Recent Tutoring Session Reviews
"Today the student and I cleaned up his essays for the University. We only have a few more words to cut down and will finalize the essay for submission tomorrow. We focused on diction, preventing repetition, and emphasized answering the question completely and concisely. He did a great job today!"
"The student and I finished his essay today, getting the word count down to the required 1000. We re-structured much of his essay to accommodate the word count and to introduce the themes we decided should be prevalent in the statement. He is now ready to submit his first application, and in our next session we will continue tweaking the essay to accommodate the requirements for each school to which he's applying."
"This session, we worked further on the "why transferring" essay. We refined the section discussing personal experience and directed it more towards programming and less towards hardware development. We also focused on including numbers and specifics in reasons for transferring. For next week, I suggest adding a paragraph on general interests and one on public policy, relating these back to the central theme. We will finalize the essay next week and move on to supplements."