Adult ESL/ELL Advanced Quiz: Register Appropriate Writing
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A graduate student is drafting a research paper on urban housing policy. She writes the following sentence in her literature review: "A lot of researchers have looked into how gentrification messes up low-income communities, but not many of them have really nailed down the long-term effects on residents who get pushed out."

Which revision most effectively transforms the sentence into register-appropriate academic prose while preserving the original meaning?

Numerous scholars have examined the ways in which gentrification disrupts low-income communities; however, the long-term consequences for displaced residents remain insufficiently theorized in the existing literature.
Many researchers have studied how gentrification disrupts low-income communities, but they have not yet fully explained the long-term effects on the residents who are forced to relocate.
Scholars have investigated gentrification's negative impact on low-income communities extensively, yet a definitive consensus regarding the permanent outcomes for displaced individuals has not been universally established.
A significant body of research has explored the destabilizing effects of gentrification on low-income communities, though empirical documentation of long-term outcomes for economically marginalized displaced populations is still ongoing.
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Adult ESL/ELL Advanced Quiz: Register Appropriate Writing

Practice Register Appropriate Writing in Adult ESL/ELL Advanced with focused quiz questions that help you check what you know, review explanations, and build confidence with test-style prompts.

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Question 1

A graduate student is drafting a research paper on urban housing policy. She writes the following sentence in her literature review: "A lot of researchers have looked into how gentrification messes up low-income communities, but not many of them have really nailed down the long-term effects on residents who get pushed out."

Which revision most effectively transforms the sentence into register-appropriate academic prose while preserving the original meaning?

  1. Numerous scholars have examined the ways in which gentrification disrupts low-income communities; however, the long-term consequences for displaced residents remain insufficiently theorized in the existing literature. (correct answer)
  2. Many researchers have studied how gentrification disrupts low-income communities, but they have not yet fully explained the long-term effects on the residents who are forced to relocate.
  3. Scholars have investigated gentrification's negative impact on low-income communities extensively, yet a definitive consensus regarding the permanent outcomes for displaced individuals has not been universally established.
  4. A significant body of research has explored the destabilizing effects of gentrification on low-income communities, though empirical documentation of long-term outcomes for economically marginalized displaced populations is still ongoing.
Explanation: When a question asks you to revise informal writing into "academic prose," you need to evaluate two things simultaneously: register (formal vs. casual vocabulary and tone) and precision (does the revision faithfully capture the original meaning without distorting or inflating it?). The original sentence makes two clear claims: (1) researchers have studied gentrification's harm to low-income communities, and (2) the long-term effects on displaced residents aren't well understood yet. Option A handles both beautifully. It replaces casual phrases like "looked into," "messes up," and "nailed down" with precise academic language — "examined," "disrupts," and "remain insufficiently theorized." That last phrase is especially strong because it identifies why the gap exists (a theoretical shortcoming in the literature), which is exactly the kind of disciplinary framing expected in a graduate literature review. Option B is cleaner than the original but stays closer to plain language ("studied," "fully explained") rather than true academic register. It reads more like a competent undergraduate sentence than graduate-level prose. Option C overcorrects in a different direction — phrases like "universally established" and "permanent outcomes" actually change the meaning. The original says effects are understudied, not that scholars haven't reached consensus. Option D piles on qualifiers ("economically marginalized displaced populations," "empirical documentation") that go well beyond what the original claims, making it verbose and imprecise — a common trap that confuses complexity with academic quality. A useful rule of thumb: in academic writing, the goal is precision and formality, not maximum complexity. When evaluating revisions, always ask whether the new version is accurate and appropriately formal — not just one or the other.

Question 2

An advanced ESL learner is editing a formal cover letter for a competitive professional position. She has written: "I am very passionate about this job and I really think I would be great at it because I have done a lot of similar work before." Which of the following revisions reflects the register norms of a highly competitive professional cover letter most accurately?

