5th Grade Writing Quiz: Provide Conclusion For Narrative

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Read the narrative. Which conclusion best follows from the narrated events and returns to the beginning with change?

Emma brought her homemade cookies to the school bake sale. Last year, she had stood behind the table and barely spoke to anyone. This year, she wanted to help more, but she still felt shy. Before the sale started, Emma made a price sign and arranged the cookies in neat rows. When the first customers came, Emma whispered the prices, and her friend Sofia had to repeat them. Emma took a breath and tried again, using a clear voice like she practiced at home. A teacher bought two cookies and said, "Thanks for speaking up. I can hear you now." Emma started smiling when she handed out napkins and counted change. By the end, there were only crumbs left on the tray, and Emma's feet were tired from standing all afternoon.

Emma won a million dollars from a surprise lottery ticket under the table. She bought a mansion and a helicopter. The ending introduces a new event that was not in the story.

Emma went home and decided she would never talk to anyone again. She hid the money from the bake sale and refused to help next year. This ending does not match her growing confidence.

As Emma packed up the table, she remembered how quiet she had been last year. This time, she had talked to customers, handled money, and even joked with Sofia. Walking out of the cafeteria, she felt proud that she had changed.

Emma said the bake sale was fun. That is all the ending explains. It does not connect to her shyness or what she did differently this year.

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5th Grade Writing Quiz: Provide Conclusion For Narrative

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Question 1

Read the narrative. Which conclusion best follows from the narrated events and returns to the beginning with change?

Emma won a million dollars from a surprise lottery ticket under the table. She bought a mansion and a helicopter. The ending introduces a new event that was not in the story.
Emma went home and decided she would never talk to anyone again. She hid the money from the bake sale and refused to help next year. This ending does not match her growing confidence.
As Emma packed up the table, she remembered how quiet she had been last year. This time, she had talked to customers, handled money, and even joked with Sofia. Walking out of the cafeteria, she felt proud that she had changed. (correct answer)
Emma said the bake sale was fun. That is all the ending explains. It does not connect to her shyness or what she did differently this year.

Explanation: This question tests 5th grade narrative writing skill: providing a conclusion that follows from the narrated experiences or events (CCSS.W.5.3.e). A conclusion that follows from the narrative means the ending connects logically to what was narrated in the story. It should resolve the problem or situation shown, reflect on the experiences described, show change that resulted from events narrated, or demonstrate the impact of the experience. The conclusion uses information from the narrative - not introducing new elements or making claims unsupported by the events. In this narrative, Emma overcomes her shyness at the bake sale through gradual progress from last year to this year. The events showed her starting shy again but making improvements: creating signs, practicing clear speech, receiving encouragement, and successfully interacting with customers throughout the sale. An effective conclusion must address this arc by showing her recognition of how much she's changed from last year. Choice C is correct because it explicitly compares her quiet behavior last year to her accomplishments this year (talking to customers, handling money, joking with Sofia), and shows her feeling proud of her change while packing up. This follows from the narrative because it directly references both time periods mentioned and specific actions that demonstrate her growth. Choice D is incorrect because saying the bake sale was 'fun' provides no connection to her shyness journey or recognition of her personal growth from last year to this year. This does NOT follow from the narrated events because it fails to address the central arc of overcoming shyness that frames the entire narrative. To help students: Before writing conclusion, review narrative to identify main arc (What problem did I show? What experience did I narrate? What changed?). Ask 'Does my ending address what I developed in the middle?' and 'Does my ending use information from my story?'. Practice comparing strong conclusions (resolve using story events, reflect on specific experiences) with weak conclusions (introduce new elements, make generic statements, leave arc unresolved). Use story map to plan: beginning setup → middle events → conclusion that follows. Watch for: ending abruptly without resolution, introducing new information in conclusion, writing generic 'I learned a lot' without connecting to specific events, resolving different problem than one shown, stating lessons unsupported by narrative, jumping to unrelated future, forgetting to show how events changed character/situation, contradicting earlier events.

Question 2

Read the narrative. Which ending best follows from the narrated events and completes the relationship change?

Marcus was assigned to work with Yuki on a science poster. Marcus liked to finish fast, but Yuki liked to plan carefully. On the first day, Marcus started coloring the title without asking, and Yuki frowned. "We should agree on the layout first," she said. Marcus felt annoyed, but he stopped and listened as Yuki sketched a neat design in pencil. The next day, Marcus brought extra markers and asked, "Which colors match your plan?" Yuki smiled a little and handed him the key for the diagram. When they disagreed about one picture, Marcus suggested they check the textbook instead of arguing. They both laughed when they realized they had been talking about two different pages. By the end of the week, their poster looked organized and bright.

Marcus decided the real problem was that he didn't like science at all. He asked to switch to a different class, even though the poster was already done. The story becomes about changing schedules.
Marcus said the project was "nice." That is all the ending says. It does not show how he and Yuki worked together.
A famous singer came to the classroom and invited Marcus to go on tour. Marcus left school that day and never returned. Yuki finished the poster alone.
On presentation day, Marcus and Yuki took turns explaining the poster without interrupting each other. After class, Marcus said, "Next time, let's plan first," and Yuki nodded. They walked to lunch together, feeling like a real team. (correct answer)

Explanation: This question tests 5th grade narrative writing skill: providing a conclusion that follows from the narrated experiences or events (CCSS.W.5.3.e). A conclusion that follows from the narrative means the ending connects logically to what was narrated in the story. It should resolve the problem or situation shown, reflect on the experiences described, show change that resulted from events narrated, or demonstrate the impact of the experience. The conclusion uses information from the narrative - not introducing new elements or making claims unsupported by the events. In this narrative, Marcus and Yuki struggle to work together due to different work styles but gradually learn to compromise and collaborate. The events showed them moving from conflict (Marcus coloring without asking) to cooperation (asking about colors, checking textbook together, laughing about their misunderstanding). An effective conclusion must address this arc by showing them successfully presenting together and acknowledging their teamwork growth. Choice A is correct because it shows them taking turns without interrupting (demonstrating learned cooperation), Marcus suggesting they plan first next time (showing he values Yuki's approach), and them walking to lunch together as a 'real team' (reflecting their relationship change). This follows from the narrative because it uses the collaboration skills they developed and shows their transformed relationship. Choice D is incorrect because saying the project was 'nice' provides no information about their teamwork or relationship change, leaving the main arc unresolved. This does NOT follow from the narrated events because it fails to show how their initial conflict was resolved or how they learned to work together. To help students: Before writing conclusion, review narrative to identify main arc (What problem did I show? What experience did I narrate? What changed?). Ask 'Does my ending address what I developed in the middle?' and 'Does my ending use information from my story?'. Practice comparing strong conclusions (resolve using story events, reflect on specific experiences) with weak conclusions (introduce new elements, make generic statements, leave arc unresolved). Use story map to plan: beginning setup → middle events → conclusion that follows. Watch for: ending abruptly without resolution, introducing new information in conclusion, writing generic 'I learned a lot' without connecting to specific events, resolving different problem than one shown, stating lessons unsupported by narrative, jumping to unrelated future, forgetting to show how events changed character/situation, contradicting earlier events.

