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Question 1
A community foundation is preparing a report about its scholarship process. The draft includes this sentence: "Having reviewed all 84 applications, three candidates appeared to the selection panel to require additional interviews." The intended meaning is that the selection panel reviewed the applications and reached the conclusion.
Which revision most clearly corrects the misplaced introductory modifier?
- Having reviewed all 84 applications, three candidates appeared to require additional interviews by the selection panel.
- Having reviewed all 84 applications, the selection panel concluded that three candidates required additional interviews. (correct answer)
- Having reviewed all 84 applications, additional interviews were required by the selection panel for three candidates.
- Having reviewed all 84 applications, three candidates were concluded by the selection panel to need additional interviews.
Explanation: When a sentence opens with a participial phrase like "Having reviewed all 84 applications," that phrase must immediately be followed by the noun or pronoun that performs the action. This is called a dangling or misplaced modifier, and it's one of the most commonly tested grammar concepts at this level. Ask yourself: who did the reviewing? The answer is the selection panel — so "the selection panel" must appear right after the comma.
Choice B does exactly this. "Having reviewed all 84 applications, the selection panel concluded that three candidates required additional interviews." The modifier attaches correctly to its subject, and the sentence clearly conveys the intended meaning.
Choice A moves "the selection panel" to the end of the sentence as part of a prepositional phrase, but the subject directly after the comma is still "three candidates" — the modifier remains dangling. Candidates cannot review applications.
Choice C replaces "three candidates" with "additional interviews" as the subject, but interviews can't review applications either. This swaps one dangling modifier for another.
Choice D keeps "three candidates" as the grammatical subject immediately after the modifier, so it still implies the candidates did the reviewing. Restructuring the predicate doesn't fix a subject-placement problem.
Strategy tip: Whenever you see a sentence opening with an -ing phrase, immediately identify who is performing that action, then check whether that actor is the very next noun after the comma. If it isn't, the modifier is misplaced and the sentence needs revision — just as it did here with answer B being the only fix that places "the selection panel" in the correct position.
Question 2
A job description contains the following sentence: "The new coordinator will be responsible for scheduling volunteers, to maintain inventory records, and that monthly safety reports are submitted on time."
Which revision uses parallel grammatical structure while preserving the original meaning?
- The new coordinator will be responsible for scheduling volunteers, maintaining inventory records, and ensuring that monthly safety reports are submitted on time. (correct answer)
- The new coordinator will be responsible for scheduling volunteers, to maintain inventory records, and ensuring that monthly safety reports are submitted on time.
- The new coordinator's responsibilities include scheduling volunteers, maintaining inventory records, and to ensure monthly safety reports are submitted on time.
- The new coordinator will be responsible to schedule volunteers, maintaining inventory records, and ensure that monthly safety reports are submitted on time.
Explanation: When a sentence lists multiple responsibilities or actions connected by "and," each item in the list must follow the same grammatical form — this is called parallel structure. In the original sentence, the three items use three different forms: a gerund phrase ("scheduling volunteers"), an infinitive phrase ("to maintain inventory records"), and a subordinate clause ("that monthly safety reports are submitted"). That mismatch is the error you're being asked to fix.
The correct revision is A. It converts all three items into gerund phrases: "scheduling volunteers," "maintaining inventory records," and "ensuring that monthly safety reports are submitted on time." Each element starts with an -ing verb, creating a clean, consistent list that preserves all three original responsibilities.
B is wrong because it still mixes forms — it keeps the infinitive "to maintain" while using gerunds for the other two items. The parallelism problem isn't fully resolved.
C appears close, but its third item breaks the pattern by switching to an infinitive: "to ensure monthly safety reports are submitted on time." Two gerunds plus one infinitive is still a mismatch, making this choice incorrect.
D is the most scrambled of the wrong answers. It uses an infinitive first ("to schedule"), then a gerund ("maintaining"), then a bare verb ("ensure") — three different forms in a single list. This actually introduces more inconsistency than the original.
A useful strategy: whenever you spot a list joined by "and" or "or," quickly label the grammatical form of each item. If they don't all match, look for the answer choice that makes them uniform — that's your revision.
Question 3
A facilities report explains that a contractor failed to follow the specifications last year. As a result, the repairs currently need to be performed again. The draft report states: "If the contractor would have followed the specifications, the repairs would not need to be repeated now."
