Recent Tutoring Session Reviews
"The student and I focused on revisions, writing with a purpose and using our skills to look at our stories while we write."
"The student and I talked about her assignment from last time and read what she had researched on socialism, communism, and Paolo Friere, and how those elements related to what she was reading in 1984. I gave the student her major essay assignment. She is to write a paper on "Can a totalitarian regime exist in an educated society?" She is to use 1984 as a her primary source, writings and criticism on The Pedagogy of the Oppressed as her secondary source, and she is to research a real-life totalitarian regime and their education to support her thesis. By July 8, she is to have completed reading 1984, written her thesis statement, found supporting quotes, and developed an outline for her argument."
"This is cumulative for the editing I've done on the student's essay for admission. It is pretty close to being completed, and at this point is ready for submission along with the rest of his application."