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Question 1
A student argues that students should be allowed to redo major assignments.
Draft:
"Some teachers worry that allowing redos will encourage students to procrastinate. this objection overlooks the fact that redos can be limited to one per unit and require students to complete extra practice first."
Which transition best refutes the counterclaim and signals a rebuttal?
- Nevertheless, (correct answer)
- For example,
- In addition,
- As a result,
Explanation: This question tests using transition words, phrases, and clauses to create cohesion and clarify relationships among claims, counterclaims, reasons, and evidence in argumentative writing. Transitions create cohesion by connecting ideas and clarifying relationships: Addition transitions (furthermore, additionally, moreover, also, another reason) add supporting points ("Schools should extend lunch periods. Furthermore, longer lunches improve student focus in afternoon classes"—"Furthermore" signals additional reason supporting claim). Sequence transitions (first, second, next, finally) order multiple points ("First, extended lunches allow adequate eating time. Second, they provide social interaction. Finally, they reduce afternoon fatigue"—sequence transitions organize three reasons clearly). Contrast transitions (however, nevertheless, in contrast, on the other hand, whereas, although) show opposing ideas ("Longer lunch periods benefit students. However, critics argue they reduce instructional time"—"However" signals shift from claim to counterclaim, clarifies this is opposition). Concession transitions (admittedly, granted, while it is true, although) acknowledge opposing points before refuting ("Admittedly, longer lunches reduce class time. Nevertheless, improved focus during remaining class time offsets this loss"—"Admittedly" concedes counterargument, "Nevertheless" refutes it). The draft presents a counterclaim (teachers worry about procrastination) followed by a rebuttal (this overlooks limitations on redos). "Nevertheless" (A) correctly signals this rebuttal relationship, showing that despite the teachers' concern, the objection can be addressed through specific limitations. "For example" (B) wrongly suggests the rebuttal is evidence for the teachers' worry; "In addition" (C) incorrectly implies adding to the counterclaim rather than refuting it; "As a result" (D) wrongly suggests the rebuttal is caused by the teachers' worry. Effective rebuttals require transitions that signal opposition to the counterclaim while maintaining logical flow—"Nevertheless" achieves this by acknowledging the concern exists but arguing it can be overcome.
Question 2
A student is writing an essay supporting longer lunch periods at school.
Draft:
"Longer lunches give students enough time to eat. They are less likely to rush and skip healthy foods. some administrators worry that a longer lunch would shorten class time."
Which transition best introduces the counterclaim and signals a shift to an opposing view?
- As a result,
- In the same way,
- However, (correct answer)
- In addition,
Explanation: The first two sentences give reasons that support longer lunches. The sentence after the blank switches to an opposing view: some administrators worry about lost class time. To connect a supporting point to a counterclaim, you need a contrast transition. "However" signals that shift, telling readers an opposing idea is coming. "As a result" claims the administrators' worry is caused by students having time to eat, but that cause-and-effect relationship does not exist here. "In the same way" signals that the next idea agrees with the reasons before it, yet the worry about shortened class time actually disagrees with them. "In addition" signals another supporting point, but the administrators' concern is an objection, not one more reason favoring longer lunches. Only a contrast transition matches the true relationship between the support and the opposing view, so "However" is the best choice.
Question 3
A student is writing an argument that the school should start classes 30 minutes later. Read the draft sentences.
Claim: School should start later.
Reason: Teens need more sleep to focus.
Evidence: A local survey found that 62% of students get fewer than 8 hours of sleep on school nights.
Which transition best connects the reason to the evidence?
"Teens need more sleep to focus. a local survey found that 62% of students get fewer than 8 hours of sleep on school nights."
- In contrast,
- For instance, (correct answer)
- As a result,
- On the other hand,
Explanation: The reason states a general idea—teens need more sleep to focus. The evidence, a survey showing 62% of students get too little sleep, is a specific example that backs up that idea. "For instance" is the transition that introduces a specific example supporting a general point, so it fits the relationship exactly.