Which revision correctly expresses the relationship between the past failure and its present consequence?
- If the contractor followed the specifications, the repairs will not need to be repeated now.
- If the contractor had followed the specifications, the repairs would not need to be repeated now. (correct answer)
- If the contractor would follow the specifications, the repairs would not have needed repetition now.
- If the contractor has followed the specifications, the repairs would not need to be repeated now.
Explanation: When a sentence describes a past condition that never happened — and connects it to a present or ongoing consequence — you're working with a mixed conditional. The key grammatical rule: use the past perfect ("had + past participle") in the if-clause to signal a hypothetical past event, and "would" + base verb in the result clause to describe the present consequence.
The correct revision is B: "If the contractor had followed the specifications, the repairs would not need to be repeated now." This structure precisely captures the relationship — the failure happened in the past (hence had followed), and the consequence is being felt in the present (hence would not need). This is the standard mixed conditional form and the only choice that handles both time references correctly.
Each wrong answer breaks this structure in a specific way. A uses simple past (followed) in the if-clause and future tense (will not need) in the result — it sounds like a real, possible future condition rather than a counterfactual about the past. C uses would follow in the if-clause, which is a common error; "would" should almost never appear in the if-clause of a conditional — it belongs in the result clause. D uses the present perfect (has followed), which suggests something that may have just happened or is still possible, rather than a clearly completed past failure with no chance of revision.
A reliable tip: in any conditional sentence testing a past hypothetical, check the if-clause first. If you see would there instead of had, that's your red flag — it's almost certainly wrong.
Question 4
The directors of two nonprofit organizations met to discuss the background checks belonging to all of their volunteers. A staff member is preparing a formal summary of the meeting.
Which sentence correctly uses plural and possessive forms?
- The two nonprofit organizations's directors agreed that the volunteer's background checks must be renewed before assignments begin.
- The two nonprofit organization's directors agreed that the volunteer's background checks must be renewed before assignments begin.
- The two nonprofit organizations directors agreed that the volunteers background checks must be renewed before assignments begin.
- The two nonprofit organizations' directors agreed that the volunteers' background checks must be renewed before assignments begin. (correct answer)
Explanation: When a question asks you to identify correct plural and possessive forms, slow down and examine each noun separately: Is it plural? Does it show ownership? Each condition requires a different treatment.
In this sentence, you have two groups — the organizations and the volunteers — and both groups possess something. The directors belong to the organizations (plural possessive), and the background checks belong to the volunteers (plural possessive). To make a regular plural noun possessive, you simply add an apostrophe after the existing -s: organizations' and volunteers'. That's exactly what answer D does, making it the correct choice.
Answer A adds 's to organizations, creating organizations's — a double-s construction that is never correct for regular plural nouns. This is a common trap students fall into when they confuse singular possessives (the organization's) with plural ones. Answer B uses organization's (singular possessive), which implies only one organization — but the passage clearly states there are two. This mismatch between the passage's context and the grammar makes B incorrect. Answer C drops apostrophes entirely from both organizations and volunteers, treating them as plain plurals. Without apostrophes, these words simply mean "more than one organization/volunteer" with no indication of ownership — so the sentence loses its intended meaning.
A useful rule of thumb: for plural nouns that already end in -s, the apostrophe goes after the s, not before it, and nothing is added. Singular nouns get 's; regular plural nouns get just '. Keeping that distinction clear will help you navigate possessive questions quickly and confidently on the exam.
Question 5
Maya spoke with Elena about an overdue building inspection. Maya then emailed the landlord, and the landlord promised to respond within two business days. A draft report states: "After Maya spoke with Elena about the overdue inspection, she emailed the landlord, who promised to respond promptly."
Which revision best corrects the pronoun-reference problem without changing the intended meaning?
- After Maya spoke with Elena about the overdue inspection, she emailed the landlord, who promised to respond within two business days.
- After speaking with Elena about the overdue inspection, the landlord was emailed by Maya and promised to respond within two business days.
- After Maya spoke with Elena about the overdue inspection, Maya emailed the landlord, who promised to respond within two business days. (correct answer)
- After Maya spoke with Elena about the overdue inspection, Elena emailed the landlord, which promised to respond within two business days.
