Correcting Verb Mood Errors

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1

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English. One of the answer choices repreoduces the underlined portion as it is written in the sentence.

If I was you, I wouldn't treat my brothers so poorly; they grow up faster than you think.

If I were you

If I is you

If I are you

If I was you

If I wasn't you

Explanation

The subjunctive mood is used when a sentence is intended to express doubt or possibility, rather than a hard truth. In the sentence above, because the word "if" begins the sentence, we know that the subjunctive should be used. The correct subjunctive construction of the underlined portion above is "If I were you."

2

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English. One of the answer choices reproduces the underlined portion as it is written in the sentence.

The general wished that his aid was more competent, but it was simply not the case.

The general wished that his aid were more competent

The general wished that his aids was more competent

The general wished that his aide was more competent

The general wishes that his aid was more competent

The general wished that his aid was more competent

Explanation

Subjunctive mood is used when a sentence is intended to express doubt or possibility, rather than hard truth. In the sentence above, because of the word "wished" in the sentence, we know that subjunctive should be used. The underlined portion should read, "The general wished that his aid were more competent"

3

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English. One of the answer choices reproduces the underlined portion as it is written in the sentence.

If he was more competent as a lawyer, he would make more money.

If he were more competent as a lawyer,

If he was more competent as a lawyer,

If he was competenter as a lawyer,

If he was competent as a lawyer,

If he was more competent as a lawyer;

Explanation

Subjunctive mood is used when a sentence is intended to express doubt or possibility, rather than hard truth. In the sentence above, because of the word "if" in the sentence, we know that subjunctive should be used. The underlined portion should read, "If he were more competent as a lawyer,"

4

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English. One of the answer choices repreoduces the underlined portion as it is written in the sentence.

The General wished that his subordinate was more loyal, but it was not the case.

subordinate were more loyal

subordinate was more loyal

subordinate was most loyal

subordinate was loyaler

subordinate was loyalest

Explanation

The subjunctive mood is used when a sentence is intended to express doubt or possibility, rather than a hard truth. In the sentence above, because the word "wished" is in the sentence, we know that the subjunctive should be used. The correct subjunctive construction of the underlined portion above is "subordinate were more loyal."

5

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English. One of the answer choices repreoduces the underlined portion as it is written in the sentence.

The President requires that everyone is respectful during visits to the White House.

everyone be respectful

everyone are respectful

everyone is respectful

everyone was respectful

everyone were respectful

Explanation

The subjunctive mood is used when a sentence is intended to express doubt or possibility, rather than hard truth. In the sentence above, because the word "requires" precedes the subordinate clause, thus making this a requirement or request for possible future behavior, as opposed to an expression of actual behavior that is occuring. The correct subjunctive construction of the underlined portion above is "everyone be respectful."

6

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English. One of the answer choices reproduces the underlined portion as it is written in the sentence.

In the middle of the drought, she looked out the window and thought, “Even if I were to lavish all my attention on the plants in the garden, they would still be killed by this heat.”

were to

am to

was to

will

do

Explanation

This sentence is correct as it is. Here, the statement in quotation marks is a counterfactual statement. This means that it talks about something that isn't actually the case in reality. The narrator is thinking about what might happen if she lavished care on her plants, but in reality, she is not lavishing care on her plants. Counterfactual statements use the verbs in the subjunctive. “Were” is the subjunctive form of the English verb “to be” (or “am,” in this sentence).

7

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English. One of the answer choices repreoduces the underlined portion as it is written in the sentence.

The doctor insists that I be still during my examination.

I be still

I were still

I am still

I was still

I will be still

Explanation

The subjunctive mood is used when a sentence is intended to express doubt or possibility, rather than a hard truth. In the sentence above, because the word "insists" precedes the subordinate clause in the second part of the sentence, we know that the subjunctive should be used. The correct subjunctive construction of the underlined portion above is "I be still." The sentence is correct as written.

8

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a setence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English. One of the answer choices reproduces the underlined portion as it is written in the sentence.

If I were President for a day, I would try to solve the gridlock in Congress.

If I were President for a day

If I was President for a day

Be I were President for a day

If I be President for a day

If I were President on a day

Explanation

The subjunctive verb mood is used when a sentence is intended to express doubt or possibility, rather than a hard truth. In the sentence above, because the word "if" begins the sentence, we know that subjunctive should be used. The sentence is correct as it is written.

9

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English. One of the answer choices reproduces the underlined portion as it is written in the sentence.

If humans could fly, they will need gigantic wings and huge chest muscles to control those wings.

would need

may need

needed

were needing

will need

Explanation

This sentence expresses a counterfactual statement, so it needs verbs in the subjunctive mood. “Could” can be thought of as a past subjunctive form of the verb “can,” so there is no problem with the first part of the sentence; however, the verb in the second part of the sentence, “will need,” is in the indicative mood, not the subjunctive. To correct this, we have to change “will need” to its past subjunctive form, “would need.”

10

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English. One of the answer choices reproduces the underlined portion as it is written in the sentence.

According to the email that my boss sent, it is absolutely necessary that we all are on time to work.

be

are

were

will be

being

Explanation

In English, the subjunctive mood of verbs is often used after certain expressions like “it is necessary that” or “it is important that.” The subjunctive is used to talk about wishes, desires, or thoughts about things that aren't actually the case. In this sentence, the expression “it is necessary that” introduces a phrase that must use the subjunctive, because it expresses something that the boss desires. So, we have to change the verb “are,” which is in the indicative mood, to its subjunctive form, “be.”

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