  1. My extensive background in comparable roles has equipped me with the analytical and interpersonal competencies this position demands, and I am deeply committed to contributing meaningfully to your organization's objectives. (correct answer)
  2. I have a strong passion for this role and believe my previous experience in similar positions makes me a highly qualified and suitable candidate for your consideration.
  3. I am enthusiastic about this opportunity and confident that my considerable experience in related fields positions me as a strong candidate capable of fulfilling the responsibilities of this role effectively.
  4. Having completed significant work in comparable areas, I am very eager to bring my skills and experience to this role and to make a meaningful contribution to your team's goals and mission.
Explanation: When evaluating professional register in cover letters, ask yourself: Does this sentence sound like it belongs in a boardroom, or in a casual conversation? Formal professional writing favors precise, substantive vocabulary, active construction, and evidence of value — not vague enthusiasm or filler phrases like "I really think" or "a lot of." Choice A is the strongest revision because every word does deliberate work. It replaces vague experience with "extensive background in comparable roles," names specific competency types ("analytical and interpersonal"), connects those competencies directly to the employer's needs ("this position demands"), and closes with forward-looking professional commitment. There are no hedges, no intensifiers like "very" or "really," and no generic claims — just confident, precise language that signals high-level professional fluency. Choice B improves slightly on the original but still leans on weak phrasing. "Strong passion" is a common cover letter cliché, and "highly qualified and suitable candidate for your consideration" is formulaic and hollow — it tells employers nothing specific about your value. Choice C is a reasonable revision and sounds professional on the surface, but phrases like "I am enthusiastic" and "strong candidate capable of fulfilling responsibilities" remain relatively generic. It lacks the specificity and strategic vocabulary that distinguish A. Choice D contains the persistent intensifier "very eager," which undermines formal register. Eagerness and enthusiasm, when stated plainly without supporting evidence, can actually weaken a cover letter by making the writer sound junior or unfocused. Strategy tip: In register questions, flag words like very, really, a lot, and vague nouns like things or stuff as red flags — they signal informal register and almost always point away from the correct answer.

Question 3

A professor returns a student's essay with the following feedback on one paragraph:

"This paragraph mixes registers problematically. You shift between academic language and informal expressions, which undermines the scholarly credibility of your analysis. Revise for consistency."

The original paragraph reads: "Foucault's concept of biopower is super relevant here. Basically, it refers to the way states manage populations through various mechanisms. This is a big deal because it totally changes how we think about political authority and individual freedom."

Which revision most effectively resolves ALL the register inconsistencies the professor identified while maintaining the analytical substance of the original paragraph?

  1. The concept of biopower, as developed by Foucault, is an important theoretical tool for this discussion. It refers to the state's management of populations through institutional mechanisms, and its implications for our understanding of political power and freedom are considerable.
  2. Foucault's notion of biopower is highly relevant in this context. It describes the processes by which states control and manage their populations, which represents a significant shift in how political authority and individual freedom are understood theoretically.
  3. Foucault's concept of biopower is directly applicable to this analysis. The term denotes the regulatory mechanisms through which modern states govern populations, a framework that fundamentally reconceptualizes the relationship between political authority and individual autonomy. (correct answer)
  4. Foucault's biopower framework proves particularly pertinent here, as it addresses state-level population management mechanisms that have substantially altered conventional understandings of political authority alongside the constraints placed upon individual freedoms within governed societies.
Explanation: When revising for register consistency, your goal is to match the tone, vocabulary, and formality level throughout an entire passage — in academic writing, every sentence should sound like it belongs in the same scholarly context. Watch for informal words like "super," "basically," "big deal," and "totally," which clash with the formal analytical language expected in university essays. Choice C handles this most completely. It replaces every informal expression with precise academic vocabulary: "directly applicable" instead of "super relevant," "denotes" instead of "basically refers to," and "reconceptualizes the relationship between political authority and individual autonomy" instead of "totally changes how we think." Crucially, C also upgrades the content — "regulatory mechanisms through which modern states govern populations" is more analytically rigorous than simply saying states "manage" populations, and "individual autonomy" is more theoretically precise than "individual freedom." Choice A loses something important — it drops Foucault's name from the opening attribution, which weakens the scholarly grounding. It also uses "important theoretical tool," which is acceptable but vague compared to C's specificity. Choice B is close, but "highly relevant in this context" is borderline weak for academic writing, and "understood theoretically" feels slightly awkward and imprecise. Choice D overcorrects — while every word is formal, the sentence becomes so long and convoluted that it sacrifices clarity, which is itself an academic writing standard. Complex syntax that obscures meaning is not better than informal language. Your takeaway: in register-revision questions, the correct answer must fix all informal language and maintain or improve the analytical depth — don't settle for a choice that only solves part of the problem.

