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Question 1
A writer is arguing for a “hybrid” learning approach: using both printed textbooks and tablets in class. The writer wants to distinguish this claim from two alternatives: (1) only printed textbooks and (2) only tablets. Which sentence best introduces the main claim by acknowledging both alternatives and clarifying how the hybrid approach differs?
- Some teachers insist on only printed textbooks because they reduce distractions, and these focused, screen-free lessons are the single best way to help every student learn important material effectively.
- Some teachers prefer only printed textbooks for focus, while others want only tablets for easy updates; however, classes should use a hybrid of both so students gain reliable print resources and interactive digital tools together. (correct answer)
- This essay will explain what printed textbooks are used for, what tablets are used for, and how both of these tools have appeared in classrooms over the past several years.
- Some teachers push for only tablets because updates are easy, and switching fully to digital devices is clearly the smartest choice for any modern classroom that hopes to stay current.
Explanation: The best introduction names both alternatives fairly—teachers who want only print "for focus" and teachers who want only tablets "for easy updates"—then states a clear hybrid position and explains how it differs by combining the benefits of both. That acknowledgment-plus-distinction is exactly what the question asks for.
The option arguing that print-only, screen-free lessons are "the single best way" picks one side instead of introducing a hybrid claim, so it never distinguishes the writer's actual position. The option promising to "explain what printed textbooks are used for" only announces a topic; it describes what the essay will cover without taking any arguable stance. The option calling all-digital "clearly the smartest choice" also commits to a single extreme rather than the hybrid approach, and it dismisses the other view instead of acknowledging it. Only the sentence that maps both alternatives and then carves out a distinct third position does the full job the prompt requires.
Question 2
A student wrote this introduction for an essay about school uniforms:
“School uniforms have been around for a long time in many places. There are different kinds of uniforms. Some students like uniforms and some do not. Uniforms can be expensive. Also, students want to express themselves. In conclusion, uniforms are a big topic.”
How could this introduction be improved to better introduce a clear claim and distinguish it from an opposing view?
- Open with more historical background about where and when uniforms first started, then hold the writer's position until the final paragraph so readers stay curious and keep reading to the very end.
- Cut every reference to students who disagree (such as those who value the uniformity that uniforms create) so the essay sounds bolder and does not risk confusing readers with two competing sides at once.
- Replace the opening with a straight dictionary definition of the word “uniform,” carefully listing its several meanings so that readers know exactly what the essay's key term refers to before continuing.
- State a specific thesis early (that uniforms should be optional), fairly acknowledge the strongest opposing reason (that uniforms reduce bullying), and explain why student expression and affordability matter more. (correct answer)
Explanation: The best revision does three things a strong argumentative introduction needs: it takes a clear, arguable position right away (uniforms should be optional), names the strongest reason the other side would give (that uniforms reduce bullying), and shows why the writer's values outweigh it. That both introduces a claim and distinguishes it from the opposing view.
Holding the writer's position until the final paragraph is wrong because a reader should know your claim from the start; delaying it leaves the introduction just as vague as the original. Cutting every mention of people who disagree is wrong because acknowledging the opposing side is required in argumentative writing—removing it makes the essay less complete, not bolder, and it never distinguishes a claim from a counterclaim. Opening with a dictionary definition is wrong because defining a term does not take a position or address the debate, so it never introduces an arguable claim at all.
Only one option introduces a specific claim, acknowledges the opposing view fairly, and explains why the claim wins.
Question 3
A student is writing an argumentative essay about smartphone use during the school day. The essay will be read by the principal and school board, and it must clearly state a thesis and acknowledge an opposing view. Which sentence best introduces an arguable, specific main claim while fairly acknowledging an opposing position?
- Smartphones are used by many students every day for texting, gaming, and schoolwork, and they can do a lot of different useful things during class and outside of it.
- Schools should allow students to use smartphones during lunch and passing periods for communication and organization; although some adults worry phones will distract students, limiting use to specific times balances focus with responsibility. (correct answer)
- I really like having my phone with me at school because it makes the long boring days go by faster and lets me talk to my friends whenever I feel like it.
- Many schools already have detailed rules about phones, and since students and parents often disagree about them, phone policies have become an important topic to consider carefully.
