ADULT LITERACY INTERMEDIATE • LANGUAGE

Correcting Sentence Errors — I can correct common run-ons, fragments, and tense shifts in my writing at my level.

Master the three most common sentence errors that make writing harder to read and understand.

Why Sentence Errors Matter

Every day, people write emails, job applications, reports, and school assignments. When a sentence is missing a piece or runs together without a break, readers can get confused—they have to stop and re-read to figure out what you meant. Learning to spot and fix these problems makes your writing clearer and more professional. The three most common sentence errors are run-on sentences, sentence fragments, and tense shifts. This lesson will help you recognize and fix all three.

Step 1
Check for a Complete Sentence
A complete sentence needs two things: a subject (who or what the sentence is about) and a verb (the action or state). If either is missing, the sentence is a fragment.
Step 2
Check for Too Many Sentences Stuck Together
If two complete sentences are joined without the right punctuation or connecting word, you have a run-on. Readers need a clear signal that one idea ends and another begins.
Step 3
Check That Verb Tenses Match
Verb tense tells the reader when something happens—in the past, present, or future. If your tenses jump around without a reason, readers lose track of the time order of events.
Step 4
Revise and Read Aloud
After making fixes, read your writing out loud. Your ear will often catch errors that your eyes miss. If a sentence sounds like it needs a breath in the middle, it may need a period or a connecting word.

Run-ons, fragments, and tense shifts are among the most common writing errors people make—not just beginners, but experienced writers too. A large study of student writing found that run-ons and comma splices ranked among the top five errors in thousands of papers. The good news is that once you know what to look for, these errors are very fixable. This lesson gives you a clear, step-by-step way to find and correct them.

Core Principles & Definitions

Before you can fix sentence errors, you need to know what makes a sentence correct. A complete sentence has a subject (who or what the sentence is about), a verb (the action or state), and it expresses a complete thought. When a sentence is missing one of these parts—or when two complete sentences are stuck together without the right punctuation—you get a sentence error. The three types below cover most of the sentence-level problems you will see in everyday writing.

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Run-On Sentence

Two or more complete sentences joined without the right punctuation or a connecting word. A comma splice is a type of run-on where only a comma separates two complete sentences, but a comma alone is not strong enough to do that job.
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Sentence Fragment

A group of words that looks like a sentence but is missing something—a subject, a verb, or a complete thought. For example, a group of words that starts with "because" or "although" and has nothing else attached to it is a fragment.
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Tense Shift

An unexpected jump from one verb tense to another within a sentence or passage. For example, switching from past tense to present tense without a clear reason confuses the reader about when things happened.
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Complete vs. Incomplete Sentence

A complete sentence can stand on its own and makes sense by itself. An incomplete sentence (a fragment) depends on something else to make sense. Knowing the difference is the key to spotting all three error types.
KEY TAKEAWAY
Think of a sentence like a sandwich: it needs two slices of bread (a subject and a verb) to hold everything together, one complete filling (one complete thought, or two thoughts correctly joined), and consistent ingredients (verbs that stay in the same time frame). A fragment is a sandwich with a slice of bread missing. A run-on is two sandwiches pressed together without a wrapper. A tense shift is a sandwich that mixes yesterday's leftovers with today's fresh ingredients—confusing!

Visual Explanation — Anatomy of a Sentence

This chart walks through a set of yes/no questions to find sentence errors. Start at the top and follow the arrows. Each red warning box names the error and tells you how to fix it.

The chart above gives you three questions to ask about any sentence. First, does the group of words have both a subject and a verb? If one is missing, it is a fragment. Second, if the sentence contains more than one complete thought, are those thoughts joined by a period, semicolon, or a comma plus a joining word? If not, you have a run-on or comma splice. Third, do the verbs stay in the same tense unless there is a real reason to change? If they jump around, you have a tense shift. Using these three questions turns error-checking into a simple, step-by-step habit.

How Each Error Works — Examples and Fixes

Run-On Sentences & Comma Splices

A fused sentence happens when two complete sentences are placed next to each other with nothing between them: The experiment failed the researchers revised their hypothesis. A comma splice is similar, but the writer puts a comma between them—which is not enough: The experiment failed, the researchers revised their hypothesis. Both errors leave the reader unsure where one idea ends and the next begins. There are four easy ways to fix them: (1) add a period and start a new sentence; (2) add a semicolon; (3) add a comma followed by a joining word (for, and, nor, but, or, yet, so—known as FANBOYS); or (4) use a connecting word like because, although, or when to show how the ideas are related.

Sentence Fragments

Fragments come in a few common forms. A fragment can start with a word like because, although, or when but have nothing else to complete the thought: Because the funding was cut. This leaves the reader waiting—because what? A fragment can also be missing a verb: Running through the data set for hours. (Who was running? There is no subject doing a real action here.) A fragment can also be missing a subject: And then decided to leave. To fix a fragment, you can attach it to a nearby sentence, add the missing subject or verb, or remove the opening connecting word.