Question 4

A student is writing an academic literature review and produces the following transition sentence between two paragraphs:

"So, as we've seen, Smith's ideas are pretty different from Jones's. Now let's look at what Brown says, which is kind of in the middle."

Which revision best demonstrates how an advanced academic writer would handle this transition, appropriately signaling both the contrast already established and the synthesis about to be introduced?

  1. In light of the differences discussed between Smith and Jones, Brown's work offers what might be considered an intermediate theoretical stance, which will be examined in the next section of this paper.
  2. As shown above, Smith and Jones hold significantly different views; the following section will examine Brown's perspective, which represents a compromise between these two positions.
  3. Having established the divergence between Smith's and Jones's theoretical frameworks, this review now turns to Brown's scholarship, which occupies a mediating position within this scholarly debate. (correct answer)
  4. The contrast between Smith and Jones having been outlined, attention now shifts to Brown, whose work suggests a synthesizing position between the two previously discussed scholars.
Explanation: When writing academic literature reviews, transitions must do two jobs at once: reflect back on what was just discussed and preview what comes next — all while maintaining formal, discipline-appropriate register. The original sentence fails on both counts, using casual speech ("pretty different," "kind of in the middle," "let's look at") that signals informality inappropriate for scholarly writing. Choice C accomplishes both goals with precision. The participial phrase "Having established the divergence between Smith's and Jones's theoretical frameworks" elegantly summarizes the prior contrast without restating it bluntly. The phrase "this review now turns to" is a standard, well-recognized academic convention for signaling movement within a paper. Finally, "occupying a mediating position within this scholarly debate" frames Brown's contribution as theoretically significant — not just a compromise, but a participant in an ongoing academic conversation. This is the language of synthesis, which is exactly what a literature review requires at this stage. Choice A is overly tentative. The phrase "what might be considered" introduces unnecessary hedging, weakening the analytical confidence expected in advanced academic writing. Choice B uses the mechanical phrase "as shown above," which is acceptable in technical writing but feels abrupt and underdeveloped for a literature review transition. It also reduces Brown's contribution to a mere "compromise," which lacks theoretical depth. Choice D is grammatically awkward — "The contrast between Smith and Jones having been outlined" is an absolute phrase that reads as stilted and archaic, disrupting the flow rather than improving it. As a study tip, whenever you evaluate academic transitions, ask yourself: Does this sentence look backward AND forward? Does it use discipline-appropriate vocabulary without sounding robotic or overly casual?

Question 5

Read the following excerpt from a professional email sent by a consultant to a new corporate client:

"Hi! Just wanted to touch base about the project timeline. Honestly, I think we're running a bit behind, but no worries — we'll totally get things back on track. Let me know if you wanna chat more about it!"

A colleague advises the consultant to revise the email for professional appropriateness. Beyond simply replacing informal words, which revision most comprehensively addresses ALL register problems present in the original—including vocabulary, tone, syntactic structure, and professional etiquette?

  1. Dear [Client Name], I am writing to provide an update regarding the project timeline. We have encountered some delays; however, I am confident that we will implement the necessary adjustments to meet our revised targets. Please do not hesitate to contact me should you wish to discuss this matter further. (correct answer)
  2. Hello, I wanted to follow up on the project timeline. We are somewhat behind schedule, but I am certain we will get things back on track shortly. Feel free to reach out if you would like to discuss further.
  3. Dear [Client Name], I am reaching out to discuss concerns about the project timeline. There have been some delays, and while I am optimistic about our ability to address them, I wanted to ensure you were informed. I am available to speak at your convenience.
  4. Dear [Client Name], Please allow me to update you on the project timeline status. We are currently experiencing minor delays, and steps are being taken to rectify the situation. I welcome the opportunity to elaborate on this matter at your earliest convenience.
Explanation: When a question asks you to address all register problems in professional writing, you need to evaluate vocabulary, sentence structure, tone, and etiquette simultaneously — not just swap out slang words. Think of "register" as the full package: what words you choose, how you build sentences, how formally you frame your relationship with the reader, and whether your email follows professional conventions like a proper salutation. Answer A handles every layer. It opens with a formal salutation ("Dear [Client Name]"), uses precise professional vocabulary ("provide an update," "implement the necessary adjustments," "revised targets"), employs complete subordinate clause structures rather than casual fragments, and closes with standard professional etiquette ("Please do not hesitate to contact me"). The tone is confident and accountable without being either dismissive or overly apologetic. This is the most comprehensive revision. Answer B fails on multiple fronts: it omits a proper salutation entirely, uses vague phrasing like "get things back on track" (lifted almost directly from the original), and reads more like a semi-formal message than a polished corporate communication. Answer C improves tone and structure but is softer and more tentative than necessary — phrases like "I am optimistic" and "I wanted to ensure you were informed" sound slightly informal and lack the decisive, action-oriented language expected in professional consulting. Answer D overcorrects into overly bureaucratic phrasing ("at your earliest convenience," "elaborate on this matter") that sounds stiff and formulaic rather than genuinely professional, and the passive construction "steps are being taken" avoids accountability. Your strategy: when evaluating professional writing revisions, run through a four-point checklist — salutation, vocabulary, sentence structure, and tone. A correct answer must pass all four, not just two or three.