Question 3

Read the narrative. Which revision creates a conclusion that follows from the story's events?

Emma was excited to enter the school's recycled-art contest. She collected bottle caps, cardboard, and old magazines from her neighbors. At first, she tried to glue everything into a tall tower, but it leaned and fell over. Emma felt frustrated and almost started over, but her teacher suggested building a wide base first. Emma cut a thick piece of cardboard, taped it firmly, and tested it by pushing gently. The tower still wobbled until she added three "support legs" made from rolled magazines. After that, the sculpture stood straight, and Emma added colorful bottle caps in patterns. On contest day, she carried the sculpture carefully into the gym and set it on the display table.

Emma suddenly decided to quit school and move to another country. She left the sculpture behind and never thought about it again. Everyone was confused.
Emma learned that art is important. She was happy. The contest was fun.
Emma saw her sculpture standing steady and remembered how the wide base and support legs helped. When judges stopped by, she explained her building choices and smiled. No matter the results, she felt proud she solved the wobbling problem. (correct answer)
Emma placed the sculpture on the table and then the story ends immediately. The reader never finds out how Emma feels or what she learned. Nothing is wrapped up.

Explanation: This question tests 5th grade narrative writing skill: providing a conclusion that follows from the narrated experiences or events (CCSS.W.5.3.e). A conclusion that follows from the narrative means the ending connects logically to what was narrated in the story. It should resolve the problem or situation shown, reflect on the experiences described, show change that resulted from events narrated, or demonstrate the impact of the experience. The conclusion uses information from the narrative - not introducing new elements or making claims unsupported by the events. In this narrative, Emma struggles with a falling sculpture, learns to build a stable base and add support legs, and successfully creates a standing sculpture for the contest. The events showed her initial tower falling, following teacher's advice about a wide base, testing stability, adding magazine support legs, and achieving a straight-standing sculpture. An effective conclusion must address this arc by showing her at the contest reflecting on her problem-solving success. Choice B is correct because it shows Emma's sculpture standing steady (the goal achieved), her reflection on the specific solutions (wide base and support legs), and her pride in solving the wobbling problem regardless of contest results. This follows from the narrative because it directly references the engineering solutions she discovered and shows the emotional payoff of her persistence. Choice C is incorrect because it provides only vague, generic statements ('art is important') without any specific connection to the structural problems she solved or the recycled materials she used. This does NOT follow from the narrated events because it doesn't reference any of the specific challenges or solutions shown in the story. To help students: Before writing conclusion, review narrative to identify main arc (What problem did I show? What experience did I narrate? What changed?). Ask 'Does my ending address what I developed in the middle?' and 'Does my ending use information from my story?'. Practice comparing strong conclusions (resolve using story events, reflect on specific experiences) with weak conclusions (introduce new elements, make generic statements, leave arc unresolved). Use story map to plan: beginning setup → middle events → conclusion that follows. Watch for: ending abruptly without resolution, introducing new information in conclusion, writing generic 'I learned a lot' without connecting to specific events, resolving different problem than one shown, stating lessons unsupported by narrative, jumping to unrelated future, forgetting to show how events changed character/situation, contradicting earlier events.

Question 4

Read the narrative. Which ending best follows from the narrated events and resolves the problem?

On Monday, Amir signed up for the school talent show, even though his stomach felt jumpy. He wanted to tell a funny story, but every time he practiced at home, he rushed and forgot the punch lines. After dinner, he tried again and tripped over his words. "I sound silly," he told his sister, Lina. Lina suggested he write three short notes on index cards: the beginning, the middle, and the ending. The next day, Amir practiced with the cards in front of the mirror and slowed down on purpose. On Wednesday, he practiced for his friend Mateo and asked what parts were confusing. Mateo said, "The ending is funny, but you need a pause before it." Amir tried the pause, and Mateo laughed right on time. By Friday, Amir could tell the story without looking at the cards, and his hands stopped shaking so much.

Amir went home after school and thought about how interesting the weather had been all week. Then he cleaned his room and forgot about the talent show. The next day felt like any other day.
When Amir walked onstage, he held his index cards just in case. He spoke slowly, added the pause Mateo suggested, and remembered every punch line. After the last joke, he heard real laughter and smiled all the way to his seat. (correct answer)
At the talent show, Amir decided to sing a brand-new song he had never practiced. A music teacher handed him a guitar, and Amir played perfectly. Everyone cheered for the surprise performance.
Amir walked onto the stage and stared at the audience. The lights were bright. He stood there quietly until the announcer called the next performer.

Explanation: This question tests 5th grade narrative writing skill: providing a conclusion that follows from the narrated experiences or events (CCSS.W.5.3.e). A conclusion that follows from the narrative means the ending connects logically to what was narrated in the story. It should resolve the problem or situation shown, reflect on the experiences described, show change that resulted from events narrated, or demonstrate the impact of the experience. The conclusion uses information from the narrative - not introducing new elements or making claims unsupported by the events. In this narrative, Amir faces the problem of wanting to perform comedy but struggling with rushing and forgetting punch lines. The events showed his systematic preparation: using index cards, practicing with pauses, getting feedback from Mateo, and gradually building confidence until he could perform without cards. An effective conclusion must address this arc by showing how his preparation paid off during the actual performance. Choice B is correct because it shows Amir successfully using all the strategies he practiced: holding cards 'just in case,' speaking slowly, adding Mateo's suggested pause, and remembering every punch line. This follows from the narrative because it demonstrates the direct result of his week of preparation and shows his problem (rushing and forgetting) was resolved through the specific techniques he learned. Choice A is incorrect because it introduces completely new elements (singing, guitar, music teacher) that were never mentioned in the narrative about comedy performance. This does NOT follow from the narrated events because it abandons the entire story arc about preparing for comedy and brings in unrelated musical performance. To help students: Before writing conclusion, review narrative to identify main arc (What problem did I show? What experience did I narrate? What changed?). Ask 'Does my ending address what I developed in the middle?' and 'Does my ending use information from my story?'. Practice comparing strong conclusions (resolve using story events, reflect on specific experiences) with weak conclusions (introduce new elements, make generic statements, leave arc unresolved). Use story map to plan: beginning setup → middle events → conclusion that follows. Watch for: ending abruptly without resolution, introducing new information in conclusion, writing generic 'I learned a lot' without connecting to specific events, resolving different problem than one shown, stating lessons unsupported by narrative, jumping to unrelated future, forgetting to show how events changed character/situation, contradicting earlier events.

