Identifying Sentences That Contain No Errors

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1

Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.

Missing home, he tried to grow a palm tree sapling, but it could not survive Maine’s harsh winters. No error

No error

Missing home

tried to grow

it

Maine's harsh winters

Explanation

This sentence is correct as written.

2

Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.

Stooping down to tie her shoe, Margaret saw a tiny note scribbled onto the wall only a few inches above the floor. No error

No error

Stooping down

Stooping down

saw

saw

scribbled

scribbled

above the floor

above the floor

Explanation

This sentence is correct as written. “Stooping down” uses a conventional combination of verb and preposition, “saw” is in the correct tense, “scribbled” is also in the correct tense, and “above the floor” is an appropriate prepositional phrase.

3

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English. One of the answer choices reproduces the underlined portion as it is written in the sentence.

With excitement sparkling behind the tears in her eyes, Mary announced that her poodle, the pride and joy of her life, had just won the regional dog show.

No error

behind

eyes, Mary

announced

had just won

Explanation

This sentence is correct as written. “Behind” is the appropriate use of a preposition, the comma between “eyes” and “Mary” is grammatical, “announced” is a verb in the correct tense, and “had just won” is an appropriate combination of verb and adverb.

4

Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.

I would rather run an entire marathon than spend one more day sitting at that table nibbling crumpets. No error

No error

entire

than spend one more day

that

nibbling

Explanation

This sentence is correct as written. “Entire” is an adjective that modifies a noun, “than spend one more day” is a logical comparison, “that” is a demonstrative pronoun used correctly, and “nibbling” is a present progressive verb that describes a concurrent action.

5

Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.

Henry was a fiercely stubborn child; he would carry out incredibly successful hunger strikes if he was not served macaroni and cheese for dinner. No error

No error

child; he

incredibly successful

was

for dinner

Explanation

This sentence is correct as written. The semi-colon between “child” and “he” is grammatical, “incredibly successful” uses adverbs and adjectives to modify the appropriate words, “was” is in the correct tense, and “for dinner” is an acceptable prepositional phrase.

6

Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no errors at all.

Georgina thought that she and Helen had both had a good time, but she was worried in her heart that the other woman despised her. No error

No error

thought

had both had

but

despised

Explanation

There are no errors in this sentence. Although it may look at a glance like an ambiguous pronoun reference, Georgina is clearly the subject of the sentence (indicated by the clear subject-verb pairing "Georgina thought"), so the "she" in the second clause continues to refer to her rather than to Helen.

7

Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.

While some people find that juggling muliple jobs exhausts them, others find it very energizing. No error

No error

While

others

find

exhausts

Explanation

There is no error in this sentence.

8

Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.

Spinningaround to face the intruder, Jack stifled a cry of recognition. No error

No error

Spinning

to face

stifled

a cry of recognition

Explanation

This sentence is correct as written! "Spinning", "to face," and "stifled" are all the correct forms of the verbs, and "a cry of recognition" is a well-formed noun phrase.

9

Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.

A group of leading experts in entomology, the study of insects, is coming to speak to my biology class about career opportunities in that exciting field. No error

No error

in

is

about

in that

Explanation

Make sure that you identify the proper subject in this sentence. Many students are fooled by collective singulars: "a group of experts," "a team of players," "a school of fish," "a murder of crows," and so forth. In all of these cases, even though we are talking about many individual things, we are conceiving of them as single entities. As you may have noticed, the little word "of" will frequently alert you to the presence of a collective singluar in this kind of construction. This type of sentence can also confuse the eye, as there are two plural nouns ("experts" and "insects") between the subject ("group") and the main verb ("is").

10

Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.

After eating turkey, mashed potatoes, green bean casserole, and dinner rolls at my family's Thanksgiving dinner, I am always surprised that I can find room to have pumpkin pie for dessert.

No error

After eating

turkey, mashed potatoes, green bean casserole, and dinner rolls

at my family's Thanksgiving dinner,

that I can find room to have pumpkin pie for dessert

Explanation

This sentence is grammatically correct and needs no stylistic changes made to it.

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