Use Transitions to Show Sequence Practice Test

Look at the transitions the writer uses: "First, Amir opened his math notebook. Then he solved the first problem. Then he checked his work. Then he started the next page." How could the writer improve the transitions to better manage the sequence?​

The sentences show a morning routine: “First, Yuki fed her dog and filled its water bowl. Then, she checked her homework folder. Then, she ate toast. Then, she put on her jacket and left.” How could the writer improve the transitions to better manage the sequence?