Question 5

Read the narrative. Which conclusion best follows from the experiences in this narrative?

On Friday, Jamal's class visited the city aquarium. Jamal hurried to the first tank and pressed his notebook against the glass. A guide explained how sharks keep moving so water can flow over their gills. Jamal wrote that down, but he still felt confused. At the jellyfish exhibit, the room was dark, and the tanks glowed like lamps. Jamal noticed the jellyfish pulsing slowly, almost like they were breathing. He asked the guide why they moved that way, and she said their bodies push water to help them drift. Later, Jamal watched a sea turtle rise for air and then glide back down. On the bus ride home, he reread his notes and circled the word "water" again and again.

On Monday, Jamal told his class that the aquarium was crowded and the gift shop had cool posters. He said the jellyfish room was his favorite because the tanks glowed so brightly in the dark.
On Monday, Jamal told his class the most surprising fact he learned: sharks are actually much more dangerous than jellyfish. He warned everyone to stay far away from sharks if they ever go swimming near one.
On Monday, Jamal told his class about one big idea he noticed: water helps sea animals in different ways. He explained the sharks' gills, the jellyfish drifting, and the turtle coming up for air. (correct answer)
On Monday, Jamal told his class that he wants to become a marine biologist someday. He described the long training and special schools a person needs before they can work at a real aquarium.

Explanation: This narrative follows Jamal collecting notes and circling the word "water" over and over. A strong conclusion should pull those experiences together and show what he understood. The best answer shows Jamal sharing his one big idea—that water helps sea animals in different ways—and backing it up with the exact things he saw: the sharks' gills, the jellyfish drifting, and the turtle rising for air. This uses the story's events and explains why his note-taking mattered. The choice about the crowded aquarium and glowing gift-shop posters stays on the surface. It mentions the trip but ignores the water idea Jamal kept circling, so it doesn't follow from what the story built. The choice warning that sharks are more dangerous than jellyfish adds a new claim about danger that the narrative never made. Jamal was noticing how water helps these animals, not comparing which is scarier. The choice about becoming a marine biologist jumps to a future goal and describes training and schools the story never mentioned. It introduces new information instead of concluding the experiences shown. When you write a conclusion, ask: Does my ending use what happened in my story, and does it tie back to the main idea I developed? Only the water answer does both.

Question 6

Read the narrative. Which ending does NOT follow from the narrated events?

Emma was chosen to be the line leader for her class for the first time. At first, she felt excited, but then she worried about making mistakes. On Monday, she walked too fast and the line stretched out behind her. Her teacher gently said, "Try matching your steps to the class." On Tuesday, Emma walked slower, but she forgot to stop at the corner and the class almost bumped into another group. Emma apologized and felt her cheeks get warm. At recess, her friend Diego said, "You can practice. Just watch how other leaders pause." On Wednesday, Emma watched the older class in the hallway and noticed they stopped at every doorway. On Thursday, Emma whispered to herself, "Stop at corners, check behind me," and the line stayed together. On Friday morning, the teacher handed Emma the line leader badge again, and Emma took a deep breath.

Emma led the class down the hallway, pausing at doorways like she practiced. She checked behind her and kept a steady pace. When the class arrived together, Emma felt proud that she improved all week.
Emma led the line more smoothly than on Monday, even though she was still a little nervous. She remembered Diego's advice and paused where she needed to. By the time they reached the library, the class was still together.
Emma suddenly found a lost puppy in the hallway and decided to keep it in her desk. The class spent the day training the puppy to do tricks. No one cared about line leading anymore. (correct answer)
Emma took a deep breath and reminded herself to stop at corners and match the class's pace. She led the line carefully, and her teacher nodded with a small smile. Emma realized practice helped her feel calmer.

Explanation: When you finish a story, a good ending should make sense with everything that came before it. This skill is called checking for a logical conclusion—asking, "Does this ending grow out of the events in the story?" Here's how to do it. First, find the story's main idea. All week, Emma practices being a better line leader: she matches her steps, stops at corners, and checks behind her. Then, look at each ending and ask, "Does this connect to Emma learning to lead the line?" The ending where Emma "led the class down the hallway, pausing at doorways" fits perfectly. But the ending where she "found a lost puppy" and "no one cared about line leading anymore" jumps to a brand-new topic the story never mentioned. Try this: after reading, sum up the story in one sentence. The ending that ignores your sentence is the one that doesn't belong!

Question 7

Read the narrative. Which conclusion best follows from the narrated events?

Maya wanted to learn how to ride her bike without training wheels before summer ended. On the first try, she wobbled and put her feet down right away. Her neighbor Chen offered to help and said, "Let's start on the grassy field so it's softer." Maya practiced pushing off and gliding, but she kept turning the handlebars too sharply. Chen reminded her to look ahead instead of staring at the front tire. After several tries, Maya glided for three seconds, then five seconds, and she laughed even though she still had to stop. The next day, she tried on the sidewalk and felt faster, but she panicked and stepped off. Maya took a break, drank water, and told herself she could try again. On the last afternoon of summer break, Maya rolled her bike back to the grassy field and asked Chen to watch one more time.

Maya suddenly decided to learn to swim instead of riding a bike. She signed up for a swim team and never looked at her bike again. Chen became a famous coach on television.
Maya rode the bike perfectly on her first try and did ten tricks in a row. Everyone in the neighborhood cheered like it was a parade. Maya never felt nervous at all.
Maya pushed off, looked ahead, and kept her handlebars steady like Chen taught her. She glided across the field and then pedaled a few times before stopping safely. Maya grinned and thanked Chen because she knew her practice led to this moment. (correct answer)
Maya went to the field and the story ended. Nothing else happened, and the reader never found out if she improved. The end.

