Develop Writing Through Planning and Revising Practice Test

He edited commas and spelling so the story followed conventions, even though the confusing event order stayed the same.

He added the missing discovery moment and replaced repeated words, so readers understood how he found the cave.

He planned a new outline after drafting, which moved the conclusion to the beginning for stronger organization.

He worked independently and kept the jump in time, so the reader had to infer how the cave appeared.