Adult Literacy Beginner • Language

Correcting Run-Ons — I can recognize and correct run-on sentences or missing punctuation in supported editing tasks.

Learn how to spot and fix run-on sentences so your writing is clear and easy to read.

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Inside this lesson 10 sections 5 questions 5 figures

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Why Sentences Need Boundaries

Think about how you talk. When you speak, you pause between ideas. You take a breath. Those pauses help the person listening know when one thought ends and a new one begins. Writing works the same way — but instead of pauses, we use punctuation marks like periods and commas. When a sentence runs two complete thoughts together without the right punctuation, it is called a run-on sentence. Run-on sentences are hard to read because the reader cannot tell where one idea stops and the next one starts. This lesson will help you spot run-ons and fix them.

Step 1 • Find the Two Thoughts

Read the sentence. Ask yourself: are there two complete ideas here? A complete idea has a person or thing (subject) doing something (verb).

Step 2 • Check the Punctuation

Look at how the two ideas are joined. Is there a period? A comma? Nothing at all? This tells you if there is a run-on error.

Step 3 • Choose a Fix

You can fix a run-on by adding a period, adding a comma plus a joining word, or using a semicolon. You will practice all of these in this lesson.

Step 4 • Check Your Work

Read the fixed sentence out loud. Does it sound right? Can you tell where one idea ends and the next begins? If yes, you fixed the run-on!

Step 5 • Practice Makes It Stick

The more you practice spotting and fixing run-ons, the easier it gets. By the end of this lesson, you will be able to do it on your own.

The big question we will answer in this lesson is simple: when two complete thoughts end up in the same sentence, how do you fix it? There are a few easy ways, and we will look at each one.

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Key Words and Definitions

Before we practice fixing run-on sentences, let's learn a few key words. A complete sentence has a subject (who or what the sentence is about) and a verb (what that subject does) and expresses a complete thought. A run-on sentence happens when two complete thoughts are stuck together without the right punctuation. There are two common types of run-ons: a fused sentence (no punctuation at all between the two thoughts) and a comma splice (only a comma between the two thoughts, with no joining word). Learning to spot these two errors is the first step to fixing them.

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Complete Sentence

A sentence that has a subject and a verb and makes one complete thought. Example: The store closes at nine.
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Fused Sentence

Two complete thoughts run together with nothing between them — no period, no comma. Example: The store closes at nine I need to leave now.
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Comma Splice

Two complete thoughts joined with only a comma and no joining word. Example: The store closes at nine, I need to leave now.
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Joining Word (Conjunction)

A small word that connects two complete thoughts. The most common ones are: for, and, nor, but, or, yet, so. You can remember them with the word FANBOYS.
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Semicolon

A punctuation mark (;) that can join two closely related complete thoughts without a joining word. It is stronger than a comma but softer than a period.
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KEY TAKEAWAY

Think of a complete sentence like a box that holds one idea. A run-on sentence is like trying to stuff two ideas into one box with no divider — everything spills together and gets confusing. A period, a semicolon, or a comma with a joining word acts like a divider that keeps the ideas separate and easy to read.

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Visual Explanation — Anatomy of a Run-On

Three Types of Clause JoiningFUSED SENTENCE (ERROR)The exam starts at noon∅we should study tonight.Independent Clause 1Independent Clause 2COMMA SPLICE (ERROR)The exam starts at noon,we should study tonight.Independent Clause 1Independent Clause 2✓ Four Correct SolutionsFIX 1 — PERIOD...at noon. We should study...FIX 2 — SEMICOLON...at noon; we should study...FIX 3 — COMMA + CONJUNCTION...at noon, so we should study...FIX 4 — ADD A JOINING WORDBecause the exam starts at noon...Quick CheckCan each part stand alone as a sentence? → YES → You have two complete thoughts.Two complete thoughts need a proper connector: period, semicolon, or comma + joining word.
The top two boxes show the two types of run-on errors: the fused sentence (no punctuation) and the comma splice (comma without a joining word). Below, the four boxes show four ways to fix them. The quick check at the bottom gives you a simple test: if each part can stand alone as a sentence, the two thoughts need to be connected the right way.

