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Question 1
Read this student's opinion writing.
"I think students should visit the library more often, even when it is not assigned. Libraries have many kinds of books, so everyone can find something interesting. Reading often builds vocabulary, which helps in every subject. It also improves focus because you practice paying attention for longer periods. Some students say they are too busy, but even 15 minutes of reading a day can help. Libraries are also quiet places to study and get help from librarians. Reading can be exciting because you can learn about history, science, or new places. Another reason is that some libraries have free programs like crafts and game days."
This paragraph needs a conclusion, but the last sentence introduces new information instead. Which conclusion best summarizes the main reasons and provides closure?
- Libraries are big buildings with many shelves of books, and some of them have been around for a very long time.
- The library should also start selling snacks and drinks, because students often get hungry while they are busy reading.
- Visiting the library is a very important thing that everyone should think about, and that is really all there is to say.
- For these reasons, students should make library visits a regular habit. Reading more builds vocabulary and focus, and the library is a helpful place to learn. (correct answer)
Explanation: The best conclusion restates the opinion in fresh words ("make library visits a regular habit"), briefly reminds readers of the main reasons (building vocabulary and focus, and the library being a helpful place), and uses "For these reasons" to signal closure. That is exactly what a strong conclusion does.
The choice about libraries being big buildings with old shelves only describes what a library is. It does not restate the opinion or summarize the reasons, so it gives no closure.
The choice about selling snacks and drinks adds a brand-new idea that never appeared in the paragraph. The prompt warns against introducing new information, so this cannot be a conclusion.
The choice saying the library is important and "that is really all there is to say" sounds like an ending, but it never names any of the actual reasons. It restates nothing specific and leaves the argument unsummarized.
Only the answer that restates the opinion, sums up the key reasons, and closes with concluding language does the full job.
Question 2
Read this student's opinion essay.
I think students should limit screen time on school nights. When I stare at a screen too long, my eyes feel tired and I get headaches. Screens can also keep us awake because bright light makes it harder to feel sleepy. If we go to bed late, we have trouble paying attention in class the next day. Limiting screen time also gives us time to do other healthy things, like reading or talking with family. Some people say screens help them relax, but you can relax by drawing or listening to music too. Exercise is important. The end.
The ending is abrupt and does not connect to the opinion. Which revision creates a stronger conclusion?
- In conclusion, using screens less on school nights helps students sleep, focus, and feel better. We should put devices away early so we are ready to learn tomorrow. (correct answer)
- In conclusion, exercise is really important for students, and everyone should try to move their body and stay healthy every single day.
- In conclusion, video games can be pretty expensive, and brand-new ones keep coming out almost every single year for people to buy.
- In conclusion, I really like using screens because they are so much fun, and that is honestly my final opinion on the topic.
Explanation: The best conclusion pulls the essay together. The winning choice restates the opinion in new words, sums up the main reasons (sleep, focus, feeling better), and adds a call to action about putting devices away early. That gives readers a clear sense of closure tied to the essay's argument.
The choice about exercise sounds finished, but it wraps up a topic the essay never really argued—this essay is about limiting screen time, not about exercising. The choice about video games being expensive brings in a brand-new idea that was never one of the writer's reasons, so it does not conclude anything the essay said. The choice about liking screens because they are fun actually argues the opposite of the writer's opinion, so it cannot be a strong ending for this essay. Only the first choice restates and supports the essay's real opinion, so it is the correct answer.
Question 3
Read this opinion writing.
I believe our neighborhood should add bike lanes on busy streets. Bike lanes make riding safer because cars have a clear space away from bikes. When people feel safe, more families may ride instead of driving short distances. That can reduce traffic near schools and parks. Bike riding is also good exercise, and it does not pollute the air like cars do. Some drivers worry bike lanes will slow traffic, but fewer cars on the road can help everyone move better. Bike lanes help.
Which conclusion provides the BEST closure by restating the opinion and summarizing key reasons?
- Bike lanes help.
- In conclusion, adding bike lanes would make our streets safer and encourage healthier, cleaner travel. If the city paints lanes on busy roads, our neighborhood can have less traffic and more confident riders. (correct answer)
- I once saw a red bike that had a bell and a basket.
- The speed limit should be 100 miles per hour so cars get places faster.
