SAT Writing › Correcting Punctuation Errors: Commas for Introductory or Interrupting Phrases
Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English.
Under the teacher's guidance the students' reading ability improved.
Under the teacher's guidance, the students' reading ability improved.
Under the teacher's guidance the students' reading ability improved.
Under the teacher's guidance the students reading ability improved.
Under the teacher's guidance the students' reading ability improved.
Under the teacher's guidance the students' reading ability improving.
"Under the teacher's guidance" is an introductory phrase, one that conditions the action of the sentence, but is apart from its main structure. Any introductory phrase needs to be set apart fom the main body of the sentence by a comma. The only answer choice that correctly uses a comma to separate the phrase is "Under the teacher's guidance, the students' reading ability improved."
Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English. One of the answer choices reproduces the underlined portion as it is written in the sentence.
Thor the Norse god of thunder is famous for his enormous appetite and incredible capacity to wage war.
Thor, the Norse god of thunder, is
Thor the norse god of thunder is,
Thor the Norse god of thunder is
Thor the Norse God of Thunder is
Thor the Norse god of thunder are
Introductory or interrupting phrases -phrases that are subordinate and add information to a sentence, but are not necessary to the sentence being complete- must be separated from the rest of the sentence by commas. In the sentence above "Thor the norse god of thunder is" should read "Thor, the norse god of thunder, is."
Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English. One of the answer choices reproduces the underlined portion as it is written in the sentence.
Whenever I'm exhausted there is no better way for me to get some sleep than to rest in my bed.
Whenever I'm exhausted, there is no better way for me to get some sleep than to rest in my bed.
Whenever I'm exhausted there is no better way for me to get some sleep than to rest in my bed.
Whenever, I'm exhausted there is no better way for me to get some sleep than to rest in my bed.
Whenever I'm, exhausted there is no better way for me to get some sleep than to rest in my bed.
Whenever I'm exhausted there are no better way for me to get some sleep than to rest in my bed.
Introductory are subordinate and add information to a sentence, but are not necessary to the sentence being grammatically complete, must be separated from the rest of the sentence by commas. "Whenever I'm exhausted," establishes the contextual condition for the situation described in the main clause, and acts as an introductory clause. Thus, a comma must be added after "exhausted."
The athlete, a respected team leader was always the first person in the locker room before a game.
The athlete, a respected team leader, was
The athlete, a respected team leader was
The athlete a respected team leader was
The athlete, a respected team leader having been
The athlete, the respected team leader was
The phrase "a respected team leader" is what is known as an interrupting phrase, or a phrase that provides information but is unnecessary for the structure of the sentence. All interrupting phrases must be set apart from the rest of the sentence by commas; therefore, the correct answer is "The athlete, a respected team leader, was."
More than anyone else he had encountered the preacher was convinced of the rightness of his cause.
More than anyone else he had encountered, the preacher was convinced of the rightness of his cause.
More than anyone else he had encountered the preacher was convinced of the rightness of his cause.
More than anyone else he encountered the preacher was convinced of the rightness of his cause.
More than anyone else, he had encountered the preacher was convinced of the rightness of his cause.
More than anyone else he had encountered the preacher was convinced, of the rightness of his cause.
The phrase "More than anyone else he had encountered" is an introductory clause, a clause that conditions the information provided in the main body of the sentence. All such clauses need to be set off from the rest of the sentence by a comma, making "More than anyone else he had encountered, the preacher was convinced of the rightness of his cause."
Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English. One of the answer choices reproduces the underlined portion as it is written in the sentence.
Larry, my favorite comedian is coming to town next week to perform a set!
Larry, my favorite comedian, is coming to town next week to perform a set!
Larry, my favorite comedian is coming to town next week to perform a set!
Larry my favorite comedian is coming to town next week to perform a set!
Larry; my favorite comedian, is coming to town next week to perform a set!
Larry, my favorite comedian is coming to town next week to perform a set.
Interrupting phrases are so-called because they interrupt clauses in order to provide information, context (they can also rename a subject, in which case they are sometimes called appositives). In the example sentence, the subject is first named with the proper noun "Larry," then renamed with the label "my favorite comedian." Because this renaming is not essential to the fundamental grammatical structure of the clause in which it appears, it must be separated using commas at the beginning and end of the phrase.
Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English. One of the answer choices reproduces the underlined portion as it is written in the sentence.
Under the old regime the action was perfectly legal and undertaken quite often.
Under the old regime, the action was
Under the old regime, the action was
Under the old regime the action was
Under the old regime the action was
Under the old regime the action had been
Under the old regime the action had been
Under, the old regime the action was
Under, the old regime the action was
Under, the old regime, the action was
Under, the old regime, the action was
The phrase "Under the old regime" is what is called a conditional phrase, as it gives the conditions which make the main body of the sentence possible. Such phrases always need to be set off from the main part of the sentence by a comma; therefore, "Under the old regime, the action was," is the correct answer choice.
Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English. One of the answer choices reproduces the underlined portion as it is written in the sentence.
The young recruit clearly the top of his class had great promise.
The young recruit, clearly the top of his class, had great promise.
The young recruit clearly the top of his class had great promise.
The young recruit, clearly the top of his class had great promise.
The young recruit clearly the top of his class, had great promise.
The young recruit clearly, the top of his class, had great promise.
Interrupting phrases add information to a sentence, but are not necessary to the sentence being grammatically complete, and such clauses must be separated from the rest of the sentence with a comma on either end. Generally, such phrases provide context, information, or act as appositives (renaming the subject noun).
The best way to correct the example sentence is, "The young recruit, clearly the top of his class, had great promise."
Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English.
The entire staff, long time veterans of the company was surprised by their CEO's sudden resignation.
The entire staff, long time veterans of the company, was surprised by their CEO's sudden resignation.
The entire staff, long time veterans of the company was surprised by their CEO's sudden resignation.
The entire staff long time veterans of the company was surprised by their CEO's sudden resignation.
The entire staff, long time veterans of the company were surprised by their CEO's sudden resignation.
The entire staff, long time veterans of the company, were surprised by their CEO's sudden resignation.
The phrase "long time veterans of the company" is an interrupting phrase, one that adds information to the sentence but remains outside of its main structure. An interrupting phrase must be set apart from the rest of the sentence by commas. The only answer choice that correctly sets apart the phrase is "The entire staff, long time veterans of the company, was surprised by their CEO's sudden resignation.
Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English. One of the answer choices reproduces the underlined portion as it is written in the sentence.
While I can empathize with the plight of your lizard I find it hard to weep for a reptile.
While I can empathize with the plight of your lizard, I find
While I can empathize with the plight of your lizard: I find
While I can empathize with the plight of your lizard; I find
While I can empathize with the plight of your lizard I find
While I can empathize with the plight of your lizard, I find,
Introductory or interrupting phrases, i.e. phrases that are subordinate and add information to a sentence, but are not necessary to the grammatical completeness of the sentence, must be separated from the rest of the sentence by commas. The best way to correct the underlined portion of the sentence above is: "While I can empathize with the plight of your lizard, I find..."