Explanation: Pronoun-reference problems occur when a pronoun (like "she" or "it") could logically refer to more than one noun, leaving the reader uncertain about who or what is meant. When you spot a pronoun in a sentence with multiple possible antecedents, ask: "Who or what does this pronoun actually refer to, and is that obvious from the sentence alone?"
In the draft, the sentence reads: "After Maya spoke with Elena about the overdue inspection, she emailed the landlord." Because both Maya and Elena are female and both are named just before "she," the pronoun is ambiguous — a reader cannot be certain who sent the email. Choice C resolves this cleanly by replacing "she" with "Maya," eliminating all ambiguity while preserving the original meaning exactly. It also keeps "within two business days" from the source passage rather than the vague word "promptly."
Choice A removes the vagueness of "promptly" but keeps the ambiguous "she," so the pronoun problem remains unsolved. Choice B attempts a fix by restructuring the sentence, but its passive construction ("the landlord was emailed by Maya") is awkward, and the phrasing implies the landlord was "speaking with Elena" before the email — distorting the original meaning. Choice D replaces "she" with "Elena," which directly contradicts the passage: it was Maya, not Elena, who sent the email.
A useful strategy: whenever a pronoun follows two or more same-gender nouns, mentally substitute each noun into the sentence and ask whether the meaning stays clear and accurate. If it doesn't, replace the pronoun with the specific noun — just as C does here.
Question 6
A city employee is proofreading an update about a funding request: "The grant application is complete, however, the council cannot submit it until the public-comment period ends."
Which revision correctly joins the two independent clauses and punctuates the transitional word?
- The grant application is complete, however, the council cannot submit it until the public-comment period ends.
- The grant application is complete; however, the council cannot submit it until the public-comment period ends. (correct answer)
- The grant application is complete however; the council cannot submit it until the public-comment period ends.
- The grant application is complete; however the council, cannot submit it until the public-comment period ends.
Explanation: When two independent clauses are connected by a conjunctive adverb like however, therefore, or nevertheless, you need a semicolon before the transitional word and a comma after it. This is the standard punctuation formula: independent clause + semicolon + however + comma + independent clause. The semicolon does the heavy lifting of joining the two complete thoughts, while the comma after however signals that it's an introductory transition, not part of the core sentence.
Choice B applies this rule correctly — the semicolon follows "complete," and the comma follows "however," giving you a grammatically sound, professional sentence. This is your answer.
Choice A is the original error and represents one of the most common mistakes in writing: using only a comma to join two independent clauses with a conjunctive adverb. This creates a comma splice, which is a serious punctuation error. A comma alone isn't strong enough to join two full sentences.
Choice C places the semicolon after however rather than before it, which completely breaks the logic. The semicolon ends up separating "however" from the clause it belongs to, producing a sentence fragment on the left side ("The grant application is complete however").
Choice D uses the semicolon correctly before "however" but omits the comma after it — and then incorrectly inserts a comma after "council," which disrupts the natural flow of the second clause with no grammatical justification.
A handy tip: whenever you spot however, therefore, or moreover connecting two sentences, mentally check for the semicolon-before, comma-after pattern. If either piece is missing or misplaced, the sentence needs revision.
Question 7
A customer-service report is intended to compare the response times of a branch office with the response times of the regional office. The draft states: "Unlike the regional office, the branch office's response times were substantially shorter."
Which revision makes the comparison logically and grammatically complete?
- Unlike the regional office, response times at the branch office were substantially shorter during the reporting period.
- The branch office's response times were substantially shorter than the regional office during the reporting period.
- The branch office's response times were substantially shorter than those of the regional office during the reporting period. (correct answer)
- Compared with response times at the regional office, the branch office was substantially shorter during the reporting period.
Explanation: When a sentence uses "unlike" or "than" to draw a comparison, both sides of the comparison must be grammatically parallel — meaning you're comparing the same type of thing to the same type of thing. This question tests whether you can spot and fix a faulty comparison, one of the most common errors in formal writing.
The original draft compares "the regional office" (an institution) to "the branch office's response times" (a measurement). That's like comparing apples to square footage — logically mismatched. A correct revision must compare response times to response times. Choice C does exactly that: "The branch office's response times were substantially shorter than those of the regional office." The word "those" is a pronoun standing in for "response times," so you're comparing times to times. It also specifies "during the reporting period," grounding the claim appropriately.