Explanation: This question tests 5th grade narrative writing skill: providing a conclusion that follows from the narrated experiences or events (CCSS.W.5.3.e). A conclusion that follows from the narrative means the ending connects logically to what was narrated in the story. It should resolve the problem or situation shown, reflect on the experiences described, show change that resulted from events narrated, or demonstrate the impact of the experience. The conclusion uses information from the narrative - not introducing new elements or making claims unsupported by the events. In this narrative, Maya works to learn bike riding without training wheels before summer ends, with help from her neighbor Chen. The events showed her gradual progress: initial wobbling, Chen's advice to use grass and look ahead, improving glide times (three seconds to five seconds), trying the sidewalk but panicking, taking a break and encouraging herself, returning to the field on the last day of summer. An effective conclusion must address this arc by showing Maya's final attempt using what she learned. Choice B is correct because it shows Maya applying all the specific techniques she practiced: pushing off, looking ahead (Chen's advice), keeping handlebars steady (addressing her earlier sharp turning problem), gliding and then pedaling (progression from her practice), and acknowledging how practice led to success. This follows from the narrative because it demonstrates the culmination of her week-long effort and Chen's coaching, showing she achieved her goal through the specific skills developed in the story. Choice A is incorrect because it introduces a completely new activity (swimming) and abandons the entire bike-learning journey, plus adds an unrealistic element about Chen becoming a famous TV coach. This does NOT follow from the narrated events because it brings in unrelated elements and leaves Maya's bike-riding goal that drove the entire narrative completely unaddressed. To help students: Before writing conclusion, review narrative to identify main arc (What problem did I show? What experience did I narrate? What changed?). Ask 'Does my ending address what I developed in the middle?' and 'Does my ending use information from my story?'. Practice comparing strong conclusions (resolve using story events, reflect on specific experiences) with weak conclusions (introduce new elements, make generic statements, leave arc unresolved). Use story map to plan: beginning setup → middle events → conclusion that follows. Watch for: ending abruptly without resolution, introducing new information in conclusion, writing generic 'I learned a lot' without connecting to specific events, resolving different problem than one shown, stating lessons unsupported by narrative, jumping to unrelated future, forgetting to show how events changed character/situation, contradicting earlier events.

Question 8

Read the narrative. Which ending would follow from the experiences in this narrative?

Mei wanted to bake muffins for the school bake sale, but she had never baked without an adult. She read the recipe twice and lined up the ingredients on the counter. When she measured the flour, she packed it down hard, and the batter turned thick like clay. Mei worried she had ruined everything, but she remembered her aunt saying, "Flour should be light." Mei dumped the flour back into the bag and spooned it gently into the cup without pressing. This time the batter looked smooth, and she folded in blueberries carefully. While the muffins baked, the kitchen smelled sweet, and Mei kept checking the timer instead of opening the oven. When the pan finally came out, the tops were golden and slightly cracked.

A magician appeared in Mei's kitchen and turned the muffins into bouncing balls. Mei joined the magician's show and traveled the world. She never baked again.
Mei tasted one muffin and smiled because it was soft, not heavy. She wrote "spoon flour, don't pack it" on a sticky note for next time. At the bake sale, she felt proud seeing people choose her muffins. (correct answer)
Mei turned off the oven and threw the batter away without baking it. She didn't try any measuring changes. Then she went to bed, and the story stops.
Mei decided that baking is the same as playing video games. She said she learned a lot about life. Everything worked out perfectly.

Explanation: This question tests 5th grade narrative writing skill: providing a conclusion that follows from the narrated experiences or events (CCSS.W.5.3.e). A conclusion that follows from the narrative means the ending connects logically to what was narrated in the story. It should resolve the problem or situation shown, reflect on the experiences described, show change that resulted from events narrated, or demonstrate the impact of the experience. The conclusion uses information from the narrative - not introducing new elements or making claims unsupported by the events. In this narrative, Mei learns to bake independently by discovering the importance of measuring flour correctly, fixing her mistake, and successfully baking golden muffins for the bake sale. The events showed her packing flour too hard, remembering her aunt's advice about light flour, re-measuring properly, and waiting patiently for the muffins to bake. An effective conclusion must address this arc by showing the result of her corrected technique and her learning from the experience. Choice A is correct because it shows Mei tasting the successful result (soft, not heavy muffins), making a specific note about the technique she learned (spoon flour, don't pack it), and feeling proud at the bake sale. This follows from the narrative because it directly addresses the flour-measuring problem she solved and shows the positive outcome of her learning. Choice D is incorrect because it shows Mei giving up before even baking the corrected batter, which contradicts the narrative where she already fixed the flour problem and the muffins were baking with a sweet smell. This does NOT follow from the narrated events because it ignores her successful problem-solving and the fact that the muffins were already in the oven. To help students: Before writing conclusion, review narrative to identify main arc (What problem did I show? What experience did I narrate? What changed?). Ask 'Does my ending address what I developed in the middle?' and 'Does my ending use information from my story?'. Practice comparing strong conclusions (resolve using story events, reflect on specific experiences) with weak conclusions (introduce new elements, make generic statements, leave arc unresolved). Use story map to plan: beginning setup → middle events → conclusion that follows. Watch for: ending abruptly without resolution, introducing new information in conclusion, writing generic 'I learned a lot' without connecting to specific events, resolving different problem than one shown, stating lessons unsupported by narrative, jumping to unrelated future, forgetting to show how events changed character/situation, contradicting earlier events.

Question 9

Read the narrative. Which conclusion resolves the situation developed in this narrative and follows from the events?

Yuki and her dad planted three tomato seedlings in a sunny spot behind their apartment building. At first, Yuki watered them every day, but the soil turned muddy and the leaves drooped. Her dad explained that roots need air, not just water, and they checked the soil with a finger before watering. The next week, Yuki forgot once and worried the plants would dry out. When she looked closely, she saw the soil was still damp under the top layer. She pulled a few weeds and used a small stick to gently loosen the dirt. After that, she made a simple schedule on the fridge: water only when the soil felt dry and the leaves looked thirsty. By the end of the month, the plants stood taller, and tiny yellow flowers appeared.