"In contrast" signals that two ideas oppose each other, but the survey supports the reason rather than disagreeing with it. "On the other hand" also introduces an opposing viewpoint, so it wrongly suggests the evidence pushes against the reason instead of proving it. "As a result" signals cause and effect, implying the survey happened because teens need sleep; but the survey is evidence of the problem, not a consequence of it. Only "For instance" correctly shows the survey illustrating and supporting the reason.
Question 4
A student is arguing that the school should keep arts electives (band, chorus, and art) even when budgets are tight.
Draft:
"Arts classes help students express themselves and stay engaged in school. opponents argue that electives should be cut so the school can focus on tested subjects."
Which transition best shows contrast between the claim and the counterclaim?
- For this reason,
- In contrast, (correct answer)
- In the same way,
- As a result,
Explanation: The draft moves from a claim (arts classes help students express themselves and stay engaged) to an opposing viewpoint (opponents want electives cut). That shift from support to opposition calls for a contrast transition. "In contrast" signals that a different, opposing idea is coming, which is exactly the relationship between the claim and the counterclaim. "For this reason" signals cause and effect, wrongly suggesting the opponents' position results from arts classes helping students. "In the same way" signals agreement or similarity, wrongly implying the counterclaim supports the same idea as the claim. "As a result" also signals cause and effect, wrongly suggesting the push to cut electives is an outcome of arts classes being helpful. Only "In contrast" clearly marks the sentence as an opposing viewpoint, alerting readers that the writer is now acknowledging the other side of the argument.
Question 5
A student is arguing that the city should build more bike lanes.
Draft:
"Bike lanes make streets safer for cyclists. they also reduce traffic because more people choose to bike instead of drive."
Which transition best fits the blank to connect the two ideas?
- Additionally, this second point strengthens the argument for bike lanes. (correct answer)
- Nevertheless, this second point weakens the argument for bike lanes.
- For example, this second point illustrates the first point about bike lanes.
- On the other hand, this second point contradicts the first point about bike lanes.
Explanation: Both sentences give reasons that support building more bike lanes: one about safety and one about reducing traffic. Because the second reason adds to the first, you need a transition that signals addition. "Additionally" does exactly that, showing the second reason builds on the first while both support the same claim. "Nevertheless" signals contrast, as if the second idea pushes against the first, but here the two ideas agree, so it misreads the relationship. "For example" would tell the reader the second sentence is an illustration of the first, yet reducing traffic is a separate reason, not an example of streets being safer. "On the other hand" sets up an opposition between two ideas, which does not fit when both points argue for the same thing. To choose correctly, notice whether the two reasons work together or clash—here they cooperate, so only an addition transition keeps the writing cohesive.
Question 6
A student is building an argument that schools should limit homework on weeknights. The student has already stated one reason and now wants to add a second, separate reason in an ordered list.
Draft:
"Students need time after school for family responsibilities and activities. too much homework can reduce sleep, which makes it harder to learn the next day."
Which transition best shows sequence and introduces the second reason?
- For example, showing that this idea is an illustration of the first point
- In contrast, showing that this idea opposes the first point
- Second, showing that this idea is the next point in order (correct answer)
- As a result, showing that this idea is caused by the first point
Explanation: The writer is listing separate reasons that support the same claim, so the blank needs a sequence transition that introduces the next point in order. "Second" does exactly this, signaling that reduced sleep is a new, additional reason alongside the family-time reason. "For example" is wrong because it labels the sleep idea as an illustration of the family-responsibilities reason, but sleep is not an example of family time—it is a distinct reason. "In contrast" is wrong because it signals opposition, yet both statements support limiting homework rather than disagreeing. "As a result" is wrong because it claims a cause-and-effect link, suggesting family responsibilities cause reduced sleep, when the two ideas are simply separate supporting reasons. Only a sequence transition correctly organizes multiple reasons for readers, so "Second" is the best choice.