Explanation: The best sentence takes a clear, arguable position (allow phones during lunch and passing periods) and fairly names the opposing view (some adults worry phones distract students) before showing how limiting use to specific times answers that concern. It states a thesis and acknowledges disagreement, which is exactly what the essay needs.
The choice about smartphones being used for texting, gaming, and schoolwork only describes what phones do—it names the topic but never argues that schools should do anything, so it isn't a claim.
The choice about liking your phone because it makes boring days go faster is a personal preference. 'I like it' can't be argued with evidence, and it ignores any opposing view.
The choice about schools having detailed rules and people disagreeing points out that phone policies are an important topic, but it never says what the policy should be, so it takes no position at all.
Only one sentence both states a specific, debatable claim and fairly acknowledges the other side.
Question 4
A student is writing about the community and argues: “The city should build protected bike lanes on major roads to improve safety.” The student wants to acknowledge an opposing claim without misrepresenting it. Which sentence best acknowledges the opposing view while still distinguishing the student’s claim?
- Some residents claim that bike lanes are unnecessary; however, this view ignores that these opponents simply refuse to care about the wellbeing of cyclists who ride on busy roads.
- Some residents worry protected bike lanes could reduce parking or slow traffic; however, the city should prioritize preventing injuries, and careful planning can minimize this inconvenience. (correct answer)
- Some residents note that protected bike lanes already exist in nearby cities; meanwhile, many roads in our own community still have only painted lines running along both sides.
- Some residents support this proposal strongly; likewise, the lanes should be built because I would personally use them every single day on my own morning ride to school.
Explanation: The best answer names a concern opponents actually hold—that lanes could reduce parking or slow traffic—then keeps the writer's own priority distinct (preventing injuries) and offers a fair response (careful planning). It represents the other side honestly instead of distorting it. The choice saying opponents 'refuse to care about the wellbeing of cyclists' builds a straw man: it invents a hostile motive rather than stating the real concern, so it misrepresents the opposing view. The choice comparing nearby cities and painted lines only reports facts; it never states an opposing claim or distinguishes the writer's position, so it drops the argument entirely. The choice ending with 'I would personally use them every single day' rests on personal preference, not the shared reasoning an argument needs, and it never acknowledges any opposing view. Only one sentence both acknowledges the opposition fairly and keeps the writer's claim distinct.
Question 5
A writer is choosing a thesis for an essay about allowing phones during lunch. Which thesis statement is the strongest arguable claim (specific and debatable) for an 8th-grade argument essay?
- Many students at our school bring phones and use them regularly during their lunch period because the cafeteria is where they gather with friends.
- Our school should ban phone use during lunch because staring at screens is unhealthy and it takes away from real conversations at the table.
- Our school should allow phones during lunch only in designated areas because it supports family communication while protecting face-to-face social time. (correct answer)
- Our school should keep the current rules during lunch because I really enjoy my phone and it helps me relax after my busy morning classes.
Explanation: The strongest choice takes a specific, debatable position: allowing phones during lunch only in designated areas. It offers reasons a reader could support with evidence—helping families stay in touch while still protecting in-person time—and it balances two competing values, so reasonable people could genuinely disagree. That is exactly what an arguable thesis does. The claim that many students bring and use phones only describes a fact about what students do; it reports what happens but never argues what the school should do, so no one would dispute it. The claim that the school should ban phone use gives reasons but rests them on personal opinion—whether screens are 'unhealthy' or hurt 'real conversations' is asserted, not the kind of fair, defensible position you could back with evidence. The claim about keeping current rules looks like a policy statement, but its actual reason is a personal preference ('I really enjoy my phone'); an argument essay needs a position others can debate, not a defense of what you personally like. Only the designated-areas thesis states a clear position, offers reasons, and stays genuinely arguable.
Question 6
A writer argues that the school cafeteria should offer a daily vegetarian main option. The writer includes this sentence: “Some students and parents prefer the current menu because it is familiar and they worry vegetarian meals won’t be filling; however, adding one vegetarian option expands choice and can still meet nutrition needs.” How does the writer distinguish their claim from the opposing position?
- The writer restates the opposing position word for word and adopts it as the claim, so both sides end up wanting exactly the same familiar menu.