Tense Shifts

Verb tense tells your reader when something happens. A tense shift becomes an error when the tense changes for no clear reason. Consider: The author argues that social media was harmful. The verb argues is present tense, but was is past tense. Since the author's argument is still in print and still being discussed, both verbs should be present tense: The author argues that social media is harmful. Sometimes, however, switching tenses is correct—when events actually happen at different times: The bridge collapsed in 1940, and engineers now study the failure to improve modern designs. Here the switch from past (collapsed) to present (study) makes sense because the two actions really do happen at different times.

Common Trap: Transition Words
Words like however, therefore, moreover, and consequently are transition words, not joining words like "and" or "but." You cannot use them after a comma to connect two complete sentences. This creates a comma splice: The data was inconclusive, however the team published anyway. Fix it by using a semicolon before the transition word or starting a new sentence: The data was inconclusive; however, the team published anyway.

Error Classification & Repair Strategies

Three columns show the most common examples of each error and how to fix them. Run-ons have four possible fixes. Tense shifts require you to decide whether the change in time is real—if it is, the shift is correct.
Quick checks and fixes for the five most common sentence errors.
Error TypeQuick CheckHow to Fix It
Fused sentenceCan you find two complete sentences with nothing between them?Period; semicolon; comma + FANBOYS; connecting word
Comma spliceIs a comma the only thing separating two complete sentences?Replace comma with period or semicolon; add a joining word after the comma
Fragment (incomplete thought)Does it start with a word like because, although, or when and have nothing attached?Attach to the sentence before or after; remove the opening connecting word
Fragment (missing subject or verb)Is there a subject? Is there a main action verb? If either is missing, it is a fragment.Add the missing subject or verb; attach to a nearby sentence
Tense shift (unneeded)Underline every verb. Does the tense change without a real change in time?Change the odd verb(s) to match the tense used throughout the rest of the passage

Worked Example — Revising a Flawed Paragraph

Below is a short paragraph with several sentence errors. We will walk through finding and fixing each one, step by step, using the questions from Section 3.

📝 Original (Flawed) Paragraph
Climate change affects agriculture in developing nations, however, small-scale farmers lack resources to adapt. Because rainfall patterns have become unpredictable. Crops that once thrived now fail harvests decline every year. In 2020, the UN published a report that urges governments to invest more, the report warned that food insecurity will worsen.
Step-by-Step Revision
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Step 1 — Find Error 1 (Comma Splice with a Transition Word)The first sentence reads: Climate change affects agriculture in developing nations, however, small-scale farmers lack resources to adapt. The word however is a transition word, not a joining word like "and" or "but." Using a comma before it creates a comma splice—two complete sentences separated by only a comma. Replace the comma before however with a semicolon.
Climate change affects agriculture in developing nations; however, small-scale farmers lack resources to adapt.
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Step 2 — Find Error 2 (Fragment)The next sentence is: Because rainfall patterns have become unpredictable. This starts with "because," which means it is an incomplete thought—it makes the reader ask "because what happened?" It has a subject (rainfall patterns) and a verb (have become) but does not finish the thought on its own. Attach it to the sentence before it.
…small-scale farmers lack resources to adapt because rainfall patterns have become unpredictable.
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Step 3 — Find Error 3 (Run-On / Fused Sentence)The next sentence reads: Crops that once thrived now fail harvests decline every year. Two complete sentences—Crops that once thrived now fail and harvests decline every year—are stuck together with no punctuation at all. Add a semicolon or use a comma plus a joining word.
Crops that once thrived now fail, and harvests decline every year.
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Step 4 — Find Error 4 (Comma Splice + Tense Shift)The final sentence reads: In 2020, the UN published a report that urges governments to invest more, the report warned that food insecurity will worsen. There are two problems here: (a) a comma splice joins two complete sentences with only a comma, and (b) the verb urges is present tense while the rest of the sentence is past tense (published, warned). Since the paragraph is telling about past events, change urges to urged and fix the comma splice with a period.
In 2020, the UN published a report that urged governments to invest more. The report warned that food insecurity would worsen.
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Step 5 — Put Together the Revised ParagraphPut all the corrections together and read the paragraph aloud to make sure every sentence sounds complete and clear.
Climate change affects agriculture in developing nations; however, small-scale farmers lack resources to adapt because rainfall patterns have become unpredictable. Crops that once thrived now fail, and harvests decline every year. In 2020, the UN published a report that urged governments to invest more. The report warned that food insecurity would worsen.

Strengths, Limitations & Common Pitfalls

Knowing how to correct run-ons, fragments, and tense shifts will make your writing much cleaner. But it also helps to know when the rules can be bent—and what traps to watch out for.