The diagram above shows all the main ideas from this lesson in one picture. The two error types at the top have the same problem: two complete thoughts with no proper boundary between them. The four fixes at the bottom each solve the problem in a slightly different way. A period makes two separate sentences — the clearest and simplest fix. A semicolon shows that the two ideas are closely connected. A comma with a joining word shows how the two ideas relate (for example, "but" shows contrast, and "so" shows a result). Adding a word like "because" or "when" at the start of one thought makes it clear that one idea supports the other.

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How to Fix Run-Ons — Four Simple Strategies

There are four easy ways to fix a run-on sentence. Each one works by putting a clear boundary between two complete thoughts. Let's look at each fix one at a time, with simple examples from everyday life.

Fix 1 — Use a Period

The easiest fix is to put a period between the two complete thoughts and start the second one with a capital letter. This makes two separate sentences. For example: I went to the store I bought milk. → I went to the store. I bought milk. This fix is always correct and is a great place to start.

Fix 2 — Use a Semicolon

A semicolon (;) can join two complete thoughts that are closely related. You do not need a joining word with a semicolon. For example: I went to the store I bought milk. → I went to the store; I bought milk. Use a semicolon when the two ideas are very closely connected and you want to keep them in the same sentence.

Fix 3 — Use a Comma Plus a Joining Word (FANBOYS)

A comma alone between two complete thoughts is an error. But a comma plus a joining word works correctly. The seven joining words are: for, and, nor, but, or, yet, so. You can remember them with the word FANBOYS. For example: I went to the store I bought milk. → I went to the store, and I bought milk. The joining word shows how the two ideas connect. "But" shows contrast. "So" shows a result. "And" adds information.

Fix 4 — Add a Connecting Word to the Start

You can also add a word like "because," "when," "since," or "although" to the beginning of one thought. This makes that thought lean on the other one, showing how the ideas are connected. For example: I went to the store I needed milk. → I went to the store because I needed milk. This is a good fix when one idea explains the reason for the other.

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Watch Out: 'However' and 'Therefore' Are Not Joining Words

Watch out for words like however, therefore, also — these are NOT joining words (FANBOYS). You cannot use a comma before them to connect two complete thoughts. Instead, use a semicolon: The store was busy; however, I found what I needed quickly.

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Choosing the Right Fix

All four fixes are correct. How do you choose which one to use? The best fix depends on how the two ideas relate to each other. The flowchart and table below will help you decide.

How to Choose Your FixFind the run-on sentenceAre the two ideas closely related?NOYESUse a PERIODTwo separate sentencesDo you want to show how they connect?NOYESUse a SEMICOLONClose connection, no joining wordAre the ideas equal in weight?NOYESADD A CONNECTING WORDbecause, although, since, when..., + FANBOYSand, but, so...Remember: a comma ALONE between two complete thoughts = COMMA SPLICE (error)Always pair a comma with a FANBOYS word, or use a semicolon or period instead.
This chart helps you choose the best fix for a run-on. Start at the top by finding the run-on. Then ask: are the two ideas closely related? Use a period if they are not. If they are related, decide if you want to show how they connect. Keep following the arrows to find your best fix.
FixWhen to Use ItExample
PeriodThe two ideas are about different things, or you just want two short, clear sentences.The meeting ended early. Everyone went home.
SemicolonThe two ideas are closely related and you want to keep them together without a joining word.The meeting ended early; everyone went home.
Comma + FANBOYSYou want to show exactly how the ideas connect — one adds to the other, or one contrasts with the other.The meeting ended early, so everyone went home.
Connecting word at startOne idea gives the reason or background for the other idea.Because the meeting ended early, everyone went home.

Summary of correction strategies with usage guidance and examples

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Worked Example — Editing a Paragraph for Run-Ons

The following worked example shows how to find and fix run-on sentences in a short paragraph. The paragraph is about a busy morning at work — the kind of everyday situation many people write about. Notice how each step starts by checking if there are two complete thoughts before choosing a fix.

