Choose Precise and Concise Language Practice Test

A student is revising to use a strong verb instead of a weak verb + noun.

Wordy version: “Jada made a decision to join the debate club.”

Which revision is most concise while keeping the meaning?

A student wants to revise a sentence to be more precise and concise.

Vague, wordy version (18 words): “There are many different people who think that the idea is a good one that should be considered.”

Which revision is best?