Explanation: This question tests 5th grade opinion writing: providing a concluding statement or section related to the opinion presented (CCSS.W.5.1.d). Strong opinion writing conclusions RESTATE the opinion in new words (not copying from introduction), SUMMARIZE the key reasons briefly (remind readers of 2-3 main points), may include a CALL TO ACTION (what readers should do), and provide FINAL THOUGHT about importance or impact. Good conclusions give a sense of CLOSURE—they feel complete and use concluding language (For these reasons, In conclusion, Therefore, Ultimately). Choice B is correct because it uses proper transition language ('In conclusion'), restates the opinion in new words ('adding bike lanes would make our streets safer'), summarizes two key benefits (safer streets and healthier/cleaner travel), and includes a specific call to action (city should paint lanes on busy roads). This makes an effective conclusion by connecting safety and environmental benefits while telling decision-makers what to do. Choice A is weak because it's too brief and vague ('Bike lanes help') without restating the full opinion about adding bike lanes to the neighborhood or summarizing specific reasons, showing the common error where students write overly simple endings that don't provide real closure. To help students: Ask - Does it restate your opinion in NEW words? Does it remind readers of your main reasons? Does it feel COMPLETE? Does it tell readers what to do? Use transition words: For these reasons, In conclusion, Therefore, Ultimately.
Question 4
Read this opinion writing.
"I think families should adopt pets from animal shelters instead of buying them from stores. Shelters are full of dogs and cats that need safe homes. Adoption fees are often lower than buying a pet, and many pets are already vaccinated. When you adopt, you also help the shelter have space for another animal. Some people worry shelter pets are not friendly, but many are gentle and just need patience. Adopting can teach kids responsibility because they help feed, walk, and care for the pet. Animals need help."
The conclusion is too vague. Which revision most clearly connects to the opinion and summarizes the reasons?
- In conclusion, adopting from a shelter is a kind choice that saves animals and helps families too. It costs less, gives pets a second chance, and supports shelters that are overcrowded. (correct answer)
- In the end, animals really do need help, and there are a lot of them out there. People should try to be kind to every animal they meet each day.
- In conclusion, pets are cute, and some people like fish more than dogs. Everyone gets to pick their own favorite kind of animal to have at home.
- In conclusion, shelters should be bigger, and the city should build one on every single street so that no animal ever has to wait for a home.
Explanation: The best conclusion restates the opinion in fresh words and reminds readers of the main reasons. The choice about adopting being a kind choice does this: it says shelter adoption saves animals and helps families, then sums up three reasons from the essay—it costs less, gives pets a second chance, and supports overcrowded shelters. That gives the writing a strong, complete ending.
The ending that says animals need help and people should be kind is too vague. It never mentions the opinion about shelter adoption or the specific reasons, so it could fit almost any animal topic.
The one about pets being cute and liking fish more than dogs drifts off-topic. Personal favorites have nothing to do with the argument for adopting from shelters.
The one saying shelters should be bigger and the city should build one on every street adds a brand-new idea instead of summarizing the writer's reasons. A conclusion should wrap up the points already made, not introduce new demands.
Only the first choice restates the opinion and pulls the reasons together, so it is the clear answer.
Question 5
Read this student's opinion writing.
I believe kids should read for at least 20 minutes every day. Reading builds vocabulary because you see new words in real sentences. It also helps you understand stories and information, which makes schoolwork easier. When I read daily, I get better at writing because I learn how authors describe things. Reading can also reduce stress because it gives your brain a calm break. Libraries make reading easier because you can borrow books for free. Another reason is that reading helps you become a better speller.
The ending adds a new reason instead of concluding. Which sentence would provide the BEST conclusion for this opinion essay?
- In conclusion, reading 20 minutes a day helps kids learn new words, improve school skills, and enjoy a relaxing break. If you are not sure what to read, visit the library and choose a book today. (correct answer)
- Another reason is that reading every single day can help you become a much better speller and writer over time. That is one more benefit that everyone should think about carefully.
- In conclusion, books are made of paper, and paper comes from tall trees in the forest. That is why we should always remember to take good care of our natural environment.
- In conclusion, those are all of my reasons, and honestly that is really just about all that I have left to say about this whole entire topic today.
Explanation: The best ending brings the whole essay to a close. It uses conclusion language, restates the opinion in fresh words (reading 20 minutes a day helps kids), sums up the main benefits already given (new words, better school skills, a relaxing break), and tells readers exactly what to do next by visiting the library. That gives the writing a complete, finished feeling.
The choice about becoming a better speller and writer just piles on another new reason, which is the very mistake the stem asks you to fix—a conclusion should wrap up ideas, not add more. The choice about paper coming from trees drifts to a totally different topic (caring for the environment), so it does not conclude this essay about reading. The choice saying those are all my reasons and that is all sounds finished, but it does not restate the opinion or remind readers of any benefits, so it leaves the essay feeling empty. Only the first choice truly summarizes the argument and closes it well.