- The writer shows a difference in priorities: opponents value the familiar current menu, while the claim focuses on expanding choices and meeting nutrition needs. (correct answer)
- The writer treats the opposing position as a fact everyone accepts, so no arguable claim is actually introduced and both positions simply agree.
- The writer dismisses the opposing position by insisting vegetarian meals are always cheaper, a point the sentence never raises or supports at all.
Explanation: The writer names what the other side cares about—keeping a familiar menu and fearing meals won't be filling—and then, with "however," points to a different priority: expanding choice while still meeting nutrition needs. That contrast in priorities is exactly how a writer distinguishes their claim from an opposing position without ignoring it. The choice about restating the opposition and adopting it is wrong because the word "however" signals the writer disagrees, not agrees—the two sides do not want the same thing. The choice claiming no arguable claim exists is wrong because the sentence clearly takes a debatable position (add one vegetarian option), which is arguable, not a fact everyone accepts. The choice about vegetarian meals being cheaper is wrong because the sentence never mentions cost or price at all; it responds to the worry about filling meals, not money. Only the priorities answer accurately describes the move the writer makes.
Question 7
A writer is introducing an argument about school technology, aiming to argue for a hybrid approach in which students use both printed textbooks and tablets. Some people prefer only printed books, and others prefer only tablets. Which introduction most effectively states the writer's position?
- Some families prefer printed textbooks for their reliability, while others insist tablets should replace books entirely; therefore, schools should abandon printed books completely and move all learning onto digital devices as soon as possible.
- Some people favor traditional printed textbooks, while others argue that tablets should replace books completely; therefore, this essay will carefully describe and explain each of these different opinions before reaching a final decision.
- Some families prefer traditional printed textbooks, while others argue that tablets should replace books entirely; however, schools should combine the two so students gain the focus of print and the resources of digital tools. (correct answer)
- Some students find printed textbooks helpful, while others prefer tablets for their apps; still, everyone knows tablets are simply better because they include games and features that make school feel far more fun.
Explanation: The strongest introduction names both sides—people who favor print and people who want tablets to replace books—and then commits to a clear, arguable position: schools should combine the two so students get the focus of print and the resources of digital tools. That is a genuine third stance, distinct from either extreme. One option acknowledges both sides but then concludes schools should 'abandon printed books completely'; that adopts one of the extreme positions the writer is arguing against, not the hybrid claim. Another option lists the opposing views but only promises to 'describe and explain each of these different opinions before reaching a final decision'; announcing a topic is not the same as stating a position, so no claim is actually introduced. The last option ends with 'everyone knows tablets are simply better' and points to games and fun; it relies on an unsupported assertion and a non-academic reason, so it fails to present a defensible claim. Only the hybrid answer both acknowledges the alternate views and states a specific, arguable position.
Question 8
A student’s topic is whether students should be required to complete community service to graduate from middle school. Which thesis statement is the strongest arguable claim (specific and debatable), rather than a topic or a vague opinion?
- Community service is when people volunteer their time to help others in their community, and many schools now offer such programs to students.
- Students should probably do some community service before they graduate because helping out is generally a good and worthwhile thing to do.
- Middle school students should complete at least 15 hours of community service to graduate because required service builds civic responsibility and connects learning to real community needs. (correct answer)
- Volunteering can be enjoyable and rewarding, so most people would likely agree that students benefit from doing at least a little community service.
Explanation: The strongest thesis takes a specific, debatable position and gives reasons: requiring at least 15 hours to graduate is an exact requirement reasonable people could argue about, and the because-clause names why the requirement matters. That makes it a claim you could support with evidence, not just a topic or preference. The option that explains what community service is only defines the term—it describes a concept instead of taking a stand anyone could dispute. The option saying students 'should probably do some' service because it is 'good and worthwhile' does take a position, but it is too vague to argue or support: no amount, no requirement, no clear reasoning. The option about volunteering being 'enjoyable' that 'most people would likely agree' with fails because it rests on personal feeling and claims everyone agrees—if a claim isn't actually debatable, it can't be an arguable thesis. Only the specific, evidence-based requirement gives you a real position to defend.