Question 6

A legal intern drafts the following sentence for a formal brief: "The defendant basically ignored the contract terms and did whatever he wanted, which obviously broke the agreement and hurt our client." Which of the following best illustrates how an advanced understanding of professional legal register would transform this sentence?

  1. The defendant failed to adhere to the established contractual obligations and proceeded to act in a self-determined manner, which ultimately constituted a breach and damaged the interests of the aggrieved party.
  2. The defendant clearly violated the terms of the contract by acting unilaterally, which resulted in a breach of agreement and caused harm to the plaintiff in this case.
  3. It is evident that the defendant did not follow the contract and instead pursued independent actions, thereby creating a situation that was harmful to our client's legal position.
  4. The defendant's willful disregard of the contractual provisions constitutes a material breach, the consequences of which have demonstrably prejudiced the interests of the plaintiff. (correct answer)
Explanation: When writing in legal register, you must think beyond simply "sounding formal." True professional legal writing combines precision of legal terminology, logical structure, and economy of language — every word carries legal meaning and evidentiary weight. Answer D achieves all three. "Willful disregard" establishes intent, which is legally significant. "Contractual provisions" is more precise than "contract terms." "Material breach" is a specific legal standard (not all breaches are equal under law). "Demonstrably prejudiced" signals provability in court, and "plaintiff" correctly identifies the injured party by their formal legal designation. Each word does real legal work. Now consider why the other choices fall short. A is wordy and bureaucratic rather than precise — phrases like "self-determined manner" and "aggrieved party" sound formal but lack the sharp legal specificity that courts and attorneys expect. It dresses up the original sentence without transforming it. B is actually the most readable and clear, but "clearly violated" and "in this case" are conversational softeners. More importantly, it uses no specialized legal terminology beyond "breach" and "plaintiff," meaning it hasn't fully elevated the register. C still reads as semi-informal explanation — "creating a situation that was harmful" is vague and analytical rather than assertive, which is unsuitable for a legal brief that must argue a position confidently. A useful strategy: in legal register questions, look for answers that use terms of art (words with specific legal definitions) rather than just formal-sounding vocabulary. D is correct precisely because each phrase reflects how lawyers think about liability, not just how they talk.

Question 7

A student submits the following thesis statement for a sociology essay:

"In this essay, I'm going to talk about why poor neighborhoods don't get as much money from the government as rich ones, and how this is really unfair and needs to change."

Which revision most effectively transforms this thesis statement into one that meets the register expectations of an advanced academic essay—specifically regarding formality, precision, argument framing, and disciplinary language—while retaining the original argumentative intent?

