SAT Writing : Identifying Ambiguity and Redundancy Errors

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Example Question #63 : Identifying Other Phrase, Clause, And Sentence Errors

Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.

Our physics teacher is famous for distributing papers to students while at the same time chewing his gum quite loudly. No error

Possible Answers:

loudly

physics

No error 

at the same time

distributing 

Correct answer:

at the same time

Explanation:

“At the same time” means the same thing as “while.” Therefore, it is redundant, and doesn't need to be included in the sentence.

Example Question #2 : Identifying Ambiguity And Redundancy Errors

Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.

Certain colors are associated with certain emotions in our minds, and while certain smells are associated with certain memories. No error

Possible Answers:

No error

with

and while

associated

are

Correct answer:

and while

Explanation:

Either "while" or "and" could be used as a proper transition between the two sections of the sentence, but the phrase "and while" is overly wordy and therefore incorrect. 

Example Question #1 : Identifying Ambiguity And Redundancy Errors

Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.

Our Algebra homework this week was definitely without a doubt the most challenging assignment yet, so it was gratifying to get a perfect score on it. No error

Possible Answers:

yet, so

most

Algebra

No error

without a doubt

Correct answer:

without a doubt

Explanation:

"Without a doubt" means the same thing as "definitely" and therefore does not need to be included in the sentence.

Example Question #2 : Identifying Ambiguity And Redundancy Errors

Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all. 

When Lonnie stepped onto the field, he was definitely without a doubt the most confident member of our high school marching band. No error

Possible Answers:

 most confident 

our

definitely without a doubt

No error

When Lonnie stepped

Correct answer:

definitely without a doubt

Explanation:

"Without a doubt" means the same thing as "definitely," and is therefore redundant when used in the above sentence. 

Example Question #1 : Identifying Ambiguity And Redundancy Errors

Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all. 

While when Rachel was cleaning her apartment, she found her long-lost high school yearbook beneath her cat's bed. No error

Possible Answers:

long-lost

beneath

found

No error

when

Correct answer:

when

Explanation:

In the sentence above, "when" is redundant since "While" is already used. 

Example Question #2 : Identifying Ambiguity And Redundancy Errors

Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all. 

Jonah was really thirsty during the day, but however he didn't have enough money to buy a bottle of water from the vending machine. No error

Possible Answers:

No error

to buy

really

from

however

Correct answer:

however

Explanation:

In the sentence above, "however" is redundant, since "but" is already used. 

Example Question #941 : Identifying Sentence Errors

Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all. 

April's pencils were not all sharpened, even though although she had run them through the sharpener several times. No error

Possible Answers:

although

No error

several

run them

were not

Correct answer:

although

Explanation:

In this instance, "although" means the same thing as "even though" and is therefore redundant. 

Example Question #6 : Identifying Ambiguity And Redundancy Errors

Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all. 

Calvin would often tell Jimmy that Jimmy was his best friend, while simultaneously at the same time he would tell Steve that he was his best friend. No error

Possible Answers:

simultaneously

would often

Jimmy

he

No error

Correct answer:

simultaneously

Explanation:

"Simultaneously" means the same thing as "at the same time" in this sentence, and is therefore redundant. 

Example Question #1 : Identifying Ambiguity And Redundancy Errors

Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all. 

The kitten is very shy around most people, yet but he immediately runs up to play with Daisy whenever she comes into the house. No error.  

Possible Answers:

around

to play

but

whenever

No error

Correct answer:

but

Explanation:

"But" is a redundant word in the above sentence, as it is a synonym of "yet" and is not required for the sentence to be grammatically correct.

Example Question #8 : Identifying Ambiguity And Redundancy Errors

Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.

As the substitute teacher wrote the homework assignment on the board, the last bell began to ring as well. No error

Possible Answers:

wrote

No error

on

board, the last bell

as well

Correct answer:

as well

Explanation:

Since the use of "as" in the introductory clause already establishes that another action is happening at the same time, the "as well" is redundant and should be omitted.

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