Question 9
A writer’s thesis is: “Middle schools should delay start times to 8:30 a.m.” Which outline best shows a logical organization of reasons and evidence, including a counterargument?
- Describe how early starts feel annoying (share personal opinion); 2) Detail the writer’s typical morning routine step by step (add personal narrative); 3) Mention sleep research briefly without explaining it (reference a source vaguely); 4) End without addressing any concerns or objections (close on the personal note).
- Explain adolescent sleep needs (evidence from pediatric recommendations); 2) Connect more sleep to better attention and grades (evidence from school studies); 3) Address the counterargument about bus schedules and activities (offer solutions); 4) Conclude by restating why benefits outweigh costs (tie back to thesis).
(correct answer)
- Provide a long history of clocks and time zones (add background details); 2) List every school’s current start time in the state (compile a full survey); 3) Note how hard scheduling changes can be (stress the obstacles); 4) Conclude that changing start times is basically impossible (reject the thesis).
- Give statistics with no explanation of what they mean (drop in raw numbers); 2) Add unrelated facts about the cafeteria food menu (include off-topic content); 3) Save the thesis statement for the very end (delay the main claim); 4) Ignore any counterarguments readers might raise (skip opposing views).
Explanation: The best outline actually builds the argument: it opens with adolescent sleep needs backed by pediatric recommendations, links more sleep to better attention and grades using school studies, fairly handles the counterargument about bus schedules and activities by offering solutions, and ends by tying the benefits back to the thesis. Each reason supports the claim, each has matching evidence, and the opposing view comes before the conclusion.
The outline built on personal opinion and a detailed morning routine leans on feelings instead of evidence and never answers objections. The outline that surveys clock history and every school’s start time drifts into background that doesn’t support the thesis and ends by declaring change impossible, which argues against the claim rather than for it. The outline with unexplained statistics, cafeteria facts, and a thesis buried at the very end is disorganized and ignores counterarguments entirely. Only the outline that introduces the claim, supports it with reasons and evidence, and distinguishes it from the opposing view meets what the stem asks.
Question 10
A student is writing an argumentative essay about a school policy. The topic is whether the school should require all students to wear uniforms. The writer wants an introduction that (1) clearly states a thesis, (2) acknowledges an opposing view fairly, and (3) distinguishes the writer’s claim from that opposing view. Which introduction best does all three?
- School uniforms are an interesting topic, and people across the country have argued about them for many years in a variety of different ways.
- Many schools now require uniforms, and while some students dislike them, uniforms come in a wide range of colors, fabrics, and styles that suit everyone.
- Although some students argue that uniforms limit self-expression, our school should require uniforms because they reduce clothing-based bullying and help students focus on learning rather than fashion. (correct answer)
- Uniforms are the better choice because they save time in the morning, and honestly nobody enjoys picking out a new outfit every single day.
Explanation: The best introduction states a clear, arguable thesis ("our school should require uniforms"), fairly names the opposing view ("some students argue that uniforms limit self-expression"), and distinguishes the writer's claim by giving reasons that outweigh that objection (reducing bullying and improving focus). That combination does all three things the prompt asks. The choice calling uniforms "an interesting topic" that people argue about only announces a subject—it never takes a position, so there is no thesis to defend. The choice describing colors, fabrics, and styles mentions that some students dislike uniforms but never states the writer's own claim; it lists facts everyone agrees on instead of arguing anything. The choice about saving time and disliking new outfits does state a position, but it rests on personal preference and convenience rather than acknowledging or answering the opposing view, so it fails to distinguish a defensible claim. Only the winning introduction sets up a real argument by handling all three tasks at once.
Question 11
A writer is arguing that the town should ban single-use plastic bags at local stores. They plan to address three different counterarguments: (1) it will hurt businesses, (2) it limits personal choice, and (3) it won’t make a real environmental difference. Which plan best distinguishes these opposing claims and responds in a logical way?
- State the thesis; then bundle all three counterarguments into one paragraph (business worries, choice worries, and environmental worries together), respond with the general point that plastic is harmful, and restate the thesis to close the essay.
- Open with a story about the writer’s favorite store; then move between business costs and wildlife facts as they come to mind (mentioning jobs, then litter, then prices), letting the reader infer how each detail connects to the proposed bag ban.