  1. It will be argued in this essay that low-income neighborhoods are systematically underfunded relative to wealthier areas, and that this constitutes an inequitable distribution of public resources demanding immediate governmental attention.
  2. This paper will demonstrate that government funding is distributed unequally, with wealthier communities consistently receiving greater financial resources than economically disadvantaged ones, which is an unjust practice that requires reform.
  3. The unequal distribution of government funding across communities of differing socioeconomic status represents a critical issue, and this essay will examine why this disparity exists and propose that it must be addressed urgently.
  4. This essay argues that systemic inequities in public resource allocation disproportionately disadvantage low-income communities, a pattern that warrants critical policy intervention and structural reform. (correct answer)
Explanation: When evaluating academic thesis statements, focus on four qualities: formality of register, precision of language, argument framing, and use of disciplinary vocabulary. A strong academic thesis doesn't just state a topic—it makes a specific, arguable claim using field-appropriate terminology. Option D does all of this most effectively. It uses disciplinary language from sociology and policy studies ("systemic inequities," "public resource allocation," "structural reform"), frames the argument precisely ("disproportionately disadvantage"), and signals analytical sophistication through terms like "warrants critical policy intervention." Crucially, it retains the original intent—government funding is unfair to low-income communities and must change—while elevating the register entirely. Now consider why the other options fall short. Option A opens with the passive construction "It will be argued," which sounds formal but is actually considered weak in academic writing because it distances the writer from their own claim. It also lacks the sharp disciplinary vocabulary that D achieves. Option B is clearer than the original but still relies on relatively plain language ("unjust practice," "requires reform") that doesn't reflect advanced sociological discourse—it reads more like a competent high school thesis. Option C is the weakest revision: it hedges significantly ("will examine why... and propose"), which undermines the argumentative commitment a thesis requires. A thesis must argue, not merely examine. When revising thesis statements for academic register, ask yourself: Does this sentence make a specific claim, use field-appropriate vocabulary, and signal what the essay will argue—not just discuss? That checklist will help you distinguish a sophisticated thesis from a polished but ultimately surface-level one.

Question 8

A student writing a formal academic essay wants to introduce a counterargument. She drafts: "Some people think my argument is wrong because they believe economic growth always helps everyone." Which of the following revisions best demonstrates register-appropriate academic writing for introducing and framing a counterargument?

  1. Critics of this position contend that broad-based economic growth inherently produces equitable distributional outcomes, thereby challenging the premise of the present argument. (correct answer)
  2. Opponents argue against this view by suggesting that economic growth is always beneficial for all members of society, which is a point that this paper will now address.
  3. There are those who disagree with this argument on the grounds that economic growth can be considered a universally beneficial force that ultimately reaches all segments of the population.
  4. Some academics have put forward the idea that economic growth will always end up helping everybody, and this is a perspective that deserves serious consideration in this discussion.
Explanation: When writing formal academic essays, register refers to the level of formality, vocabulary precision, and stylistic conventions appropriate for a given context. Introducing a counterargument requires not only the right tone but also precise, discipline-appropriate language that signals scholarly engagement — avoiding vagueness, colloquialisms, or unnecessary wordiness. Choice A is the strongest revision because it achieves all of this simultaneously. The phrase "Critics of this position contend" uses a recognized academic attribution verb ("contend") and a formal noun phrase. "Inherently produces equitable distributional outcomes" replaces the vague original with precise economic vocabulary, and "thereby challenging the premise of the present argument" elegantly signals the counterargument's relevance — all without padding. Choice B fails because "Opponents argue against this view by suggesting" is redundant ("argue against" and "suggesting" overlap in meaning), and the closing phrase "which is a point that this paper will now address" is mechanical and unsophisticated — a hallmark of intermediate, not advanced, academic writing. Choice C uses acceptable vocabulary but is structurally weak. "There are those who disagree" is an imprecise, informal construction in formal writing. Academic prose prefers direct attribution (e.g., "Critics argue") over this vague framing. Choice D is the weakest option. "Will always end up helping everybody" is clearly colloquial and informal — directly inappropriate for academic register — and "deserves serious consideration" is a filler phrase that adds no analytical value. Your takeaway: in academic writing, precision and economy of language are key. Practice replacing vague phrases ("some people think") with precise attribution verbs like contend, assert, or maintain paired with formal noun phrases.

Question 9

A human resources manager is composing an internal memo to all staff about a new remote-work policy. One paragraph reads: "We want to make sure everybody knows that working from home is totally fine two days a week. Just shoot us an email to let us know which days work for you, and we'll try to sort it out as fast as we can."

The manager realizes the memo's tone is too casual for formal workplace communication. Which revision best achieves the appropriate professional register without becoming unnecessarily stiff or bureaucratic?