Question 6
Read this student's opinion essay.
Students should join an after-school club or activity. Clubs help kids make new friends, especially if they are shy. Activities also teach skills, like drawing in art club or solving problems in robotics. Being part of a group can help students feel connected to school and want to attend. Some kids worry activities will be too hard, but many clubs welcome beginners and help them learn. After-school programs can also be a safe place to stay until families get off work. That's my opinion.
Which conclusion is MOST effective because it restates the opinion, summarizes key reasons, and gives a sense of closure?
- Clubs should be required for everyone and meet late so that no student is ever allowed to head home early.
- For these reasons, joining a club is a great choice. Clubs build friendships, teach skills, and help kids feel connected. (correct answer)
- After school, I usually grab a snack, finish my chores, and then relax before starting my homework for the night.
- That is honestly just my own personal opinion, and it is something I have felt strongly about for a very long time.
Explanation: The best ending is the one starting "For these reasons." It restates the writer's opinion in fresh words, reminds readers of the three main reasons (friendships, skills, feeling connected), and gives a clear sense of closure. That is exactly what a strong conclusion does.
The choice about clubs being required and meeting late is off track: it adds a brand-new demand the essay never argued, instead of pulling the reasons together. The snack-and-chores sentence describes the writer's afternoon routine, which has nothing to do with the opinion or its reasons, so it gives no closure. The "that is honestly just my own personal opinion" sentence only repeats that it IS an opinion; it never restates WHAT the opinion is or summarizes any reason, so readers are left without a real wrap-up.
Remember: a conclusion should say your opinion again in new words and briefly remind readers of your main reasons.
Question 7
Read this opinion paragraph.
I believe families should adopt pets from animal shelters instead of buying them from stores. Shelters are full of animals that need safe homes and kind owners. Adoption often costs less because many shelters include shots and checkups. Shelter pets can be wonderful companions because they are grateful and loving. Some people think shelter animals are always sick or mean, but many are healthy and friendly. When you adopt, you also make more space for another animal to be rescued. Animals need help.
Which conclusion is most clearly related to the opinion and gives a strong call to action?
- Animals need help.
- In conclusion, adopting from a shelter gives animals a second chance and helps families find loving pets. If your family wants a pet, visit a local shelter or donate supplies to support their work. (correct answer)
- Cats are better than dogs because they are quieter.
- Pet stores sell fish, lizards, and hamsters too.
Explanation: This question tests 5th grade opinion writing: providing a concluding statement or section related to the opinion presented (CCSS.W.5.1.d). Strong opinion writing conclusions RESTATE the opinion in new words (not copying from introduction), SUMMARIZE the key reasons briefly (remind readers of 2-3 main points), may include a CALL TO ACTION (what readers should do), and provide FINAL THOUGHT about importance or impact. Good conclusions give a sense of CLOSURE—they feel complete and use concluding language (For these reasons, In conclusion, Therefore, Ultimately). Choice B is correct because it uses proper transition language ('In conclusion'), restates the opinion in new words ('adopting from a shelter gives animals a second chance'), summarizes the key benefit (helps families find loving pets), and includes a specific, actionable call to action (visit a local shelter or donate supplies). This makes an effective conclusion by connecting the opinion to concrete actions readers can take. Choice A is weak because it's too vague and general ('Animals need help') without specifically restating the opinion about shelter adoption or providing any summary of reasons, showing the common error where students write conclusions that could apply to any animal topic. To help students: Teach conclusion formula - Restate opinion (in NEW words, not copied), Call to action (what readers should do - appropriate and achievable), Final thought (why it matters, impact, benefits). Focus on RESTATING OPINION in NEW WORDS and PROVIDING CLOSURE related to OPINION PRESENTED.
Question 8
Look at this student's opinion writing.
Our town should improve the neighborhood park. The playground has old equipment, and some parts are broken. When families visit, they sometimes leave because there is not much to do. If the city adds new swings and a safe climbing area, more kids can play without getting hurt. The park also needs more trash cans, because litter ends up on the grass. Cleaner spaces help animals and make the park nicer for everyone. Adding a few benches would give grandparents and parents a place to rest while watching children.
The paragraph stops after the last reason and needs a conclusion. Which sentence would provide the BEST conclusion for this opinion essay?
- The park is near my house, and I like to go there with my friends on the weekend when the weather is nice.
- For all these reasons, the city should repair and update the park soon so it is safer and cleaner for everyone. (correct answer)
- Maybe someday the park could also add a huge swimming pool and a giant roller coaster that everyone would love.