- State the thesis; then explain why plastic pollution is bad (photos of harmed animals and choked rivers), argue that people who oppose the ban simply do not care about the environment, and end the essay on that point.
- State the thesis; then address each counterargument in its own section—business impact (evidence from towns with small fees and transition periods), personal choice (how reusable options remain available), and environmental effect (data on litter reduction)—before concluding. (correct answer)
Explanation: The strongest plan states a clear position and then gives each opposing claim its own section, answering it with fitting evidence—fee and transition data for business worries, reusable options for the choice worry, and litter data for the environmental worry—before concluding. This both separates the three counterarguments and responds to each logically. The plan that folds all three counterarguments into one paragraph and answers only with the broad idea that plastic is harmful never treats the concerns individually, so it fails to distinguish the opposing claims. The plan that opens with a personal store story and drifts between business costs and wildlife facts leaves the connections unexplained, so it lacks the logical organization the task requires. The plan that dismisses opponents as people who "do not care about the environment" attacks a straw man instead of fairly stating and answering their actual concerns. Only the sectioned plan distinguishes each opposing claim and responds to it with relevant evidence, so it is the best choice.
Question 12
A student is drafting an essay about whether the city should build more protected bike lanes near schools. The student wants an introduction that maps the debate (different viewpoints) and then states a clear thesis. Which introduction does this most effectively?
- While some families see painted bike lanes as helpful markings on busy roads, others point out that many streets near schools do not have them yet; this essay will describe how bike lanes are painted and where the city has installed them so far.
- While supporters claim protected bike lanes are the best idea the city has ever had, opponents are simply people who do not care about children; therefore the city must build protected lanes everywhere because no reasonable person could ever disagree with keeping kids safe.
- While some people ride bikes to school and others walk or take the bus, everyone travels somehow near these busy streets; this essay will talk about the different ways students get to school and about bikes and safety in general.
- While some residents support protected bike lanes to prevent crashes, others worry they reduce parking and slow traffic; the city should still build protected lanes near schools because student safety outweighs the inconvenience to drivers. (correct answer)
Explanation: The best introduction maps the debate AND lands on a clear, arguable thesis. It fairly names both sides—supporters wanting to prevent crashes, and residents worried about parking and traffic—then takes a definite position: the city should build the lanes because safety outweighs driver inconvenience. That is a claim reasonable people could debate, and it shows why one side is prioritized.
The option about painted markings names two viewpoints but never takes a position; it only promises to describe what bike lanes are and where they exist, which is a topic, not a thesis.
The option calling the lanes 'the best idea ever' and labeling opponents as people who do not care about children takes a position but misrepresents the other side unfairly. A straw-man caricature and an absolute claim that 'no reasonable person could disagree' is not a fair mapping of the debate.
The option about walking, biking, and the bus lists ways students travel but only promises to 'talk about' bikes and safety in general. It announces a topic without stating what the city should actually do, so there is no arguable claim.
Only the last option both fairly maps opposing viewpoints and commits to a specific, defensible thesis.
Question 13
A writer argues that the school cafeteria should offer a vegetarian main dish every day. The writer includes this sentence: “Some students say adding vegetarian options is unnecessary because the current menu already has enough choices, but a daily vegetarian main dish ensures students with dietary needs can eat a full, healthy lunch.” How does the writer distinguish their claim from the opposing view?
- By treating the opposing view as unreasonable, suggesting that students who like the current menu simply do not care about eating a healthy lunch.
- By restating the opposing view about menu variety and then agreeing with it, concluding that the current choices are already enough for everyone.
- By showing that the opposing view values having enough menu choices, while the main claim prioritizes meeting students' dietary needs with a complete meal. (correct answer)
- By dismissing the opposing view as false, claiming the current menu fails because no student truly enjoys any of the meals it offers.
Explanation: The correct answer explains that the writer names the opposing concern—that the menu already has enough choices—and then shows a different priority: guaranteeing that students with dietary needs can eat a full, healthy meal. This fairly represents both sides but makes clear why the writer's position matters more.