A few weeks later, Yuki picked her first red tomato and rinsed it under the sink. She smiled because the schedule and careful watering had worked. When she shared slices with her dad, she felt proud of what she had learned about patience. (correct answer)
Yuki learned that plants are living things. She felt good. Everything was fun.
A neighbor arrived with a brand-new puppy and asked Yuki to train it for a contest. Yuki spent every afternoon teaching the puppy tricks. The garden disappeared from the story.
Yuki decided tomatoes were too hard, so she threw the plants away and asked for a video game. Then she stayed inside for the rest of the summer. She never thought about gardening again.

Explanation: This question tests 5th grade narrative writing skill: providing a conclusion that follows from the narrated experiences or events (CCSS.W.5.3.e). A conclusion that follows from the narrative means the ending connects logically to what was narrated in the story. It should resolve the problem or situation shown, reflect on the experiences described, show change that resulted from events narrated, or demonstrate the impact of the experience. The conclusion uses information from the narrative - not introducing new elements or making claims unsupported by the events. In this narrative, Yuki learns to care for tomato plants through trial and error, discovering proper watering techniques and creating a schedule, with plants showing progress by growing taller and flowering. The events showed overwatering problems, learning about soil moisture, making a watering schedule, and seeing yellow flowers appear. An effective conclusion must address this arc by showing the result of her patient care - the tomatoes growing. Choice D is correct because it shows the natural result of her efforts (picking a red tomato), uses the specific methods she learned (the schedule and careful watering), and reflects on the lesson about patience she gained. This follows from the narrative because it completes the growing cycle started with seedlings and shows the payoff of her learned techniques. Choice C is incorrect because it provides only vague, generic statements ('plants are living things') without any specific connection to the tomato growing experience or her specific learning journey. This does NOT follow from the narrated events because it doesn't reference any of the specific challenges, solutions, or progress shown in the story. To help students: Before writing conclusion, review narrative to identify main arc (What problem did I show? What experience did I narrate? What changed?). Ask 'Does my ending address what I developed in the middle?' and 'Does my ending use information from my story?'. Practice comparing strong conclusions (resolve using story events, reflect on specific experiences) with weak conclusions (introduce new elements, make generic statements, leave arc unresolved). Use story map to plan: beginning setup → middle events → conclusion that follows. Watch for: ending abruptly without resolution, introducing new information in conclusion, writing generic 'I learned a lot' without connecting to specific events, resolving different problem than one shown, stating lessons unsupported by narrative, jumping to unrelated future, forgetting to show how events changed character/situation, contradicting earlier events.

Question 10

Read the narrative. Which conclusion best follows from the experiences in this narrative?

Amir's class visited the city science museum on a rainy Tuesday. He rushed to the electricity exhibit and rubbed his socks on the carpet to make a tiny spark. Next, his group tried the wind tunnel, but their paper airplane kept flipping over. Amir felt annoyed because he wanted it to fly straight like the ones in the videos. The museum guide suggested folding the wings evenly and adding a small paper clip to the nose. Amir and his partner, Sofia, carefully measured both wings with a ruler printed on the table. Their first new plane still wobbled, so they bent the back edges just a little. On the third try, the plane sailed through the tunnel and landed softly in the net. Amir laughed, and Sofia held up the plane like it was a prize.

On the bus ride home, Amir stared out the window and felt proud of his group's patience. He realized small changes, like even folds and a paper clip, can make a big difference. He couldn't wait to tell his family how they solved the problem together. (correct answer)
Amir decided the real problem was the rain outside, so he bought an umbrella at the museum store. Then he spent the rest of the day learning to juggle oranges. He forgot about the wind tunnel.
Amir and Sofia walked away from the wind tunnel without testing the plane again. They didn't know what to do next. The class moved on, and the story ends there.
A museum guard handed Amir a gold medal for being the smartest visitor of the year. The mayor arrived and gave a long speech about airplanes. Amir became famous overnight.

Explanation: This question tests 5th grade narrative writing skill: providing a conclusion that follows from the narrated experiences or events (CCSS.W.5.3.e). A conclusion that follows from the narrative means the ending connects logically to what was narrated in the story. It should resolve the problem or situation shown, reflect on the experiences described, show change that resulted from events narrated, or demonstrate the impact of the experience. The conclusion uses information from the narrative - not introducing new elements or making claims unsupported by the events. In this narrative, Amir's group struggles with making a paper airplane fly straight in the wind tunnel, receives guidance about even wings and paper clips, and succeeds after careful adjustments. The events showed measuring wings with a ruler, making multiple attempts, and finally achieving success through patience and teamwork. An effective conclusion must address this arc by reflecting on the specific problem-solving experience. Choice A is correct because it shows Amir reflecting on the specific lessons learned (patience, small changes like even folds and paper clips) and feeling proud of the group's collaborative problem-solving. This follows from the narrative because it directly references the specific solutions they discovered (even folds, paper clip) and the teamwork shown. Choice B is incorrect because it introduces completely unrelated elements (rain, umbrella, juggling) and abandons the wind tunnel experience without any reflection. This does NOT follow from the narrated events because it ignores the entire problem-solving arc and introduces random new activities. To help students: Before writing conclusion, review narrative to identify main arc (What problem did I show? What experience did I narrate? What changed?). Ask 'Does my ending address what I developed in the middle?' and 'Does my ending use information from my story?'. Practice comparing strong conclusions (resolve using story events, reflect on specific experiences) with weak conclusions (introduce new elements, make generic statements, leave arc unresolved). Use story map to plan: beginning setup → middle events → conclusion that follows. Watch for: ending abruptly without resolution, introducing new information in conclusion, writing generic 'I learned a lot' without connecting to specific events, resolving different problem than one shown, stating lessons unsupported by narrative, jumping to unrelated future, forgetting to show how events changed character/situation, contradicting earlier events.

Question 11

Read the narrative. Which ending best follows from the narrated events and completes the story?

Yuki had always avoided the high dive at the community pool. From the deck below, it looked like a tall ladder leading to the sky. One Saturday, her friend Carlos asked, "Want to climb up with me? We don't have to jump." Yuki agreed, as long as they could go slowly. Halfway up, her legs started to shake, and she gripped the rail. Carlos waited and talked about the snack bar to help her think of something else. At the top, Yuki looked down and felt her stomach flip, so she stepped back. The lifeguard said, "It's okay to climb down. Trying is still brave." Yuki climbed down carefully, and her hands stopped trembling once her feet touched the deck. The next week, Yuki returned to the pool and stared at the high dive again.

