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Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English.
Any obstacle; however, challenging must be overcome by your conviction.
Any obstacle, however challenging, must
Any obstacle, however, challenging must
Any obstacle; however, challenging must
Any obstacle—however challenging must
Any obstacle however challenging must
Explanation
Using the word "however" to join two independent clauses requires the use of a semicolon and a comma. In this case, "however" is not functioning as a conjunctive adverb. It is simply an adverb modifying the word "challenging." Because the modifier "however challenging" interrupts the independent clause, it is best to set it between commas.
Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English.
Of the eight colleges in the League, Bale considers its athletic programs to be the better.
best.
better
more competitive.
better option for student athletes.
greater.
Explanation
Since there are eight schools in the Ivy League, the superlative comparison "best" is necessary in this sentence. "Best" would only be correct if Bale were being compared to one other school.
Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English.
Mathew began reading many books about investing he wanted to become better at investing than Warren Buffet.
many books about investing; he wanted to become better
many books about investing he wanted to become better
many books about investing, he wanted to become better
many books about investing, he wanted to, become better
many books about investing; he wanted to, become better
Explanation
This sentence does not contain the correct punctuation where it is necessary. The sentence joins two related independent clauses together without the use of a coordinate conjunction; therefore, a semicolon is necessary between the words "investing" and "he." The correct choice is, "many books about investing; he wanted to become better."
While global temperatures have risen sharply over the last century, they have only recently eclipsed the Medieval period, during which scientists theorize that a series of volcanic eruptions sent the earth into a period of historic warmth.
they have only recently eclipsed the Medieval period, during which scientists theorize that a
they have only recently eclipsed those of the Medieval period, during which scientists theorize that a
it has only recently eclipsed the Medieval period, during which, scientists theorize, a
it has only recently eclipsed that of the Medieval period, during which scientists theorize a
they have only recently eclipsed those of the Medieval period, during which, scientists theorize, a
Explanation
This problem provides two very clear decision points for you to get started:
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"they" vs. "it" as the first word of the sentence
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"that of" vs. "those of" vs. (no possessive) in relation to "the Medieval period"
The key to both of these is recognizing the subject of the sentence which is "global temperatures." Since temperatures is plural, the pronoun that corresponds to them must be "they" and you can eliminate choices "it has only recently eclipsed the Medieval period, during which, scientists theorize, a" and "it has only recently eclipsed that of the Medieval period, during which scientists theorize a".
Then notice that the comparison is between current global temperatures and the temperatures during the Medieval period; you cannot logically compare "temperatures" with the timeframe, so you need to have "those of" (which "they have only recently eclipsed those of the Medieval period, during which scientists theorize that a" and "it has only recently eclipsed that of the Medieval period, during which scientists theorize a" have but "they have only recently eclipsed the Medieval period, during which scientists theorize that a" does not) to properly draw the comparison.
Between "they have only recently eclipsed those of the Medieval period, during which scientists theorize that a" and "they have only recently eclipsed those of the Medieval period, during which, scientists theorize, a", notice that the only difference is commas around "during which." Why is that important? Here you're dealing with a tense/timeline decision. Since "theorize" is present-tense but the Medieval period is clearly in the past (even if you're not a historian, the fixed past tense "sent" outside the underline tells you that those volcanoes were in the past), you cannot have "scientists theorize" as part of the phrase "during which." The scientists currently theorize that volcanoes caused the global warming, so you need to separate that subject-verb from the modifier "during (the Medieval period)." This means that answer choice "they have only recently eclipsed those of the Medieval period, during which, scientists theorize, a" is correct.
Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English.
Even though the companies are constantly engaged in legal battles; Samretiredsinger makes parts for Apple's iPhone.
