Correcting Preposition Errors

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1

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English.

The young woman had severed all ties with her family after they had shown strong disapproval for her choice to move across the country.

they had shown strong disapproval of her choice

they had shown strong disapproval for her choice

they have shown strong disapproval for her choice

they had shown strong disapproval for her choices

them had shown strong disapproval for her choice

Explanation

The use of the preposition "for" in this sentence is incorrect, as it is not the common preposition matched with disapproval. The commonly used word is "of," which more properly conveys the connection to disapproval. The only answer choice which makes this change is "they had shown strong disapproval of her choice."

2

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English. One of the answer choices reproduces the underlined portion as it is written in the sentence.

The girls were always challenging their father's rules for every opportunity.

their father's rules at every opportunity.

their father's rules for every opportunity.

their father's rules in every opportunity.

their father's rules on every opportunity.

their father's rules onto every opportunity.

Explanation

The use of the preposition "for" in the sentence is odd, and does not properly reflect what the girls are doing. The preposition should be changed to indicate that they challenged during certain moments. The preposition that best shows this is "at," making the correct answer choice "their father's rules at every opportunity."

3

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English.

Her inquiry about the petroleum cartels in Brazil made her a target of the cartel's harassment.

Her inquiry into the petroleum cartels of Brazil

Her inquiry about the petroleum cartels of Brazil

Her investigation about the petroleum cartels into Brazil

Her inquiry into the petroleum cartels into Brazil

Her inquiry on top of the petroleum cartels all about Brazil

Explanation

The most idiomatic use of prepositions is "Her inquiry into the petroleum cartels of Brazil." The phrase "inquiry about" is unidiomatic. And many of the adjustments to the preposition preceding Brazil are seemingly trivial. It is important in this case to examine each choice carefully and consider both prepositions and the particular context of their use.

4

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English. One of the answer choices repeats the underlined portion as it is written.

Even though we started on the same day, at this point Robert is junior than me in the company.

at this point Robert is junior to me in the company.

at this point Robert is junior underneath me in the company.

at this point Robert is equally as junior than me in the company.

at this point Robert is junior from me in the company.

at this point Robert is junior against me in the company.

Explanation

Comparative prepositions (like "senior" or "junior") are followed by "to", not than, from, or against. The correct version of the sentence reads, "Even though we started on the same day, at this point Robert is junior to me in the company."

5

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English.

She compared the merger with a bloodless coup.

She compared the merger to a bloodless coup.

She compared a bloodless coup with the merger.

She compared to the merger a bloodless coup.

She compared the merger against a bloodless coup.

She compared the against the merger a bloodless coup.

Explanation

The example sentence includes a preposition error. Prepositions are used to describe relationships of time, space, or logic between parts of a sentence. When a comparison is being made between two things, one thing (in this case the merger) is compared TO another thing (in this case a bloodless coup). "With" is used to describe combinations ("Tommy went to school with Jane), and compliance ("they complied with regulations"). The correct version of this sentence reads, "She compared the merger to a bloodless coup."

6

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English.

Sandra felt she had no one to talk to.

Sandra felt she could not talk to anyone.

Sandra felt she had no one to talk to.

Sandra felt she had no one to talk.

Sandra felt she was talking to nobody.

Sandra felt she wasn't speaking to anyone.

Explanation

This sentence contains a dangling preposition. Prepositions should never end a sentence in English, so the sentence must be reworked in order to remove the mistake. Simply omitting the "to" at the end is not sufficient, however, since the sentence will not make sense once that is done. The correct choice is, "Sandra felt she could not talk to anyone" because it is the closest to the meaning of the original sentence and fixes the error.

7

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English.

The COO strove to make her habits quite different than those of her predecessor, a change that did not go underappreciated by her subordinates.

The COO strove to make her habits quite different than those of her predecessor, a change that did not go underappreciated by her subordinates.

The COO strove to make her habits quite different than that of her predecessor, a change that did not go underappreciated by her subordinates.

The COO strove to make her habits quite different than those of her predecessor; a change that did not go underappreciated by her subordinates.

The COO strove to make her habits quite different to those of her predecessor, a change that did not go underappreciated by her subordinates.

The COO strove to make her habits quite different than her predecessor, a change that did not go underappreciated by her subordinates.

Explanation

The correct pairing is "different from;" "than" is only used with comparative adjectives such as "larger than" or "smarter than." "Different from those" is correct - the demonstrative "those" must match, in number, what it refers to - in this case, "habits."

8

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English.

The rumors about the celebrity were the strangest things he ever heard of.

He heard the strangest rumors about the celebrity.

The rumors about the celebrity were the strangest things he ever heard of.

The rumors about the celebrity were the strangest things ever.

He heard the strangest things in rumors about the celebrity.

The rumors about the celebrity were the strangest things he ever heard.

Explanation

It is incorrect to have a preposition dangling at the end of a sentence. In fact, the preposition "of" is unnecessary in this sentence. "He heard the strangest rumors about the celebrity" is the best answer because it conveys the same idea in the most clear and concise manner.

9

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English.

Though Harun has broken many records, he has not yet broken the record he wants to.

Though Harun has broken many records, he has not yet broken the record he wants to break.

Though Harun has broken many records, he has not yet broken the record he wants to.

Though Harun has broken many records, he has not broken the record he wants to yet.

Though Harun has broken many records, he has yet to break the record he wants to.

Though Harun broke many records, he has yet to break the record he wants yet.

Explanation

This sentence contains a dangling preposition. You should never end a sentence with a preposition in standard English. Additionally, "yet" cannot come at the end of the sentence either, since it is a conjunction. The only choice that fixes this issue is, "Though Harun has broken many records, he has not yet broken the record he wants to break."

10

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English.

Angelo had many questions about his new position, but he did not know who he should talk to.

about his new position, but he did not know to whom he should talk.

about his new position, but he did not know who he should talk to.

about his new position but he did not know who he should talk to.

about his new position, but he was unsure who should be spoken to about the problems.

about his new position; but he did not know who he should talk to.

Explanation

This sentence contains a dangling preposition. A preposition should never end a sentence in English. "about his new position, but he did not know to whom he should talk" is the correct choice, as it fixes this issue. The other choices contain punctuation errors (Note: a comma should be used before "but" because it is joining two independent clauses) or change the action to passive voice unnecessarily.

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