- Parks are important places, and many towns work hard to take good care of the parks that they already have.
Explanation: The best conclusion restates the writer's opinion in new words and reminds readers why it matters. The sentence beginning "For all these reasons" does this: it signals that the essay is ending, repeats the main idea (the city should fix the park) in fresh wording, and points to the benefits of a safer, cleaner park. That gives the essay a complete, finished feeling.
The sentence about the park being near your house and going with friends is only a personal detail. It does not restate the opinion or wrap up the argument. The sentence about adding a swimming pool and a roller coaster introduces brand-new ideas the essay never argued for, so it does not conclude anything. The sentence saying parks are important and towns take care of them sounds general and could fit almost any topic; it never restates THIS essay's opinion about improving THIS town's park. A strong conclusion must tie back to the argument you actually made.
Question 9
Read this student's opinion writing about reading.
I think students should read for at least twenty minutes every day. Reading often helps build vocabulary, so hard words become easier over time. It can also improve writing, because readers notice how authors use details and strong sentences. Reading is also a great way to learn facts about history, science, and other places. Some students say reading is boring, but choosing a book about your favorite topic can make it exciting. Libraries and classrooms have many kinds of books, like comics, mysteries, and biographies. Also, reading every day can help you fall asleep faster at night.
The last sentence introduces a new reason instead of concluding. Which conclusion would work BEST to restate the opinion and provide closure?
- Also, reading before bed every night can help tired students fall asleep much faster and feel more rested in the morning.
- Most books are printed on paper, and some longer chapter books can take many weeks for a busy student to finish.
- In my opinion, everyone should read comics, mysteries, and biographies, because those kinds of books can be found in most libraries.
- In conclusion, daily reading is a smart habit for students to build. It grows vocabulary, improves writing, and helps us learn new information in a fun way. (correct answer)
Explanation: The best conclusion says "In conclusion," then restates the opinion in new words ("daily reading is a smart habit") and quickly reminds readers of the main reasons—it grows vocabulary, improves writing, and helps you learn—ending on a positive note. That wraps up the whole piece and gives a sense of closure.
The choice about reading before bed to fall asleep is wrong because it adds a brand-new reason instead of summarizing the reasons already given—exactly the mistake the last sentence made.
The choice about books being printed on paper and taking weeks to finish is off-topic; it never restates the opinion or the reasons for reading daily.
The choice telling everyone to read comics, mysteries, and biographies only repeats one small detail from the middle of the writing. It picks up a single example instead of restating the main opinion and summarizing the key reasons, so it does not truly conclude the piece.
Question 10
Read this student's opinion essay.
We should reduce waste at home and at school. When we throw away too much plastic and paper, it fills up landfills that take years to break down. Some trash can also blow into rivers and harm animals that mistake it for food. Reusing items, like water bottles and lunch containers, can lower the amount of garbage we make. Recycling paper and cans also saves resources, because new materials do not have to be made from scratch. Even small changes, like using both sides of a notebook page, can make a difference. So we should help the Earth.
The last sentence is too vague. Which revision creates a stronger conclusion that restates the opinion and includes a call to action?
- Trash is everywhere, and it is gross.
- So we should help the Earth.
- Also, factories should stop making plastic forever, and then there would be no trash at all.
- In conclusion, we should cut down on waste by reusing and recycling every day. If each family starts with one small change, our community can keep landfills and rivers cleaner. (correct answer)
Explanation: This question tests 5th grade opinion writing: providing a concluding statement or section related to the opinion presented (CCSS.W.5.1.d). Strong opinion writing conclusions RESTATE the opinion in new words (not copying from introduction), SUMMARIZE the key reasons briefly (remind readers of 2-3 main points), may include a CALL TO ACTION (what readers should do), and provide FINAL THOUGHT about importance or impact. Good conclusions give a sense of CLOSURE—they feel complete and use concluding language (For these reasons, In conclusion, Therefore, Ultimately). Choice B is correct because it uses 'In conclusion,' restates the opinion in new words ('cut down on waste by reusing and recycling' instead of 'reduce waste'), includes a specific call to action ('each family starts with one small change'), and provides a final thought about the impact (keeping landfills and rivers cleaner). This makes an effective conclusion by telling readers exactly what they should do and why it matters. Choice A is weak because it's too vague ('help the Earth') without restating the specific opinion about reducing waste or summarizing any of the concrete reasons given. This is a common error where students write a general environmental statement that doesn't connect to their specific argument about waste reduction. To help students: Teach conclusion formula - Restate opinion (in NEW words, not copied), Summarize key reasons (briefly mention 2-3 main points), Call to action (what readers should do - appropriate and achievable), Final thought (why it matters, impact, benefits). Watch for: vague statements that could fit any environmental topic instead of the specific opinion presented.