Samretiredsinger and Apple are constantly engaged in legal battles, Samretiredsinger makes
Samretiredsinger and Apple are constantly engaged in legal battles Samretiredsinger makes
Samretiredsinger and Apple are constantly engaged in legal battles; Samretiredsinger makes
Samretiredsinger and Apple are constantly engaged in legal battles - Samretiredsinger makes
Samretiredsinger and Apple are constantly engaged in legal battles, Samretiredsinger, makes
Explanation
This sentence misuses a semicolon. Semicolons are used when joining two independent clauses without the use of a coordinate conjunction. Instead, in this sentence, a dependent clause is joined to an independent clause. The phrase "Even though Samretiredsinger and Apple are constantly engaged in legal battles" is an example of an introductory phrase, explaining information necessary to the context of the sentence, but outside of the main sentence, grammatically. These types of phrases must be followed by a comma in order to separate them from the rest of the sentence. The correct answer choice is, "Samretiredsinger and Apple are constantly engaged in legal battles, Samretiredsinger makes."
Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English. One of the answer choices reproduces the underlined portion as it is written in the sentence.
Leading the Transcendentalist movement, Ralph Waldo Emerson championed individualism; and spoke against slavery.
Leading the Transcendentalist movement, Ralph Waldo Emerson championed individualism and spoke against slavery.
Leading the Transcendentalist movement, Ralph Waldo Emerson championed individualism, and spoke against slavery.
Leading the Transcendentalist movement; Ralph Waldo Emerson championed individualism and spoke against slavery.
Leading the Transcendentalist movement; Ralph Waldo Emerson championed individualism, and spoke against slavery.
Leading the Transcendentalist movement, Ralph Waldo Emerson championed individualism; and spoke against slavery.
Explanation
A semi-colon separates two independent clauses. No punctuation between "individualism" and "and" is necessary.
Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English.
Japanese longswords, katanas, are considered the best swords in the world by many individuals.
Many individuals consider Japanese longswords, katanas, the best swords in the world.
Japanese longswords, katanas, are considered the best swords in the world by many individuals.
Many individuals consider Japanese longswords, a katana, the best sword in the world.
Japanese longswords, katanas, are the best swords in the world according to the opinion of many individuals.
Many individuals might consider Japanese longswords, also known as katanas, to be the best swords in the world.
Explanation
This sentence contains an error in verb voice. The phrase "Japanese longswords...are considered..." is in the passive voice. Since there is already an interrupting appositive renaming the subject here, it is best to simply re-phrase this sentence in the active voice in order to avoid an overly wordy and complex sentence. The most clear and concise choice in this instance is, "Many individuals consider Japanese longswords, katanas, the best swords in the world." The other choices are too wordy or contain inconsistencies (e.g. longswords...a katana).
Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English.
The teacher required the students to bring their own instruments when coming to the music lesson.
bring
take
carry
truck
lift
Explanation
This sentence contains no errors. All of the available choices are synonyms for "carry," but the difference lies in the point of reference. "Carry," "lift," and "truck" are generic words for carrying something, but "bring" indicates that you are carrying something to the position where the subject is, and "take" indicates you are moving away from the subject. The words "when coming to the music lesson" indicate that they are moving towards the direction of the subject: the music teacher (presumably, the teacher is already there). The correct choice is, "bring."
Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English.
Christopher loved to play video games in his free time; he found playing them relaxing.
Christopher loved to play video games in his free time; he found playing them relaxing.
Christopher loved to play video games in his free time, he found playing them relaxing.
Christopher loved to play video games in his freetime; he found playing them relaxing.
Christopher loved to play video games in his free time; he finds playing them relaxing.
Christopher loved to plays video games in his free time; he found playing them relaxing.
Explanation
There are no errors in the above sentence. This sentence joins two related independent clauses without the use of a coordinate conjunction, so there should be a semicolon present after the word "time." In the other sentences, there are issues with parallelism (found...finds), verb agreement (loved to plays), word errors (freetime is not one word), or using a comma where a semicolon should be used. The correct choice is, "Christopher loved to play video games in his free time; he found playing them relaxing."
Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English.
Many, elements on the periodic table are very volatile.
Many elements on the periodic table
Many, elements on the periodic table
Many elements on the periodic table:
Many elements on the periodic table -
Many, elements on the periodic table:
Explanation
This sentence misuses a comma. This sentence is a simple sentence, so no punctuation of any sort is needed. The comma should be omitted because it comes in the middle of an independent clause. The correct choice is, "Many elements on the periodic table."