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Original Paragraph (contains errors)

Maria got to work late her bus broke down. She told her boss she was sorry, he said it was okay. She made a cup of coffee she started on her emails right away.

Step-by-Step Correction

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    Step 1 — Find the Complete Thoughts

    Read the paragraph carefully. Look for places where two complete thoughts are stuck together. We find these pairs: (1) "Maria got to work late" and "her bus broke down." (2) "She told her boss she was sorry" and "he said it was okay." (3) "She made a cup of coffee" and "she started on her emails right away."
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    Step 2 — Name the Errors

    Between thoughts 1 and 2 there is no punctuation at all — this is a fused sentence. Between thoughts 3 and 4 there is only a comma and no joining word — this is a comma splice. Between thoughts 5 and 6 there is no punctuation — another fused sentence.
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    Step 3 — Fix the First Fused Sentence

    The second thought ("her bus broke down") tells us why she was late. Adding the word "because" connects them naturally and shows the reason.
    Maria got to work late because her bus broke down. (added connecting word "because")
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    Step 4 — Fix the Comma Splice

    "She told her boss she was sorry" and "he said it was okay" are two separate things that happened. Adding a comma and the joining word "and" connects them clearly.
    She told her boss she was sorry, and he said it was okay.
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    Step 5 — Fix the Second Fused Sentence

    "She made a cup of coffee" and "she started on her emails right away" are two things she did one after the other. A period makes two clean, simple sentences.
    She made a cup of coffee. She started on her emails right away.
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    Step 6 — The Fixed Paragraph

    Putting all the fixes together gives us a clear, easy-to-read paragraph with no run-on errors.
    Maria got to work late because her bus broke down. She told her boss she was sorry, and he said it was okay. She made a cup of coffee. She started on her emails right away.

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Strengths and Limits of Each Fix

Each fix works well, but each one also has times when it is not the best choice. The table below shows the good points and things to watch out for with each fix. Good writers mix and match to keep their writing clear and interesting.

FixGood PointsWatch Out For
PeriodAlways correct; very clear; easy to use.Using too many short sentences in a row can sound choppy or choppy. It does not always show how ideas connect.
SemicolonShows that two ideas are closely linked; keeps ideas in one sentence.Using too many semicolons can make writing feel heavy. The reader still has to figure out how the ideas connect.
Comma + FANBOYSClearly shows how ideas connect; sounds natural; easy to read.Only seven joining words to choose from; using "and" over and over can get boring.
Connecting word at startShows why or when something happened; adds detail; many word choices.Can make sentences long if used too much; one idea ends up less important than the other.

Comparison of run-on correction fixes — good points and things to watch out for

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KEY TAKEAWAY

Think of your four fixes like tools in a toolbox. A hammer is great, but you would not use it for every job. A period is like a hammer — strong and reliable. A semicolon is like a wrench — good for tight connections. A comma with a joining word is like a connector piece — it links two things and shows how they fit together. A connecting word at the start is like a bridge — it shows how one side leads to the other. Use the right tool for the job!

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What You Can Do Next

Fixing run-on sentences is an important first step in writing clearly. Once you feel comfortable spotting and fixing run-ons, you will be ready to work on other writing skills. The table below shows how what you learned in this lesson connects to the next things you can learn.

What You Learned (Run-On Correction)What Comes Next
Spotting two complete thoughts in one sentenceReading longer sentences and understanding how different parts connect to each other
Using a semicolon between related thoughtsUsing colons and other punctuation marks to make writing even clearer
Using connecting words like "because" and "when"Writing sentences that clearly show reasons, times, and conditions
Using FANBOYS joining wordsUsing transition words and phrases to connect ideas across a whole paragraph
Fixing comma splicesLearning all the rules for commas — there are many uses, and you are already working on one of the trickiest!

How run-on correction skills connect to next writing steps

Every skilled writer started exactly where you are now — learning to put the right punctuation in the right place. As you practice, fixing run-ons will become second nature. You will start to notice them in things you read every day, like emails, signs, and notes. That awareness is a sign that your writing skills are growing.