Question 11
Read this student's opinion writing.
Our school should have a class pet in each homeroom. A class pet can teach students responsibility, because someone must feed it and clean its area. It can also help students learn science by observing how an animal eats, moves, and rests. Many students feel calmer when they can quietly watch a small animal during independent work time. Teachers can set clear rules so the pet stays safe and is not a distraction. Some people worry about allergies, but the school could choose a pet like a fish that stays in a tank. A class pet can make the classroom feel like a friendly community. That is why I think our school should have a class pet in each homeroom.
Which conclusion is weak because it copies the opinion statement word-for-word?
- In conclusion, teachers should talk with families before picking a pet.
- That is why I think our school should have a class pet in each homeroom. (correct answer)
- A class pet can be fun to watch and care for.
- For these reasons, having a class pet could help students learn responsibility and science. If we choose a safe pet and follow rules, it can improve our classroom community.
Explanation: This question tests 5th grade opinion writing: providing a concluding statement or section related to the opinion presented (CCSS.W.5.1.d). Strong opinion writing conclusions RESTATE the opinion in new words (not copying from introduction), SUMMARIZE the key reasons briefly (remind readers of 2-3 main points), may include a CALL TO ACTION (what readers should do), and provide FINAL THOUGHT about importance or impact. Good conclusions give a sense of CLOSURE—they feel complete and use concluding language (For these reasons, In conclusion, Therefore, Ultimately). Choice C is correct as the weak conclusion because it's an identical word-for-word copy of the opinion statement from the introduction ('That is why I think our school should have a class pet in each homeroom'). This is exactly what makes a conclusion weak - no development, no summary, just repetition. Choice A would be the stronger conclusion because it uses 'For these reasons,' restates the opinion in new words ('having a class pet could help students' instead of exact copy), summarizes key benefits (learn responsibility and science), includes a condition (if we choose safe pet and follow rules), and provides final thought (improve classroom community). To help students: Teach conclusion formula - Restate opinion (in NEW words, not copied), Summarize key reasons (briefly mention 2-3 main points), Call to action (what readers should do - appropriate and achievable), Final thought (why it matters, impact, benefits). Practice identifying conclusions that simply copy the thesis statement word-for-word.
Question 12
Read this student's opinion writing.
I think teachers should give less homework on weekends. Weekends are a time for families to spend time together and rest. If students have too much homework, they may rush and not learn the material well. Kids also need time to play outside, exercise, and help at home. Some people say homework teaches responsibility, but students can still practice responsibility on school nights. When students return on Monday feeling rested, they can focus better in class. These are my reasons.
Which conclusion includes the BEST restatement and sense of closure?
- In the end, weekend homework can be hard for some students and easy for others, depending on the subject and how much they already know about it.
- In addition, students should get longer lunch breaks on Mondays so they have plenty of time to eat, relax, and talk with their friends before class.
- These are my reasons, and that is why I feel this way about homework after thinking carefully about the whole topic and everything above.
- To conclude, weekend homework should be lighter so students can rest and still learn well, giving kids more time for family, exercise, and careful studying so they return ready to succeed. (correct answer)
Explanation: The best conclusion restates the opinion in fresh words ("weekend homework should be lighter" instead of "give less homework"), briefly sums up the main reasons (rest, family, exercise, careful studying), and adds a final thought about the payoff (returning "ready to succeed"). That gives the writing a real sense of closure. The choice about homework being hard for some and easy for others does not restate the opinion at all—it introduces a new, unsure idea instead of wrapping up the argument. The choice about longer Monday lunches adds a brand-new topic that was never part of the writing, so it drifts away from the opinion instead of closing it. The choice that just says "These are my reasons" only repeats the passage's weak ending and stretches it out; it still never restates the opinion in new words or summarizes the actual reasons, so it leaves the writing feeling unfinished. Only the conclusion that restates, summarizes, and looks forward truly finishes the argument.
Question 13
Look at this student's opinion writing.
I think our town should add more recycling bins in public places like parks and sidewalks. Many people buy snacks and drinks, and then they cannot find a bin nearby. When trash is left on the ground, it can wash into storm drains and end up in rivers. Recycling bins can also remind people to sort plastic, paper, and cans instead of throwing everything away. Some people say bins cost money, but cleaning up litter also costs money and time. More bins would make our community look cleaner for everyone who visits.
