Provide Concluding Opinion Statement Practice Test

Read this student's opinion writing.

"I believe our school should have a longer recess every day. Right now we only get about 20 minutes, and it feels rushed. When recess is short, many kids barely finish their snack before the bell rings. Longer recess also helps students move their bodies, which is important for health. Teachers often say we focus better after we get fresh air and exercise. Another reason is that recess helps us practice sharing and solving problems with friends. If we have more time to play, fewer arguments start because people do not feel hurried. Some kids also need extra time to calm down when they feel upset. A longer recess could make the classroom quieter and help learning go smoother. That is why I think our school should have a longer recess every day."

The last sentence is weak because it repeats the opinion exactly. Which revision creates a stronger conclusion?

Read this student's opinion paragraph.

"I believe our community should build more bike lanes on busy roads. Bike lanes make it safer for kids and adults to ride without cars getting too close. When more people bike, there is less traffic, so drivers spend less time waiting. Biking also reduces air pollution because fewer cars are used for short trips. Some people say bike lanes take away parking spaces, but safety should come first. If riding feels safer, more families might choose bikes for the park or the store."

Which conclusion is most clearly related to the opinion that the community should build more bike lanes and provides closure?