Yuki jumped from the high dive and did five flips perfectly, even though she had never tried it before. Everyone clapped for her amazing trick. She won a trophy for diving that day.
Yuki went home and said, "That was fun," and then the story ended. No one knew what happened with the high dive. The next week was not important.
Yuki climbed the ladder again, this time without rushing. She practiced standing at the top for a few seconds, then climbed down like before. She felt proud that she was getting a little braver each visit. (correct answer)
Yuki decided she hated swimming and sold the pool to a movie company. The pool turned into a stage for a giant concert. Carlos became a famous singer overnight.

Explanation: This question tests 5th grade narrative writing skill: providing a conclusion that follows from the narrated experiences or events (CCSS.W.5.3.e). A conclusion that follows from the narrative means the ending connects logically to what was narrated in the story. It should resolve the problem or situation shown, reflect on the experiences described, show change that resulted from events narrated, or demonstrate the impact of the experience. The conclusion uses information from the narrative - not introducing new elements or making claims unsupported by the events. In this narrative, Yuki faces her fear of the high dive through gradual steps with support. The events showed her journey: initial avoidance, agreeing to climb without jumping, experiencing fear halfway up, using Carlos's distraction technique, reaching the top but stepping back, receiving validation from the lifeguard that trying is brave, successfully climbing down, and returning the next week. An effective conclusion must address this arc by showing continued progress. Choice B is correct because it shows Yuki taking another incremental step (climbing again, practicing standing at the top, climbing down) while acknowledging her growing bravery. This follows from the narrative because it continues the pattern of gradual progress established throughout the story and reflects the lifeguard's message that trying is brave. Choice D is incorrect because it shows Yuki suddenly performing expert diving tricks she never practiced, which contradicts the careful, gradual approach to overcoming fear shown throughout the narrative. This does NOT follow from the narrated events because it abandons the realistic progression of facing fears for an unrealistic instant expertise. To help students: Before writing conclusion, review narrative to identify main arc (What problem did I show? What experience did I narrate? What changed?). Ask 'Does my ending address what I developed in the middle?' and 'Does my ending use information from my story?'. Practice comparing strong conclusions (resolve using story events, reflect on specific experiences) with weak conclusions (introduce new elements, make generic statements, leave arc unresolved). Use story map to plan: beginning setup → middle events → conclusion that follows. Watch for: ending abruptly without resolution, introducing new information in conclusion, writing generic 'I learned a lot' without connecting to specific events, resolving different problem than one shown, stating lessons unsupported by narrative, jumping to unrelated future, forgetting to show how events changed character/situation, contradicting earlier events.

Question 12

"The Robot Challenge"

Nia joined the Robot Club in the fall. She liked building, but she was too nervous to talk during team meetings. When her teammates shared ideas, she just listened.

The team had to build a robot that could scoop up ping-pong balls and drop them into a bucket. Amir, the team captain, attached a big plastic scoop to the front. Nia thought it looked too heavy, but she stayed quiet.

At the practice round, the robot rolled forward and tipped right over. The plastic scoop was so heavy that the back wheels lifted off the table. The team got zero points.

That night, Nia couldn't stop thinking about it. She drew a sketch of a smaller scoop made of cardboard, light enough to keep the wheels down.

At the next meeting, her hands felt sweaty, and she almost put the sketch away. Instead, she stood up. "I think the plastic scoop is too heavy," she said. "A cardboard scoop would be lighter, so the robot wouldn't tip." Everyone listened. Amir said, "Let's try it!"

At the final competition, the robot rolled smoothly, scooped up ball after ball, and dropped them into the bucket. When the scores were posted, their team had won first place.

Read the narrative. Which ending best follows from the narrated events and reflects on what Nia learned?

Nia decided that cardboard is always better than plastic, so she planned to build every robot out of cardboard.
Nia thought about the sketch she almost put away. Next time, she would share her idea before the robot tipped. (correct answer)
Nia decided the best part of Robot Club was winning first place, and she hoped the team would win again.
Nia learned that teamwork makes the dream work and that robots are a lot of fun to build.

Explanation: The story already solves the problem: the team wins. So a good ending should reflect on what Nia learned. Her real struggle was that she was too nervous to talk. She noticed the scoop was too heavy but stayed quiet until after the robot tipped. The best ending has her remember the sketch she almost put away and decide to speak up sooner next time. That is the lesson the events point to. Deciding cardboard is always better takes the wrong lesson; the story is about speaking up, not about one material. Focusing on winning first place skips what Nia learned about herself. Saying teamwork makes the dream work is a general saying that never mentions her fear of speaking.

Question 13

"The Simple Question"

During Emma's first week at her new school, the cafeteria was the loudest, loneliest place she had ever been. Everyone already had friends. Emma ate her sandwich fast and stared at her tray.

That Friday night, Emma told her mom she hated lunch. Mom hugged her. "You don't need to make a big speech," she said. "Just ask one person one simple question."

On Monday, Emma noticed a girl named Priya drawing a cat in a space helmet. Emma took a deep breath. "What's your cat's name?" she asked.

Priya looked up and grinned. "Captain Meow. Do you draw?"

Emma pulled out her pencil. By the end of lunch, Captain Meow had a sidekick, a dog wearing goggles.

All through September, Emma and Priya made comics together at lunch. Emma drew the pictures, and Priya wrote the funny words. Now it was October. On Thursday afternoon, Priya waved a stack of blank paper. "Bring your best ideas tomorrow," she said. "We're starting a brand-new comic."

That night, Emma filled two whole pages of her notebook with ideas.

Read the narrative. Which conclusion best follows from the narrated events and connects to the beginning?

On Friday, Emma showed Priya her two pages of ideas, and they picked a superhero story for their new comic.
On Friday, Emma gave a big speech about her comic ideas, and the whole lunch table asked to join.
At Friday's lunch, Emma sat across from Priya. The cafeteria was still loud, but it no longer felt lonely. (correct answer)
Emma learned that making friends is important and that everyone should be nice to new kids.

Explanation: The question asks for an ending that connects to the beginning. The story opens with the cafeteria as "the loudest, loneliest place" Emma had ever been. The best ending returns to that same cafeteria: it is still loud, but it no longer feels lonely, because Emma now sits with Priya. That shows how much she has changed since the first week. Picking a superhero story with Priya follows the events, but it never ties back to how lonely Emma felt at the start. Giving a big speech goes against Mom's advice, "You don't need to make a big speech"; Emma made a friend with one simple question. Saying everyone should be nice to new kids is a general lesson that skips Emma's own story.