The paragraph ends without a conclusion. Which sentence would provide the BEST concluding statement?
- Another reason to think about is that some people do not like walking far when they are carrying their trash around.
- For all these reasons, our town should place more recycling bins in busy areas. If we add bins and use them, we can cut down on litter and protect our rivers. (correct answer)
- Recycling is a very important thing to do because it helps keep the whole Earth clean and healthy for us all.
- Parks are really fun places to visit and play games with your friends together after a long day at school.
Explanation: The best conclusion wraps up the whole argument. The sentence starting with "For all these reasons" restates the opinion in new words (place bins in busy areas), reminds readers of the main points (less litter, cleaner rivers), and tells readers what to do. That gives the paragraph a complete, finished feeling.
The choice about people not liking to walk far adds a brand-new reason instead of wrapping up. A conclusion should pull ideas together, not introduce something new. The choice saying recycling helps keep the Earth clean is true, but it is too general—it never restates this writer's specific opinion about adding bins in town, so it could end almost any recycling essay. The choice about parks being fun places to play drifts off topic; it talks about playing with friends instead of the argument for more recycling bins. Only the "For all these reasons" sentence actually concludes THIS opinion.
Question 14
Read this opinion paragraph.
I believe families should try to reduce food waste at home. When we throw away food, all the water and energy used to grow it are wasted too. In the United States, a lot of food is thrown out even though it is still safe to eat. One easy way to help is planning meals and making a shopping list. Another way is saving leftovers for lunch the next day. Composting fruit peels and vegetable scraps can also keep trash out of landfills. If we waste less food, we save money and help the Earth. So we should help the Earth.
Which conclusion best restates the opinion in a new way and provides better closure?
- So we should help the Earth.
- For all these reasons, cutting down on food waste is a smart choice for families. By planning meals, using leftovers, and composting scraps, we can save money and protect the planet. (correct answer)
- Food can be delicious, especially pizza and tacos.
- This is important, and people should think about it.
Explanation: This question tests 5th grade opinion writing: providing a concluding statement or section related to the opinion presented (CCSS.W.5.1.d). Strong opinion writing conclusions RESTATE the opinion in new words (not copying from introduction), SUMMARIZE the key reasons briefly (remind readers of 2-3 main points), may include a CALL TO ACTION (what readers should do), and provide FINAL THOUGHT about importance or impact. Good conclusions give a sense of CLOSURE—they feel complete and use concluding language (For these reasons, In conclusion, Therefore, Ultimately). Choice B is correct because it uses strong transition language ('For all these reasons'), restates the opinion in new words ('cutting down on food waste is a smart choice'), summarizes specific strategies mentioned in the essay (planning meals, using leftovers, composting), and provides a final thought about dual benefits (save money and protect the planet). This makes an effective conclusion by connecting all the reasons together and showing the broader impact of the opinion. Choice A is weak because it's too vague ('help the Earth') without restating the specific opinion about food waste or summarizing any of the concrete reasons given, showing the common error where students write generic conclusions that could fit any environmental topic. To help students: Use transition words - For these reasons, In conclusion, Therefore, Ultimately. Watch for: vague statements ('this is good'), conclusions about different topic, no closure or finality.
Question 15
Read this student's opinion essay.
I believe our school should have a longer recess every day. Right now recess feels rushed, and many kids barely start a game before the whistle blows. If recess is longer, students can run, climb, and play, which helps our bodies stay healthy. Teachers also say that after a good break, kids focus better in class. Longer recess can also help students solve problems with friends, like taking turns and sharing rules. Some people worry that longer recess will take away learning time, but students often learn better after moving around. When we come back calm and ready, class time can be used wisely. That is why I think our school should have a longer recess every day.
The last sentence is weak because it just repeats the opinion. Which revision creates a stronger conclusion?
- That is why I think our school should have a longer recess every day, just like the sentence at the very start of my essay already said.
- Recess is really fun, and honestly it is the best part of the whole school day for almost every kid I know. The end.
- For these reasons, adding more recess time would help students stay healthy and focused. It also gives us time to practice teamwork, so our whole school day runs better. (correct answer)
- Also, longer recess would let us have snack time outside, and maybe we could even invite kids from other schools to come play games with us too.
Explanation: The best conclusion is the one that says the recess idea would help students stay healthy and focused, gives time for teamwork, and makes the whole school day run better. It restates the opinion in fresh words and pulls together the essay's main reasons, so it feels finished and strong.