  1. All employees are hereby informed that remote work is permissible on a maximum of two days per week. Personnel must submit written notification to management specifying preferred remote-work days, and requests will be processed in a timely and expeditious manner.
  2. Please be advised that employees are permitted to work remotely up to two days per week. To arrange your schedule, kindly submit your preferred days via email, and we will respond as promptly as possible. (correct answer)
  3. We would like to inform all staff members that working from home for two days each week has been approved. Please send us an email indicating your preferred days, and we will do our best to accommodate your request quickly.
  4. It is the policy of this organization that remote work, not exceeding two days per calendar week, is authorized. Employees who wish to participate should electronically communicate their scheduling preferences, and a response will be forthcoming in due course.
Explanation: When revising for register — the level of formality in language — your goal isn't simply to eliminate casual words. You're aiming for a tone that feels professional, respectful, and clear without sounding robotic or artificially stiff. Think of it as a spectrum: too casual loses credibility, too formal creates distance and confusion. The original memo fails with phrases like "totally fine," "shoot us an email," and "sort it out" — all informal expressions inappropriate for official workplace communication. The ideal revision replaces these with precise, professional language while keeping the message warm and human. B achieves exactly this balance. Phrases like "please be advised," "permitted to work remotely," and "as promptly as possible" are professional without being cold. The sentence structure is clear, the message is accessible, and it respects employees without talking down to them. This is the sweet spot for formal internal communication. A goes too far in the other direction. "Hereby," "personnel," and "timely and expeditious manner" (which is redundant — both words mean the same thing) create a stiff, legalistic tone more appropriate for a legal contract than a staff memo. C is close but slightly too conversational in spots — "we will do our best" sounds informal and non-committal for a professional policy statement. It reads more like a friendly note than a formal memo. D is the most extreme overcorrection. "It is the policy of this organization," "not exceeding," and "a response will be forthcoming in due course" are unnecessarily bureaucratic and may actually confuse readers. Study tip: When evaluating register, read choices aloud — overly stiff language often feels awkward when spoken, which is a reliable signal that it's too formal for its context.

Question 10

In academic writing, the choice between active and passive voice is often a register decision as much as a grammatical one. A researcher writes the following sentence in the methods section of a scientific paper: "I mixed the two compounds together and then I heated the mixture to 200°C, and I recorded the temperature every five minutes." Which revision best reflects the register conventions of scientific academic writing in this context?

  1. We mixed the two compounds together, heated the mixture to 200°C, and recorded the temperature every five minutes during the experiment.
  2. The two compounds were combined, and the resulting mixture was heated to 200°C; temperature readings were recorded at five-minute intervals throughout the process. (correct answer)
  3. Mixing the two compounds, heating to 200°C, and recording the temperature at five-minute intervals were the primary procedural steps undertaken.
  4. The researcher combined both compounds, applied heat until the mixture reached 200°C, and systematically recorded the temperature in five-minute increments.
Explanation: When you encounter questions about scientific writing style, think about register — the level of formality and the conventions specific to a discourse community. In academic science, methods sections traditionally deprioritize the researcher's identity and emphasize the procedures themselves. This is achieved through passive voice, precise technical vocabulary, and objective tone. Answer B achieves all of this elegantly. It uses passive constructions ("were combined," "was heated," "were recorded"), replaces casual phrasing like "mixed together" with the more precise "combined," and restructures the repetitive "every five minutes" into the formal "at five-minute intervals." The semicolon also improves cohesion between related procedural steps. This is exactly the impersonal, process-focused register scientific journals expect. Answer A improves on the original by reducing repetition of "I," but switching to "we" is not a true solution — it still foregrounds the researchers rather than the procedure. Many scientific journals explicitly discourage first-person voice in methods sections, so A merely softens the problem without fixing it. Answer C attempts a nominalized structure (turning verbs into noun phrases like "mixing" and "recording"), which can sometimes signal academic writing. However, the result is awkward and harder to follow — good academic writing is precise and clear, not just structurally complex for its own sake. Answer D uses third person, which feels more objective, but referring to "the researcher" in your own methods section is an unusual and somewhat distancing construction that doesn't align with standard scientific convention. Your study tip: in science writing questions, look for passive voice + formal vocabulary + absence of personal pronouns as the signature of correct methods-section register.