Correcting Conjunction Errors

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1

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English.

Mark's conviction was laudable, and his behavior, however, was completely unprofessional.

Mark's conviction was laudable; his behavior, however,

Mark's conviction was laudable, so his behavior, however,

Mark's conviction was laudable, for his behavior, however,

Mark's conviction was laudable, however, his behavior

Mark's conviction was laudable however his behavior

Explanation

In order to arrive at the correct answer, one must effectively combine the two independent clauses. Because they contrast in meaning, using the conjunctive adverb however after a semi-colon is appropriate. The other answers incorrectly implement conjunctions or punctuation to resolve the issue. Using a semi-colon to join two independent clauses that contrast will work when using a conjunctive adverb like "however" to convey the appropriate relationship between the clauses. Note that comma usage also comes into play here.

2

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English.

Mark's conviction was laudable, and his behavior, however, was completely unprofessional.

Mark's conviction was laudable; his behavior, however,

Mark's conviction was laudable, so his behavior, however,

Mark's conviction was laudable, for his behavior, however,

Mark's conviction was laudable, however, his behavior

Mark's conviction was laudable however his behavior

Explanation

In order to arrive at the correct answer, one must effectively combine the two independent clauses. Because they contrast in meaning, using the conjunctive adverb however after a semi-colon is appropriate. The other answers incorrectly implement conjunctions or punctuation to resolve the issue. Using a semi-colon to join two independent clauses that contrast will work when using a conjunctive adverb like "however" to convey the appropriate relationship between the clauses. Note that comma usage also comes into play here.

3

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English.

The temperature dropped suddenly in the chamber, which will mean that the pipes passing through the manifold will be frozen by the chill.

and the resulting chill will freeze the pipes that are passing through the manifold.

which will mean that the pipes passing through the manifold will be frozen by the chill.

which will mean that the chill will freeze the pipes passing through the manifold.

and this will mean that the pipes passing through the manifold will be frozen by the chill.

and as a result, the pipes will be frozen by the chill, passing through the manifold.

Explanation

The word “which_”_ does not have an antecedent noun, and so the construction is incorrect in the two answer choices in which it is present. Similarly, in the sentence implementing “this,” there is no noun to which it refers. The final incorrect answer leaves the modifier “passing through the manifold” dangling too far from the noun to which the modifier refers.

4

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English.

Neither the advisors' ominous projections or the board's grim outlook bothered the CEO enough to make her change her course.

Neither the advisors' ominous projections nor the board's grim outlook

Neither of the advisors' ominous projections or the board's grim outlook

Neither the advisors' ominous projections or the board's grim outlook

Either the advisors' ominous projections nor the board's grim outlook

Neither the advisors' ominous projections, nor the board's grim outlook

Explanation

The correct correlative conjunction pair here is "neither/nor." No comma is needed. The other pairings listed are either mismatched or inappropriate. The correct correlative conjunction for "either" is "or."

5

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English.

The professor allowed her class to choose the assignment style for the semester: either several small quizzes and one large final exam and one large midterm exam and one large final exam.

semester: either several small quizzes and one large final exam or one large midterm exam and one large final exam.

semester, either several small quizzes and one large final exam, or one large midterm exam and one large final exam.

semester: either several small quizzes and one large final exam and one large midterm exam and one large final exam.

semester, either several small quizzes and one large final exam, and one large midterm exam and one large final exam.

semester; either several small quizzes and one large final exam or one large midterm exam and one large final exam.

Explanation

Although the constituents in the list are a bit convoluted, this can be boiled down to a simple either A or B. A and B each have an "and," which can make the sentence seem more confusing, but, when simplified, it can be easier to tell that the sentence is describing a choice BETWEEN two options (both of which include two items and an "and"), so the "and" between "quizzes" and "one" needs to be replaced with "or."

6

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English.

The professor allowed her class to choose the assignment style for the semester: either several small quizzes and one large final exam and one large midterm exam and one large final exam.

semester: either several small quizzes and one large final exam or one large midterm exam and one large final exam.

semester, either several small quizzes and one large final exam, or one large midterm exam and one large final exam.

semester: either several small quizzes and one large final exam and one large midterm exam and one large final exam.

semester, either several small quizzes and one large final exam, and one large midterm exam and one large final exam.

semester; either several small quizzes and one large final exam or one large midterm exam and one large final exam.

Explanation

Although the constituents in the list are a bit convoluted, this can be boiled down to a simple either A or B. A and B each have an "and," which can make the sentence seem more confusing, but, when simplified, it can be easier to tell that the sentence is describing a choice BETWEEN two options (both of which include two items and an "and"), so the "and" between "quizzes" and "one" needs to be replaced with "or."

7

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English.

The temperature dropped suddenly in the chamber, which will mean that the pipes passing through the manifold will be frozen by the chill.

and the resulting chill will freeze the pipes that are passing through the manifold.

which will mean that the pipes passing through the manifold will be frozen by the chill.

which will mean that the chill will freeze the pipes passing through the manifold.

and this will mean that the pipes passing through the manifold will be frozen by the chill.

and as a result, the pipes will be frozen by the chill, passing through the manifold.

Explanation

The word “which_”_ does not have an antecedent noun, and so the construction is incorrect in the two answer choices in which it is present. Similarly, in the sentence implementing “this,” there is no noun to which it refers. The final incorrect answer leaves the modifier “passing through the manifold” dangling too far from the noun to which the modifier refers.

8

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English.

Neither the advisors' ominous projections or the board's grim outlook bothered the CEO enough to make her change her course.

Neither the advisors' ominous projections nor the board's grim outlook

Neither of the advisors' ominous projections or the board's grim outlook

Neither the advisors' ominous projections or the board's grim outlook

Either the advisors' ominous projections nor the board's grim outlook

Neither the advisors' ominous projections, nor the board's grim outlook

Explanation

The correct correlative conjunction pair here is "neither/nor." No comma is needed. The other pairings listed are either mismatched or inappropriate. The correct correlative conjunction for "either" is "or."

9

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English.

While I was busy working on the grant proposal; Kevin was taking care of the day-to-day operations of the organization.

While I was busy working on the grant proposal,

While I was busy working on the grant proposal.

While I was busy working on the grant proposal:

While I was busy working on the grant proposal

While I was busily working on the grant proposal;

Explanation

"While I was busy working on the grant proposal" is a subordinate clause, so the sentence requires the second clause—an independent clause—in order to be a complete grammatical sentence. Because "While I was busy working on the grant proposal" is a dependent clause, it should thus be followed with a comma. Semicolons and periods can only be used to punctuate independent clauses. The correct version of the sentence reads, "While I was busy working on the grant proposal, Kevin was taking care of the day-to-day operations of the organization."

10

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English.

Neither of my colleagues or our professor could answer the question I raised, which I found quite disconcerting.

Neither my colleagues nor our professor could answer the question I raised

Neither my colleagues or our professor could answer the question I raised

Neither of my colleagues and nor our professor could answer the question I raised

Neither of my colleagues and our professor could answer the question I raised

Neither of my colleagues, our professor could answer the question I raised

Explanation

The central issue here is the proper implementation of the correlative conjunction "neither...nor." The use of the preposition "of" and the conjunctions "or," "and," etc., appropriately resolve the issue. If anything, these other modifications result in unidiomatic phrases or awkward syntax.

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