Question 14

"The Squeaky Trumpet"

Keisha had played the trumpet for only three weeks, and band rehearsal made her stomach twist. Every time the band started the spring song, her first note came out as a squeak, and she usually came in a beat too late. Once the drummer giggled, and Keisha's cheeks burned.

After rehearsal, Mr. Ortiz, the band teacher, waved her over. "You're breathing from your shoulders," he said. "Put your hand on your belly and breathe in until it pushes your hand out. That's where your air should come from."

Keisha tried it. The note was still shaky, but it was louder and steadier than before.

That week, her friend Maya, who played the clarinet, came over every afternoon. Maya tapped the beat on the kitchen table while Keisha took belly breaths and counted, "One, two, three, play!" By Thursday, Keisha hit her first note on time three times in a row. She still cracked a high note now and then, but she was getting better.

On Friday morning, Keisha opened her trumpet case and walked into the band room. The next rehearsal was about to begin.

Read the narrative. Which ending best follows from the narrated events and resolves the problem?

Keisha decided to play very quietly so nobody would hear her squeak, and the drummer stopped giggling.
Keisha played her part, then asked Maya to teach her the clarinet so they could sit together in band.
Keisha took a belly breath and came in on the beat. She still cracked a high note, but she grinned. (correct answer)
Keisha learned that hard work is always important, and after that, band was the best part of her day.

Explanation: Keisha's problem was squeaking her first note and coming in late. Mr. Ortiz taught her belly breathing, and Maya helped her count the beat. The best ending has her take a belly breath and come in on the beat, which solves the problem with the exact strategies she practiced. She still cracks a high note, which matches the story's point that she was still improving, and she grins anyway. Playing very quietly hides the squeak instead of fixing it, and nobody in the story ever suggested it. Asking Maya to teach her the clarinet drifts away from the trumpet problem. Saying hard work is always important states a lesson without showing what happened at rehearsal.

Question 15

"Waiting for the Cue"

Amir joined the school choir in January because his older sister said it was fun. On the first day, he found out it was harder than it looked. The songs for the spring concert had tricky starts, and Amir kept coming in too early, singing alone for a whole second before everyone else. His face turned red every time.

His classmate Lena noticed. After rehearsal, she sat next to him by the piano. "Don't guess when to start," she said. "Listen for the piano. Right before we sing, Mrs. Park plays three low notes. When you hear the third one, breathe in, then sing."

At the next rehearsal, Amir listened closely. Bum, bum, BUM. He breathed in and came in right with the group. He missed the cue once more that day, but after that he got it again and again.

Every night that week, Amir sang the songs in his room while a recording of the piano part played on his mom's phone. His voice grew stronger, and he stopped turning red.

On Friday, Mrs. Park said she would hand out the parts for the spring concert, including a few short solo lines. Amir's hands felt sweaty as she started reading names.

Read the narrative. Which ending best follows from the narrated events and shows a future outlook based on them?

Amir got a short solo. That night, he played the piano recording and practiced listening for the third low note. (correct answer)
Amir got a short solo. He planned to start singing a little early so he would never be late.
Amir got a short solo. He decided to sing it as loudly as he could so everyone would hear him.
Amir got a short solo and learned that music is important and that practice makes perfect.

Explanation: The question asks for an ending that looks ahead and builds on what happened. Amir's problem was coming in too early. Lena taught him to listen for Mrs. Park's three low piano notes, and he practiced with a recording every night. The best ending has him get a solo and go right back to that recording to listen for the third note. It looks ahead to the concert using the exact strategy that worked. Planning to start a little early repeats his original mistake. Singing as loudly as he can doesn't help his real problem, which was timing, not volume. Saying practice makes perfect is a general lesson that never shows what Amir will actually do next.

Question 16

"Sofia's Rocks"

Sofia loved her rock collection, but she did not love talking in front of people. When Ms. Carter said every student would share something during show-and-tell week, Sofia's stomach flipped. Her turn was on Friday, the last day.

On Monday, Sofia practiced for her big brother, Leo. Her voice came out so tiny that he had to lean in close. "Pretend you're just telling me," Leo said. By Wednesday, her voice was a little louder.

On Thursday, Ms. Carter gave her three note cards. "Write one fact on each card," she said. "Then you won't have to remember everything."

On Friday, Sofia carried her shoebox of rocks to the front of the room. Her hands shook. At first, she stared at her shoes and whispered. Then she saw her friend Keisha in the second row giving her a thumbs-up.

Sofia took a deep breath and looked up. In a louder voice, she held up her purple geode and told how it formed. She showed the striped agate and the fossil shell she found at the lake. When she finished, the class clapped, and Keisha clapped the loudest of all.

Read the narrative. Which ending would follow from the narrated events and reflect the character's change?

Sofia learned that show-and-tell is important and that everyone should always try their very best.
When Ms. Carter asked for someone to read the lunch menu aloud, Sofia raised her hand, knees still shaking. (correct answer)
Sofia decided her rocks were the best part, and she went looking for new ones at the lake that weekend.
Sofia decided that next time, Keisha could give the talk while she stood beside her and held up the rocks.

Explanation: The question asks for an ending that shows how Sofia changed. At the start, her stomach flipped at the idea of speaking, and her voice was tiny. By the end, she looked up and spoke louder. The best ending has her volunteer to read the lunch menu aloud even though her knees still shake. She is still a little nervous, which fits the story, but she now chooses to speak. Letting Keisha give the talk next time puts Sofia back where she started, so it shows no change. Hunting for new rocks follows her hobby but ignores her real problem, speaking in front of people. Saying everyone should try their best is a general lesson that never shows what Sofia actually learned.

Question 17

"The Fun Run"

When Keisha joined the after-school running club, she had one goal: to run the whole mile at the school fun run without stopping. On the first day, she sprinted ahead of everyone. Halfway around the track, she had to stop and walk, gasping for air.

Amir, an older runner in the club, jogged over. "Don't start so fast," he said. "Pick a pace you can keep."

Keisha tried it. She ran slower at the start and saved her energy. Coach Lee timed the mile every Friday, and Keisha wrote each time in a small blue notebook. In the first week, her time was 13 minutes, and she had walked twice.

Every week, she practiced pacing herself. When she wanted to quit, Amir ran beside her and reminded her to breathe. She started going to bed earlier and drinking more water, too.

