some houses are built around a central courtyard; while others open onto a patio flanked by ornate grillwork.
\[6\] Pueblo Revival buildings are dignified by their vigas, which are roof beams that extend beyond the outer edge of walls. \[7\] Recessed windows and doorways with arched tops are also very common in this style of architecture. \[8\] Some famous examples of Pueblo Revival buildings include the New Mexico Museum of Art, the Painted Desert Inn, and various edifices at the University of New Mexico in Santa Fe.
What sentence would best conclude this passage?
While mainly restricted to the Arizona, New Mexico, and California, this movement has made valuable contributions to American architecture as we know it today.
This, however, should not be confused with the Mission Revival Style, which is a different movement altogether.
Although aesthetically pleasing, buildings made in this style are ecological disasters.
Luckily, the style is now seen as archaic, and its many flaws are being replaced by exciting new innovations.
Recently, architects have been wondering if this style could be adapted to Northeastern climates.
The sentence that best wraps up the passage and underscores the importance of the author’s discussion is this one: “While mainly restricted to the Arizona, New Mexico, and California, this movement has made valuable contributions to American architecture as we know it today.” All of the other options introduce brand-new ideas, which is a good strategy for beginning but not ending a passage.
(1) The sport of lacrosse, while perhaps not as widely popular today in the United States as baseball or football, is far older. (2) These games served many important cultural functions. (3) They were used to settle disputes between tribes, as festival events, and to train young men to become warriors and hunters.
(4) Hundreds of men and women from rival tribes or villages would gather to play at once. (5) The playing field was sometimes several miles long. (6) The original game was very different from the organized sport played today. (7) A single game would be played from dawn until sunset, and be followed by dancing and feasting.
(8) Modern, standardized versions of lacrosse started to be played in the 1850s and soon became very popular throughout Canada and the United States. (9) For over a century, it has been one of the most widely played sports in high schools in both nations.
What would be the best sentence to insert between Sentence 1 and Sentence 2?
Numerous Native American tribes, including the Iroquois, Cherokee, and Onondaga have played versions of it for at least 400 years.
The first modern lacrosse league was organized in Montreal in 1856.
The sport has quickly gained popularity in recent years.
However, the game has faced a lot of criticism over the years due to its violent nature.
Consequently, professional lacrosse players are not paid the same salaries as baseball players.
The sentence "Numerous Native American tribes, including the Iroquois, Cherokee, and Onondaga have played versions of it for at least 400 years" creates the best transition between the two other sentences and adds key information which clarifies the passage, introducing where and when the game originated.
1 Whether or not you are superstitious. 2 Fortunetelling has played a major role in many cultures.3 Also known as divination. 4 Western fortunetelling arose from the Romani people and such as reading tea leaves’, gazing into crystal balls, tarot reading, palmistry, and observing the flights, innards, or eating patterns of birds. 5 In William Shakespeare’s famous play “Julius Caesar,” for example, a soothsayer warns the soon to be assassinated Caesar to beware the Ides of March. 6 Western fortunetelling has also been influenced by Eastern divination methods such as the I Ching and to read coffee beans. 7 Unfortunately several major religions prescribe fortunetelling with very degrees of severity. 8 Despite, fortunetelling still thrives in contemporary culture, psychics and Magic-8 balls are just two of many fun ways to attempt to see into the future.
Which of the following topics would best augment the passage if added in a sentence?
Lists of further fortunetelling methods and the cultures from which they derive
A discussion of black cats and other superstitions
A discussion of horseshoes and other lucky charms
A quotation of a religious prohibition against fortunetelling
Lists of religions that do and do not prohibit fortunetelling
Fortunetelling methods and their cultures is the main focus of the passage, so adding further information about this topic would be the best choice.