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Practice Problems

Try these five practice problems. Each one asks you to find and fix a run-on sentence using what you have learned. The problems use everyday situations so you can see how these skills work in real life.

Question 1: UNDERSTANDING

What is the difference between a fused sentence and a comma splice? Give one example of each using everyday language.
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A fused sentence is when two complete thoughts are written together with nothing between them — no period, no comma, nothing. Example: She studied all night she passed the test. A comma splice is when two complete thoughts are joined with only a comma and no joining word. Example: She studied all night, she passed the test. Both are run-on errors. The fused sentence has no boundary at all between the two thoughts. The comma splice has a comma, but a comma alone is not strong enough to separate two complete thoughts — you need a joining word (like "and" or "so") to go with it.

Question 2: BASIC

Find the error in this sentence and fix it using a semicolon: The grocery store was busy, I still found everything on my list.
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This sentence is a comma splice. The two complete thoughts are "The grocery store was busy" and "I still found everything on my list." There is only a comma between them — no joining word. A semicolon is a good fix because the two ideas are closely connected: The grocery store was busy; I still found everything on my list. The semicolon shows that the two ideas belong together while keeping a clear boundary between them.

Question 3: INTERMEDIATE

This passage has two run-on errors. Find each one and fix the passage using two different fixes: The schedule was posted in the break room there were not enough chairs at the table, they had to bring in extras from the hall.
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Error 1: Between "break room" and "there" there is no punctuation — this is a fused sentence. Error 2: Between "table" and "they" there is only a comma — this is a comma splice. Here is a corrected version using two different fixes: The schedule was posted in the break room. There were not enough chairs at the table, so they had to bring in extras from the hall. The period separates the first two complete thoughts cleanly into two sentences. The comma plus the joining word "so" connects the last two thoughts and shows that one thing led to the other.

Question 4: APPLIED

You are helping a friend fix their writing. Find the error in this sentence, explain why it is wrong, and show two ways to fix it: The doctor's office called to confirm my appointment, however I had already written the time in my calendar.
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The error is a comma splice. The word "however" is not a FANBOYS joining word, so a comma before it is not enough. You need a semicolon before "however" and a comma after it. Fix 1 (semicolon): The doctor's office called to confirm my appointment; however, I had already written the time in my calendar. Fix 2 (two sentences): The doctor's office called to confirm my appointment. I had already written the time in my calendar. Both fixes are correct. The semicolon version keeps the contrast between "they called" and "I already knew" in one sentence. The two-sentence version is simpler and just as clear.

Question 5: THINKING IT THROUGH

Look at this sentence from a short story: The baby laughed, the dog barked, the phone rang. It has comma splices. Should it be fixed? Think about when it might be okay to leave it and when it should be corrected. Give your answer and explain your thinking.
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The case for fixing it: this sentence is a comma splice. It has three complete thoughts joined only by commas, with no joining words. In most everyday writing — like emails, job applications, or school work — this would be marked as an error. A corrected version could be: The baby laughed. The dog barked. The phone rang. The case for leaving it: in stories and creative writing, short sentences joined with commas can give a feeling of things happening fast, one after another. Some writers do this on purpose to create a quick, exciting pace. Conclusion: if you are writing an email, a work report, or a school assignment, fix the comma splices. If you are writing a story and want to show things happening quickly, you may choose to keep them — but make sure it is a choice, not a mistake. When in doubt, use a period.

SUMMARY

Lesson Summary

Summary

A run-on sentence happens when two or more complete thoughts are joined without the right punctuation. The two main types are the fused sentence (no punctuation at all between the thoughts) and the comma splice (only a comma, without a joining word). You can fix a run-on by using a period to make two separate sentences, a semicolon for closely connected ideas, a comma with a FANBOYS joining word to show how ideas connect, or a connecting word like "because" or "when" to show that one idea supports the other.

Remember that words like however, therefore, also are NOT FANBOYS joining words. A comma before them is not enough — use a semicolon instead. The best writers mix and match the four fixes to keep their writing clear and easy to read. Learning to fix run-ons is a skill that will help you in every kind of writing — from emails and job applications to school assignments and everyday notes.

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