The choice that repeats 'our school should have a longer recess every day' is weak because it just copies the opening opinion again without adding any reasons or new thinking—exactly the problem the question points out. The choice that says recess is fun and 'The end' shares a feeling but never summarizes the reasons or gives a real sense of closure. The choice about snack time outside and inviting other schools adds brand-new ideas that were never in the essay, so it wanders off topic instead of wrapping up the argument. Only the option that restates the opinion and sums up the reasons does the job of a true conclusion.
Question 16
Look at this student's opinion writing.
I think our town should add more recycling bins in public places like parks and bus stops. When people cannot find a bin, they often throw bottles and paper on the ground. Litter makes our community look messy and can wash into storm drains. Recycling also saves resources because old cans and paper can be used again. Our school recycles, and it keeps a lot of trash out of the landfill each week. Some people say bins cost money, but cleaning up litter also costs money and time. If bins are easy to find, more people will use them.
The paragraph ends without a conclusion. Which sentence would provide the BEST conclusion for this opinion essay?
- In conclusion, more recycling bins would keep our town cleaner and help save resources. Town leaders should place bins in busy areas so everyone can recycle easily. (correct answer)
- Recycling is important for many reasons, and it is something that people all over the world care about every single day.
- My friend likes to collect empty bottles and cans and then trade them in at the store for prizes and small amounts of money.
- More recycling bins in public places like parks and bus stops would definitely be a very good thing for our whole town to have.
Explanation: The best conclusion pulls the whole essay together. The sentence beginning "In conclusion" uses concluding language, restates the opinion in fresh words ("keep our town cleaner and help save resources"), reminds readers of the main reasons, and adds a clear call to action about placing bins in busy areas. That gives the essay a complete, finished feeling.
The choice saying recycling is important "all over the world" is too general and drifts to a new, bigger topic instead of wrapping up THIS essay about the town's bins. The choice about a friend trading bottles for prizes is off-topic; it tells a personal story and never states the writer's opinion. The choice that says more bins "would definitely be a very good thing" just repeats the opening opinion in almost the same words, so it does not summarize the reasons or bring the argument to a close. Ask yourself: Does the sentence restate the opinion in NEW words, remind readers of the reasons, and feel COMPLETE? Only the first choice does all three.
Question 17
Read this student's opinion essay.
I believe our school should have a longer recess every day. Right now, recess feels rushed, and many kids barely start a game before the whistle blows. Longer recess helps our bodies because running and climbing are real exercise. Doctors say kids need about 60 minutes of activity each day, and recess can help. It also helps our brains because we come back calmer and more ready to learn. When we get to move, we wiggle less during math and reading. Some people worry longer recess takes away learning time, but focused students learn faster. Recess also helps friendships because we can solve problems and practice taking turns. That is why I think our school should have a longer recess every day.
The last sentence is weak because it just repeats the opinion. Which revision creates a stronger conclusion?
- For these reasons, our school should have a longer recess every day so that many kids do not have to stop before their game even starts.
- For these reasons, extending recess would help students stay healthy, focus better, and build friendships. I hope our principal will consider adding more recess time so we can learn our best. (correct answer)
- In conclusion, longer recess would be a good idea, and I really think our whole school should agree that it is the right thing to do.
- Ultimately, a longer recess would also give students more chances to buy snacks from the cafeteria and hang out with friends from other classes.
Explanation: The strongest conclusion does three things: it restates the opinion in new words, it briefly reminds readers of the main reasons, and it ends with a clear final thought. The best answer restates the opinion as 'extending recess would help students,' sums up all three reasons from the essay (staying healthy, focusing better, building friendships), and adds a call to action asking the principal to consider it. That gives the essay a complete, satisfying ending.
The choice that begins 'For these reasons, our school should have a longer recess' just copies the opening opinion word-for-word and adds a detail; it repeats instead of summarizing, which is the same weak move the stem points out. The choice starting 'In conclusion, longer recess would be a good idea' sounds like a conclusion but never mentions the essay's reasons, so it feels empty. The choice beginning 'Ultimately' adds a brand-new point about buying snacks that was never argued in the essay, so it does not wrap up the ideas the writer actually gave. Only the best answer reviews the real reasons and closes the argument.
Question 18
Read this argument about healthy living.
I believe kids should get at least one hour of exercise most days. Moving our bodies helps our hearts and muscles stay strong. Exercise can also improve mood, because it helps many people feel less stressed. When kids play outside or join a sport, they practice teamwork and learn to keep trying. Some students say they do not have time, but even walking the dog or riding a bike counts. Too much sitting can make people feel tired and unfocused.
The paragraph needs a closing sentence. Which conclusion best summarizes the reasons and ends the paragraph smoothly?