Benefits and cautions when applying sentence-error correction rules.
StrengthLimitation / Pitfall
Fixing run-ons makes it clear where one idea ends and another begins, so readers follow your writing more easily.If you break every sentence into very short pieces, your writing can feel choppy and hard to read. Some ideas belong together.
Fixing fragments ensures every sentence says something complete, which makes your writing sound more professional.Sometimes writers use a short fragment on purpose for effect (e.g., 'Absolutely not.'). In creative writing, this can work well—but in school or work writing, it is usually best to avoid fragments.
Keeping verb tenses consistent helps readers follow the time order of events without getting confused.Some tense changes are needed and correct—for example, when events really do happen at different times. Not every tense change is an error.
Using a checklist of questions gives you a reliable way to edit your own writing, even under time pressure.Fixing only grammar without thinking about your reader or purpose can produce writing that is technically correct but still hard to understand.
KEY TAKEAWAY
Grammar rules are tools, not laws. A carpenter learns the right way to use a hammer before deciding when to try something different. In the same way, you need to understand the rules for complete, clear sentences before you choose—on purpose—to break them for a specific effect. The goal of this lesson is to make every choice in your writing a decision, not an accident.

Connection to Stronger Writing & Revision

The skills you learned in this lesson are the building blocks of stronger writing overall. Once you can spot and fix sentence errors, you are ready to work on bigger skills: combining short sentences (joining two related sentences into one more interesting sentence), parallel structure (making items in a list sound balanced and even), and paragraph flow (using transitions and clear topic sentences to guide the reader through your ideas from one paragraph to the next).

How fixing sentence errors connects to stronger writing skills.
This Lesson (Sentence Errors)Next-Level Writing Skills
Fix run-ons by separating or correctly joining sentencesCombining sentences: join related ideas using connecting words and phrases to add variety and show how ideas relate
Fix fragments by adding missing partsPurposeful short sentences: use brief sentences for emphasis or effect in the right kind of writing
Fix tense shifts by keeping verb tenses consistentAdvanced verb use: learn to use different verb forms to show when things happened, how long they lasted, or whether they are certain or uncertain
Use a checklist to review individual sentencesBig-picture revision: look at whether your whole piece is organized well, whether your paragraphs connect, and whether your ideas are clear to your reader

Writing teachers and researchers agree that fixing sentence errors is important—but it is just one part of good writing. After you fix the errors, you can step back and ask bigger questions: Do my sentences work together to build a clear point? Does each paragraph stay on topic? Does my writing say what I mean in a way my reader will understand? Fixing errors in this lesson frees up your attention so you can focus on those bigger questions as you keep growing as a writer.

Practice Problems

PROBLEM 1CONCEPTUAL
In your own words, what is the difference between a comma splice and a fused sentence? Why does knowing the difference help you fix them?
PROBLEM 2BASIC
Find the error in the sentence below and write a corrected version: The study was well-designed, its conclusions were not supported by the data.
PROBLEM 3INTERMEDIATE
The passage below has a fragment and a tense shift. Find both errors and rewrite the passage correctly: The committee reviewed the proposal for two hours. Although several members raised objections. The chair then calls for a vote, and the measure passed unanimously.
PROBLEM 4APPLIED
You are editing a cover letter for a job application. Rewrite the paragraph below so it has no run-ons, fragments, or tense shifts: I have three years of experience in data analysis I am proficient in Python and SQL. Having completed a certification in machine learning last spring. In my previous role, I develop dashboards that improved reporting efficiency by 40%, my manager praised the results.
PROBLEM 5CRITICAL THINKING
Read the passage below from a published essay: She walked into the room. Silence. The kind of silence that presses against your eardrums and makes you count your own heartbeats. The word 'Silence' is a fragment, and 'The kind of silence…' could be seen as one too. Should these fragments be corrected? When is it okay—or even better—to use a fragment on purpose? Use at least two ideas from this lesson to support your answer.

Lesson Summary

This lesson covered the three most common sentence errors in everyday writing. A run-on sentence (including fused sentences and comma splices) happens when two complete sentences are joined without the right punctuation or connecting word. The four fixes are a period, a semicolon, a comma plus a FANBOYS joining word, or a connecting word that shows how the ideas relate. A sentence fragment is missing a subject, a verb, or a complete thought; the fix is to add the missing piece or attach the fragment to a nearby sentence. An unneeded tense shift happens when the verb tense changes for no real reason; the fix is to change the odd verb to match the tense used in the rest of the passage.

The three-question checklist from Section 3 gives you a simple, repeatable way to check your sentences: Does it have a subject and a verb? Are complete sentences joined correctly? Do the verb tenses stay consistent? Using these questions as a habit will improve your editing. Once you have mastered sentence errors, you will be ready to work on bigger skills like combining sentences, parallel structure, and paragraph flow. Remember: the goal is not to follow rules without thinking, but to make every sentence choice a decision, not an accident.

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