Choice A fixes the opening modifier but still compares "the regional office" (the institution) to "response times at the branch office" — the same category mismatch as the original. Choice B compares "response times" directly to "the regional office" rather than to the regional office's response times, leaving the comparison incomplete. Choice D goes further in the wrong direction — "the branch office was substantially shorter" implies the office itself is short, which is nonsensical.
A useful pattern to remember: whenever you see a comparison word like "unlike," "than," or "compared with," mentally ask, "Am I comparing the same kind of thing on both sides?" If not, the sentence has a faulty comparison — and answer choices using pronouns like "those" or "that" are often the fix.
Question 8
Minutes completed on January 20 summarize a meeting held on January 8. At that meeting, the transit director discussed a delivery deadline the supplier had already missed and made a prediction about January 12. The draft minutes state: "At the January 8 meeting, the director explains that the supplier missed the deadline and predicts that replacement parts will arrive by January 12."
Which revision most accurately establishes the sequence of past events and the director's future prediction from that past viewpoint?
- At the January 8 meeting, the director explained that the supplier had missed the deadline and predicted that replacement parts would arrive by January 12. (correct answer)
- At the January 8 meeting, the director explained that the supplier missed the deadline and predicts that replacement parts will arrive by January 12.
- At the January 8 meeting, the director had explained that the supplier has missed the deadline and predicted that replacement parts arrived by January 12.
- At the January 8 meeting, the director explains that the supplier had missed the deadline and had predicted that replacement parts would arrive by January 12.
Explanation: When minutes document a past meeting, verb tenses must work together to show when each event happened relative to the others. This question tests three layers of time: (1) now (January 20, when minutes are written), (2) the meeting (January 8), and (3) events that were already past at the meeting — plus a prediction made from that past moment.
Answer A handles all three layers correctly. Since the meeting itself is past, the director's actions use simple past: "explained" and "predicted." The missed deadline happened before the meeting, so it gets past perfect: "had missed." The prediction looked forward from January 8, so "would arrive" correctly expresses future-from-a-past-viewpoint (known as "future in the past"). This is the only choice where every tense does its precise job.
Answer B breaks the sequence by switching "predicts" to present tense, as if the director is predicting right now rather than at the January 8 meeting. This mixes timelines.
Answer C uses "had explained," which would imply the explanation happened before some other past event — a meaning that doesn't fit here. Worse, "arrived by January 12" turns the prediction into a statement of completed fact, which contradicts the context entirely.
Answer D keeps the draft's flawed present-tense "explains" for the director's action, then double-stacks past perfect ("had predicted") where simple past is appropriate, creating an awkward and inaccurate sequence.
The tip to remember: when reporting what someone said or predicted in the past, shift your verbs back one step — present becomes past, and "will" becomes "would."
Question 9
A hiring committee is deciding which applicant should manage two service centers. The committee's draft memo includes a blank: "The committee will interview the director believes best prepared to oversee both sites."
Which pair of words correctly completes the sentence?
- whomever; are
- whomever; is
- whoever; are
- whoever; is (correct answer)
Explanation: When a sentence contains a clause within a clause, you need to analyze each part separately before choosing your words. This question tests two distinct grammar skills at once: the whoever/whomever distinction and subject-verb agreement.
Start with the second blank. The clause " best prepared to oversee both sites" needs a subject and verb. Ask yourself: who is best prepared? Multiple finalists might be considered, but the sentence is describing a general characteristic — the type of person who is best prepared — so the subject is a singular concept. Use are with a plural subject and is with a singular one. Since "whoever" refers to one person fitting a description, is is correct. This eliminates choices A and C.
Now tackle the first blank. The full embedded clause is "whoever is best prepared to oversee both sites." That entire clause functions as the object of the verb "interview" — the committee will interview [the whole clause]. A common trap is to look only at the word immediately following "interview" and assume it needs the objective case whomever. But you must treat the embedded clause as a unit. Inside that clause, "whoever" acts as the subject of "is," so it takes the nominative form whoever, not the objective whomever. This confirms D and eliminates B.
Choice A fails on both counts — whomever misidentifies the grammatical role, and are doesn't match the singular subject. Choice B gets the verb right but still uses whomever incorrectly. Choice C uses the right pronoun but pairs it with the wrong verb.
Your strategy: when you see whoever/whomever, find that word's role inside its own clause — ignore what comes before it.