- In the end, sitting too much is a problem that makes many people feel tired, unfocused, and bored during their day.
- Also, exercise works even better when you buy expensive equipment and special shoes made for different kinds of sports.
- For these reasons, kids should make time to move for about an hour each day. It strengthens our bodies, improves our mood, and helps us build teamwork skills. (correct answer)
- I really like playing video games after school with my friends because they are fun and we get to relax together.
Explanation: The best conclusion is the one beginning "For these reasons." It uses concluding language, restates the opinion in new words ("make time to move for about an hour"), and briefly sums up the three main reasons from the paragraph: stronger bodies, better mood, and teamwork. This gives the reader a sense of closure and ties the whole argument together.
The choice about "sitting too much" only repeats one detail from the middle of the paragraph and adds a new idea ("bored") instead of summarizing the reasons, so it does not wrap up the argument.
The choice about "expensive equipment and special shoes" adds a brand-new claim that was never part of the argument, so it does not conclude anything the writer said.
The choice about "playing video games after school" is off-topic; it talks about relaxing instead of exercising and does not restate the opinion or summarize any reasons.
A strong conclusion restates your opinion in fresh words and reminds readers of your main points.
Question 19
Read this opinion writing.
"I believe families should limit screen time on school nights. When kids stare at screens too long, it can be harder to fall asleep. Doctors say sleep helps our brains learn and remember new information. Too much screen time can also cause headaches and make our eyes feel tired. If we turn off devices earlier, we have more time to read, talk, or get ready for the next day. Some people think screens help them relax, but there are other relaxing activities, like drawing or listening to music. Limiting screens can help everyone feel calmer and more rested. Exercise is important. The end."
Which conclusion best restates the opinion in a new way and provides better closure?
- For all these reasons, turning screens off earlier on school nights is a smart choice. Better sleep, healthier eyes, and more family time help kids do their best in school. (correct answer)
- Families should limit screen time because video games are the main reason kids stay up late and forget to do their homework every single night.
- Screens have become a huge part of life, and companies keep making brand-new games and apps that everyone wants to try out each year.
- In the end, screens matter, so families should think about them and maybe make some rules that work for everyone at home.
Explanation: The best conclusion restates the main opinion in fresh words—"turning screens off earlier on school nights is a smart choice"—and briefly sums up the writer's key reasons: better sleep, healthier eyes, and more family time. The phrase "For all these reasons" signals a strong ending, and connecting the benefits to doing well in school gives the reader a satisfying sense of closure.
The choice about video games staying up late adds a brand-new reason that was never in the essay and misreads the argument, so it does not truly restate what the writer said. The choice about companies making new games and apps drifts to a different topic and never mentions limiting screens or the writer's opinion at all. The choice saying screens "matter" and families should "maybe make some rules" sounds like an ending, but it is too vague—it never restates the actual opinion or reminds readers of the reasons, so it gives weak closure. Only the first choice restates the opinion in new words, summarizes the reasons, and closes the essay clearly.
Question 20
Read this student's opinion writing.
I think every student should join an after-school club or activity. Activities help kids learn new skills, like acting, coding, or playing a sport. Clubs also help students make friends with people they might not meet in class. When students practice something each week, they learn how to set goals and improve over time. Some students worry about being too busy, but many clubs only meet once or twice a week. After-school activities can even help students feel more connected to school. That's my opinion.
Which conclusion summarizes the main reasons and provides better closure?
- One more idea is that every club should hand out free pizza at each meeting, which would make more kids want to sign up and stay.
- After school is the part of the day when the sun begins to go down and families start to head home for dinner together.
- Clearly, joining a club is a great choice for students. It builds skills, creates friendships, and helps kids feel proud, so students should try one this year. (correct answer)
- That is really the whole thing I wanted to say, so I think I am pretty much done talking about clubs now.
Explanation: A strong conclusion should remind readers of the main opinion and its reasons, then leave them with a clear final thought. The best answer restates the opinion in fresh words ('joining a club is a great choice'), sums up the three key benefits from the writing—building skills, making friends, and feeling proud—and ends with a call to action ('try one this year'). That gives the writing real closure. The choice about clubs handing out free pizza adds a brand-new idea instead of summarizing what was already said, so it does not conclude the argument. The choice about the sun going down and families heading to dinner only explains what 'after school' means; it wanders off topic and never mentions the opinion or its reasons. The choice that just says the writer is done talking simply announces an ending—it repeats no reasons and restates no opinion, so it feels abrupt and empty. Only one answer both summarizes the reasons and closes the piece with purpose.