On the morning of the fun run, Keisha laced her sneakers tight and lined up with the other runners. Amir gave her a thumbs-up from the side. Keisha took a deep breath and thought about her plan: start slow, stay steady, don't stop.

Read the narrative. Which conclusion best follows from the narrated events and shows a clear result?

Keisha sprinted out ahead of everyone at the start and held the lead all the way to the finish.
Keisha walked part of the mile with a friend, and they talked and laughed the whole way to the finish.
Keisha learned that running is a fun sport and that exercise is important for everyone.
Keisha started slow and ran the whole mile. She wasn't first, but it was her best time yet. (correct answer)

Explanation: Keisha's goal was to run the whole mile without stopping. On the first day she sprinted, ran out of breath, and had to walk. With Amir's help she learned to start slow and keep a steady pace, and she tracked her times in a notebook. The best ending has her start slow and run the whole mile. She isn't first, but it is her best time, a clear result of her plan. Sprinting out ahead is the strategy that failed on the first day. Walking and laughing with a friend gives up the goal of not stopping. Saying exercise is important is a general lesson that never shows how the fun run went.

Question 18

"The Speech"

On Monday, Ms. Grant told the class that everyone would give a two-minute speech on Friday. Amir's hands went cold. Whenever he talked in front of people, he rushed so fast that nobody could understand him.

That night, Amir practiced in his room. He read his speech about sea turtles out loud, but he finished in less than one minute. On Tuesday, he tried the mirror. He watched himself talk faster and faster.

On Wednesday, his older sister Layla listened to him. "Take one slow breath before you start," she said. "And look at the clock on the back wall. It will remind you to slow down."

Amir wrote each part of his speech on note cards. On Thursday, he timed himself with Layla's phone. His first try took one minute and twenty seconds. His second try took almost two minutes.

On Friday, Ms. Grant called his name. Amir picked up his note cards. His heart pounded as he walked to the front of the room.

Read the narrative. Which ending best follows from the narrated events?

Amir read his speech as fast as he could to get it over with, and the class clapped politely.
Amir took one slow breath and found the clock on the back wall. His speech lasted almost exactly two minutes. (correct answer)
Amir left his note cards on the desk and made up his speech on the spot, and it went great.
Amir realized that hard work is important and that people should always try their very best.

Explanation: Amir's problem was rushing so fast that nobody could understand him. Layla told him to take one slow breath and look at the clock on the back wall. He used note cards and timed himself until he got close to two minutes. The best ending has him take that breath, find the clock, and speak for almost exactly two minutes, which shows his practice worked. Reading as fast as he can is his old problem, so it does not follow. Leaving his note cards behind and making it up throws away the preparation the story built. Saying hard work is important states a lesson without showing what happened at the front of the room.

Question 19

"The Birdhouse"

Chen wanted to watch birds from the balcony of his family's apartment, so he and his dad decided to build a birdhouse.

Chen was in a hurry. He measured the first board too fast and cut it in the wrong place, so one corner came out crooked. They had to cut a new piece. Then he sanded so hard that he scratched a deep groove into the wood. When he hammered the first nails, he swung too hard, and two of them bent.

His dad handed him a new nail. "Slow hands make straight lines," he said.

Chen took a breath. He sanded slowly, in small circles, until the wood felt smooth. He held each nail steady and tapped it gently, one tap at a time. It took the whole Saturday afternoon.

At last, Chen and his dad nailed on the roof. Chen set the birdhouse on the workbench and stepped back. This time, every side stood straight.

Read the narrative. Which ending would follow from the experiences in this narrative?

Chen hung the birdhouse on the balcony. "Next time, bigger nails, so they won't bend," he told Dad.
The next morning, a sparrow hopped inside the birdhouse. Chen whispered, "Slow hands," and didn't move a muscle. (correct answer)
Chen rushed to hang the birdhouse before school, hammering the hook in fast so he wouldn't miss any birds.
Chen learned that birds are important animals and that everyone should help take care of nature.

Explanation: Chen built the birdhouse so he could watch birds from the balcony, but rushing made him cut, sand and hammer badly. His dad told him, "Slow hands make straight lines," and slowing down worked. The best ending has a sparrow hop inside while Chen whispers "Slow hands" and stays perfectly still. He gets the birds he wanted, and he still uses the patience he learned, now for watching instead of building. Using bigger nails takes the wrong lesson, since the nails bent because he swung too hard. Rushing to hang the birdhouse before school brings back the hurrying that ruined his first tries, so it ignores what Chen learned. Saying everyone should take care of nature is a general lesson the story never builds.

Question 20

"Slow Down, Carlos"

Carlos had to give a three-minute speech about his rock collection. The first time he practiced it for his sister, he talked so fast that she said it sounded like one long word. His hands shook so much that his paper rattled.

His teacher, Ms. Patel, gave him two ideas. "Put one main idea on each note card," she said. "And after each card, stop and take a breath. Pauses give your listeners time to think."

Every night that week, Carlos practiced in his room. He read a card, paused, took a breath, and turned to the next card. At first the pauses felt strange and too long. By Thursday, they felt normal.

On Friday, Carlos stood in front of the class holding his note cards. He took a breath and began. He spoke slowly and paused after each card. When he showed the rock that looked like a potato, his classmates laughed, and he waited for them to finish before he went on. Halfway through, he noticed his hands had stopped shaking.

When he said his last sentence, the whole class clapped.

Read the narrative. Which conclusion best follows from the narrated experiences and reflects what the character learned?

Carlos decided the potato rock joke made his speech great, so next time he would tell more jokes.
Carlos decided that reading from one full page would be easier next time than using note cards.
At his desk, Carlos remembered how strange the pauses felt at first. Now they felt like his secret trick. (correct answer)
Carlos learned that rocks are interesting and that it is important to share your hobbies with others.

Explanation: The question asks for an ending that reflects on what Carlos learned. He talked so fast it sounded like one long word, so Ms. Patel taught him to use one idea per note card and to pause after each card. The pauses felt strange at first, but by Thursday they felt normal, and during the speech his hands stopped shaking. The best ending has him remember how strange the pauses felt and see them now as his secret trick. That reflects on the exact strategy that helped. Crediting the potato rock joke takes the wrong lesson, since the laugh was a small moment. Switching to one full page drops the note cards that helped. Saying rocks are interesting is a general statement about his hobby, not his speaking.