The choice about treating the opposing view as unreasonable is wrong because the sentence never insults or dismisses students who like the current menu; it states their concern fairly. The choice about restating the opposing view and then agreeing with it is wrong because the writer does not agree—the word "but" signals a clear disagreement, not acceptance. The choice about dismissing the opposing view as false is wrong because the writer never claims the current menu fails or that no one likes it; instead of proving the other side false, the writer shows why the daily vegetarian option meets a need the current variety does not. Only the correct answer captures how the writer distinguishes the two views by contrasting their priorities.
Question 14
A student is writing an argument that the school should replace most detentions with a restorative justice program (guided conversations, problem-solving meetings, and making amends). Some teachers argue detentions are faster and easier to manage. Which sentence best introduces the student’s claim while acknowledging and distinguishing the opposing claim?
- The school should keep using detentions because they are quick and easy to run; students should follow the rules, and consequences help everyone remember what the expectations are at school.
- The school should try new approaches to discipline because the old system is unfair to students; teachers who rely on detentions are ignoring how much better conversations can be for everyone.
- The school should replace most detentions with a restorative program because it addresses the causes of conflict; although some teachers prefer detentions for being quicker, long-term solutions matter more than short-term convenience. (correct answer)
- The school should think carefully about detention because there are strong points on every side; both restorative programs and detentions are common, so each approach clearly has real value worth considering.
Explanation: The best answer states a clear, arguable position—that the school should replace most detentions with a restorative program—and gives a reason: it addresses the causes of conflict. It then fairly acknowledges the opposing view (some teachers prefer detentions because they are quicker) and distinguishes it by explaining why long-term solutions outweigh short-term convenience. That combination is exactly what a strong claim introduction does.
The choice defending detentions and telling students to follow the rules takes a position, but it argues the opposite of the student's claim, so it can't introduce this argument. The choice about trying new approaches sounds argumentative, but it relies on hostile language (calling teachers unfair and accusing them of ignoring students) instead of fairly acknowledging the other side. The choice saying there are strong points on every side never actually commits to a position; praising both approaches equally is not a claim a reader could argue for or against.
Only one option introduces a specific claim while acknowledging and distinguishing the opposing view.
Question 15
A student is writing about homework limits. They want to acknowledge an opposing view but still clearly state their own claim. Which sentence best does both?
- Although some students dislike homework because it feels boring, middle schools should ban all homework entirely so that kids can finally relax and enjoy their free time after school.
- Although some parents believe homework is important, the truth is that homework is a complicated subject that depends on the teacher, the grade level, and the type of assignment being given.
- Although some teachers argue that more homework builds discipline and test scores, middle schools should limit homework to 60 minutes nightly so students have time for sleep and activities. (correct answer)
- Although researchers have published many studies about homework, students and parents alike continue to hold many different opinions about how much homework is really the right amount.
Explanation: The best sentence fairly acknowledges an opposing view and then states a clear, arguable claim. The winning sentence recognizes that some teachers value homework for building discipline and test scores, then states a specific position—limiting homework to 60 minutes per night—and gives a reason (time for sleep and activities). That combination of a fair opposing view plus a debatable position is exactly what the question asks for. The sentence about banning all homework so kids can relax leans on personal preference ('feels boring,' 'enjoy their free time') rather than an evidence-based claim, so it does not argue a reasonable position. The sentence calling homework 'a complicated subject that depends on the teacher' acknowledges others but never takes a side—describing something as complicated is not stating a claim. The sentence about researchers publishing studies and people holding different opinions only reports that a debate exists; it never says what the writer thinks should happen. Only one choice both respects the other side and commits to a clear, arguable claim.
Question 16
A student wrote this introduction for an essay about banning single-use plastic water bottles at school: “Plastic bottles are everywhere. They are made of plastic. Some people recycle them. This essay will talk about plastic bottles.” How could the student best improve the introduction to clearly introduce an arguable claim and acknowledge an opposing view?
- Add more background facts and stay neutral, such as: “Plastic bottles are manufactured cheaply and shipped worldwide, and this essay will present both sides fairly so that readers can decide the issue for themselves.”
- Replace it with a thesis that takes a stance and answers disagreement, such as: “Our school should ban single-use plastic water bottles to reduce waste; although some students argue bans are inconvenient, refill stations solve that problem.” (correct answer)
- Keep the list of general facts but announce the topic more clearly, such as: “Plastic bottles matter to everyone, and this essay will discuss the many different sides of the plastic bottle debate here at our school.”
