# SAT Writing : Correcting Ambiguity and Redundancy Errors

## Example Questions

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### Example Question #1 : Correcting Ambiguity And Redundancy Errors

Inspired by storylines that would come to him in dreams, Lord Bennington would stage one-man plays, his audience enjoying the show.

Lord Bennington would stage one-man plays that were inspired by storylines from his dreams; his audiences would enjoy the shows.

Inspired by storylines that would come to him in dreams, Lord Bennington would stage one man plays, his audiences enjoying the show.

Inspired by storylines that would come to him in dreams, Lord Bennington would stage one-man plays; his audiences enjoying the show.

Inspired of storylines that would come to him in dreams, Lord Bennington would stage one-man plays, his audiences enjoyed the show.

(No changes needed)

Lord Bennington would stage one-man plays that were inspired by storylines from his dreams; his audiences would enjoy the shows.

Explanation:

The original statement is grammatically incorrect because "audience" and "show" should be plural.  Also, "his audience enjoying the show" makes the sentence into a run-on.  The correct answer is concise and not awkward.

### Example Question #2 : Correcting Ambiguity And Redundancy Errors

Every person in the room appreciating the jokes by the performers.

Every person in the room appreciating the jokes by the performers.

Every person in the room appreciated the jokes by the performers.

Every person in the room has appreciating the jokes by the performers.

Every person in the room appreciating the jokes from the performers.

Every person in the room appreciating the jokes of the performers.

Every person in the room appreciated the jokes by the performers.

Explanation:

The sentence as written is actually a fragment, as it does not contain a proper verb. The word "appreciating" in the sentence is a gerund, or a verb form that can function as anoun. The correct answer will use a full verb form, as "Every person in the room appreciated the jokes by the performers" does.

### Example Question #3 : Correcting Ambiguity And Redundancy Errors

Religious texts often appear quite difficult to understand, being contradictions of themselves.

Explanation:

The underlined phrase in the sentence is awkwardly worded, which makes the sentence itself difficult to understand. The "religious texts" contain contradictions, a meaning not conveyed properly by the sentence. "Contradicting themselves" is the clearest, most appropriate choice among the answers.

### Example Question #1365 : Improving Sentences

All people choose their own religious denomination when they have been adults.

Explanation:

The underlined phrase is very awkwardly worded, and the use of the past perfect form "have been" is confusing. The phrase needs to be cleaned up for better clarity of meaning. "When they are adults" is the best choice among the answers.

### Example Question #6 : Correcting Ambiguity And Redundancy Errors

Few people understand the sheer work involved in having written of a novel.

writing a novel.

having writing of a novel.

having written of a novel.

writing having been done for a novel.

having written novel.

writing a novel.

Explanation:

The underlined phrase is awkwardly worded, and as such can lead to confusion. In order for the sentence to be improved, the words should be simplified and clarified. Making the final phrase of the sentence simply "writing a novel" is the best answer choice.

### Example Question #5 : Correcting Ambiguity And Redundancy Errors

Select the answer that produces the most effective sentence, one that is clear and exact, without awkwardness or ambiguity.

The teacher reprimanded all the students after the final. She didn't realize only a few had cheated.

The teacher reprimanded all the students after the final, not realized

The teacher reprimanded all the students after the final, she didn't realize

The teacher reprimanded all the students after the final. She didn't realize

Having reprimanded all the students after the final, the teacher didn't realize

Although the teacher reprimanded all the students after the final, she hadn't realized

The teacher reprimanded all the students after the final. She didn't realize

Explanation:

In this case, the original is the best choice. It separates independent clauses with a comma, and avoid the passive voice.

### Example Question #6 : Correcting Ambiguity And Redundancy Errors

Select the answer that produces the most effective sentence, one that is clear and exact, without awkwardness or ambiguity.

The artist depicted the responses of farmers to industrialization: this was a perspective rarely seen at the time.

industrialization: this was a perspective rarely seen at the time.

industrialization. This was a perspective rarely seen, at the time.

industrialization, a perspective having been rarely seen, at the time.

industrialization: this being a perspective, at the time, rarely seen.

industrialization, at the time, a perspective rarely seen.

industrialization: this was a perspective rarely seen at the time.

Explanation:

Here the original sentence is the best option: it is simple and uses correct punctuation.

### Example Question #1 : Correcting Ambiguity And Redundancy Errors

Although only given serious attention in recent decades, the author had a devoted fanbase  in the time of his own.

in the own time.

in his own time.

in the time of his own.

in the time being his own.

in the time that was his own.

in his own time.

Explanation:

The underlined portion of the sentence is grammatically correct, but very awkwardly worded. It can be both cleaner and more sensible by being simplified. The best, most simplified, answer choice is "in his own time."

### Example Question #10 : Correcting Ambiguity And Redundancy Errors

Having to have been what is like a chameleon, the spy could take on many different personas.

Having to be like a chameleon

Having to have been what is like a chameleon

To have been having what is like a chameleon

Having to had been like a chameleon

Had been what like a chameleon

Having to be like a chameleon

Explanation:

The underlined portion of the sentence is extremely wordy and confusing. The best way to improve the sentence is to simplify the phrase while retaining its original intended meaning. The answer choice that best does this is "Having to be like a chameleon."

### Example Question #8 : Correcting Ambiguity And Redundancy Errors

Professional athletes, having to have their careers ended by the time they are in their thirties, usually struggle when they are forced to retire.

having to have their careers ended by the time they are in their thirties

having their careers end in their thirties

having had their careers ending by the time of their thirties

to have their careers ended by in their thirties

having careers ended by thirties

having their careers end in their thirties

Explanation:

The underlined phrase is extremely long and somewhat confusing, and needs to be simplified a great deal. The repetition and unclear language needs to be done away with while keeping the meaning of the sentence intact. The answer choice that best does all of this is "having their careers end in their thirties."

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