Recent Tutoring Session Reviews
"Today with the student we finalized her essay. We went through and read the whole thing aloud. We also added in a few additional quotes, moved around several sources to make sure all of the paragraphs were cohesive, and cleared up many of the topic sentences. She has worked on the Bibliography, and she is going to try and finish it up before Sunday (she used many sources)."
"We worked on her reflection essay on Othello Act III, scene iii. She was able to formulate a solid thesis and details. She has improved greatly in her ability to analyze literature. We also completed her final draft of an in-class essay regarding certainty and doubt."
"Today we went over old essays of the student's, looking specifically at what makes a strong thesis (argumentative, falsifiable, discreetly qualified). We rewrote one old thesis in particular, exploring the questions it contained and the paragraph structure it implied."