Develop Writing Through Planning and Revising Practice Test

A student is revising this draft to improve organization. Which revision strategy would best help the ideas flow logically?

Student draft (drafting): "First, we should recycle at school. Also, our principal is nice. Recycling saves energy. We could put bins in every hallway."

A student is revising for word choice. Which revision best replaces the repetitive word good with more specific language?

Student draft (revising stage):

"Reading is good for your brain. It is a good way to learn new words."