- Change it into a stronger emotional appeal, such as: “Plastic bottles are a huge problem, and our school really needs to do something about them soon before it is too late for us.”
Explanation: The best revision names a debatable position (“should ban”), gives a reason (“to reduce waste”), and then names and answers an opposing view (“some students argue bans are inconvenient…refill stations solve that problem”). That is exactly what an arguable claim with an acknowledged counterargument looks like. The option that adds background facts but stays neutral so readers “decide for themselves” fails because an argument essay needs a stance—staying neutral means there is no claim at all. The option that keeps the fact list and adds “discuss the many different sides” still only announces a topic; it never states what the writer thinks or answers any opposing view. The option that swaps in an emotional appeal (“a huge problem…needs to do something”) sounds urgent but is vague—it names no specific position and ignores the other side entirely. Only the thesis option both takes an arguable stance and distinguishes it from the opposing view.
Question 17
A writer is arguing that the school should limit smartphone use during the school day to improve focus. The writer wants a thesis that is specific (not too broad), arguable, and placed early, and that acknowledges an alternate claim that phones can be useful for learning. Which thesis statement best meets these goals?
- Smartphones have become part of daily life, and nearly every student at our school carries one and uses it throughout the day for research, messaging, and many other everyday purposes.
- Our school should ban every form of technology from the building; although some tools seem helpful, technology is always distracting and never helps students learn anything useful during class.
- I really don't like seeing phones at school, and although a few students think they are handy, I honestly believe the school should just take them all away because they annoy everyone.
- Our school should require students to keep smartphones in lockers during class; although phones can help with research and organization, structured limits protect learning without eliminating educational uses. (correct answer)
Explanation: The best thesis takes a clear, specific position (keeping phones in lockers during class), stays arguable because reasonable people could disagree, and fairly acknowledges the alternate view that phones help with research and organization before explaining why limits still make sense. That is exactly what the prompt asks for. The choice saying smartphones have become part of daily life only reports facts about how common phones are; it names the topic but never takes an arguable position, so it isn't a thesis. The total-ban choice claims technology is 'always distracting and never helps'; even with its brief nod to helpful tools, that absolute, all-technology claim is too broad to defend and dismisses the alternate view rather than answering it. The 'I really don't like' choice rests on personal annoyance rather than a reasoned position, and its mention of a few students who find phones handy is brushed aside instead of genuinely weighed, so it isn't arguable the way an argument thesis must be. Only the locker-policy statement is specific, arguable, and fair to the opposing claim while still defending its own position.
Question 18
A writer’s claim is: “The school should replace most paper worksheets with digital assignments.” An opposing view is: “Paper is better because it reduces screen time and is easier for some students to read.” Which sentence most effectively acknowledges the opposing view fairly while still distinguishing and supporting the writer’s claim?
- Although digital assignments may improve organization and feedback, paper is easier for some students to read, so the school should keep using worksheets for every assignment and avoid any big changes to the current system.
- Although paper can reduce screen time and may be easier for some students, switching most assignments to digital formats will improve organization and feedback, and screen-time limits or printed copies can address those remaining concerns. (correct answer)
- Although paper worksheets and digital assignments each may offer some real advantages, the two sides basically agree, and either choice would work about equally well for the school going forward with either format.
- Although people who prefer paper raise a point about screen time, they simply do not understand technology, so the school should ignore their outdated views and move everything to digital assignments right away.
Explanation: The best answer fairly restates the opposing view—that paper reduces screen time and helps some students read—then keeps the writer’s claim by naming a real advantage of digital work (better organization and feedback) and offering solutions like screen-time limits or printed copies. It both acknowledges and distinguishes the two positions.
The choice that admits digital could improve organization but then decides the school should keep paper for everything drops the writer’s claim and sides with the opposing view instead of supporting it. The choice that says both sides basically agree and either format works never distinguishes the positions or explains why digital is better—it just calls them equal. The choice that says paper supporters “do not understand technology” attacks people with a straw man instead of fairly addressing their real concern. Only the best answer respects the opposing view while clearly arguing for the writer’s claim.